1、高一英語短文改錯題27篇1Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboyWhatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.

2、Pleasetryrememberthattheworkyoudoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendaysandsevennightaweek.2DearTracy，AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn'tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenp

3、unishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexampletometofollow.Butheoftensay：“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan'tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverli

4、stens.Please,helpme.Puzzled3EverymorningStevewenttoworkbythetrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffath

5、isstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotoffatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!”.Heshouted.4Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,I

6、feltveryexciting.Asweallknow,computersaregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inthepast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmycompu

7、ter.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.5InApril10ththisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethem

8、angotin,hesnatchedthewoman'shandbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutoftheLift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedforthegroundfloor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthethieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtellthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallyc

9、aught.6OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmetohome.But

10、whenIarrivedIwasshiveringandIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imusthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.7Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecitylastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountryside.Takemyaunt'sfamilyforexample,Wesupplyprecioustreesandflo

11、werstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily'sincomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusiness

12、withforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemforoverseastrade.82Womenareplayingamuchimportantpartinsocietythanbefore.Nowwomenareworkingasteachers,scientistsandevenleadersAlmostalljobsthatusedtobedonebymenisdoneperfectlywellbywomen.Womenarenolongerlook

13、eddowninsocietyAsthechangesintheirsocialrole,women'spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.That'shardtofindthewifeisbusywhilethehusbandissittinginanarmchair,watchesTV.Inspiteofallthesechange,thegreatnumberofmenstillguardtheirrights.Sometimesfewwomenareallowingtoattendimportantmeetings.This

14、istheproblemweshouldtrytosolveitnow9HiThankyouforyoure-mail!Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendsplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoa

15、differentschool,butwealwaysgetstogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.WhataboutyourselfTellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon!Lis

16、a10HereisaphotowhichI'vekeptformanyyears.Look,thechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatitthatIwasverylovelyYes.Yousee,Iwasmakingaface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.IaskedmymotherhowoldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthattime.CanyouseethehouseallmakingofwoodThehousewhichwasn

17、ewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthisoldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,becausetherewasmanyfriendlyneighbourswegetalongverygoodwitheachother,butit'sagreatpitythatWewillmoveawaysoon.Totellatruth,Ireallycan'tbeartopartfromthem.WhenFatherboughtmeacomputerforabirthdaypresenti

18、nlastyear,Ifeltveryexciting.Asweallknow,computersaregettingmoreusefullynowadays.Muchinformationcanbestoredinit.WecanlearnwhathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheInternet.Peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydanger.Now,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscome,Idoexercisesonmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectthemb

19、uttellmetherightanswers.Itisconvenientformetopreparefortheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhavebecomearealfriendofmine.12Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedaletterfromaelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayheseethatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoabuswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefusetoo

20、ffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,theyevensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorryforthis.Today'syoutharetomorrow'soldpeople.RespecttheoldandcaringfortheyoungisafinetraditionofourChinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepitup.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingfromthisincidentandyouwi

21、llhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideoroutsidetheschool.Thankyou.13Hello!I'mHannah,istheformerEditorofKiwibox'sLife&Peoplesection.I'venowmovedandbecametheSeniorEditorofBooks&School.Alittleaboutmeyoumaynotknow:Iam17yearsoldhighschooljuniorfromArizona.I'vebeenonKiwiboxforJanuary

22、of2004,whichIbecameareporter.OutsideofKiwibox,myhobbiesincludemusic,writingandjusthangingoutandtrytogetthroughhighschool.I'mreallyhappilytobeapartoftheBooks&Schoolsection.Ilovetoreadandwrite,sobookreviewsarealwaysalotoffuns.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorcommentsaboutthissection,I'dlovetoansweri

23、t.Youcanreachmeatgingermulatta.Hannah14HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyandoftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,andin1904heproducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,acarmaker,wasveryinterestedinRoyce'scar,andsoonRollsandRoycegointobusinesstogether.OneoftheirfirstmodelwastheSilverGhos

24、t.In1907,aSilverGhostbroketheworldsrecordbydrive14,371mileswithoutbreakingdownonce.Afterthedrive,itwascostjustovertoputthecarbackintoperfectcondition.ThisisnotsurprisingthattheSilverGhostwasregarded“thebestcarintheworld”15HowmuchtimesdoyouspendwithyourparentsWhendidyoulasttellthemwhatisonyourmindYou

25、rparentsareyourdearestpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung.Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep.Buteventhoughmanychildstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmaybecomemorecloseasyougetolder.Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.HaveyoueverthoughtwhatyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethemFindchanceanddosomethingfort

26、hemortohaveasinceretalkwiththem.Ifyoucandothis,yourparentswillbeveryhappy.16“Practicemakesperfect”wasanoldsaying.Ittellsusthatitdoesnotanymatterifweareslowatdoingsomething.Aslongaswekeepontryingandpractice,we'lldoagoodjobintheend.ThesayisespecialusefulinEnglishstudy.Sinceastudentispooratspeaking

27、,heshouldgraspeverychancetoopenmouthandspeakEnglish.HisoralEnglishmaybeexcellentonedayduetohishardworks.NotonlyisthesayingusefulinEnglishstudy,itisalsohelpfulinourdailylife.Toanextent,itisnoshortcutindoingeverythingsincekeytosuccessliesin“Practicemakesperfect17AtaFridaynight,apooryoungartiststoodatt

28、hegateofthesubwaystationandplayedhisviolinwithlargepieceofpaperonthegroundBeforelong,hewassurroundingwithpeople,whowereallattractedbythewordonthatpaper.Itsaid,“lastnight,agentlemanputanimportantthingintomyhatbymistaken.Pleasecometoclaimitsoon.”Seeingthis,peoplewonderedwhyitcouldbe.Afterabouthalfanho

29、ur,amancameandbroughtbackhislotterywhichwonaprizeof500,000.Latersomeoneaskedtheviolinist:“Whydon'tyoutakingthelotteryticketforyourself”Hesaid,“WhileIdon'thavemuchmoney,Ilivehappily.However,Ilosehonesty,Iwon'tbehappyforever.”18“Ding-ling-ling”thebellrang,announcedtheendofschool.home.Somer

30、odetheirbike,somewentOnebyone,thestudentslefttheirschoolorwentbybus,andotherswentonfoot.Ontheway,Johnsawoneofherclassmatesrodeabike.Heaskedhimtakehimhomeonhisbike.Whentheycametoacrossing,anaccidentwashappened.Abigredtruckmovedquicklyuptothem.Johnwassofrightenedthathejumpedoffthebikeallofsudden.Thetr

31、uckknockedhimontotheground.Hewasterribleinjuredandsenttohospitalatonce.Thatisimportantforusalltofollowthetrafficregulationsforourownsafety.19AfewmonthsafterreturntheUSfromGermany,ItookpartinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearnedtospeakGermangoodinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudy

32、inganotherlanguage.Atthefirstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhy."Ifinditgreatfuns.It'sthefirsttimeI'veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwit

33、haGermanaccent."heexplainedit.20OnedayIhappenedtofindachattingroomonmyQQ,therepeoplewerechatinEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised.IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpracti

34、semyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.21Oneafternoon,whenIwasonmywayhome,theskychangedsuddenly.Darkcloudsweregathered.IbegantofeelworriedbecauseIdidn'thavebotharaincoatorumbrellaaboutme.Itsoon

35、startedtorain.JustasIwashurryingtohome,Iheardofsomeonecallingmefrombehind.IturnedtohavealookandfindthathewasLiuWei,agoodneighbourofmine.Heofferedtosharehisumbrellawithme.Wewalkedallthewayshome.WithoutLiuWei'shelp,Iwouldhavegotwettotheskin.HowmuchthankfulIwasforhishelp!226Iworriedaboutthemissedba

36、galltheevening.ItrytorememberexactwhatIhaddonefromthetimeIleftthestoreuntilatthetimeIgothome.IrememberedwhetherIhadlookedatthebagwhileIwashavinglunch.SoImusthaveitwhenIleftthestore.Irememberedshowingittoafriendonthebus.ButIhadthebagthen.Icamedirectlyfromthebustomyhouse,andImusthaveforgottenitonthebu

37、s.Iwasinhurrytogetoffandforgottocheckthepackageslyingonthefloor.Ishouldbemuchcarefulnexttime.23Akindoflittlecarmaysomedaytakeplaceoftoday'sbigones.Ifpeopledrivesuchcarsinthefuture,therewouldbelesspollutioninthereair.Therewillbemorespacesforparkingcarsincities.Thestreetswillbelesscrowd.Anddriving

38、willbesafeastheselittlecarscangoonly65kmperhour.Thefuturecarswillbefineforgettingroundacity,sotheywillnotbeusefulforlongtrips.Littlecarswillgo200km,beforeneedingtostopmoregas.Ifbigcarsarestillusedalongwiththesmallones,twosetsofroadsthatwillbeneededinthefuture.Someroadswillbeusedforthebigfastcarsanda

39、notherroadswillbeneededfortheslowsmallones.Itissaidthatthirdsuchlittlecarsfitinthespacenowneededforonecartheusualsize.24MrZhangisoversixtyyearsold.Hehasretired（退休）.Heisoneofmyrespectedteacher.HeteachesuschemistrywhenwewereinseniorGradeOne.Hewasold,andhetaughtusgood.Hetriedhisbesttomakehisclasseslive

40、ly.MrZhangusuallymadegoodpreparationsforthelessonandwasstricttous,too.Wheneverwemademistakesinourhomework.hewouldaskustocorrectthem.Atthattime,Iwasusedtobepoorlyinchemistry.MrZhangoftenhelpedmewithmystudiesverypatiently.Withhishelp,Ihadmaderapidprogressandcaughtwiththeclass.Heisalwaysverykindtoevery

41、student.Asanexperiencedteacher,heisrespectedandlovedbyallthestudents.Lookbackatmychildhoodexperience,Ican'tswimbecauseIhaveastrongfearofwater.Ithinkthatthreereasonmightexplainthefear.ThefirstreasonisthatIwasnotallowedtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,formymotherhadunreasonablefearofit.So,evenasachi

42、ldIwastaughtseethewaterassomethingdanger.Second,myeyesbecamebadoneswhenIwasfive.IfItookoffmyglassesinthewater,Icouldn'tseeanything,butthisincreasedmyfear.TheworstpartofyourexperienceisthatasachildIoftenseeaneighbordrowned.SincethenIhadbeenmorefrightened.26Iusedtogoingtothecountrysidetodrawanimal

43、sandplants.OnedayIwaswalkedacrossafieldlookingforrabbitstodraw.Losinginthought,Ihadn'tnoticedabulltorunningtowardsme.About100metersaheadwasatreeunderthatIwouldsitanddraw.Suddenly,Iheardthenoisebehindme.Iturnedandsawthebull.Knowingabullcanrunmorefasterthanaman,Iquicklyreachedthetreeandclimbup.Fro

44、mthereIsawthebullkickingmyfoodbagbyitsfeet.Itkeptdonethisfor15minutesandmovedaway.ButIwasquitenervousinthetree.27WhenpassingthebusstationonmywaytohomeIfoundoutalittlegirlalonecrying.Obviously,shewaslosing,lookingforhermother.Icameupandaskedherwhy.Whenaskedwherehermotherwas,shejustshookheadandkeptcry

45、ing.ThenItookhertothestationbroadcastingroomforahelp."Anyonewholostachildpleasecometoourbroadcastingroom."whichwassoonheardagainandagain.Minuteslater,aworryingmothercame.Thegirlrantohermotherhappilytearsstillineyes.Themotherwasverythankfulandaskedformyname.Withsmile,Ianswered,"I'm

46、onlyaLeaguemember.IhavejustdonethataLeaguemembershoulddo.It'smyduty."28Ialwayswantedtobegreatchemist.Ihadadreamofdiscoveringanewsubstancethatwouldsavethelifeofhundredsofpeopleonthespecialstage.Unfortunate,Iwasnevergoodatchemistryatschool,buttheteacherusedtogetveryangrywithme.Afterawhile,Iho

47、peIwouldbecomeaninventoranddesignedanastonishednewproductwhichwouldbecomeahouseholdbrand.Myparentsencouragedme,buttheytoldmetobealittlemorerealistic.Afterafewweekslater,Ihadagoodideaforapenthatcouldwritewithupsidedown.Withmygreathappiness,afriendofmesaidthathewasproudofmeforit.29DearLiLei,Thanksfory

48、ourletter.Imightgetusedtothelifeofnewschoolgradually.Foodhereisverydeliciouseverydayandtheschoolapproachtheseaanditsarchitectureisquitebeautiful.ButseveralbooksareinEnglishandIhavetowritenumberofarticles,whichmightseemdifficult.Muchmoreworse,IfindoutmyspeakingEnglishgetsworse.Iknowthereisalotofdiffe

49、rentbetweenlearningitinclassanditsuse.Fortunately,therearesomefunnyclubsandprofessionorganizationsforEnglishlearning.Thecostsarenothigher.Bytheway,thankyouformakingsouvenirsforme.SendingthemtomewhenyoufinishandIwillbeveryhappy.Pleasewritetomesoon.30DearFanny,I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutinoursc

50、hoolsportsmeet.Itwasholdingon,whichwasafineday.Therewereover1,000studentsandteachersattendedit.WangLin,astudentfromourclasswonthe100-metrerace.Hefinishestheraceinsecondsandbroketheschoolrecord.Itwasreallysuccess.Thatwasbecauseweweretryingtodomybest.AlthoughIwasnotoneofthewinner,Iwasalsoproudofthatwe

51、haddone.I'mlookingforwardtomeetyouagainthiswinter.Pleasewritetomesoon.Yours,Jenny9改錯題答案1.fromof/about.makemakes.timestime.that.try后力口tocompete力口against/with2didtdoes在all后加去掉been.heThim3newspaper冃y面overtto去掉butchildrenSaysays.DoingttchildtforDo.hurtingthurt.havinghave.happierhappy.himthemnight-ni

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