高考作文評分標準第一檔（1-6分）…第二檔（7-12分）…第三檔（13-18分）完成試題規定的部分任務。雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋部分主要內容；應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求；有一些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解；應用簡單的語句間連接成分，使全文內容連貫；整體而言，基本達到了預期寫作的目的。Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.高考作文評分標準第一檔（1-6分）…Evaluationo1高考作文評分標準第四檔（19-24分）完成試題規定的主要任務。雖漏掉一兩個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容；應用的語法結構和詞組能滿足任務的要求；語法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞匯所致；應用簡單的語句間連接成分，使全文結構緊湊；達到預期的寫作目的。Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.高考作文評分標準第四檔（19-24分）Evaluation2高考作文評分標準第五檔（25-30分）完成試題規定的全部任務。覆蓋所有內容要點；應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯；語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡量使用較復雜結構或較高詞匯所致；具備較強的語言應用能力；有效的使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊；完全達到了預期的寫作目的。Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.高考作文評分標準第五檔（25-30分）Evaluation3B340班紹興市模考最高分最低分平均分21分（林佳俊）9分14.2分Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.B340班紹興市模考最高分21分（林佳俊）Evaluat4加分點句子結構的優化使用高級詞匯語句間的連接Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.加分點句子結構的優化Evaluationonly.5

高考英語寫作訓練之句子結構的優化（上篇）Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.高考英語寫作訓練之句子結構的優化（上篇）Evaluat6Translation老師應該鼓勵學生養成良好的習慣，不要亂涂亂丟。（2019，浙江）Teachersshouldencouragestudentstodevelop/formgoodhabitsandbetterbehavethemselves,insteadofscribblingandlitteringabout.Studentsshouldbeencouragedtodevelop/formgoodhabitsandbetterbehavethemselves,insteadofscribblingandlitteringabout.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.Translation老師應該鼓勵學生養成良好的習慣，不要7被動語態老板警告我說，如果再遲到的話就要開除我。MybosswarnedmethatifIwerelateagain,hewouldfireme.IwaswarnedthatifIwerelateagain,Iwouldbefired.浙江衛視將舉辦第二屆中國好聲音ZhejiangSatelliteTVisgoingtohold

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heldinZhejiangSatelliteTV.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.被動語態老板警告我說，如果再遲到的話就要開除我。Evalua8被動語態學校必須采取有效措施，來解決亂涂和亂丟的問題(2019，浙江)Ourschoolmusttakeeffectivemeasurestosolvetheproblemofscribblingandlittering.Effectivemeasuresmustbetakentosolvetheproblemofscribblingandlitteringonourcampus.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.被動語態學校必須采取有效措施，來解決亂涂和亂丟的問題(2019Translation等到客人走了之后，桌上至少一半的菜沒有動過,這是我沒有想到的。Afteralltheguestsgotupandleft,halfofthedisheswereleftuntouched,andthisresultwasoutofmyexpectation.Afteralltheguestsgotupandleft,halfofthedisheswereleftuntouched,whichwasoutofmyexpectation.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.Translation等到客人走了之后，桌上至少一半的菜沒10定語從句人物介紹TakeAbrahamLincoln,forexample.

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(范文：2019,浙江)TakeAbrahamLincoln,whowasborninapoorfamily,forexample.Heonlyreceivedalimitededucation,but…Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.定語從句人物介紹Evaluationonly.11定語從句Which指代整個句子的意思Yetthroughhispainstakingeffort,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica.Eventothisday,Lincolnisregardedasoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworld.(范文：2019,浙江)Yetthroughhispainstakingeffort,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica,whichalsomadehimoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworldeventothisday.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.定語從句Which指代整個句子的意思Evaluation12整合TakeAbrahamLincoln,forexample.Hewasborninapoorfamily,andonlyreceivedalimitededucation.

Yetthroughhispainstakingeffort,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica.Eventothisday,Lincolnisregardedasoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworld.TakeAbrahamLincoln,whowasborninapoorfamily,forexample.Heonlyreceivedalimitededucation,butthroughhispainstakingeffort,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica,whichalsomadehimoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworldeventothisday.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.整合TakeAbrahamLincoln,fore13Translation她的失敗都應該歸咎于她的粗心大意。Hercarelessnesswastoblameforherfailure.Itwashercarelessnessthatwastoblameforherfailure.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.Translation她的失敗都應該歸咎于她的粗心大意。E14強調句Itis/was…that…直到所有客人都離開的時候，我才知道我的菜太多了。(紹興模考，2019)Ididn’trealizethatIhadorderedtomuchfooduntilalltheguestsgotupandleft.Itwasnotuntilalltheguestsgotupandleftthat

IrealizedthatIhadorderedtoomuchfood.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.強調句Itis/was…that…Evaluation15Do強調一個動詞我希望越來越多的人加入到這個光盤行動當中來。（2019，紹興模考）IhopemoreandmorepeoplewilltakepartintheClearYourPlateCampaign.Ido

hopemoreandmorepeoplewilltakepartintheClearYourPlateCampaign.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.Do強調一個動詞Evaluationonly.16Translation直到袁隆平的雜交水稻研制成功，人們取笑他得聲音才停下來。(2019,浙江)Peopledidn’tstopteasingYuanLongpinguntilhehadsucceededinhishybridrice.OnlyafterYuanLongpinghadsucceededinhishybridricedidpeoplestopteasinghim.NotuntilYuanLongpinghadsucceededinhishybridricedidpeoplestop

teasinghim.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.Translation直到袁隆平的雜交水稻研制成功，人們取17倒裝否定詞置于句首(not,never,hardly/seldom)我永遠都不會再相信他的話。Iwillneverbelievehimagain.NeverwillIbelievehimagain.那些被抓到亂涂亂丟的同學不僅應該接受教育，還要受到懲罰。(2019,浙江)Thosewhoarecaughtscribblingorlitteringshouldnotonlybescoldedbutalsobepunished.Notonlyshouldthosewhoarecaughtscribblingorlitteringbescolded,butalsotheyshoudbepunished.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.倒裝否定詞置于句首(not,never,hardly/18倒裝Only+狀語（從句）+部分倒裝只有通過這樣的方法，才能解決這樣的問題。Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvesuchaproblem.只有等到失去之后，你才會倍加珍惜。Onlyafteryoulostitwouldyoucherishitmore.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.倒裝Only+狀語（從句）+部分倒裝Evaluation19Translation父母所能夠為我們做的終究是有限的，所以學會如何獨立解決生活中的困難非常重要。Whatourparentscandoforusisalwayslimited,thusit

isofgreatsignificanceforustolearnhowtosolveproblemsofourown.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.Translation父母所能夠為我們做的終究是有限的，所20名詞性從句What引導的主/賓/表語從句

最另大家感動的是，李越不顧炎熱，為班級采購歌詠比賽的服裝。(2019,浙江)WhatmovedthewholeclassmostisthatLiYuewentdowntowntolookforthecostumesforthesingingcompetition,regardlessofthehotweather.Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.名詞性從句What引導的主/賓/表語從句Evaluatio21

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Yourself!Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2019-2019AsposePtyLtd.Evaluationonly.22IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(強調句)ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.

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