高考英語讀后續寫精讀精煉（十一）一：原文重現TenminutestogoandIcouldlocktheshop’sdoorbehindme.Therewerestillafewcustomerswhocouldn’tdecidewhattobuy.Oneladytestedallthelipsticksontheshelf.Herfriendwasbusywiththesunglasses.Theymustbetouristswithlotsoftimeontheirhands.IhadafakesmilegluedonmyfaceasIwaitedbehindthecounterforthemtomakeuptheirminds.Theywalkedoutwithoutbuyinganything.Thenitwastenminutespast5:00.Theywastedmytime.SometimesIwonderedifthiswasreallywhatlifewasabout.Workingfrom8:00amto5:00pm,Icaughtjustaglimpseofthesunriseonmywaytoworkeverymorning.IwishedIcouldstandonthathillandwaitforthesuntorise.ItfeltlikelifewasslippingthroughmyfingersandthatIneverenjoyedthelittlethingsinlifethatwouldmakemehappy.21世紀教育網版權所有Goinghomeafteraday’sworkwasn’tmuchrelief.Athome,afamilywaswaitingformyattention.Whilepreparingdinner,Iputthelaundryinthewashingmachineandtookcareofthepets.Afterdinner,itwastimetowashthedisheswhiletherestofthefamilyrelaxedwiththeirownactivities.IwishedIcoulddothat,Mybodywastired.Mysoulwastired.Icouldn’tgoonlikethis.ItwasmyownfaultthatIdidn’tmaketimeformyself.Ihadspoiledmyfamilyovertheyearsbydoingeverythingbymyself.Notimeforawalkwiththedog,notimetojustsitonmyownandstareatnothing.WhyshouldIbelikethis?Ineededserioustimeformyself,timetorechargemybatteriesanddothingsthatwouldmakemeabetterperson.21*cnjy*comAfamilymeetingwasthefirststep.Duringthemeeting,IexplainedwhyIwasbad-temperedandaskedthemwhattheythoughtwouldsolvetheproblem.EveryonegotaturntocomeupwithideasforhowtheycouldhelpmeachievemygoaltohaveatleastonehourperdaytodowhatIliked.注意：1、續寫詞數應為150左右；2、請按如下格式在相應的位置作答。Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisworkingperfectly._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二：文本解析【分析】本文以時間為線索展開，講述了作者厭倦了每天上班下班包辦家務的生活，她覺得自己應該成為更好的人。于是她召開了家庭會議，家人們表示會幫助她實現她的目標，讓她每天至少有一小時的時間做自己喜歡的事情。一個月以后作者覺得自己變得快樂了，并領悟到學會尋求幫助是最勇敢的事。【詳解】1.段落續寫：①由第一段首句內容“家里愿意接受實際的解決辦法。”可知，第一段可描寫作者和家人們一起制定了具體的計劃。②由第二段首句內容“自房子里的新規定實施以來，一個月已經過去了，而且這個計劃運行得很完美。”可知，第二段可描寫作者在一個月后生活和心理上的積極變化。2.續寫線索：制定計劃——積極響應——列表——期待——變化——感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①建議：suggest/advise②獲得：get/obtain③提供：give/offer情緒類①積極：positive/active高分句型1：Ithasgivenusmoretimetospendtogether,chattingandlaughing.(運用了現在分詞作狀語)2：Itfollowsthataskingforhelpisthebravestmovewecanmake.(運用了動名詞作主語)三：續寫單句訓練這個家庭提出來實際的解決方案。“讓每個人都負責打掃自己的房間怎么樣？””我建議。“晚飯后輪流做飯、洗衣服和打掃衛生呢？”“他們的反應相當積極。我創建了一張圖表，上面有每周的日子、家務以及每天負責任的家庭成員的名字。我已經看到我每天下班后都有一個小時。眾議院的新規定開始已經過去一個月了，這個計劃進展順利。這給了我們更多的時間在一起，聊天和大笑。我不再覺得自己陷入了激烈的競爭。一個月以來，我已經和我的狗上山7公里，下班后看日落。現在，我不介意顧客是否在關門的時候在商店里逗留。我的微笑不再是假的了。因此，尋求幫助是我們所能做出的最勇敢的舉動。四：佳作展現Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisworkingperfectly.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：課后練筆Boysliketobeconsideredtobebrave,butwhatkindofthingscanbeconsideredtobebrave?Itisnotaquestionthatcanbeansweredbywords,butbytheactualdeed.AboywiththenameHenrygaveusagoodexample.RonnyandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.OnedayasRonnyandHenryweregoinghomeafterschool,theysawsomepeoplefightinginthestreetcorner.Ronnysaidexcitedly,“Somepeoplearefighting!Let’sgoandhavealook!”ButHenryrefused,“It’snoneofourbusiness.We’dbettergohomeanddon’tgetclosetothem.AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”【來源：21·世紀·教育·網】“Youareacoward,andafraidtogo,”saidRonny,andoffherantothespotwithsomeotherboys.Henryhadtogohomealoneanddidn’tthinkaboutitanymore.www-2-1-cnjy-comButRonnythoughtHenrywasacowardandtoldalltheboysthat.Theylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhim.Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRonnyforhisrudebehavior,becausehehadlearnedthattruecouragewasshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtosticktohisthoughtandgotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Ronnydidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadhisnewfriendswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn’tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadlotsoffun.21*cnjy*comParagraph1:Afewdayslater,somethingterriblehappenedtoRonny.

2·1·c·n·j·y___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atthatmoment,Henryhappenedtopassby.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六：單句訓練幾天后，Ronny發生了一件可怕的事情。那天下午放學后，Ronny和他的一些新朋友在河里快樂地洗澡。突然，他被困在泥里，無法出來。他努力掙扎著，但他仍然被困住了。他尖叫著呼救，但都沒有成功。那些叫亨利是懦夫的孩子們盡快下水了。他們很害怕，甚至沒有試圖幫助他。就在這時，亨利碰巧經過了。他聽到了尖叫聲，盡快跑到河里去。看到Ronny差點淹死，亨利立即脫下衣服，毫不猶豫地跳進了水里。他到達Ronny時，就在他上次正在下沉的時候。他費了很大的勁，對自己也很危險，及時把Ronny帶到了岸上。亨利很樂意幫助他的朋友，盡管他非常累。參考答案三：單句訓練Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions.“Whatabouthavingeveryoneberesponsibleforcleaningtheirownroom?”Isuggested.“Andwhatabouttakingturnstocook,dolaundryandcleanupafterdinner?”Theirreactionwasquitepositive.21教育網Icreatedachartwiththedaysoftheweekandthechoresandwiththenameoftheresponsiblefamilymembereachday.21·世紀*教育網IwasalreadytoseethatIwouldgetanhourformyselfeverydayafterwork.Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisworkingperfectly.Ithasgivenusmoretimetospendtogether,chattingandlaughing.【出處：21教育名師】InolongerfeellikeI’mcaughtintheratrace.Foramonthnow,I’vebeenabletowalksevenkilometersupthehillwithmydogandwatchthesunsetafterwork.21·cn·jy·comNow,Idon’tmindifcustomersarelingeringintheshopwhenit’stimetolockthedoor.Mysmileisnolongerfake.Itfollowsthataskingforhelpisthebravestmovewecanmake.六：單句訓練Afewdayslater,somethingterriblehappenedtoRonny.21教育名師原創作品Thatafternoonafterschool,Ronnywasbathingwithsomeofhisnewfriendsintheriverhappily.Suddenly,hewasstuckinthemudandcouldn’tgetout.2-1-c-n-j-yHestruggledhardbuthewasstilltrapped.Hescreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould.TheyweresoscaredanddidnoteventrytohelpAtthatmoment,Henryhappenedtopassby.Heheardthescreamsandrantotheriverassoonaspossible.【版權所有：21教育】SeeingRonnywasalmostdrowned,Henrytookoffhisclothesimmediatelyandjumpedintothewaterwithoutanyhesitation.HereachedRonnyjustashewassinkingthelasttime.Withgreateffort,andwithmuchdangertohimself,hebroughtRonnytotheshoreintime.Henrywashappytohelphisfriend,thoughhewasextremelytired.四：佳作展現（一）Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions.“Whatabouthavingeveryoneberesponsibleforcleaningtheirownroom?”Isuggested.“Andwhatabouttakingturnstocook,dolaundryandcleanupafterdinner?”Theirreactionwasquitepositive.Icreatedachartwiththedaysoftheweekandthechoresandwiththenameoftheresponsiblefamilymembereachday.IwasalreadytoseethatIwouldgetanhourformyselfeverydayafterwork.【來源：21cnj*y.co*m】Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisw