PAGEPAGE1SectionⅦWriting——趣聞軼事記敘文eq\a\vs4\al([文體指導(dǎo)])個(gè)人軼事屬于記敘文范疇，要遵循下面五個(gè)步驟：1．簡述故事的梗概——Introduction給出簡要的信息，說明在某時(shí)、某地你做了什么，遇到了什么人，在此之前發(fā)生了什么事情。ThatwastheworstdayIhaveeverhadwhenIwasdoing...2．故事的起先——Beginningofthenarrative描述這個(gè)帶有幽默性質(zhì)的故事是怎樣起先的。AsIwaswaitingforabus，ataxipassedbyandsplashedrainwateroverme...3．故事的發(fā)展——Developmentofthenarrative描寫接下來發(fā)生的事情，即在哪些方面出了問題。Whenwehurriedtothestation，therewasalongqueueandwehadtowaitforalongtime.Wegotdisgusted...4．故事進(jìn)一步走向高潮——Furtherdevelopmentofthenarrative又有了新的插曲，使得故事更具有幽默性。Iwashavingaphototakenwhenmyclassmatefellintothewater.Luckily，atthemoment...5．進(jìn)行總結(jié)——Conclusion故事的結(jié)尾寫你和你的同學(xué)是怎樣圓滿地把事情解決的。Intheend，thekeepertookustotheofficeandwedriedoutJack'sclothes.Whenwefinallygothome，myparentssawusfunnyandweallburstoutlaughing.eq\a\vs4\al([亮點(diǎn)句式])1．Ihadnoideahowto...2．TherewasabsolutelynothingIcoulddoaboutit.3．Iwenttotallyoutofcontrol.4．Istartedtogetthefeelingthat...5．Itwasarealshamethat...6．Theyallburstoutlaughing.7．Thefunniestthingaboutitwasthat...8．Everythingworkedoutallrightintheend.eq\a\vs4\al([寫作任務(wù)])依據(jù)提示，通過買鞋的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，以第一人稱編寫一個(gè)小故事。一天，我在一家鞋店買了一雙皮鞋，店員告知我這鞋實(shí)行“三包”。四天后這鞋壞了，我很生氣，回到鞋店想要回我的錢。但店員不想賠錢，他說，“三包”就是保留三天。eq\a\vs4\al([審題謀篇])體裁記敘文時(shí)態(tài)一般過去時(shí)為主主題買鞋人稱第一人稱為主結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：介紹買鞋的狀況；其次段：敘述回鞋店維權(quán)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。eq\a\vs4\al([遣詞造句])Ⅰ.對接單元詞匯1．bewornout 穿壞的；用舊的2．getback 取回；要回3．makesb.astonished 使某人感到震驚4．keepone'spromise 遵守諾言Ⅱ.巧用單元句式、語法(一)完成句子1．那里的售貨員告知我這鞋實(shí)行三包。Andthesellertheretoldmehewouldhave“threeguarantees”fortheshoes．2．我問他為什么不信守承諾。Iaskedhimwhyhedidn'tkeephispromise．(二)句式升級(jí)3．Butonlyfourdayslatertheshoeswerewornout.Iwasangryandreturnedtotheshop.Ihopedtogetbackmymoney.(用so和非謂語動(dòng)詞改寫句子)Butonlyfourdayslatertheshoeswerewornout，soIwasangryandreturnedtotheshophopingtogetbackmymoney.4．HeknewIhadkepttheshoesforfourdays.Hedidn'twanttocompensateme.Itmademeastonished.(用時(shí)間狀語從句和定語從句改寫句子)WhenheknewIhadkepttheshoesforfourdays，hedidn'twanttocompensateme，whichmademeastonished.eq\a\vs4\al([妙筆成篇])【參考范文】ThreeGuaranteesOnedayIboughtapairofleathershoesinashoeshop.Andthesellertheretoldmehewouldhave“threeguarantees”fortheshoes.Ilefttheshophappily.Butonlyfourdayslatertheshoeswerewornout，soIwasangryandreturnedtotheshophopingtogetbackmymoney.Itoldhimwhathadhappenedtomyshoes.WhenheknewIhadkepttheshoesforfourdays，hedidn'twanttocompensateme,whichmademeastonished.Iaskedhimwhyhedidn'tkeephispromise.Butthesellersaid