1、The beauty of writing“Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an _man.” -Francis Bacon exact閱讀使人充實，交談使人機智，閱讀使人充實，交談使人機智，寫作使人精確。寫作使人精確。 -培根培根 閱卷老師喜歡的句子閱卷老師喜歡的句子 、 同位語結構、同位語結構、with復合結構復合結構，使文章簡潔、通順使文章簡潔、通順；盡量使用；盡量使用動詞短語和詞組、定語從句等動詞短語和詞組、定語從句等復合句，修辭潤色文章。復合句，修辭潤色文章。使用分詞短語使用分詞短語( (非謂

2、語動詞非謂語動詞）Non- finite Verbs in writing非非謂語動詞謂語動詞在寫作中的在寫作中的應應用用非謂語動詞是指在句子中不是謂語的動非謂語動詞是指在句子中不是謂語的動詞，主要包括詞，主要包括不定式、動名詞和分詞（不定式、動名詞和分詞（現在分詞和過去分詞現在分詞和過去分詞），即動詞的非謂），即動詞的非謂語形式。非謂語動詞除了不能獨立作謂語形式。非謂語動詞除了不能獨立作謂語外，可以承擔句子的其他成分語外，可以承擔句子的其他成分 非謂語動詞也是動詞的一種，他們有非謂語動詞也是動詞的一種，他們有著動詞的其他特點，可以充當主語、著動詞的其他特點，可以充當主語、賓語、狀語等。非謂語

3、動詞與謂語動賓語、狀語等。非謂語動詞與謂語動詞是相對的概念詞是相對的概念 1. Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful . 2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. 3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook. Correction寫作中非謂語動詞常見的錯誤寫作中非謂語動詞常見的錯誤Seenclimbingcalling1. When she heard th

4、e news, she burst into crying._ the news, she burst into crying.2. Australia is located on the west coast of the Pacific. Australia is the largest country in Oceania.Australia， _ _ the west coast of the Pacific， is the largest country in Oceania.用非謂語結構改寫句子用非謂語結構改寫句子Hearinglocated on 3. Though I admi

5、t what he has said, I still doubt he didnt do his best. _ _ _ _ _, I still doubt he didnt do his best.4. Because I missed the bus, I went to school late. _ _ _, I went to school late.Admitting what he hassaidMissing the bus5.When I was walking in the street , I saw him. _ in the street , I saw him.

6、6.If you work hard,_hard , you will succeed. WalkingWorking7.Although he had failed many times , he didnt lose heart. _many times , he didnt lose heart.8.As she was scolded by the teacher, the girl sat there without lifting her head._ ,the girl sat there without lifting her head.Having failedScolded

7、 by the teacher 例文：例文： Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed(刻刻). Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final

8、examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back seat. Enjoy one essayplay musicmakehappy Playing music makes them happy.make a sentence using nonfinite verbs_ by the reporter from CCTV,the man said he was very happy. (interv

9、iew) Interviewed Finish the sentence using nonfinite verbse.g. Having finished my homework, I went on to help my parents.listen to / burst out laughingHaving listened to the song called “Gangnam style”, we burst out laughing.Follow the example and make a sentence.3. Moyan stood there and was surroun

10、ded by many reporters. Moyan stood there surrounded by many reporters.用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子Combine the following sentences1. As soon as they arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.2. If I am given another chance. I will succ

11、eed.Given another chance, I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English(目的目的). He studies harder. To improve his English, he studies harder.4.When he left the classroom, he didnt say goodbye to me.5. Because he is ill, he cant attend the meeting. When leaving the classroom, he didnt say goodbye

12、to me. Being ill, he cant attend the meeting.Being+n./adj.作原因狀語作原因狀語6.The policeman saw the thief who was stealing a bike.7. The boys who swam in the river were in danger.The policeman saw the thief stealing a bike. The boys swimming in the river were in danger8.Because he hadnt seen the film before

13、, he went to the cinema.Not having seen the film before, he went to the cinema.用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子 1.因為因為在這國家沒有朋友在這國家沒有朋友，她覺得要想找，她覺得要想找到工作是不可能的。到工作是不可能的。用連詞用連詞becauseBecause she has no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.用非謂語結構用非謂語結構Having no friend in the country, sh

14、e found it impossible to find a job.2.這本這本用簡易英語寫成的用簡易英語寫成的書很容易讀懂書很容易讀懂用定語從句用定語從句 The book, is easy to understand.用非謂語結構用非謂語結構 The book , is easy to understand用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子which was written in simple English, written in simple English,3. 他們是他們是來自于幾個國家的來自于幾個國家的游客。游客。用定語從句用定語從句 They are vi

15、sitors who come from several countries.用非謂語結構用非謂語結構They are visitors coming from several countries.用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子4.發現他好朋友沮喪發現他好朋友沮喪，他竭盡所能讓他，他竭盡所能讓他朋友開心。朋友開心。用并列句用并列句He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非謂語結構用非謂語結構Finding his best friend fr

16、ustrated, he did everything he could to make him happy.用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子 It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy. It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.4. 用非謂語結構合并下列句子用非謂語結構合并下列句子用非謂語結構改寫和美化句子用非謂語結構改寫和美

17、化句子Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because the

18、y are afraid of failing in exams.用非謂語結構美化文章用非謂語結構美化文章 Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非謂語結構美化文章用非謂語結構美化

19、文章They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. 用非謂語結構美化文章用非謂語結構美化文章Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exa

20、ms.Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非謂語結構美化文章用非謂語結構美化文章Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even ad

21、mired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非謂語結構美化后的文章用非謂語結構美化后的文章建議建議有足夠的睡眠是必要的。有足夠的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我們的課堂學習。它能有效的改善我們的課堂學習。2.保持健康的身體是進一步學習及工作保持健康的身體是進一步學習及工作的基礎。的基礎。要求：要求：1. 1. 用用2- 32- 3句話句話表達表格內容表達表格內容 2. 2- 32. 2- 3句話要有句話要有

22、連貫性連貫性necessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work. 高考臨近，保持良好的心態有助于減輕焦慮，高考臨近，保持良好的心態有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難的勇氣還能增強克服困難的勇氣 。Having a try翻譯翻譯: 高考臨近，保持良好的心態有助高考臨近，保持良好的心態有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難的勇氣于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難的勇氣 。高考臨近。高考臨近。 (National College Entrance Exam

23、ination) 保持良好的心態很重要。保持良好的心態很重要。 (have a right attitude)它有助于減輕焦慮它有助于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難和勇敢地克服困難。Step2：分別翻譯這幾個簡單句：分別翻譯這幾個簡單句National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having a tryStep1：拆分成幾個簡單句：拆分成幾個

24、簡單句(中文中文)Step3：合并句子：合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties b

25、ravely.Sentence1:Having a tryStep3：合并句子：合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcom

26、e difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip: Try to use differentways to express.Having a try建議建議 有足夠的睡眠是必要的。有足夠的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我們的課堂學習。它能有效的改善我們的課堂學習。2.保持健康的身體是進一步學習及工作保持健康的身體是進一步學習及工作的基礎。的基礎。要求：要求：1. 1. 用用2- 32- 3句話句話表達表格內容表達表格內容 2. 2- 32. 2- 3句話要有句話要有連貫性（連貫性（20112011高考模擬）高考模擬）Having a trynecessary

27、an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work.建議建議 有足夠的睡眠是必要的。有足夠的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我們的課堂學習。它能有效的改善我們的課堂學習。2.保持健康的身體是進一步學習及工作保持健康的身體是進一步學習及工作的基礎。的基礎。Having a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep .Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an eff

28、ective way to improve our learning in the class. Keeping healthy is the basis for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work. Passage： Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to

29、keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.Having a try With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be a

30、n effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work. Besides, doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health. Last but not least, it is very important to keep a balanced diet.二二. 使用使用非謂語動詞非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔使句子簡潔高檔三三. 巧用巧用倒

31、裝倒裝增強句子表現力增強句子表現力四四. 嘗試多嘗試多 樣化表達方樣化表達方式式一一.使用較使用較高級詞匯高級詞匯使文章增加吸引力使文章增加吸引力強調句強調句With短語復合結構短語復合結構定語從句定語從句名詞性從句名詞性從句(主賓表同從句主賓表同從句)各種狀語從句各種狀語從句被動語態被動語態A beggar1. beggar, lie, sleep2. Mr. Li, hurry, pay no attention to3. stick out，trip over(絆倒絆倒) , angry4.take out, note 5. blow, jump, run after6. surpris

32、ed, stood ,mouth open1. 一天，一個乞丐躺在路邊一天，一個乞丐躺在路邊睡覺睡覺。李先生。李先生匆忙匆忙趕路趕路回家，沒有注意到那個乞丐。回家，沒有注意到那個乞丐。2. 這個乞丐突然伸出拐杖，差點把李先生這個乞丐突然伸出拐杖，差點把李先生絆倒絆倒了了,這使得這使得李先生很生氣。李先生很生氣。3. 意識到他是個殘疾人意識到他是個殘疾人，李先生想給他一些錢，李先生想給他一些錢。4.于是他拿出了一張百元鈔票于是他拿出了一張百元鈔票,突然一陣風把鈔突然一陣風把鈔票吹到了空中。票吹到了空中。5. 看到被風吹到空中的百元鈔票看到被風吹到空中的百元鈔票，乞丐迅速跳，乞丐迅速跳起來起來去追

33、去追那張鈔票，那張鈔票，使李先生非常驚訝使李先生非常驚訝。：用五個句子寫出下列信息點，注意：用五個句子寫出下列信息點，注意非謂語和復合句的運用。非謂語和復合句的運用。1. 一天，一個乞丐躺在路邊一天，一個乞丐躺在路邊睡覺睡覺。李先生。李先生匆匆忙趕路忙趕路回家，沒有注意到那個乞丐。回家，沒有注意到那個乞丐。One day, hurrying home, Mr. Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground, sleeping.2. 這個乞丐突然伸出拐杖，差點把李先生這個乞丐突然伸出拐杖，差點把李先生絆倒了絆倒了,這使得這使得李

34、先生很生氣。李先生很生氣。Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his stick, almost tripping Mr. Li over, which made him very angry. 3. 意識到他是個殘疾人意識到他是個殘疾人，李先生想給他一些錢。，李先生想給他一些錢。Realizing the beggar was a disabled person, Mr. Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.4.于是他拿出了一張百元鈔票于是他拿出了一張百元鈔票,突然一陣風把突然一陣風把鈔票吹到了空中。鈔票吹到了空中。He took out a 100-yuan note, which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.5. 看到被風吹到空中的百元鈔票看到被風吹到空中的百元鈔票，乞丐迅速，乞丐迅速跳起來跳起來去追去追那張鈔票，那張鈔票，使李先生非常驚訝使李先生非常驚訝。Seeing this, the beggar jumped quic