讀后續寫原題目呈現：閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Magicwasafour-year-oldGermanShepherdabouttobeadoptedattheanimalshelteralongwithhundredsofotherdogs.Thereporterannouncedthatthedogsandcatswouldbeputdownifnoonecamebytheendoftheday.MyfriendRosiefeltworriedabouttheanimalsandaskedmetoaccompanyherthere.Soafterschoolwerushedtothesheltertosavewhoeverwecould.Finally,shegotacatandIwastouchedbythepooranimals,askingtheshelterworkerforthebiggestdogtheyhad.HisnamewasMagic.Actually,Ilivedaloneinanapartment.Ihadtostayincollegeduringtheday.

SoIalwaysstayedoutandtakingcareofadogathomeseemedachallengeforme.Rosiefeltuneasyaboutthedogandadvisedmetoabandonthethoughtofkeepingthedogandsendittoawarmhome.ButIlikedMagicsomuch,soIdidn’tacceptheradviceandbroughtMagichome.AfterlearningIadoptedadog,myneighborbelowshowedworryforIhadn'tkeptananimalbefore.Asitturnedout,therewasn'talotoftrust.Magicwouldtakethefoodoutofhisbowl,bringitinfrontofmeandeatitonebiteatatime.MyfriendRosiewasprettysureIwascrazyandthatkeepingitwouldbeahugemistake.ButslowlyMagicandIgottoknoweachother.Webecamebestfriends.Forthefirsttime，myapartmentfeltlikeahome.WewalkedtogetherthroughCentralParkeverymorningandnight.Evenwhenmyfriendsinvitedmetoparties,IjustwantedtobehomewithMagic.Ourliveswerehappy.Forthefirsttime,Iwascontent.Unfortunately,aproblemappeared.WhenIwasin,hekeptcalm,buthebarkedalotwhenIwasnotin,whichdisturbedmyneighborbelow.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.

_________________________________________________________________Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.____________________________________________________________________________________________主題語境：人與自我主要內容：文章是關于一個人和一只被拯救的德國牧羊犬之間的感人故事。故事圍繞著主人對狗的愛和牧羊犬對主人的依戀展開。主人通過收養狗，讓他的生活變得更加充實和快樂，而狗也找到了一個溫暖的家。然而，隨著牧羊犬因為孤獨而頻繁叫喚的問題出現，主人和鄰居之間產生了一些不和諧。這個故事展現了愛和責任之間的平衡，以及如何解決問題的重要性。讀的技巧：讀要素1.who---抓主要人物和主要人物的身份，但不要忽略次要人物。

I---acollegestudent

Rosie---myfriend

Magic---theadopteddog

Myneighbor---livingbelow,disturbedbyMagic’sbarking

Thereporter,theshelterworker,theadoptedcat---次要人物2.whathappened---抓主要事件，梳理故事發展情節。IadoptedadogwhileRosieadoptedacatattheanimalshelter

→

Rosieadvisedmetoabandonthethoughtofkeepingthedogandsendit

toawarmhome

→

Ididn’tacceptheradviceandbroughtMagichome

→

MyneighborshowedworryforIhadn’tkeptananimalbefore

→

MagicandIgottoknoweachotherandbecamebestfriends

→

MagicbarkedalotwhenIwasnotinanddisturbedmyneighborbelow

→

Myneighborknockedonmydoor…3.how---抓人物情感變化。

I:

worried

→

touched

→

determined

→

happy

→

confused

→…

Rosie:

worried

→

uneasy

→

…

Theneighbor:

worried

→

disturbed

→

…構思續寫內容的技巧：三銜接三銜接：1.

續寫第一段首句后的第一個要點與上文和首句緊密銜接；2.第二個要點與續寫第二段首句緊密銜接形成過渡；3.續寫第二段首句后的第一個要點與續寫第二段首句緊密銜接。一主題：續寫第二段的第二個要點點明主題，升華故事寓意，畫龍點睛，體現正能量。方法：

在充分理解兩段續寫首句的基礎上，結合前文，尤其是文章的最后一段，合理構思每段2個情節。注意：構思的情節要與前文關鍵伏筆相呼應。Para1:

由“Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.”以及上文內容可構思第一段的第1個情節為“我的鄰居受到了什么樣的困擾”；由“Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.”可構思第一段的第2個情節為“我向朋友Rosie求助”Para2:

由“Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.”可構思第二段的第1個情節為“我解決Magic感到孤獨這個問題的過程”；根據前文大意和情感發展基調構思第二段的第2個情節為“Magic因為陪伴而不再孤獨”。主題升華：愛、友誼、陪伴與責任。思考：本文的主題是否可以設置為“呼吁人們保護動物、珍愛生命”？---我認為仁者見仁智者見智，關鍵看怎樣自圓其說。續寫關鍵點：本文續寫的關鍵要點是體現學生在真實的生活情境中解決問題的能力。“Howtosolvetheproblem?”

以下解決途徑是否可取？1.sentMagicbacktotheanimalshelter2.buyanewdogtoaccompanyMagic3.buyatoytoplaywithMagicduringthedaytime4.bringMagictothecollegeduringthedaytime5.decidetostudyathomeandaccompanyMagic6.spendmoretimewalkingtogetherorwithMagic7.tellMagichowIfeelabouthisbarkingandMagicneverbarksagain8.gototheshelterandbringanotherdog/cattokeepMagiccompany9.letRosie’scatplaywithMagicduringthedaytime范文欣賞Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.

Histiredlookandredeyes

convincedmethatthebarkscauseddisturbancetohim.He

explainedtomethat

heworkedatnightsandduringthedaytimeheusedtosleepinthehouse.

However,

theconstantbarksofthedogkepthimawake.Feelingsorry,Iapologizedtohimandpromisedtocomeupwithasolutionwithoutdelay.

ButthethoughtthatIcouldn'tcontinuekeepinghimhurtmealot.Finally,I

wenttomyfriendRosieforanidea.Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.So

thebestsolutiontotheproblemwastofindacompanionforhimwhenIhadtostayout.Andmaybehercat

waslikelyto

beagoodcompanionforthedog.

ThoughIwasworriedMagichadtroublegettingalongwithacat,Ihadnootherchoice.

Surprisingly,

themomentMagicsawthecat,heshowedhappinessandleanedclosetothecatinnotime.

Inthatmoment,Irealizedthatthefeelingsofanimalsshouldbecaredfor.詞匯與句型積累sorryadj.

慚愧的，歉疚的

lonelyadj.

孤獨的，寂寞的

worriedadj.

擔憂的，擔心的

surprisinglyadv.

令人吃驚地，出人意料的

happinessn.

快樂，幸福apologizetosb.forsth.

因某事向某人道歉

comeupwithasolution

想出一個解決辦法

gotosb.foranidea

向某人征求意見

thebestsolutiontotheproblemis/wasto…

解決這個問題最好的辦法是……

findacompanionforsb.

為……找一個同伴

havetrouble(in)doingsth.

做某事有困難

themoment+從句

一……就

佳作欣賞Oneday,myneighborbelowknockedonmydoor.Onseeinghisimpatientandabitannoyedface,

IknewthatI

wasintrouble

duetoMagic'sbarking."Canyoujust

keepyourdogcalm

and

keephimfrom

barking?

Heissonoisythatwecan'thaveanormallifewhenyouarestayingincollegeduringtheday!

Ifyoucan'tsolvetheproblem,wehavetocallthepolice."

Havingapologizedandclosedthedoor,Iliedonthesofa,

feelingabitconfused.Magicwasjustbesideme,

sittingquietlyandlookingatsomewhereontheroof.Icouldnotimaginehowlouditsvoicewas.IjustwonderedwhyMagicbarkedalotwhileIwasinthecollege.Ithoughtaboutthetrouble

desperately,butnoneofthesolutions

cameuptome.MaybeIshouldaskRosieforheridea.IjumpedoutofsofaandcalledRosie.Afterlisteningtotheproblem,RosiefiguredMagicbarkedjustbecausehefeltlonely.

Suddenly,I

wasawareoftheproblem.Ididn'tknowifMagicexperiencedsomethingbadbeforeenteringtheanimalshelter.

Ifitdidhappen,itwouldletagreatpaininhisheart.Rosietoldmethatmostoftimesadogbarkedbecauseoffearoranger.Now,Ifoundthesolution.Iwastheonlyperson

thatMagiccouldrelyon,soIhadto

takeontheresponsibility.Icontactedmycollege