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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Katie’sdadworksonaferry.AllspringandsummerhebringshomestoriesaboutThePirate,awharf(船塢、碼頭)cat.Throughherdad’stales,Katiehascometorespectthiswildcreaturewhotakesdelightintroublingdogs,killswharfrats,andbattlesaseagulloverpossessionofapilingnearthewharf.Onepleasantfallnight,afteraweekofcoldandrain,Dadbroughtthepoorinjuredcathomeandsaidthatheneededsomecareandawarmplacetorecover.AlthoughMomisn’tfondofpets,shefindssomesoftragstoputaroundhim.Thenextmorning,hewasawakewhenIsteppedintothekitchen.Withoutraisinghishead,hecurleduphislipandhissed(發出咝咝聲)atme.“Stayawayfromhim,”Momordered.“Apetheisn’t.You’dthinkhe’dbealittlemoreappreciative.”Itookoverpreparinghisfood.Thehissinglessened,buthenevertookhiseyesoffus,andhisexpressioncertainlydidnotsaythankyou.ThenexttimeIfedhim,Ibroughtabook,andafterputtingdownthefood,Isatonthefarsideoftheporchandstartedreading.Thatcatglaredatme,butIignoredhim.Afteralmosthalfanhour,hebegantoslipout.Ikeptreading,andsoonIcouldhearhimeatingthefish.Thenextday,ittooktenminutesforhimtocomeout,andthedayafterthat,onlythreeminutes.Ialsobeganmovingthebowlalittleclosereachday.TheMondaybeforeThanksgiving,Itriedputtingthebowlinmylap.Hecameandstoodinfrontofmebutwouldnotcomeanyfarther.Finallyheletoutayowl.OnTuesday,Iputapieceoffishinmyhandandhelditouttohim.Ittooktime,buthefinallywolfeditdown.OnWednesday,whenhetookthelastbitefrommyhand,Imovedmyfingerslightlyunderhischin.Heshrankbackbutdidn’trunaway.OnThanksgiving,heactuallyletmepethim.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnDad’snexteveningoff,weputThePirateinaboxanddrovedowntothewharf.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________海盜貓故事續寫續寫要點(兩段)?第一段:?親密互動細節:細致描述感恩節后“我”與海盜貓更深入的互動場景,如“我”給它梳理毛發時,它舒服地瞇起眼睛,喉嚨里發出持續的咕嚕聲,“AfterThanksgiving,thebondbetweenThePirateandmegrewstronger.WhenIcombedhisfur,hewouldclosehiseyescomfortably,acontinuouspurrresonatingfromhisthroat.Heseemedtotrulyenjoythisgentletouch,andhisbodywouldrelaxcompletelyundermyhands.”。?融入家庭表現:全面展現海盜貓融入家庭后的種種表現,它會跟著媽媽在廚房踱步,好奇地看著媽媽做飯,還會在爸爸休息時跳上沙發,依偎在爸爸身邊,“ThePiratestartedtointegrateintoourfamilylifeinvariousways.HewouldfollowMomaroundthekitchen,hiseyesfullofcuriosityasshecooked.WhenDadwasrestingonthecouch,ThePiratewouldjumpupandsnugglebesidehim,asifseekingthewarmthoffamily.”。?家庭氛圍變化:深入刻畫因為海盜貓的改變,家庭氛圍變得更加溫馨和諧,一家人會因為海盜貓的有趣行為而歡笑不斷,“Theonce-tenseatmosphereathometransformedintoawarmandharmoniousone.OurfamilywasfilledwithlaughterbecauseofThePirate'samusingantics.Wewouldsharestoriesabouthisnewbehaviorsatthedinnertable,andthesemomentsbroughtusclosertogether.”。?第二段:?送貓回碼頭過程:生動描繪送海盜貓回碼頭途中,它在盒子里不安分的狀態,爪子不停地抓撓盒子內壁,發出急切的叫聲,“Onthewaytothewharf,ThePiratewasextremelyrestlessinthebox.Hisclawsscratchedtheinnerwallsoftheboxcontinuously,andhisurgentmeowsfilledthecar.Heseemedtosensethatsomethingsignificantwasabouttohappen,andhisanxietywaspalpable.”。?碼頭分別場景:具體呈現到達碼頭打開盒子后,海盜貓沖向熟悉的地方,然后回頭張望時的眼神和動作,仿佛在訴說不舍,“Whenwearrivedatthewharfandopenedthebox,ThePirateshotoutlikeanarrow,runningstraighttowardsthepilingheonceclaimedashisown.Butthen,hepausedandturnedback,hiseyeslookingatusintently.Histailswayedgently,asifhewastryingtoconveyhisgratitudeandreluctance.”。?“我”的內心感受:深入闡述“我”看著海盜貓離開時復雜的內心感受,既有對分別的不舍,又為它回到熟悉的環境感到欣慰,“AsIwatchedThePiratedisappearintotheshadowsofthewharf,amixofemotionswelledupinsideme.Ifeltadeepsenseoflossatthethoughtofnotseeinghimeveryday,butatthesametime,Iwasgladthathewasbackinhisnaturalhabitat.Iknewthatourtimetogetherhadbeenprecious,andithadchangedbothThePirateandme.”。?情感線(150字)?感恩節后,“我”與海盜貓的情感愈發深厚,從最初的警惕對立轉變為親密無間,海盜貓融入家庭,讓“我”感受到溫暖與快樂,家庭氛圍也變得溫馨。送它回碼頭時,“我”內心滿是不舍,看著它奔向熟悉的地方,又為它能回歸原本的生活而感到欣慰。在與海盜貓相處的過程中,“我”體會到了付出愛與收獲信任的美好,情感經歷了從陌生到喜愛,再到分別時復雜交織的變化。?故事線(6條)?凱蒂的爸爸在碼頭工作,常給凱蒂講海盜貓的故事,凱蒂聽聞海盜貓的種種事跡,對它心生敬意。?秋天的一個夜晚,爸爸帶回受傷的海盜貓,媽媽雖不喜歡寵物,但還是幫忙找了軟布照顧它。?凱蒂負責給海盜貓喂食,一開始海盜貓充滿警惕,后來在凱蒂的耐心陪伴下,逐漸放下防備,與凱蒂的互動越來越多。?感恩節后,海盜貓徹底改變,融入凱蒂的家庭,與家人親密無間,給家庭帶來許多歡樂。?爸爸休息時,一家人決定送海盜貓回碼頭,途中海盜貓表現得很不安。?到達碼頭后,海盜貓沖向熟悉的地方,然后回頭與凱蒂和爸爸告別,消失在碼頭的陰影中,凱蒂雖有不舍,但也為它回歸家園感到欣慰。?主旨升華句5句英文?Thisheart-warmingstoryvividlydemonstratesthatwithpatienceandlove,eventhewildestofcreaturescanbetamed,andtheresultingbondcanbringimmeasurablejoyandwarmthtoourlives.?這個溫馨的故事生動地表明,憑借耐心和愛,即使是最野性的生物也能被馴服,而由此產生的情感紐帶能給我們的生活帶來無法估量的快樂和溫暖。?ThroughKatie'scareforThePirate,weareremindedthateverylivingbeinghasthepotentialtochangeandconnectwithothers,andouractsofkindnesscancreateabridgebetweendifferentworlds.?通過凱蒂對海盜貓的照顧,我們被提醒,每個生物都有改變和與他人建立聯系的潛力,我們的善舉可以在不同的世界之間架起一座橋梁。?ThejourneyofThePiratefromawildandunrulycattoabelovedfamilymembershowcasesthepowerofcompassionandtheprofoundimpactitcanhaveonboththegiverandthereceiver.?海盜貓從一只野性難馴的貓到成為深受喜愛的家庭成員的歷程,展示了同情的力量以及它對給予者和接受者都能產生的深遠影響。?Thisnarrativeservesasapoignantreminderthatsometimes,themostunexpectedconnectionscanbringthegreatesthappiness,andthememorieswecreateduringthesespecialtimeswillstaywithusforever.?這個故事有力地提醒我們,有時候,最意想不到的聯系能帶來最大的幸福,而我們在這些特殊時刻創造的回憶將永遠伴隨著我們。?Fromtheinitialencounterwiththeinjuredcattothebittersweetfarewellatthewharf,weseethatlifeisfullofbeautifulsurprises,andourabilitytoloveandcarecantransformnotonlyothersbutalsoourselvesinthemostwonderfulways.?從最初與受傷的貓相遇,到在碼頭苦樂參半的告別,我們看到生活充滿了美麗的驚喜,我們去愛和關心的能力不僅能以最奇妙的方式改變他人,也能改變我們自己。?寫作示范一?OnThanksgiving,heactuallyletmepethim.Afterthat,ThePirate'stransformationwasastonishing.Everymorning,hewouldwaitformeatthekitchendoor,meowingsoftly.WhenIsatontheporchtoread,hewouldjumpontomylapandcurlup,purringcontentedly.Ieventaughthimsomesimpletricks,likefetchingasmalltoy.Mom,whousedtobeindifferent,nowoftenlaughedatThePirate'sfunnybehaviors.Hehadtrulybecomeanindispensablepartofourfamily,fillingourdayswithjoy.?OnDad’snexteveningoff,weputThePirateinaboxanddrovedowntothewharf.Asweapproached,ThePirateseemedtosensewhereweweregoing.Hemeowedloudlyandscratchedthebox.Whenweopenedthebox,herushedouttowardshisoldpiling.Butthen,heturnedaroundandlookedatusforalongtime.Hiseyesseemedtoholdathousandwords.Wewatchedashedisappearedintotheshadows.AlthoughIfeltapangofsadness,Iknewthiswashishome.Thetimewespenttogetherhadchangedhimandme,andIwasgratefulforthosepreciousmemories.?寫作示范二?OnThanksgiving,heactuallyletmepethim.Fromthenon,ThePirate'sattitudetowardsuschangedcompletely.Hewouldfollowmearoundthehouse,likealittleshadow.Intheevenings,hewouldliebesidemeonthecouchwhilewewatchedTV.Imadeasmallbedforhim,andhelovedit.Momalsostartedtoshowheraffectionforhim,oftengivinghimsometreats.ThePiratehadbroughtourfamilycloser.?OnDad’snexteveningoff,weputThePirateinaboxanddrovedowntothewharf.Asthefamiliarsceneryofthewharfcameintoview,ThePiratebecameextremelyexcited.Whenweopenedthebox,herantowardsthepiling,hisoldterritory.Buthestoppedandlookedbackatus,meowing.Itwasasifhewasthankingus.DadandIstoodthere,watchinghim.Ifeltabitsadtoseehimgo,butIknewitwasforthebest.ThetimewithThePiratehadbeenawonderfulchapterinmylife,andIwouldalwayscherishit.?參考答案OnThanksgiving,heactuallyletmepethim.WhenIscratchedunderhischin,hehalf-closedhiseyesandlookedupatmewithanexpressionthatwasn’tdisagreeable.Thingsseemedtobegoingprettywell.Hestoppedtryingtoescapeandseemedgladtoseeme.It
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