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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheIceCreamTruck“Nevergiveup!Nevergiveup!”chantedtwoyoungchildren,MaxandLily,astheymarchedbarefootbehindtheirgrandmotherMimiwhowasleadingthemonagreatadventure,straightoffthebeachwheretheyhadspentthedaybuildingsandcastlesandswimminginthesea.Theywereseekingthemysteriousicecreamtruck!Overtheyears,Mimihadbeeanexampleofpositivityforherfamily.Itwasnotatitlesheearnedwithouteffort,however.Herhusbanddiedearlyandatonlyfortyyearsoldshewaslefttoraiseherdaughteralone.Shefacedtheheartbreakingdisasterpowerfulenough.Shecouldhavelivedunderablackcloud.Butshechallengedherselftofindjoyeverydayinstead.Shewasalwaysupforanewchallenge,whetherthatwashikingacrosstherockymountaininAustriatogetabetterviewofthebreathtakingscenery,orsigningupfortapdancingclassesatfifty.Leadingbyexample,Mimitaughtherdaughterjusthowmuchonecouldachievewithapositiveattitude.Andobviouslyshehadtakenthesameapproachinherrelationshipwithhergrandchildrenaswell.BeforestartingheradventurewithMaxandLilyonthathotJulyafternoon,Mimiheardtheicecreamman’sbellfromherbeachchair.Sheturnedandsawhimbriefly,spottinghisgreenshirtandcatchingthesightofhiswavingbellbeforeheturnedanddisappeared.Theicecreammanvisitedthebeachonadailybasis,althoughthedelaybetweenthesoundofhisbellandthedisappearanceofhistruckwasnotlong.Onemustbequicktocatchhim.MaxandLilyweredisappointedwhentheydidn’tcatchhimintimethatday.ThatwasuntilMimi’seyesshoneandshesaid,“Nevergiveup!”Sheexplainedthatthetruckmightbegone,buttheycouldhurryuptofinditatitsnextstop.Theywalkedblockafterblock.Notknowingwhichdirectionthetruckhadtaken,theyhadtomaketheirbestguessaboutwheretosearch.Thekids’tinylegsweretired,buttheywenton,continuingthechant,“Nevergiveup!Nevergiveup!”注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Afterabouttwentyminutesofwalking,Max’sfaithstartedtogetshakenintheburningsun.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justtwoblockslater,theyfoundit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一個炎熱的七月午后,Max和Lily在沙灘玩耍時,沒能及時趕上賣冰淇淋的卡車,感到很失望。他們的奶奶Mimi是個積極樂觀的人,她以自身經(jīng)歷為榜樣,教育家人積極面對生活。看到孩子們失落,Mimi鼓勵他們“永不放棄”,并帶著他們?nèi)ふ冶苛芸ㄜ嚒K麄冄刂值酪宦穼ふ遥⒆觽冸m腿酸疲憊,但仍在Mimi的帶領(lǐng)下,喊著口號堅持前行。故事山分析開端:Max和Lily在沙灘沒趕上冰淇淋卡車,Mimi決定帶他們?nèi)ふ?。發(fā)展:三人在烈日下走了很久,方向不明,孩子們開始疲憊。高潮:Max信念動搖,此時他們發(fā)現(xiàn)了冰淇淋卡車。結(jié)局:找到卡車,滿足心愿,同時也領(lǐng)悟到堅持的意義。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:Mimi是積極樂觀的榜樣?;貞?yīng):在Max信念動搖時,Mimi用積極的話語鼓勵他,體現(xiàn)其榜樣作用。伏筆:孩子們疲憊但仍堅持喊口號。回應(yīng):在尋找過程中,口號成為他們堅持的動力,最終找到卡車,凸顯堅持的力量。伏筆:冰淇淋卡車每日來沙灘,行駛路線有規(guī)律?;貞?yīng):根據(jù)這個規(guī)律,他們推測出卡車下一個可能出現(xiàn)的地點,最終成功找到。伏筆:Mimi聽到冰淇淋車的鈴聲并看到其短暫身影。回應(yīng):憑借Mimi對冰淇淋車的記憶,他們在尋找過程中更有方向。伏筆:孩子們渴望吃到冰淇淋。回應(yīng):找到卡車后,孩子們滿心歡喜地挑選冰淇淋,實現(xiàn)愿望。續(xù)寫要點(兩段)第一段:著重描寫Max信念動搖時的心理,以及Mimi如何鼓勵他,可加入周圍環(huán)境描寫,如炎熱的太陽、干燥的街道等,襯托尋找的艱難。第二段:描述找到冰淇淋卡車時大家的反應(yīng),如興奮的呼喊、激動的表情,以及購買冰淇淋后的滿足感,還可升華主題,談?wù)勥@次經(jīng)歷對孩子們的影響。情感線起初孩子們因沒趕上冰淇淋車而失望,在尋找過程中,疲憊讓Max信念動搖,產(chǎn)生放棄的念頭,此時情感跌入低谷。而Mimi的鼓勵讓他們重新振作,繼續(xù)堅持。當(dāng)找到卡車時,孩子們的興奮和滿足達(dá)到頂點,這次經(jīng)歷讓他們深刻體會到堅持帶來的喜悅,也讓他們更加信任和依賴Mimi,情感從失落轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槌錆M成就感和幸福感。故事線Max和Lily沒趕上冰淇淋車,Mimi決定帶他們尋找。三人在烈日下沿著街道尋找,方向不明。孩子們疲憊,Max信念動搖。Mimi鼓勵Max,大家繼續(xù)前行。找到冰淇淋卡車。孩子們買到冰淇淋,領(lǐng)悟堅持的意義。主旨升華句Thisexperiencetaughtthechildrenthataslongasweholdontoourgoalswithunwaveringdetermination,thesweetrewardsofsuccesswillsurelyeourway.Throughthejourneyofchasingtheicecreamtruck,theylearnedthatperseveranceinthefaceofdifficultiesisthekeytoachievingourdreams,nomatterhowsmalltheymayseem.Whatseemedlikeasimplepursuitoficecreamturnedintoavaluablelessonaboutnevergivingup,showingthateveryeffortcountsinthepursuitofhappiness.Thisadventurenotonlysatisfiedtheircravingforicecreambutalsoplantedtheseedofperseveranceintheirhearts,whichwillsurelygrowandinfluencetheirfuture.Thestoryoftheirsearchfortheicecreamtruckservesasareminderthateveninthemostchallengingmoments,apositiveattitudeandperseverancecanleadustothesweetestofoutes.寫作示范示范一Afterabouttwentyminutesofwalking,Max’sfaithstartedtogetshakenintheburningsun.Hislittlefacewasflushed,andhisstepsbecameheavierandheavier.“Grandma,I’msotired.Doyouthinkwecanreallyfindit?”heasked,hisvoicefilledwithdoubt.Mimismiledgentlyandwipedthesweatoffhisforehead.“Ofcourse,mydear.Remember,nevergiveup.Thesweeterthetreat,themoreeffortittakestogetit.”EncouragedbyMimi,Maxtookadeepbreathandnodded.Justtwoblockslater,theyfoundit.Thefamiliaricecreamtruckwasparkedbythesideoftheroad.“Thereitis!”Lilyshoutedexcitedly,jumpingupanddown.Max’seyessparkledwithjoy.Theyrushedtowardsthetruck,andsoon,eachheldadeliciousicecreamconeintheirhands.Lickingtheicecream,theyrealizedthatthelongwalkwasallworthit.Thisexperiencetaughtthemthepowerofperseverance.示范二Afterabouttwentyminutesofwalking,Max’sfaithstartedtogetshakenintheburningsun.Hedraggedhisfeet,lookinglonginglyattheshadeunderthetrees.“Idon'tthinkwecanmakeit,Grandma,”hemumbled.Mimisquatteddownandlookedintohiseyes.“Max,everygreatadventurehasitstoughparts.Butgivingupmeanswe'llnevergetwhatwewant.Let'stakeashortbreakandthenkeepgoing,okay?”Maxthoughtforawhileandthenagreed.Justtwoblockslater,theyfoundit.Thesoundoftheicecreamtruck'sbellfilledtheair.MaxandLily'sfaceslitup.Theyrantowardsthetruck,theirtirednessforgotten.Astheysavoredtheiricecreams,theyknewthatthiswasn'tjustaboutthedelicioustreat.Itwasaboutthevaluablelessonofnevergivingup,alessontheywouldcarrywiththemforever.【答案】Afterabouttwentyminutesofwalking,Max’sfaithstartedtogetshakenintheburningsun.Hewonderedoutloud,“Maybeweshouldquit.Wehavebeenwalkingprettyfarandhaven’tseenthetruckyet.”Withthat,hecollapsed,restinghisachinglegsandrubbinghissorefeet.Mimibentoverandpattedhimgentlyontheshoulder.Smiling,shefortedtheboy,“Max,remember:w

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