1、高考英語書面表達書信和通知輔導【題例一】 書面表達：(NMET1999)假設你是李華，在一所中學讀書。最近收到美國朋友Smith 先生的來信。他三年前參觀過你校，聽說現在變化很大，希望了解有關情況。參照下圖（圖片無法顯示，見高考糾錯本 英語一書，下同），給他寫一封回信，介紹你校的變化。注意：1回信須包括圖畫的主要內容，可以適當增減細節，使內容連貫。2詞數100左右。Dear Mr Smith,Im glad to receive your letter.Yes,youre right,in the past three years great changes happened in my sc

2、hool.There is only one school building in my school three years ago,but now,there is another new building at the east of our school and a library at the weast where used to be my playground.The new playground is built out of my school age.So my school becomes larger than before.Also around my school

3、 there are lots of trees which are planted by ourselves.Now,my school becomes large and beautiful.I hope some day you can come to my school.Well welcome you!Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【誤點及糾錯】1短語句子不符習慣【糾錯】本文要點基本齊全,但在表達中有些層次不清,且有多處語法和用法不當的錯誤. 第二句話Yes, youre right, in the past three years great changes ha

4、ppened in my school.中,有用詞搭配錯誤，change 不能與happen一起使用，happen應改為take place,而且此處時態應該用完成時和時間狀語in the past three years呼應。改后的句子為：Yes, youre right, in the past three years great changes have taken place in my school. 第二段第一句中is 應改為was. at the east of our school 應改為 in the east of our school. at the weast應改為 i

5、n the west, weast 是拼寫錯誤。 age是明顯的拼寫錯誤，應該是gate,這種錯誤應盡量避免；out of my school gate 指的是大門外，不妥。把out of 改成in front of 或outside較好。 Now, my school becomes large and beautiful這句話可改為：Now, my school become more and more beautiful.理由同。Well welcome you ! 應改為:You are welcome!又如“題例二” get to 是固定詞組。write down是固定詞組，意為“記

6、下”。“在吃午飯時”，應用介詞短語。“to ones joy”是固定詞組，意為“令某人高興的是。” another意為“又一”。又如“題例三” raise 相當于lift,指把某物位置升高；improve相當于become better,意為“改進；提高”。按英語習慣，表達“歡迎某人做某事”時，經常把welcome用作形容詞。又如“題例四”cant常用來表示“能力；可能性”，此處最好用shouldnt。2上下文缺乏邏輯【糾錯】 where used to be my playground 中存在邏輯錯誤，應改為：where our old playground used to be .3結論不

7、當【糾錯】 So my school becomes larger than before 這個結論不太恰當，學校不會因為操場的遷出而變大，況且在原操場處又建了圖書館，這句話應去掉。參考范文：Dear Mr Smith,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom

8、building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see

9、for yourself some day.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【題例二】書面表達：用日記形式記一次有意義的旅行。提示：1時間：2000年4月16日，星期天；2天氣：晴；3人員：你班全體人員；4地點：森林（乘車兩小時到達）；5活動內容：記錄看到的動植物，野餐，檢驗河水，看看是否有污染。要求：詞數不少于100詞。習作：Sunday, April 16,2000 FineThis Sunday(Today) our class organized a trip to a forest. We went by bus and it takes(took)us two ho

10、urs to get to) the forest. When we arrived, we walked through the forest separately. While we were walking, we (we) recorded all the wildlife and plants we could see in the forest (as we walked).When we found an unknown plant, we wrote (it down) in our notebooks.Lunch(At lunch) time we made a fire i

11、n the open and cooked the meal over it. After lunch, we came to a river and tested the water to see if it was polluting(ed).Late in the afternoon we returned. In(To our) joy, we not only learned about some wildlife and plants, but also enjoyed ourselves very much. I hope Ill have other(another) chan

12、ce to go out for a more interesting outing.4時間狀語誤用【糾錯】日記記述的是當天發生的事情，故此處狀語使用“Today”更準確。5時態誤用【糾錯】日記多用過去時，與上下文時態一致。6缺乏句子間的連接成分【糾錯】此處用as引導狀語從句，意為“一邊一邊”。7時態和語態誤用【糾錯】“檢查河水是否受到污染”，從句中應用被動語態。【題例三】書面表達：英語學生會將舉辦英語演講比賽，請用英語起草一份通知（notice）.通知包括以下內容：演講時間：下周六下午三點地點：201室題目：自定，演講時間不得超過10分鐘。報名辦法：向班長報名（sign up）評判及獎勵：邀

13、請五位教師任評委（judge）,獲前十名的參賽者（contestant）獲獎舉辦單位：學生會寫通知日期：2002年5月18日習作：NoticeMay 18, 2002In order to raise(improve)the students ability to speak English, the Students Union of the English Department will hold an English contest in Room 201 on Saturday at 3 p.m. next week. Those who are willing to take par

14、t in it sign up with the monitors now. Every contestant can speak about the (any)subject within ten minutes. Five teachers will be (invited to be)judges. The first ten winners will be given awards as an encouragement. Welcome all(All) the students(are welcome)to be present at the contest.The Student

15、s Union 8時間順序不當【糾錯】當句子有兩個時間狀語時應先說具體的，即先說小的，后說大的。9內容要點遺漏【糾錯】根據提示，演講者可自選任何一個主題。句中應表示出“邀請”字樣。又如“題例四” 本通知是在上語音課之前，科代表在教室里發表的，所以動詞應用go。there本身即副詞，不必用in。【題例四】書面表達：假如你是英語科代表，在去語言實驗室上聽力課之前，向全班宣布注意事項：請提前5分鐘來語言實驗室；換鞋進語言實驗室；除教材外不要帶其他東西；按老師指令做，不要隨便動機器；課堂上只許講英語，不許講漢語；可以復制聽力材料；課后關機，按順序離開實驗室。注意：不要逐條翻譯，以口頭通知形式寫一篇短文

16、。字數：100字左右。通知開頭已給出：Hello, everyone. May I have your attention, please?Hello, everyone. May I have your attention, please? I have something important to tell you.When we have classes in the sound lab, please go (be)there five minutes earlier. Change your shoes before you come(go) into the lab. Dont t

17、ake anything into the lab except your textbooks, Once youre in there, follow the teachers instruction(s).Dont touch the machines unless the teacher tells you(to).In class you can only speak English. You cant(shouldnt) speak Chinese. You can use the machines to make a copy of the listening material.

18、When class is over, turn off your machine and leave the lab one by one.Thats all. Thank you .(這是口頭通知常用的結束語。)10用詞不當【糾錯】文章開場白寫得好，符合口頭通知習慣用語，上下句銜接自然。此處用be或get，語義表達才更確切。此處不必要使用定冠詞。11單復數不一致【糾錯】instruction在作“指示；說明；指令”解時，應使用復數形式。【整合練習】I).下面6幅畫描述了5月9日中午你和父母，姐姐在動物園一起午餐時所發生的事情。根據這些圖畫用英語寫一篇日記。注意：1.日記應包括圖中要點，可以

19、適當增加細節，使其連貫。2.詞數：100個左右。3.日記的開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數。May 9, Sunday FineThis morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo生詞：廢物箱 litter-basketII) .假如你是南京某中學學生李華。“十一”國慶節將至，你校外籍教師Alex打算利用“十一”長假外出旅游，請根據下面的圖例和中文提示用英語寫一封信，為Alex提供旅游建議。日期活動安排10月1日上午8：00從南京出發，下午游覽天安門廣場10月2日登長城10月3，4日游覽頤和園；逛商場，購物10月5日登泰山10月6日早上看日出

20、，下午返回注意：1.短文必須包括所有內容，要點，可適當增加細節，使其連貫，通順。2.詞數：100左右。3.信的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。Dear Alex,Here is my suggestion about your journey during the long National Day holidaysIII).假如你叫李明，你有一位英國網友名叫Tom，他聽說過中國的故宮，但知之不多，于是給你發來了email，請你給他介紹一下有關故宮的一些情況。請你根據下面提供的一些要點給他回一封電子郵件：1. 故宮（the Palace Museum）又叫紫禁城（the Forbidden Cit

21、y）。它于1407年開始修建，二十萬人花了十四年的時間，于1420年建成。2. 它所有的宮殿一共有999個房間。在中國“9”這個數字傳統地被認為是吉祥的。3. 現在，每周星期二，故宮免費向中國學生開發。4. 故宮保存著中國歷史上五千多年來的珍寶（precious treasures）。請他親自來看一下。IV).假如你是李華，你的鄰居張達去年七月畢業于安徽大學，現準備到南方找一家公司任職，而你的表哥恰好是南方一家公司的人事部負責人。現在請你用英語為他寫一封推薦信。張達的個人資料如下表：姓名張達性別男年齡23婚姻狀況未婚政治面貌黨員身體健康，身高1.82米專業廣告設計特長繪畫，打字，英語讀寫，汽車

22、駕駛性格特點少言語，細致，耐勞，有創新精神愛好乒乓球注意：詞數100個左右。V).假如你是校學生會主席，根據學校的安排，由你給全校同學播送一條通知。內容如下：1. 10月16日（星期六）下午2：30有一個實事報告2. 報告人：英國劍橋大學Smith Milton教授3. 報告內容：東西方不同建筑風格及其對藝術，文化的影響4. 地點：學校禮堂5. 要求：所有同學都要參加，準時到場，認真聽講，做好筆記。在聽報告期間，如有問題詢問，可舉手或遞紙條給報告人。報告會結束后將分班進行討論請根據以上內容寫一則100詞左右的英文廣播通知。參考答案：1May 9,Sunday FineThis morning

23、my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At noon we had a picnic on the grass. I ate too much, so I couldnt finish my sandwich. As I didnt know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advice. She pointed at the notice, which said, “ No litter.” And she asked me to throw the sandwich into the l

24、itter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slowly towards us. Suddenly an idea came into my mind. I could feed the elephant with my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seeing this, my sister smiled and said, “How clever you are!”2. Dear Alex,Here is my suggestion about your journey during the lo

25、ng National Day holidays. On October 1,you may take the 8:00 flight to Beijing. You are to visit the Tianan men Square in the afternoon. Next day, I suggest you visit the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world. For the next two days, you can go to the Summer Palace, walk around and do some shoppi

26、ng. On October 5,you are to take a train to Taian City to climb Mount Tai on the top of which, if lucky, youll have the chance to see the sunrise early in the morning. On the afternoon of October 6,you may return to Nanjing by train. I wish you could enjoy your travel.Yours,Li Hua3. Dear Tom,It is n

27、ice to receive your email. Now Id like to tell you something about the Palace Museum.Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City. It took 200,000 workers more than 14 years to build it. The Forbidden City was finished in 1420.As the largest museum in the world, the Palace Museum holds cultural t

28、reasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history. The Citys palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether. Chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number. Students from all over China can now visit it in groups free of charge every Tuesday. The museum is under reconstruction.I hope y

29、ou can come to China and take a look at this museum with your own eyes.Best wishes. Yours,Li Ming4. Dear cousin,I am writing to you to introduce my neighbour, who is also my friend, to you. His name is Zhang Da, a Party member. He had studied advertisement design in Anhui University for four years,

30、and in July last year he graduated from the university with good achievement in his study. I learned he wanted to find a job for himself in a company in the south, and I immediately thought of your company. Zhang is a tall young man of 23,and is unmarried. He is good at many things especially at dra

31、wing, typing and driving. He also speaks and writes English excellently and he plays table tennis well. He speaks little but he works hard and carefully with the spirit of making innovations. So I think you need such a person.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua5. Boys and girls,May I have your attention, pleas

32、e? Now I have an announcement to make. There will be a lecture in our school auditorium on Saturday Oct.16.It is about the different styles between eastern and western architecture and their effects on art and culture. The lecture will be given by Smith Milton, a professor from Cambridge University

33、in England. It will begin at 2:30 p.m. Everyone is required to attend. Please listen carefully and take notes. If somebody has a question, please put up your hand or write it down on a piece of paper and pass it to the speaker. After the lecture, well have a discussion in each class.Please do rememb

34、er the time and place:2:30 p.m. Saturday Oct.16,school auditorium. Dont be late.Thats all. Thank you. 一起始的過渡語1. To begin with(首先)，, smoking should be banned in public areas.2. Generally speaking（總體上講）, the more you practice, the more skillfully you can write in English.3. First of all, doing exercis

35、e every day is of great importance in keeping fit.4. In the first place, agriculture needs to be developed quickly to feed the world population.二 結尾常用過渡語1. Therefore(因此), it takes longer time and more energy to communicate in written English than in oral English.2. Thus(因此)，taking morning exercises

36、regularly may reduce the chances of getting sick.3. In brief(簡而言之), we should develop a good habit of study.4. In a word, country life is more beneficial to city life.三 表示先后次序的過渡詞語1. 1 時間：while, when, as 當的時候 before 在之前soon after, after, after that, then 然后 just then 在那時as soon as 一就 Early in the mo

37、rning大清早after a while 過了一會兒 This morning 今天早晨the next moment 緊接著 The other day 幾天前a few minutes later 幾分鐘以后 Finally, In the end, at last 最后soon , before long 不久2遞進: first of all 首先 next 其次besides 此外3因果:because so as a result thus 因而therefore因此，所以4轉折:butalthough, thoughyethoweverotherwise, or 否則in sp

38、ite of ， despite不管unexpectedly 沒想到instead of 而不是，反而5比較like 象 ，正如unlike 不象，不同于compared with 與相比on the contrary 相反on the other hand 在另一方面6進一步說明in other words 換句話說namely 也就是that is to say 也就是說such as 比如for example, for instance 例如7總結in a word 總之in general 一般來說in short 簡而言之after all 畢竟generally speaking

39、 概括地說應用類1. I want to ask two days leave because I need to be physically examined.2. May I have your attention, please, everybody? I have an announcement to make.3. I am writing to thank you for having given me so much help.4. When I arrived at your home, you happened to be out, so I left the message

40、.5. I am writing to make an apology to you for what I have said about you and what I have done to you.說明類（方向、坐落、指示）1 My home is not far from here; it is only two blocks (away from here).2 The bookstore is right on the left side of the street.3 The museum is on the opposite side of the street.4 There

41、 is a beautiful garden lying in the middle of the square.5 There will be a strong wind to the north of the Huai River.6 They live next door to us. They are our next-door neighbors.7 Ireland is a large island in Europe.8 Northern Ireland is part of the United Kingdom while the rest of the island make

42、s up the Republic of Ireland.9 The Ireland just west of Britain is called Ireland.10 Between Britain and Ireland, in the Irish Sea, lies the small Isle of Man.11 The British Isles are surrounded by the Atlantic Ocean to the west, and the North Sea to the east.12 The largest island is called Britain,

43、 which is separated from France by the English Channel, which at one point is only 20 miles wide.13 A new factory is to be located on this site.14 The information office is located in the city center.15 Behind it you will find a white building. Thats the library where you can find the very book.16 T

44、he village is situated in a valley.17 Where will the school be located?18 This is a beautiful situation overlooking the valley.19 That is the right direction of the site.20 Go/walk straight until you find the traffic lights/reach a crossroads. Turn right, and you will find a bus找工作/求職1. I read your

45、advertisement in yesterdays newspaper.2. I think I can be the right/suitable person you want. I want to be a volunteer.3. I know from it that you have a vacancy for a typist/driver/secretary, etc.4. I am sure I am suitable for the job.5. Besides being good at typing, I have fluent/excellent spoken E

46、nglish.6. I want very much to apply for the job you offer.7. I am very interested in the job.8. If I can get the job/can be employed, I will try my best to do it well.9. I am looking forward to receiving your reply.寫信/郵件/回信1. I am writing to tell you that we will have a get-together/ party next week

47、.2. I am writing to ask whether you have made a final decision to study abroad.3. I am glad to receive your letter/e-mail saying that you are coming here next month. I am glad to know that you have been admitted to your dream university.4. Remember me to your family. Good luck!5. Expecting your writ

48、ing back 圖表變化類用語1. As we can see from the chart, the number of people who use mobile phones is increasing steadily. 2. As can be seen from the table, there have been great changes in the ways of people getting information.3. Compared to the year before last, it is obvious that the number has fallen

49、sharply.4. Great changes have taken place since 2000.5. The number stays nearly the same, indicating that reading remains an important way that people acquire knowledge or find information.6. More and more people turn to the Internet.7. Nowadays, people have changed greatly in their eating habits.8.

50、 It is no doubt it is the quickest and most convenient way to do things.9. Living in the country, people can refresh themselves, breathing the fresh air.10. By riding bicycles, people can produce, in a certain degree, no pollution to the environment.11. More people are rich enough to afford such thi

51、ngs as traveling.12. Therefore, we can see it is a natural process with the development of science.記人類1. Hong Zhanhui, aged 23, a college student, is one of the top ten people who moved China in 2005.2. He treated well/ took good care of his 11-year-old sister like a father.3. He is highly praised f

52、or what he has done and what he is doing.4. Poor as he is, he never gives up his studies.5. Such is Hong Zhanhui, a poor but strong-minded and great person.敘事類1. The other day I was playing in the park when I met a foreigner， who was looking very worried.2. He thanked me for having helped him out of

53、 trouble.3. Seeing the case, I jumped off my bike and helped the driver, whose car was struck in the mud.4. Through our joint efforts, we managed to do it/made it/succeeded in catching the thief.5. The badly hurt boy was rushed to the nearest hospital.6. It so happened that I was passing there.7. Fi

54、ve minutes later, some firefighters with an ambulance arrived.8. It was the boys bravery and cleverness that saved the people on the train.日記類1. It is Sunday today. This morning we had a social activity-visiting a car factory/ a farm/ a theme park.2. From the activity we have learned a lot.3. We ben

55、efited a lot from the activity.4. We can realize that science is playing a more and more important part/role in modern agriculture and industry.5. From it we must enhance our sense of duty to protect wildlife and our Mother Earth.6. While visiting, we thought a lot.7. What an unforgettable experienc

56、e!8. Never shall I forget the activity!9. This is the lesson we should learn.10. Though tired, we felt very happy.講道理類、觀點對比類21 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.22 There are several reasons for it.23 I dont think it is good for a child to begin learning a foreign language at a rather early age.24 We have two main reasons why we are against it.25 This should be done under others guidance/with others help.26 To value time is to value life.27 One of the reasons is that most of us cannot afford it.2