1、七年級下冊寫作典例精講七年級下冊寫作典例精講城市與家鄉主題城市與家鄉主題如何寫出高分作文審題列提綱謀篇布局頭腦風暴家鄉介紹三步走高分寫作演練詞匯升級結構升級文章升級Step 1審題目審題目+列提綱列提綱假設你是李麗，你的朋友 Alice 下周要來玩，請你向她介紹一下你的家鄉。提示詞語：building；fresh air；friendly；look forward to提示問題：Where is your hometown?；Whats your favorite place?Dear Alice, I want to tell you something about my hometown.

2、_Yours,Lili審題目要點：人稱：時態： 一般將來時第一人稱（I, we） 描述家鄉列提綱第一段總：開門見山第二段分：家鄉具體描述第三段總：發出邀請和期待假設你是李麗，你的朋友 Alice 下周要來玩，請你向她介紹一下你的家鄉。提示詞語：building；fresh air；friendly；look forward to提示問題：Where is your hometown?；Whats your favorite place?Dear Alice, I want to tell you something about my hometown._Yours,LiliStep 1謀篇布局

3、謀篇布局1. 家鄉在哪2. 可以參觀什么？4. 為什么去那？3. 對朋友到來的期待介紹家鄉些什么介紹家鄉些什么Step 2家鄉介紹三步走家鄉介紹三步走旅行計劃如何構思？旅行計劃如何構思？Para. 1Para. 2Para. 3誠摯邀請客人誠摯邀請客人開門見山開門見山家鄉地理位置、自家鄉地理位置、自然環境、人文然環境、人文結構首段總 開門見山第二段分 家鄉具體描述第三段總 發出邀請和期待首段總：開門見山 題目已給出 I want to tell you something about my hometown.結構首段總 開門見山第二段分 家鄉具體描述第三段總 發出邀請和期待第二段分 1.家鄉位

4、置；2.家鄉描述：自然 +人文3.你最喜歡的地方。My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. 距離表達：1）be + 公里數 + away from 離多遠Its about 20 kilometres away from the centre of Wuxi. 同義表達：It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of Wuxi by bus. 2）It takes sb. some time to do 花費某人多長時間。Step 1家鄉位置家鄉位置Its v

5、ery beautiful.It is a good place.一星一星 Level 1 簡單句型簡單句型Step 2家鄉樣貌描述：自然家鄉樣貌描述：自然Step 3文章升級文章升級Its very beautiful. 簡單描述簡單描述There are many mountains and clear water in my hometown.Its _ beautiful _ it is becoming a popular place for traveling. so There be 句型 初二句型：so that如此以至于thatStep 2家鄉樣貌描述：自然家鄉樣貌描述：自然

6、It is a good place. 簡單描述Its really a good place to live.Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air.初二非謂語 細節補充Step 2家鄉樣貌描述：自然家鄉樣貌描述：自然There are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. 這里也有很多建筑。If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in the town.細節補充Step 2家鄉樣貌描述：人文家鄉樣貌描述：人

7、文人們超級熱情，而且友好。People here are very good and friendly.人文情況 花式夸獎詞匯upPeople here are very warm-hearted and friendly. 句式upPeople here are not only very warm-hearted but also friendly. 夸贊up夸贊再upStep 2家鄉樣貌描述：自然家鄉樣貌描述：自然I live in a flat near a park. The park is also my favorite place for fun for the reason

8、that I can play with my friends there.最喜歡的地方 + 原因Step 3你最喜歡的地方你最喜歡的地方My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of Wuxi by bus. _, there are many mountains and clear water in my hometown. Its so beautiful that it is becoming a popula

9、r place for traveling. Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air. _, there are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in the town. _, people here are not only very warm-hearted but also helpful. I live in a flat near a park. The

10、park is also my favorite place for fun for the reason that I can play with my friends there.C. To begin withB. Last but not leastA. In addition CBA想一想，填一填想一想，填一填look forward to結構首段總 開門見山第二段分 家鄉具體描述第三段總 發出邀請和期待I am looking forward to seeing you. Im sure you will have a good time!我很期待見到你。我相信你一定會完得很開心。

11、我很期待見到你。我相信你一定會完得很開心。Step 4高分寫作演練高分寫作演練Dear Alice, I want to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of Wuxi by bus. To begin with, there are many mountains and clear water in my hometown. Its

12、 so beautiful that it is becoming a popular place for traveling. Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air. In addition, there are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in the town. Last but not least, people here are not only v

13、ery warm-hearted but also friendly. I live in a flat near a park. The park is also my favorite place for fun for the reason that I can play with my friends there. I am looking forward to seeing you. Im sure you will have a good time!Yours, Lili高分范文高分范文親愛的愛麗絲,我想告訴你一些關于我家鄉的事情。我的家鄉在無錫北部的一個小鎮上。乘公共汽車到無錫市

14、中心通常需要40分鐘左右。首先，在我的家鄉有許多山和清澈的水。它是如此美麗，正成為一個受歡迎的旅游地方。因為有新鮮的空氣，它真的是一個居住的好地方。此外，在我的家鄉也有很多高樓大廈。如果你來這里，你會發現在這里旅行很方便。最后重要的一點，這里的人不僅很熱心而且很友好。我住在公園附近的一套公寓里。這個公園也是我最喜歡的地方，因為我可以在這里和我的朋友玩。我期待見到你。我相信你一定會玩得很開心的。李麗范文翻譯范文翻譯寫作積累寫作積累萬能模板萬能模板Dear xxx, I want to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is in

15、a small town in the north of xxx. It usually takes us about 40 minutes to reach the centre of xxx by bus. To begin with, there are many mountains and clear water in my hometown. Its so beautiful that it is becoming a popular place for traveling. Its really a good place to live because of the fresh air. In addition, there are also a lot of tall buildings in my town. If you go here, you will find it convenient to travel in th