1、英語書面表達英語書面表達English Composition Writing 寫作內容寫作內容 1. 1. 以約以約3030詞概括上文的主要內容。詞概括上文的主要內容。2. 2. 以約以約120120詞就詞就“制定規劃與達成目標制定規劃與達成目標”這一主題這一主題進行議論，內容包括：進行議論，內容包括：(1) (1) 海貍修水壩的故事給你的海貍修水壩的故事給你的啟示啟示是什么？是什么？ (2) (2) 請請結合你的生活經歷闡述結合你的生活經歷闡述“制定規劃與達成目制定規劃與達成目標標”之間的關系。之間的關系。 寫作要求寫作要求 1. 1. 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事也可以作文中可以使

2、用親身經歷或虛構的故事也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。子。2. 2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。 評分標準評分標準 概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫 Beavers are very diligent dam-builders who can build extremely good dams. However, they sometimes dont know where to build the dams or which dams sho

3、uld be fixed only because they have no consciousness to make a plan. The beavers story illustrates the importance of planning. Without a plan the best intentions and efforts will not produce results. We shouldnt work blindly but have a clear idea of our purpose, the actions needed to achieve it, and

4、 how these should be ordered. As a junior student, I achieved considerable success in learning English through the combination of hard work and planning. I prepared good materials with the help of my teacher, made plans for my daily study and self-monitored the whole process of my learning. I made r

5、apid progress and became very confident. I think I couldnt have done it without a good plan. Diligence is a key to success, but in my opinion, good plan is also essential. Through planning, we can develop clear goals, find more efficient and effective methods and thus have more opportunities to reac

6、h our goals than through hardworking alone. ContentEverything needed included which is related to your view.(內容要完整內容要完整)Structure*Good beginning and ending (好的開頭結尾好的開頭結尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (結構合理結構合理,行文流暢行文流暢)* Proper linking words between sentences1. Based on this passage, _, ma

7、king a plan before doing something is essential. 2. _, well complete our goal with a reasonable plan.3. _ its important to have a plan.as far as I am concernedOn the contrary as far as I am concerned on the contrary as a consequence使用恰當的連接詞使用恰當的連接詞 As a consequence4. As an old saying goes, “no pains

8、, no gains”, _, I think, only by taking pains to complete our goals with a plan, can we attain success. 5._, I have realized the vital importance of a strong plan. however Since thenhoweverSince thenLanguage * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤沒有語法錯誤) * With exactly used

9、 words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準確運用和句式的富于變化詞語的準確運用和句式的富于變化)Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式 this passage, as far as I am concerned, Something is essential.2. Without a detailed plan, I couldnt even allocate my time sensible, 1. Based onAdopt a variety of sen

10、tence patterns 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式3.For my part, I think that 4.In a word, , we should learn a rule, , a plan achieve success. Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式5. Although beavers are always the symbol of working hard, their working are always useless, . 6. Therefore, the confinemen

11、t to success ones capacity for substantial actions, ones advanced planning Please learn to Your composition項目項目 自評自評他評他評1. 1.書寫工整嗎？有沒有亂涂亂劃書寫工整嗎？有沒有亂涂亂劃? ?2.2.句子開頭注意大小寫了嗎句子開頭注意大小寫了嗎? ?3.3.有沒有注意標點符號有沒有注意標點符號? ?4 4將文章分段了嗎將文章分段了嗎? ?分成了幾段分成了幾段? ?5 5有單詞拼寫錯誤嗎有單詞拼寫錯誤嗎? ?幾個幾個? ?6.6.有時態錯誤嗎有時態錯誤嗎? ?誤用了哪種時態誤用了哪種時態? ?7.7.注意主謂一致了嗎注意主謂一致了嗎? ?8.8.有沒有語態的錯誤有沒有語態的錯誤? ?9.9.有沒有使用關聯詞有沒有使用關聯詞? ?使用得當嗎使用得當嗎? ?10.10.有沒有詞性的錯誤有