七年級下冊Unit5–6寫作指導思維導圖+難點突破+雙范文分層講解Unit5·描述家庭成員正在做的事【寫作重難點】1.正確使用現在進行時（be+doing）

2.描述多個人物同時活動

3.使用連詞和副詞提升表達

4.結尾加入情感或總結【常用句型與短語】?atthemoment,rightnow,iswatching,areplaying

?Mymotheris...,whilemyfatheris...

?Everyoneisenjoying...

?Itmakesmefeel...【常見易錯點】?忽略be動詞（am/is/are）

?動詞加ing拼寫錯誤

?主謂不一致（Thestudentsiswriting）【寫作思維導圖】→時間（現在）→地點（家中各處）→人物（家人）→正在做的事（進行時）→總結感受范文一（基礎）It'sseveno'clockintheevening.Kate'sfamilyareallathome.Kateisdoingherhomework.Herfatherisreadingabook.HermotheriswatchingTV.Hergrandfatherislisteningtotheradioandhergrandmotheriscleaningtheroom.HersisterBettyisplayinggames.Theyareallhavingagoodtime.范文二（升級）It'sapeacefuleveninginmyhome.Theclockstrikessevenandeveryoneisbusy.I'msittingatmydesk,finishingmyscienceproject.Inthekitchen,myfatherispreparingdinnerwhilehummingasofttune.Mymotheriswateringherfavoriteplantsonthebalcony.

Myyoungersisteriswatchingacartooninthelivingroom,laughinghappily.Meanwhile,mygrandparentsarechattingquietlyabouttheirday.Evenourcatiscurlingupbythesofa,enjoyingthewarmth.

Thougheachofusisdoingdifferentthings,wearetogether.That’swhatmakesthismomentspecial—quiet,butfulloflove.七年級下冊Unit6寫作指導【寫作重難點】1.描寫天氣的句型（It’ssunny/cool/cloudy...）

2.結合節日活動用進行時表達

3.情感表達與總結句

4.寫作順序：天氣→活動→感受【常用句型與短語】?It’sacoolautumnnight.

?Weareenjoyingthefestival.

?Myparentsaretalkinghappily.

?Themoonisshiningbrightly.

?Ilovethismomentbecause...【常見易錯點】?遺漏天氣或節日元素

?主語與動詞不一致（Myfamilyare/is）

?情感表達過于簡單，如僅用happy【寫作思維導圖】→節日（中秋/春節）→天氣（晴朗/涼爽）→活動（吃飯、賞月、聊天）→感受（團圓、幸福）范文一（基礎）DearJane,

TodayisourtraditionalMidAutumnFestival.Gettingtogetherwithourfamilyisreallyexciting!It'sacoolautumnnight.Themoonisshininginthesky.Weareeatingabigdinnernow.Mygrandparentsarelookingatthemoon.Myparentsaretalkingwitheachother.Myyoungerbrotheriseatingmooncakesatthemoment.Heisinhighspirits!

WhenitisMidAutumnFestival,everyoneisenjoyingtheirwonderfultime!TheMidAutumnFestivalmakeseveryonehappy.

Yours,

LiHua范文二（升級）TonightistheMidAutumnFestival.Theskyisclear,andafullmoonhangshighabove,lightingupthewholeyard.Myfamilyisgatheredoutside.Mygrandfatherissharingstoriesfromhischildhood,andmygrandmotherissmilingwhileenjoyingapieceofmooncake.Myparentsaretalkinghappilywithmyuncleandaunt,whilemycousinsandIareplayingwithcolorfullanterns.Everyoneislaughing.

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