1、課題：高中英語故事續寫（二）高三英語課題：高中英語故事續寫（二）專題十八：故事續寫常見問題 及應對策略專題十八：故事續寫常見問題 及應對策略 故事續寫常見問題第一.續寫情節不恰當，缺乏邏輯性1.不注重文本閱讀，忽視情節發展2.段落內容與所給首句銜接不恰當3.兩段銜接不緊密 故事續寫常見問題第一.續寫情節不恰當， 應對策略應該有效梳理文章情節：1.對一篇記敘文， 大家應進行深層次解讀，牢記記敘文中，時間、地點、人物等六要素和行文發展應是寫作關注的重點。大家可以把文章中給出的劃線詞按六要素分類，了解故事梗概。When: Where: Park Avenue , in the back seat,

2、the bankWho: the bank thief, the young man, peopleWhat: robbery, the shouts, suitcase, loud noise of an alarmWhy:How:2.在了解故事梗概的基礎上再次仔細閱讀文本，分析主要人物的動作、情緒和狀態等進一步了解故事的情節發展；再次，歸納主要 人物的關鍵性互動及對話；最后，預測故事情節的發展。3.要注意細讀兩段續寫的開頭語。這兩句開頭語對續寫起著方向性指引作用，又有限制作用。第二段的首句往往隱含第一段要寫的內容，決定著第一段的走向。 應對策略應該有效梳理文章情節：Paragraph1：

3、As he was running， Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop， stop!” Paragraph2： The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station andArthur. 應對策略在上節課中個別學生沒有注意到段落之間的銜接，從而導致了故事情節設計不恰當，我們來看一下出現的問題：1.Forget to mention “the taxi”.2. Arthur ran even faster and hurried back home.3. Arthur asked the y

4、oung man: “Did you rob the bank?” The young man was afraid and nodded.4.Arthur wrote down a sentence on the taxi drivers hand “He is the bank thief. Please drive us to the Police Station.”Paragraph1： 應對策略在上節課中個別學生沒有 故事續寫常見問題第二.文章主題不明確。最后的結尾部分，無法實現主題升華或與文章主題相吻合。 我們應該注意的是文章的主題或主旨是作者想要表達的中心思想，貫穿全文的始末，統

5、領故事的發展，是大家進行續寫的依據和方向，只有抓住原文的主題，續寫的內容與原文的主題才能相一致。 故事續寫常見問題第二.文章主題不明確。 應對策略 利用文章開頭、標題、背景、關鍵詞、主要情節等把握文章的主題 。在上節課的續寫作文中很多同學沒有注意到文章開頭的第一句話中a funny thing，把主人公寫成了一位英雄或者是參與搶劫的罪犯，從而偏離了主題。我們來看一下個別同學寫的結尾：1. The policeman arrested him and announced that Arthur robbed the bank with the young man.2. The policeman

6、 found the young man and the taxi driver planned the bank robbery together. The suitcase was filled with money. The policeman praised Arthur for his bravery. 應對策略 利用文章開頭、 故事續寫常見問題第三.語言方面錯誤較多，表述不夠準確。時態、語態、人稱等是常見錯誤。 故事續寫常見問題第三.語言方面錯誤較多 應對策略 在平時的作文訓練中要學會根據動作發生的不同時間使用不同的時態，同時還要掌握各種時態的相應的構成方式。 應對策略 在平時的作

7、文訓 故事續寫常見問題第四.詞匯、情感表達、句式及動詞使用單一1. The young man was angry and said he was not a thief.2.Arthur was worried and stopped a taxi.3.Arthur was afraid and he began to run.4.Arthur asked the driver to drive him to the police staion.5.Arthur said sorry to the young man at last.6.The police thanked Arthur f

8、or his bravery. 故事續寫常見問題第四.詞匯、情感表達、 應對策略 學會積累一些較高級的詞匯、情感表達句型、描寫心理活動的句型、豐富的句式及動詞的多種表達。下面我們依次來學習一下： 應對策略 應對策略 1.學會積累一些較高級的詞匯 The spring scenery is beautiful. The spring scenery is _. (appealing, charming; attractive, fantastic; breathtaking) 應對策略 The spbasic/generaladvanced/specificsaddepressed/ frust

9、rated / discouraged/ heartbroken/ in low spiritsworriedupset/ stressed/ under great pressuretiredexhausted / worn-out/ weary/fatiguedhappydelightful/ cheerful/ content/ thrilledgoodbeneficial /amazing/ admirable/ rewarding/ awesome/ brilliant/ fantastic/badunpleasant/ horrible/ harmful/ annoying / n

10、egative/.basic/generaladvanced/specific 應對策略 2.學會積累一些情感表達句型及描寫心理活動的句子。 應對策略 1.喜樂The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發光。Laughter lingered around the room.笑聲在房間里縈繞。His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。 I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。 I was pleased beyond description.我高興得難以形容。Her sm

11、ile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整個房間。She shed tears of joy.她高興得流下了眼淚。Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激動得滿臉通紅。Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悅。 1.喜樂Th 2. 憤怒 I was seized by anger.我充滿了憤怒。He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。 He was breathing fire and fury.他充滿著怒火。 His voic

12、e trembled with anger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。 He gave me a look of burning anger.他憤怒地看了我一眼。 He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。 He flared up at the word.他一聽到這個字就勃然大怒。 2. 憤怒 I w 3.悲傷煩惱He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他靜靜地站著,眼淚順著面頰流了下來。 Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of te

13、ars.她的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起來,跑出了房間。She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。 I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼淚。/ 我的眼里充滿了淚水。 3.悲傷煩惱He 4. 害怕He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他轉過身來,眼里充滿了恐懼。Fear slowly creeps u

14、pon her.恐懼慢慢地蔓延到她身上。She was struck with horror when.她感到恐懼She was choked by fear.她因恐懼而窒息。Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她臉色蒼白地站在那里,舌頭打結。A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一陣恐懼。/ 恐懼淹沒了他。Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated(窒息).她的心跳得厲

15、害,幾乎窒息而死。She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她渾身顫抖,覺得如坐針氈。 4. 害怕He tu 5. 感動 Touched deeply/immensely, we被深深感動,我們 Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她熱淚盈眶,表示衷心的感謝。 With tears streaming down her face, she. 淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來, 5. 感動 Touc 應對策略 3. 靈活變換句型，積累多種句型

16、表達方式。 應對策略 靈活變換句型(1) 靈活運用with 結構，非謂語和獨立主格 The entrance examination is approaching. We dont have the mood to play. With the entrance examination approaching, we dont have the mood to play. The driver followed Arthurs advice and drove him to the police station.FollowingArthurs advice ,the driver drove

17、 him to the police station like an arrow.He stood silently, and tears rolled down his cheeks. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 靈活變換句型(1) 靈活運用with (2)合理使用特殊句式（倒裝/強調/省略等）靈活變換句型 Going for a spring outing can refresh ourselves and it can relieve our pressure too. Not only can going for

18、a spring outing refresh ourselves but also it can relieve our pressure While it is intersting to have a spring outing, we cant afford the time. Intersting as/though it is to have a spring outing, we cant afford the time. Time is so precious that we cant waste it. So precious istime that we cant wast

19、e it. Hard work can lead us to success. It is hard work that can lead us to success.We will reach our goal by working against time. Only by working against time will we reach our goal When we are exposed to nature, we can feast our eyes on the wonders of naure . When exposed to nature, we can feast

20、our eyes on the wonders of naure.(2)合理使用特殊句式（倒裝/強調/省略等）靈活變換句型 應對策略 4.學會動詞的多種表達。 應對策略Use more specific words to replace “say”.shout, scream, yell, roar, cry, whisper, interrupt, add, continue, tell, remark, predict, repeat,guess, implyrefuse, agree, admit, complain, smile, urge, apologize, sigh, beg,

21、 explain，promise, comfort, compromise，warnask, wonder, doubt, answer, reply方式態度問答Use more specific words to repfirmly/excitedly/seriously/jokingly/sincerelyin great surprise/a low voice/a soft voicewith delight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/respect/alarm/satisfaction/caution/ patience/certaintyMake

22、 your “say” more specific.firmly/excitedly/seriously/jokeyeshandsheadstare / glare at / with her eyes shining/ filled with tearsHis eyes sparkle with excitement/ gratitude.pat him on the shoulder/headgrasp/hold ones handspoint to sb/sthwave his handsnod/shake his head violentlyHe thought for a moment.Make your narration more vivid with appropriate movement.eyeshandsheadstare / glare at Consolidation1. The young man was angry and said he was not a thief.2.Arthur was worried and stopped a taxi.3.Arthur was afraid and he began to run.4.Arth