Unit2HealthylifestyleReadingforwriting(1)Writealetteraboutyourlifestyle（寫信關于想要改變的生活方式）(2)writealetterofproposal（建議信）Lead-inPre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingPart1Lead-in1.流感

flu2.下定決心做某事

makeupone’smindtodosth.3.刺激；激發；促進

stimulate4.頭暈目眩的

dizzy5.牙醫

dentist6.堅果

nut7.滑板

skateboard8.充滿活力的；精力充沛的；動態的

dynamic9.保齡球運動

bowling10.喜劇；喜劇片；滑稽節目

comedy11.每月；每月一次的；月刊

monthly12.提高；增強；增進

enhance13.使恢復精力；使涼爽；刷新

refreshWordReviewPart2pre-writingReading1.Whowritethesetwoletters?

WangLuandGeorgeFielding.2.Whatarethepurposesofwritingtheseletters?Toinformtheeditoroftheirproblemsandactionstheytaketosolvetheseproblems.

Readforgeneralideaswellmanytoothachesflueasilysleepanddizzypassioneatnosugarexerciseregularlyminutesanddidsomethingactivebuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30dynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlyincontrolofherownlifesuffersfromfluortoothachesReadfordetailedideasstressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamesfindotherwaystorelaxtakecontrolofhislifeandhisdadrockclimbingmonthlywithchangehimselfforthebetterenergeticDearEditor,

YoursSincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyReadforstructuresoofaletterComplimentaryclose信尾敬語Salutation稱呼Divideeachletterintofourpartsandtrytomatchthemainideasbelowtoeachpart.identifyproblemsconsiderwhattodo describewhathe/shehasdonetochangegivetheresults ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternReadforstructuresandcontentsPart3While-writing描述想要改變的生活方式Whatbadhabitsdoyouwanttochange？overeating/eatingjunkfoodInternetaddictioncigarettesmokingstayinguplatealcoholabusetoostressedoutAfterreadingthesetwoletters,doyouthinkitisawisechoicetojointhecamp?Nowyouaregoingtojointhecamp.Writealettertotheeditortotellhimyouronelifestylethatyouwanttochange.Writing1:投稿關于要改變的生活方式假如你是李華，正在英國參加交換生活動。你想參加HealthyLife

雜志社組織的第二期夏令營活動。請給雜志社的編輯寫一封信，內容如下：1.Whatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochange;2.Whyyouwanttochange;3.Howyouplantochange;4.Whatresultyouhopetosee.常用句式1.

Iamwritingtosharewithyousomethingaboutmylifestyle.2.Iamwritingtoyouwiththepurposeof...3.I’mhavingsometroubleinkeepinghealthy.4.Ican’thaveagoodsleepatnight,andcan’tconcentrateonmystudyeither.5.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,I’mataloss...6.ItisimportantthatI(should)loseweightanddevelopahealthylifestyle.7.NotonlyamIusedtoworkingouteverydaybutalsomyfamilyare...8.Exerciseisbeneficialtoourhealth.We'dbetterrunforhalfanhoureveryday.9.Ihopeyouwillgivemesomepracticalsuggestions.DearEditor,IwaswalkingpastashopwindowtheotherdaywhenIsawmyreflection.Atfirst,Ididn'trealiseitwasme.WhenIsawitwasme,IfeltsadasIwasoverweight.Ididn'trealisehowIlooked,andnowIreallywanttochange.Ireallylikeeating,butIrealiseIeattoomuch,andIdon'teatgoodthings.IwanttochangebecauseIwanttobeabletolookatmyselfandfeelhappywithhowIlook.Ialsowanttobehealthy.Myplanistochangemydietandexerciseregularly.Iwillstopeatingsugar,andonlyeatatmealtimesratherthaneatingsnacksduringtheday.Iwillfocusonhealthyfoods.ThenIwillexerciseeveryday.Iwillwalktoschoolandback,andontheweekend,Iwillgoswimming.Ihaveonlybeendoingmyplanforaweek,butI'malreadystartingtofeelbetter.Ihaven'tlostalotofweightyet,butIfeelpositive.IfeelconfidentthatIwillreachmygoal!Yourssincerely,A.SmithSample1DearEditor,

Iwouldliketoparticipateinyoursummercampasitwouldbeincrediblybeneficialtohelpmeanalysemylifechoices.Myissuesaremultitudinousandcomplicated.Firstly,Ihavedifficultyinwakingupearly.

I’malwaystiredduringthedayandoftenfeelwornout.Thiscausesmetoovereatandsnackfrequently.Iamalsoconstantlylateandhencestressedundertimepressurealldaylong.Intheevening,IneedtorelaxsoIresorttothefallbackofmyiPhonetocheckmessagesandsurfandshoponline.Ioftenlosetrackoftimeandfallasleepintheearlyhoursofthemorningwithmyphone.PurposePresenttenseProblemSample2DuringPrimaryandmiddleschoolIwasagradeAstudent,butnowIamstrugglingtokeepupwithmypeers.Ireallywanttogetmylifebackontrack.Iwanttofindthedisciplinetochangemysleepinghabitsandovercomemyphoneaddiction.Ialsowanttofindahealthiereatingandexerciseregimeandsticktoit.DecisionIwouldliketoattendyourbootcampsoIcantakethestepsnecessary

tofirstly

reducemydependencyonmyphone.Secondly,Iwilladoptamorehealthydietandeliminatecomforteating.Finally,Iwilltrymybesttobecomeabettertimemanagerbalancingexercisewithstudycommitments.TheresultsIwanttoachieveareabetterandmorerefreshingsleepingpattern.Gaintimetofocusonmystudies.Andultimatelyhaveahealthywork-lifebalance.Hopefully,Icanjoinyouandfindabetterself.Yourstruly,LiHuaResultHopeSimplefuturetensePart4Post-writing建議信幾乎不

hardlyever要么...要么...eitheror感到昏昏欲睡和頭暈feelsleepyanddizzylackpassion

缺少激情激發動機stimulatemotivation下定決心做...makeupone’smindtodosth過去常常...usedtodosthsleepsoundly睡得香甜/好不再nolongersufferfromafluvirus感染流感病毒控制beincontrolof/takecontrolof參與takepartin/joinsbinfeelstressedout

壓力大bewornout

感到筋疲力盡的詞塊積累adjustlifestyle調整生活方式getabsorbed著迷；專心致志對...著迷bemadfor

succeedinquitting成功戒除replaceAwithB用B代替Aenhancethequality提高質量getrefreshed精神振作feelenergetic

感到精力滿滿的tryoutnewways嘗試新的方式changemyselfforthebetter讓自己變得更好詞塊積累letterofproposalWriting2:建議信第一段：寫信目的：了解對方的困難，表達建議的意圖第二段：內容要點：展開建議的具體內容并說明理由（3條為宜）第三段：表達期望：希望建議對對方有用開頭：指出對方問題：

Recently,Ilearnedthat……表明來意寫信的目的是為了給出建議：Herearesomehumblesuggestionsforyou.

/

I’mwritingtosharemyideason....../So,Iam

writingtogiveyouahand.主體：建議一Firstofall,whatyouneedtodosth.A建議二

Additionally,ifIwereyou,IwoulddosthB.

建議三

What’smore,IsuggestyoushoulddosthC.結尾：

希望對方采納：Hopefullyyoucanfollowmyadviceandmakeachangefromnowon./Iamlookingforwardtoyourgood

news.

建議信開頭句1.Iamgladtoreceiveyourletteranditismypleasuretogiveyousomeadviceon...2.Havingknownthatyouhavesometroublein...Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.3.ThanksforyourtrustingandnowIamhonoredtoofferyousomesuggestionson...here.給建議的常用句型1.Ithinkyouaresupposedto...2.Itisintelligentofyou/agreatideato...3.You’dbetter/Youmayaswell...4.IfIwereyou,Iwould...5.Itwouldbebeneficialif...建議信結尾句1.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful/beneficial.2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.3.Iwouldbemorethanpleasedtosee...DearXX，

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroublewith...NowIamwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto....

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,itisagreatideato...(建議一)Inaddition,itwouldbebeneficialforyouif...(建議二)Lastbutnotleast,IfIwereyou,Iwould...(建議三).

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,XX建議信模板假如你是李華，在一家報社工作，收到一封讀者來信說他朋友陳雷沉迷電腦游戲，希望你能給他一些意見去幫助他戒掉游戲。請根據提示寫一封建議信。1.告訴你朋友玩游戲的危害2.培養其他健康愛好3.多參加戶外活動注意：字數80左右可適當增加細節，使文章連貫。DearWorriedFriend,I’msorrytohearthatyourfriendChenLeiisaddictedtocomputergames.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtodealwithit.

Tostartwith,itisimportanttotellhimthatspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonhisstudies.Inaddition,

youmayaswellencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbieslikeplayingtheguitarorplayingbasketball.Lastbutnoleast,whynottakepartinsomeoutdooractivitiestogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgood