雅思寫(xiě)作突破Lesson5Jack飲食文化類(lèi)Inmanycountries,traditionalfoodsarebeingreplacedbyinternationalfastfoods,andthishasanegativeeffectonbothindividualsandsocieties.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2011.6.23//2007.6.28hygienePeopleshouldcaremuchaboutfoodhygiene.nutritiousfatteningfrozenfoodcannedfoodgreasyfoodMydoctortoldmetocutdownongreasyfood.afastfoodjunkie吃垃圾食品上癮的人carbonateddrinks碳酸飲料dietaryhabits飲食習(xí)慣traceelements微量元素Ironandzincaretwoimportanttraceelementsthathumanbodyneeds.haveasweettooth喜食甜食的bemouth-watering垂涎欲滴的開(kāi)頭段Recentdecadeshavewitnessedanobvioustrendthatinternationalfastfoodshavegraduallytakentheplaceoftraditionalfoodsinmanycountriesandregions.Althoughfastfoodsmaybringaboutsomedirectbenefitstopeople'sdailylife,Ipersonallybelievethatthesefoodsexertanadverseimpactonbothindividualsandsociety.讓步段Undeniably,fastfoodshavehelpedpeoplesavetimeforcookingandextricatedthemfromthecomplicated/tedious/arduouscookingprocessthatisusedinmakingtraditionalfoods.Thisisespeciallytruewhenweconsiderthefactthatnowadaysanincreasingnumberofpeopleareparticipatinginthelabormarketandundertakinganenormousamountofworkload.主體段2Topicsentence:However,thenegativeeffectsofthesefastfoodsshouldnotbeoverlooked/ignored/neglected,sincetheyare

detrimentaltoindividualsandsociety.主體段2Forindividuals,

theirphysiologicalhealthisdeterioratingbecauseoftoomuchconsumptionoffastfood.Internationalfastfoodshavelongbeencriticizedasjunkfoodbecausetheycontainaconsiderableamountofcalorieswithahighleveloftransfats.Ifpeoplegetaccustomedtoeatingthesefoods,theymaybeeasilystrickenwithsomeseverechronicdiseases,suchashighbloodpressure/hypertension,hyperlipidemia,hyperglycemiaandsoforth/andthelike.Hence,thesefoods

renderpeopleweakincombatingdiseases.主體段3With/Inregardtosociety,theintroductionandprevalenceofinternationalfastfoods,directlyorindirectly,havebroughtsomenegativeimpactsontraditionalcultures.Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatthecultureofcuisineandfoods

isanindispensablepartof

thetraditionalculture,whichrepresenttheuniqueness/identityofacountryoranation.主體段3Iflocalpeopleprefertoeatfastfoods,therecipesoftraditionalfoodsmaygraduallydisappear.Thus,localresidentsmayloseasenseofculturalidentityandsocialbelongingness.Sothisisunfavorabletoculturalinheritancewithinacountry.結(jié)尾段1Toconclude/Allthingsconsidered,althoughinternationalfastfoodsmayprovidepeoplewithgreatconvenience,theyalsoposeaseriousthreattopeople’sphysicalhealthandpreservationoftraditionalculture.Therefore,peopleshouldpaymoreattentiontoamorebalanceddietarystructureandahealthierlifestyle.結(jié)尾段2Inconclusion,Iwouldliketorestatemyviewpointthatfastfoodhasbeenposinggreatthreattopeople’shealthandpreservationoftraditionalculture.Theconflictbetweenforeignculinarycultureandlocalculinaryculturehasalwaysbeen,andwillcontinuetobeagreatconcernamongthegeneralpublicandtheacademia;sothisissuerequiresconcertedeffortbetweenindividualsandgovernmentintheforeseeablefuture.大學(xué)生找不到工作類(lèi)Youthunemploymentisaglobalprobleminmanycountriesinrecentyears.Whatarethecauses?Canyougivesomesolutionstoit?WORKjobsecurityjobsatisfactionasenseoffulfilmentfrustrationbraindrainworkexperienceexcessiveworkloadworkplaceanemployee-friendlyenvironmentworkethic敬業(yè)精神stress-induceddiseasesthepaceofworkoccupationaldisease/hazardmanualwork/mentalworktiedupatworkjobprospectsglassceilingManywomencomplainabouttheglassceilingthatbarsthemfromuppermanagementinlargecorporations.開(kāi)頭段Recently,therehasbeenagreatconcernastotheglobalyouthunemploymentamongthegeneralpublic.Inthefollowingessay,ananalysisofthepossiblecausesandsometentativesolutionswillbegivenindetail.原因段Threefactorsplayabigpart.First,thelongeconomicslowdown/slump/recessionintheWesthasreduceddemandforlabor,anditiseasiertoputoffhiringyoungpeoplethanitistofireolderworkers.Second,inemergingeconomiespopulationgrowthisthefastestwithdysfunctionallabormarkets,suchasIndiaandEgypt.Mostimportantly,manyyounggraduatesdonothavearealisticgoalabouttheirfuturecareer.措施段part1Themostobviouswaytotacklethissocialproblemistoreigniteeconomicgrowth.Thatiseasiersaidthandoneinaworldplaguedbydebt,andisanywayonlyapartialanswer.Thecountrieswheretheproblemisworst(suchasSpainandEgypt)sufferedfromhighyouthunemploymentevenwhentheireconomiesweregrowing.Throughouttherecessioncompanieshavecontinuedtocomplainthattheycannotfindyoungpeoplewiththerightskills.措施段part2Thisunderlinestheimportanceoftwoothersolutions:reforminglabormarketsandimprovingeducation.Thesearefamiliarprescriptions,butonesthatneedtobedelivered/implementedwithanewvigouranddetermination.Schoolsanduniversities:curriculumreformGovernment:bridgeofcommunicationbetweencompaniesandjobapplicants結(jié)尾段Insummary/Allthingsconsidered,thecausesareseeminglyunderstandableyetdeserveourfurthercontemplation/secondthought.Youthunemploymenthasalwaysbeen,andwillcontinuetobeagreatconcernamongthepublicandacademia;sothisissuerequiresjoint/concerted/collaborative/collective/genuineeffortsofindividualsandgovernmentintheyearstocome.sparenoeffort/makeeveryeffort2012.11.24//2007.3.10Thesedays,withthepopularityofmobilephonesandcomputers,lesspeopletendtowriteletters.Doyouthinkletterwritingwilldisappearinthefuture?結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)消失：科技的快速發(fā)展現(xiàn)代社會(huì)以無(wú)法想象的速度在演變evolving信件太慢容易丟失不環(huán)保浪費(fèi)紙張相比之下，手機(jī)和電腦就無(wú)比方便讓步：過(guò)度依賴(lài)高科技交流會(huì)損害人的literacy,缺乏真實(shí)的感情交流，輻射如何開(kāi)頭？1.Recently,withtheincreasingpopularityofmobilephonesandcomputers,adecreasingnumberofpeopletendtowriteletters.

2.AsfarasIamconcerned,letterwritingwillnotdieoutinthenearfutureandthisphenomenonis,toalargeextent,abadtrendforthereasonsgiveninthefollowingessay.主體段13.Tobeginwith,theextinctionofletterwritingwilldefinitely/undoubtedlyleadtothedeteriorationofpeople’sabilityofreadingandwriting/literacy.4.Theuseofhi-techdeviceslikesmartphonesandcomputersgivespeoplelessopportunitiesofhandwriting,thusleavingmanyofusunabletowritesomebasicwordsorcharacters.5.Ifthistrendcontinues,people’sliteracymaybecomehistorysomeday.主體段26.Moreover,letterwritingwas,andhasalwaysbeen,anexcellentwayofshowingpeople’saffectionsinceitsverybeginning/advent.7.Comparedwithhi-techwritingandcommunication,lettershavethemagicpowertobringpeoplecloserpsychologicallywiththehandwritingonthepaper/sheet.8.Thisisprovedbymostloveletterswrittenbyfamouspeopleinhistoryormoderntimes,bethemnovelists,artistsorpoliticians.

主體段39.Admittedly,letterwritinghassomedrawbacksaseverythingelse.10.Foronething,itisnotenvironment-friendlyinthatalargeamountoftreesarebeingcutdownforthepurposeofpaperproduction.11.Foranother,itisnotasefficientasmobilephonesandcomputersasitmaytakemorethanoneweekforustoreceiveit,whichisapparentlynotwelcomedasapopularwayofcommunicationinsuchafast-pacedsociety.結(jié)尾段12.Inconclusion,letterwritingwillnotdisappearintheforeseeablefutureconsideringtheanalysispresentedabovealthoughthenegativetrendgivesnosignofreversingitself.13.Meanwhile,theresolutionofthisissuecallsforthejointeffortofindividualsandgovernmentauthoritiesforthesakeofourcultureandtraditions.scienceandtechnologyManypeoplebelievethattheincreasinguseofmoderntechnologyatworkandinleisureisreducingpeople’screativity.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?開(kāi)頭段Inrecentlyyears,therehasbeenawide-rangingpublicdiscussionaboutwhethertheincreasinguseofmoderntechnologyatworkplacesandinentertainmentiskillingpeople’screativity.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iopposethisviewpointbasedonthefollowingreasonsandanalysis.主體段1Firstandforemost,scientistsandtechnicianscanmakefurthertechnologicaldevelopmentbasedontheprevioustechnologies.Forexample,theinventionoftelegraphandtelephoneledtothecreationofradiosandmobilephoneswhichareregardedasanindispensablepartofourdailylifeinmodernsociety.Onlinebusinessisanothergoodcaseinpoint.BythisImeanthatpeoplecanaccomplishmanybusinesstransactionsonlineviasomeapplicationsinvented/designedspecificallyformobilephonesorcomputers.主體段2Inadditiontothat,peopleofotheroccupationscanalsoenhancetheircreativeabilitybyusingmoderntechnology.Videogameplayersareabletoimprovetheircreativemindwhentheycomplete/accomplishthemissio