寫作

第一部分寫作的要求、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及評卷實(shí)例

（-）短文寫作的要求

《碩士研究生英語入學(xué)考試大綱》規(guī)定：英語短文寫作，要求考

生根據(jù)提示信息寫出一篇約200個單詞的短文（不包括試題中所給

的短文開頭的第一句話）。出題方式有：命題作文、看圖作文、情景

作文或段首句作文。短文必須根據(jù)考題中所給的題目和提綱所規(guī)定的

范圍來寫。主要測試考生綜合運(yùn)用英語（包括詞匯、語法、邏輯等）

的能力。

（-）評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

本題采用總體評分法，通篇分檔計(jì)分，即從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方

面進(jìn)行綜合評判。語言上的錯誤，要視其是否影響清楚地表達(dá)思想，

或成為理解上的障礙，來判來定其嚴(yán)重程度?！皹泳怼笔窃u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的

具體化。每一分?jǐn)?shù)段的中間分，各有樣卷兩份。閱卷員要根據(jù)第五項(xiàng)

的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照“樣卷”進(jìn)行評分（不得給0.5分）。評分要實(shí)事

求是，嚴(yán)肅認(rèn)真，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)始終統(tǒng)一，要避免前緊后松，還應(yīng)避免趨中現(xiàn)

象。作文的字?jǐn)?shù)明顯不足者，結(jié)合其內(nèi)容和語言適當(dāng)扣分。

1999年評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

15——13分：內(nèi)容切題，包括圖中說明"effect"的有關(guān)信息；

清楚表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確，文

章長度符合要求。

12——10分：內(nèi)容切題，包括圖中說明"effect"的有關(guān)信息，

比較清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵；文字基本連貫；句式有一定變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)

和用詞無重大錯誤，文章長度符合要求。

9分——7分：內(nèi)容切題，基本包括圖中說明"effect"的有關(guān)信

息；基本清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵；句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有少量錯誤，文章長度

符合要求。

6分——4分：內(nèi)容基本切題，基本表達(dá)圖中信息，語句可以理

解，但有較多的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯誤，文章長度基本符合要求。

3分——1分：基本按圖寫作，但只有少數(shù)句子可理解。

0分：文不切題，語句混亂，無法理解。

1998年評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

本題以通篇文檔計(jì)分，計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：

15——13分：內(nèi)容切題，包括圖畫的全部信息；清楚表達(dá)其內(nèi)

涵，文字連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確。文章長度符合要

求。

12——10分：內(nèi)容切題，包括圖畫的全部信息；比較清楚地表

達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字基本連貫，句式有一定變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞無重大

錯誤，文章長度符合要求。

9——7分：內(nèi)容切題，基本包括圖畫的信息；基本清楚地表達(dá)

其內(nèi)涵，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有少量錯誤。文章長度符合要求。

6——4分：基本表達(dá)圖畫信息，語句可以理解，但有較多的句

子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯誤。文章長度基本符合要求。

3——1分：基本按圖畫寫作，但只有少數(shù)句子可理解。

0分：文不切題，語句混亂，無法理解。

長度計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

120——150詞：扣2分

90——120詞：扣5分

90詞以下：最高分不超過6分

1997年評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

各檔評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：

15分——13分：內(nèi)容符合要求，包括對各圖的說明，對趨勢的

預(yù)測理由，數(shù)字表達(dá)正確，語言流暢，句式變化多樣，用詞面寬，雖

有個別不妥之處，仍表明作者語言基本功較好，表達(dá)能力較強(qiáng)，長度

符合要求。

12分——10分：內(nèi)容符合要求，包括對各圖的說明，對趨勢的

預(yù)測及理由，數(shù)字表達(dá)正確，思想表達(dá)清楚，文字連貫，句式變化較

多，結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞有少量一般性錯誤，長度符合要求。

9分——7分：內(nèi)容符合要求，包括對各圖的說明，對趨勢的預(yù)

測及理由，表達(dá)基本清楚，但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯誤較多，數(shù)字表達(dá)有誤，

長度符合要求。

6分——4分：內(nèi)容基本符合要求，語句尚可理解，但結(jié)構(gòu)與用

詞錯誤多，有些是嚴(yán)重錯誤數(shù)字表達(dá)錯誤，長度符合要求。

3分——1分：內(nèi)容與本題要求部分有關(guān)，除事先備好但與要求

不符的語句外，結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯誤多且嚴(yán)重，詞不達(dá)意，條理不清，不

成篇章，數(shù)字表達(dá)混亂。

0分：語句幾乎無一正確，數(shù)字表達(dá)混舌L,長度不合要求。套用

事先備好的文章，但文不對聯(lián)題，不能給分。

1991——1996年評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

本題以通篇分檔計(jì)分，計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：總分15分

15——13分：內(nèi)容切題，包括提綱的全部要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，文字

連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確。

12——10分：內(nèi)容切題，包括提綱的全部要點(diǎn)；表達(dá)清楚，文

字基本連貫；句式有一些變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞無重大錯誤。

9——7分：內(nèi)容切題，基本包括文章的要點(diǎn)；表達(dá)基本清楚，

句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有少量錯誤。

6——4分：內(nèi)容基本切題，語句可以理解，但有較多的句子結(jié)

構(gòu)和用詞錯誤。

3—1分：基本按題意寫作，但只有少數(shù)句子可以理解。

0分：文不切題，語句混亂，無法理解。

長度計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

91——100詞：扣1分

81——91詞：扣2.5分

71——80詞：扣4分

61——70詞：扣6分

60詞以下：扣8分

（三）評卷實(shí)例（1999年）

Directions:

A.Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessay

inatleast150words.

B.YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEET

II.

C.Youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:

1.effectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulation

onitswildlife

2.possiblereasonfortheeffect

3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection

THEUPSANDDOWNSOFPOPULATIONGROWTH

樣卷1.得分14分

Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,

withthegrowthofhumanpopulation,thenumberof

specieshasdecreasedrapidlyinAmerica,andsome

specieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.

Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?Ithinkthereare

severalpossiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowth

ofpopulation,moreandmorepeoplecametolivewhere

somewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecies

havetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycan

notadapttothenewevironmentanddie.Second,

althoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,

somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwild

animalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,

withthedevelopmentoftheindustry,thenaturalbalance

andtheecologicenvironmentaredestroyed.The

deforestrationhasbecomemoreandmoreserious.So

someofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.

Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesome

suggestions.First,thegovernmentsshouldmakelawsto

preventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Second,the

governmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovenatureand

protectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepractical

actionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.

樣卷2.得分11分

Therearetwographsaboutthechangesofpopulation

andwildlifeintheU.S.Asisseeninthegraphs,withthe

risingofpopulation,thenumberofextinctedspecies

increased.Obviously,thereisastrongeffectofpopulation

overthewildlifeinthiscountry.

Whydoesishappen?Icansaytherearemany

reasons.First,mancontinuedtohuntanimalsforfood

andmoneyandmanyvaluablespecieswerekilled.Second,

wildlifelosttheirsurvivingspace,bacausemanexpanded

theirindustryatarapidspeed.Morelandwasneededfor

thisdevelopmentAsaresult,wildlifehasnoplacetolive.

Thelastreasonisthattheenvironmentforwildlifehas

beenpolluted,andmanyspeciesdied.

Inmyopinion,weshouldeducatepeopletolovethe

wildanimals,nottokillandeatthem.Wealsoneedto

providewildlifewithagoodlivingconditions.Wemust

alsolaydownalawtoprotectthewildanimals.

得卷3.得分8分

Asisshowninthetable,thenumberofpeople

increasedfromlessthanonemillionin1800to250millon

in1990inU.S.Accordingtothefiguresintable,wealso

canseethattherehasbeenasharpdiclineinthewildlife

species.It'sclearthatthecountry'sgrowingpopulation

haveaharmfuleffectonwildlife.

ThepossiblereasonIthinkareasfollows:Forthefirst

place,thepopulationgrowthmakestheroomofthe

wildlife.Secondly,thepollutioncausingofpeoplegetsrid

oflargenumberofwildlife.Maybetherearesomeother

reasontoshowthewildlifedowns,butpeoplegenerally

believethattheabovereasonarecommonacceptable.

Fromtheabove,wecanseethatitisurgentto

protectthewildlife.Inmyopinion,weaskthe

govenmentstotakemeasurestokeepthepopulation

growthundercontrolling,theotherpolicythatistowork

onnewregulationsforwildlife,themanwhogetridofthe

wildlifeshouldbepunished.I'msuremyopinionisboth

soundedandgrounded.

樣卷4.得分5分

Accordingtothegraphsgivenbythetable.Theare

showntheeffectofthecountry'sgrowinghuman

populationonitswildlife.Thenumberofpeoplehavebeen

ontherisefrom1800to1980.Butthenumberofspecies

hadbeenontherisefrom1600to1900,andthespecies

haddiedoutsince1900.

ThereareIthinksomereasonsfortheupsanddowns

ofpopulationgrowth.Onthefirstplace,asapeoplewith

thedevelopmentofsociety,thestandardofliving

conditionscontinuestoimprovement.Thebirthratesis

increcasedandthedeathratesisatthedeclined.

Secondlythespecies,ontheotherhand,arelivedonthe

ruralareas.Theirconditionsofliveswereslowandthey

wereabletoprotectthemselves.Sospeciesisdecrease.

AsfarasIconcern,Isuggestthatwedidourbestto

protectwildlife.Thegovernmentshouldmakeeffective

measurestoprotectwildlife.Everyoneshouldeducatedto

propectwildlife.

樣卷5.得分2分

Fromtables,wecanseethatthecountry'sgrowing

humanpopulationonitswildlife.Itrise250from1800to

1900.Ithink,thereatleasttworeasons.Foronething,

somepeoplewanttoreturnthenation.Theyfreethemself

fromhardworks.Foranother,somepeopleloverthe

wildlife.People'slifeleverhasrisenfastly.Onthesecond

table,itisclearthattherisenratefasterfrom1800to

1900thanfrom1600to1800.

But,therearedegened.Firstly,therearenotsecured.

Theremanyharmfulthingsinthewild.Secondly,thelead

totrafficintheweekend.Beacausemostlypeopleare

freedinthesametime.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkthatpeopleshould

paidmuchattentiontothewildlifeprotection.

樣卷6.得分0分

Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthebarcharts,it

tookfromthebeginningofhumanlifetotheyear1830for

thepopulationoftheearthtoreachonebillion.That

representsatimespanofatleasttwomillionyears.Then

theworldpopulationincreasedrapidly,addinguptotwo

billionin1930.Thenextbillionwasaddedby1960,only

thirtyyears.Fromthenontheglobalpopulationwason

therise,amountingto4billionin1975,whichisanother

billionpeopleinonly15years.

Thereareatleasttworeasons,Ithink,forthesharp

increaseinworldpopulation.Inthefirstplace,thebirth

rateiscontinuouslyclimbinginmanycountries,especially

indevelopingcountries.Generallyspeaking,peoplethere

holdtheopinionthatchildrendon'tcostmuchandwhen

theygetoldenoughtoworktheywillbringinmoneyand

thatwhenparentsareold,theywilltakecareofthem.

Secondly,thedeathrateimostdevelopedcountries

declinessteadilybecausepeople'sstandardsoflivingare

raisedandhealthcareimproves.

Inmayopinion,thechiefreasonforthepopulation

growthisnotsomuchariseinbirthratesasafallin

deathratesasresultofimprovementsinmedicalcare.

第二部分2002年寫作真題

studythefollowingpicturecarefullyandwritean

essayentitled"Cultures--NationalandInternational".

Intheessayyoushould

1)describlethepictureandinterpretitsmeaning,and

2)giveyourcommentonthephenomenon.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWER

SHEEF2.(20points)

第三部分2001年寫作考題評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及樣卷

76.Directions:

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveis

probablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herown

understandingofit.

Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueina

newspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspaperto

1)showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaning

ofthepicturebelow,

2)giveaspecificexample,and

3)giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshow

love.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET

2.(20points)

2001年作文范文

Whenweusetheworld"love"wedonotsimply

meananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,which

isaverynarrowdefinitionoftheword.Thepicturebelow

illustratestherealmaningoflove,bystressingthefact

thatloveisemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusno

matterhowdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.Infact,

throughouthistorypeopleofmanydifferentcultureshave

regardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions.

Asanexampleofthepoweroflove,weshould

rememberhowtheChinesepeopleofallnationalities

respondtothecalltohelpthevictimsofnaturaldisasters

everyyear.Althoughtheirincomesarestilllowby

internationalstandards,peoplealloverthecountrydonot

hesitatetodonatewhatevertheycan--beitmoneyor

goods--tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens.Moreover,

theydothiswithnothoughtofgainforthemselves.

Inmyopinion,thebestwaytoshowloveistohelp

peoplewhoaremoreunfortunatethanweare.Weshould

alwaysbereadytogiveahelpinghandtothosewhoare

introuble,nomatterwhethertheyarefarmilymembers

orcompletestrangers.Inthisway,wecanhelptomake

theworldabetterplace,for,asthepictureshows,the

darkertheshadowsofsorrowbecome,themorebrightly

thelampofloveshines.

樣卷的評分和評語

Sampie1,Sampie2

給分：（17—20分）

評語：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列三方面的全部內(nèi)容；文章通順，語言

流暢，句式變化多樣；用詞面較寬；雖有個別不妥之處，但該生基本

功較好；表達(dá)能力較強(qiáng)；長度符合要求。

Sampie3,Sampie4

給分：（13—16分）

評語：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列三方面的全部內(nèi)容；表達(dá)基本清楚，

文字連貫；句式變化較多；結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞有少量一般性錯誤；長度符合

要求。

Sampie5,Sampie6

給分：（9—12分）

評語：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列三方面的全部內(nèi)容；表達(dá)基本清楚；

但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯誤較多，有少數(shù)是嚴(yán)重錯誤；長度符合要求。

Sampie7,Sampie8

給分：（5—8分）

評語：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列要點(diǎn)；語句尚可理解，但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞

錯誤多；有些是嚴(yán)重錯誤；長度基本符合要求。

Sampie9,Sampie10

給分：（1—4分）

評語：與題意勉強(qiáng)有關(guān)，但條理不清，不成篇章；語句錯誤多且嚴(yán)重;

詞不達(dá)意。

（注:文章長度低于180詞扣1分，低于170分扣2分,依次類推。）

（1）

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveis

probablythenoblest.Itisoftheutmostimportancetothe

humanbeings,Everybodynotonlyneedslove,butalso

shouldgivelove.

Asisdescribedinthepicture,"loveisalampwhichis

brighterindarkerplaces."Thisisindeedtrue.Peoplein

darkerplacesneedmorelightthanordinarypeople.Maye

evenadimlightcangivethemmuchhopeforabetterlife

andprogress.Maybejustathreadoflightwillcallforth

theirstrengthandcouragetostepoutoftheirdifficulties.

Forinstancewhensomeoneisstarvingtodeath,just

alittlefoodandwaterfromyoumaysavehislife.Or

whenalittlegirlinapoorruralareadropsoutofschool

becauseofpoverty,justasmallsurnofmoneyfromyou

maysupporthertofinishherschoolingandchangeher

life,youhavegivenlovewhichislikealampinadark

placewherelightismostneeded.

Sotosumup,weshouldofferourhelptoallwhoare

inneed.Weexpecttogetlovefromothersandwealso

givelovetootherssowhenyouseesomeoneindifficulty

orindistressandinneedofhelp,don'thesitatetogive

yourlovetohim.Ibelievethentheralationshipbetween

peoplewillbeharmoniousandoursocietywillbeabetter

placeforustolivein.(20分)

(2)

Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichis

mosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalso

inothercountries.Weliveindifferentcountries,speak

differentlanguages,butloveissomethingcommontous

all.Buthowtoshowlovemaybedifferentwithdifferent

peopleindifferentcountries.Thisissomethingweshould

givemorethoughtto.

Asshowninthepicture,loveislikealampwhich

shinesbrightestindarkplaces.Thistellsusasimpletruth:

Loveislikaalamp.Itismostvaluablewhenitismost

needed.Forexample,onceIsawaforeignladygetlostin

thestreet.ShecouldnotspeakChineseandnobody

seemedtobeabletohelpher.ThoughmyEnglishisnot

verygoodandIamashyperson,Ithougthsheneeded

helpverymuch.Iaskedherwhatshewanted.Shetold

meshelostherway,soIshowedherthewaytoherhotel.

Itwasasmallthingbutshethankedmeverymuch

becausemyhelpwasneededverymuch.Myhelpwaslike

alampinadarkplace.

Ithinkweallshouldbelikealampinadarkplace,

showingourlove,givingourhelptoothers,evento

strangers.Inthiswaywecanmakethisworlda

harmoniousandpeacefulworld.(18分)

(3)

Isawapicturerecentlyinyournewspaper.Thereisa

smalllampinthepictureandaflameonthelamp,which

issmiling.Thelampsays,"Loveisalamp,itwillbe

brightestinthedarkestplace."Ithinkitshowsusavivid

picture:Whereandwhoneedlive,loveisthenoblest

feeling.SoIbelievethatweshouldgiveourlovetothose

whoareinneed.Ifeveryonecangivehislovetowhomin

need,thentheworldwillbefilledwithlove.

Forexample,inthecountryside.Therearemillionsof

pupils,whocan'taffordtoattendschool.Someofthem

neverattendschool.Theyareunfortunate,butnowthere

aremanywarm-heartedpeoplewhogivehelptothe

pupils.Ofcourse,wecanalsoshowourloveinmany

otherways.Forinstance.Asafriend,weshouldhelpour

friendswhentheyareintrouble.Thereisasaying:A

friendinneedisafriendindeed.Asayoungman,we

shouldrespecttheolder.Whenwewalkonthestreet,we

canhelptheblindoroldpeopleandchildrentocrossthe

road.

Inaword,Therearemanywaystoshowourlove.

Thepeopleallovertheworldshouldloveandrespecteach

other.Thebestwaytoshowourloveistohelpothers

whentheyareindifficulities.(16分)

(4)

Everyonemayagreethatamongalltheworthy

feelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest.But

peoplehavedifferentunderstandingofit.Ascanbeseen

fromthepicture,thereisonepointofview.Itsaysthat

loveislikealamp,whichisbrighterwhenthedarkis

heavier.Thismeansthatloveshouldbegiventowhereit

ismostneeded.Iagreewiththispointofview.

Takemyexperienceforaexample.Beingpoor,Ihave

todosomepart-timejobstosupportmystudyinBeijing.

Ialwaysfeellovefromotherfriendsandfamilieswhen

theyhelpmeeitherinmaterialorinspiritualaspects.I

lovethemandwanttogivemyhelptootherpeopleatthe

sametime.Butsomeofmyclassmatestaketheirparents'

helpforgranted.

Theynevertrytosupportthembyworkingonthe

side.Theyhavenoideaofdifficultiesinone'slife.

Therefore,theydon'trealizethevalueoflove.

Asforthebestwaytoshowlove,Ithink,firstofall,

everyoneshouldbecouragedandrequiredtotrytobe

self-reliant.Secondly,whenoneisintrouble,others

shouldhelphim.Finallyweshouldeducatepeopleto

appreciatehelpfromotherpeople.Onlyinthiswaycan

oursocietybecomeabighappyfamily.(14分)

(5)

Asisshowninthepicture,wecanseeclearlythat

loveislikealampandthedarkertheenvironmentis,the

brighterloveis.Anditisnodenyingthatamongallthe

worthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisthenoblest.Actually,

becauseoflove,manypeopleintroublegethelpand

encourage,sotheywilltrytheirbesttoovertakethe

difficultyandlookforwardtoabetterfuture.What'smore,

whenothersareintrouble,theytakehelpingthemfor

granted.Therefore,lovewillbefoundallovertheworld.

Severalyearsago,someareassufferdisasterbecause

ofheavyrain.ThePLAhelpthemrebuildtheirfamilies.

Thisyear,Taiwanalsosufferdisasterbecauseoftheearth

quake.Manypeopleinourcountrydoourbesttohelp

them.

Itisnecessarytotakesomemeasuretospreadthe

love.Foronething,weshouldencouragepeoplewhohave

loveandarehappytohelpothers.Foranother,weshould

enhancetheawarenessofpeoplethatloveisbenefitfor

allofthissociety.AlsoImakesurethatbythisway,we

haveabrighterfuture.(12分)

(6)

Inthepicturebelow,inthefulldarksituation,alittle

ofsparkenlightensthedark.Thenaivesparksmilesso

sweet.Itseemstobesaying,asthecaptioninthepicture

reads,Iamalightoflove,themoredarkwhereIam,the

moreenlighten.

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveis

probablythenoblest.Asamatteroffact,allofussurvive

inaloveworld.Weofferlove,moreimportant,weneed

love.Iamahardworkingstudentthatisspecializedin

ComputerScienceandApplication.Onceatime,Ilostmy

mindaccidentallyasaresultIdroppeddownfromthe

downstairs,badlyinjured.Butformyroomates'helpI

couldn'tliveupnotonlyinphysicsbutalsoinspirits.I

thankthemgenuinly.WhatIaccomplishedtodayparty

attributetoallofthemgivingmeahandtomyschool

work.IhopeIcanliveuptomyselfaswellasmy

roommates.

AsfarasIamconcerned,loveshouldbeshowedby

twomeansasfollow.Atthefirstplace,weshouldkeepa

criticaleyeonothers'loveshowedtous.Ofcourse,most

oftheloveisgoodforus,nevertheless,somedoesharm

tous,suchashelpingtocheatinginexams.Thelastbut

notheleast,weshouldshowloveheartstothoseneeding

them.Asweknow,HopeProjectisthelargestloveproject

inourcountry,weshouldpayhighlyattentiononitrather

thanneglect.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatethe

awarenesstohelpothersinourdailylife.Let'sholdour

handstobuildourcountryfilledinlovehearts.（10分）

⑺

Thispicturetellsusarealitythatlovecanbringup

lightingandlightwillmakeeverywherebright.Although

thelightisweak,itplaysagreateffectwhichwillmake

peoplemorefirmlythanbefore.

WhenIwasatmiddle-school,myparentwereboth

outofemployee.MyparentfeltdisappointedandIwas

greatlyworriedmyfuture.Ourlifebecameveryterrible,I

evendicidedtosuicide.Ourneighbourlearntaboutmy

family'sconidition,andtheybegantohelpus.Theylenta

fewmoneytomyparentandmyparentusethesemoney

toopenashop.Theyhelpmetostudy.Myparentfinally

gotthroughhardlife.SoIsaythatloveisgreat.

Ithinkthattherearesomewaystoshowlove.You

maygivemoneytothepoorandhelptheolddosome

workingandgiveyourlovetothedisable.Thebestway

showloveisfromheartratherthanfromappearance.By

thiswaythosepeoplewhoacceptedhelpswillfeelwarmly.

Ourworldwillbrightifeveryoneshowlove.(8分)

(8)

Thepictureimplythatloveisveryimportanttothe

needy.Lovelikealampwhichisbrighterinthedarker

place.Let'shavenaexample.Whenaperson,whois

aroundus,hasaseriousillandneedasummoneytopay

forthemedicalfeebutheorhisfamilycan'taffortit,well

willmakeoureffortstohelphim.Itisclearthatloveis

importanttoeveryone,inparticular,totheneedy.

Itiswellknowntoall,loveisprobablythenoblest

amongalltheworthyfeelingofmankind,buteveryone

hashis/herownunderstandingofit.AsfarasIam

concerned,Ithinkthebestwaytoshowloveisour

suitablehelpwhenothersarefacingwithdifficultyand

needourhelps.Ifwehelpotherswithoutthinking

whetherothersneed,itperhapsdecreaseother's

confidentandatthesametimetakeusintroubles.

Asisknowtoall,everythinghastwosides.Showlove

properlywilltakeeffectivefunction,otherwiseitwilltake

negativefunction.Asaconsequence,weshouldnotonly

havelovebutalsoshowitproperly.（6分）

（9）

Thepictureshowthatloveisalampwhichleada

brightlightandhopewhenoneinvolvedindark.InChina,

wecanseemanystoriesaboutlove,forexample,From

newspaperwecanoftenreadabout"TheProjecthope."

Therearemanypeopledelvatehimselftohelpothers.In

remotecountry,somechildrencan'tgotoschoolbecause

nomoney.However,inotherdistrict,therearemany

peopletoprovidemoneytohelpthesechildren.

Fromthispicture,asmalllightbrightsomearea.We

canreadmuchfromit.Asauniversitystudents,wecan

domuch,dobest.Wecanstudyhardscienceknowledge.

Weshouldimproveourfromallkindofaspect.Aslongas

wedevoteoneselftohelpthosetroublesomeman.（4分）

(10)

Thesymbolicisalight,itwillbemorepowerfulwhen

thecircumstancesismoredark.Everyonehassymbolic

andsymbolicisaverygoodmattertous.Itcomefromus

anditcanhelpus.Thesymbolicisnotonlyafeeling,but

alsoisacharacter.

MrsBingxinisagoodwriterwithsymbolic.Shegave

allshecandotothesociety,includemoney,bookandher

heart.Shetriedherbesttohelpthosepeoplewhoneeds

help.

Weshouldshowourlovetothepeople,furthermore,

weshouldshowourlovebythebestway.Ibelievewe

havetodoisnotonlytheword,butalsoistheaction,not

onlythemoney,butalsotheheart.Ifallofushavegive

oursymbolic,theworldcanchangemorebeautiful.(2分)

第四部分優(yōu)秀作文范文精選

范文一

最新大綱樣題：

Directions:

Widespreadtobaccoconsumptionhasledtograve

consequences,yetthetobaccocompaniesstillclaimthat

theymakeavalbuablecontributiontotheworldeconomy.

Thereisadiscussioninanewspaperontheabovetwo

viewpoints.

Writeanessaytothenewspaper

1)criticizingtheirviewand

2)justifyyourstand.

Inyouressay,makefulluseoftheinformation

providedinthepidcturesprintedbelow.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET

世界煙草單產(chǎn)量世界吸咖人口比例

世界人口58億.

19941995

世界每年吸煙損失

Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethatcigarette

smokinghascausedseriousproblems.Butthetobacco

companiesinsistthattheycontributegreatlytotheworld

economybypayingtaxestothegovernmentand

employinghundredsofworkers.

Personally,Ibelievethatcigaretteproductionand

consumptionthreatenstodomoreharmthangood.Firstly,

smokingisresponsibleformanyfataldiseasessuchas

lungcancer,heartdiseasesandsoon.Accordingtothe

survey,tobaccoconsumersaccountforabout20%ofthe

worldpopulation,andamongthem,threemillionpeople

diefromsmoking-relateddiseaseseveryyear.Thefact

thattheoutputoftobaccoproductionisreducedfrom

143.64billionpoundsin1994to142billionpoundsin

1995alsosuggeststhatpeoplehavecometorealizethe

negativeeffectsofsmoking.Secondly,tobacco

consumptionisextremelywastefulofmoney.Asis

indicate!inthepictures,200billionUSdollarsislostdue

tosmokingeachyear.Obviously,thetotallossofmoney

aroundtheglobesubstantiallyexceedsthegaininthe

industry.

Inconclusion,astheeconomicdevelopmentaimsat

makingourlifebetter,wecannotsacrificeourhealthfor

short-termfinancialbenefits.Ifwehavetospendmore

andmoremoneyprovidingmedicalservicesforthosewho

sufferfromsmoking-relatedillnesses,thenotionof

promotingeconomyviatobaccoproductionisnot

justifable.Itishightimethatwefoughtforthetotal

tobaccoban.

范文二

Directions:

A.Writeanessaythatconveystheinformationinthe

followingchart/graph/picture/drawing/cartoon

accompaniedbyourcomments.

B.Timelimit:40minutes

C.Wordlimit:nolessthan150words

D.YouressayshouldbewrittenclearlyonANSWER

SHEET

Qodnng

32.7%

(HK$69447ramicn)

(FK$8691MHG

Thispiechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe

exportsofmanufacturingindustriesinHongKongin1996.

Thefirstthingwenoticeisthatthesearealllight

industries.Theyarealsowhatiscalled"labor-intensive",

meaningthattheyemploylargenumbersofpeople.

Theclothingindustryaccountsforthemostexports一

一32.7percent,worthHK$69.447million.Theelectronics

industryisinsecondplacewith26percentoftheexports,

worthHK$55.067million.Textiles,timepieces,chemicals

andjewelrytogetheronlyaccountforabout18percentof

theexports,buttheyproduceitemsworthatotalofover

HK$50million.

ItseemstomethatHongKong,whichhasasmalll

territoryandfewnaturalresources,hasmadetheright

choiceindevelopingtheseindustries.Theyproduce

mainlyexportgoods,whichbringinmuch-neededforeign

currency.Atthesametime,theyprovideemploymentfor

themaximumnumberofpeople.

范文三

Directions:

A.Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteand

essayinatleast150words.

B.Youressaymustbewrittenne