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機會。都市往往能吸引最佳的老師以及最佳的公司。由于工作機會比較廣泛,所以要升遷也比較容易。基于上述種種理由,我比較喜歡住在都市。雖然有時候我會想念小鎮新鮮的空氣及安靜的生活,但沒有什么可以填補都市提供應我的機會。假如想要成功，我認為最佳的居住地點就是都市。托福寫作輔導：托福考試滿分作文欣賞(9)"Wｈｅnpｅopｌesucceeｄ,ｉtisbecａuｓeｏfharｄｗｏrｋ．Ｌuckhasnｏthiｎｇtｏdoｗiｔhsｕcｃess."Dｏyouagｒeeordisagｒｅeｗiｔhｔheｑuotａtionabｏｖｅ?Usespecificreａｓonsandeｘａmｐlestoexpｌaiｎｙｏuｒpｏｓiｔioｎ.TｈeRoleｏｆLucｋiｎSｕcceｓsIｔhasbｅensａiｄtｈatwhenpeoｐlesucceed,iｔｉsbｅcａuseofharｄwｏrkanｄｔhaｔluckhasｎotｈinｇtodoｗithsucceｓs.AｌthoughＩｂeｌieｖethathaｒｄworkｉsｖｅryiｍportａntandistｈesuｒestwaytｏsｕccｅssformoｓtpeople,Imuｓｔdiｓagｒeewiｔhtｈiｓstaｔemenｔ.Itcannoｔbedｅnｉedthatluｃｋofｔｅｎplayｓａnｉmｐortantｒoleinsuccesｓ.Forexａｍｐle,ｍanyimportａntdisｃoｖｅrieshavebeenmadebyaｃcideｎt.Tｈｅreｈaｖｅｂｅenmａnｙｃasesoｆreｓeaｒcheｒsandinｖeｎtorｓmakingmajoｒｂrｅakｔｈroughswhiletｈeｙwｅreａctｕalｌyｔryingtｏsolvｅａｎblemorcｒeａteadiｆfereｎｔdｅviｃe.Fｕrtheｒmorｅ,thereｉｓsometｈingtobesａｉdｆorsiｍplｙｂeinginthｅrightplacｅａtthｅrighttｉme-perｈapｓmｅetingsomｅonebychanｃｅｗｈocaｎofferａgoodjoｂorｒaｒeoppｏrtunｉty．Anｄofcｏｕrse,thｅrearetherａrｅexaｍpｌesoｆgａmblersandlotｔerywiｎnｅｒswhoｂeattheodｄsａndaｃｈｉevesuｄｄeｎandｕnexpｅｃtedｓｕccesｓ.Whiｌetheiｎfｌｕｅｎceｏfｌuckcannotbeignｏｒeｄ,thiｓisnｏttosａytｈaｔｏneｓhoulｄdｅpｅndｏnｉｔａndignoｒｅthevaluｅofｈardｗｏrk.Ifoｎeiswｉｌliｎgtｏwｏrkhard,Ｉbeｌｉｅvetｈatsuccｅsswilleventuaｌlybeａcｈievｅｄ，wiｔhorwitｈoｕtｔheａddedbｅnefitoｆｌｕck.Moreｏveｒ,harｄworkisoftenaｎesseｎtｉaｌiｎgｒedienｔoflｕckbecauseiteｎａｂlｅsonetoｔaｋeａｄvanｔａgeofaluckｙencouｎter.Iｆthesciｅntistｈasnｏｔworkedharｄtｏｄevelopｈisｋnoｗlｅdgeanｄskills，hemayｎoｔrecoｇnizetｈaｔｌuｃkybrｅakthroughｗｈeｎｉtcomeｓａlong．Thereｆoｒｅ,mysuｇgestiｏnｉsnｏttocoｕntonluｃkｔｏbｒinｇyｏusuccess.Ｉｎstｅａｄ,workharｄanｄｋeepyｏurｅｙｅｓopenforｔhatｌｕckyoｐpｏｒtｕniｔｙ.運氣在成功里所扮演的角色有人說一個人會成功是由于努力,而運氣和成功則是一點關系也沒有。雖然我相信努力很重要,并且對大部分的人來說,努力是成功最可靠的方法,可是我不得不反對這種說法。能否成功,運氣扮演著一個很重要的角色，這是不可否認的事實。例如,很多重要的發現都是在偶爾情況下發生的。有很多實例表白，有重大突破的研究人員和發明家，原本是要試圖解決其他問題或是發明別的儀器。并且,僅僅是天時地利這方面也有一些關系--也許是偶爾碰到能提供好的工作和珍貴機會的人。當然也有很少數賭徒和彩票得主得到突如其來、意想不到的成功。盡管運氣的影響力不容忽視,但也不表達人就應當完全靠運氣，而忽視努力的價值。假如一個人樂意努力,不管有沒有運氣額外的幫助，我相信終究還是會成功。此外，由于努力能讓人充足運用幸運的機會，所以努力通常也是運氣的必要因素。假如科學家沒有努力培養自己的知識和技巧，那么當某個幸運的突破出現時，他也許也看不出來。因此,我建議大家不要指望運氣能帶來成功。相反地,應當努力,并隨時注意不要錯過任何好機會。托福寫作輔導：托福考試滿分作文欣賞(1０)Ｄoyｏuagreeordｉsagreewithｔhefollowinｇstatｅmｅｎｔ?Univeｒsitiesshｏuldgivetｈesameamoｕnｔoｆmonｅytothｅiｒsｔuｄents’sportsａcｔivｉtiesastheygiveｔotheirliｂraｒiｅs.Uｓespecｉficｒeasonｓａｎdeｘamplesｔｏsupｐortｙｏuroｐｉniｏｎ．MoneyforＳportsActｉvｉｔｉｅsAstｕdent’seducatioｎdoesnotonｌyconsｉｓｔｏflｅａｒniｎgａcademicｓｕbjeｃtｓ.Itisalsoimpｏｒtaｎtfｏｒstudｅnｔsｔｏdevelopoｔｈerskills,ｓuchａsteａmwork,anｄhealｔｈyhabitｓthaｔwiｌlｌasttｈemaliｆeｔime.Onewayｔｏdｏthisistｏencoｕragemorepartｉcipatｉoｎinsportｓａctiｖitiｅs．Ａｌtｈｏughitiｓｉmｐｏｒｔanttｏproviｄeａdｅquaｔefundｉngforacademiｃsｅｒvicｅｓsuchasｔｈesｃｈｏolｌibrary,Ibｅlieveitｉsiｍｐｏrtａｎttofundｓpoｒｔｓaｃtivitieseｑｕalｌy．Astudent’ｓpｒiｍａryｅｄucatiｏngoａlｉstｏpｕｒsueｋnowｌｅdge.Thｅrｅfore,ｔhｅschoｏllibｒaryisveryimportａnt.Hｏｗever，ｔheresｏurｃｅsthaｔａliｂraｒｙbuyｓarelong-lasting．Iｎａｄdｉtion,stuｄｅntsｎｏｗhaveresｏurcesotｈerthanｔｈeschoolｌｉbrarytｏsｕppoｒtｔheirsｔｕdies.Fｏrexａmple,maｎyｈａvethｅirｏpuｔｅrｓandacceｓstｏｔhｅInterｎｅt．Sｐｏｒtsactivｉtｉes,ｏntｈeｏtheｒhand，requiresomｅinveｓｔmenｔeｖeｒyyear.Equｉpｍeｎtweaｒsoｕｔaｎdneedstoｂereplａｃｅdｍｏｒeoftｅnthanlｉbraryresｏurｃｅs.Furthｅrmｏre,ａschoolthaｔprovｉdesgoodathleticeqｕipmｅntfoｒｉtssｔuｄeｎtsｗiｌlfｉnｄthaｔtheyaｒemorｅwｉlliｎｇtopａrｔicipateinpｈysicalａctiｖities.Ｓincｅtheseactivitｉesarealsoanimportａｎtparｔｏｆtheiｒｅｄuｃａtion，theimｐortａnceofｇoodｅquipｍentcａnｎoｔbeiｇnoｒed．Ｉdeally，aschoｏｌshｏuldprｏvideiｔsｓtudentｓwithawell－balａncｅdeducａｔioｎtｈathelｐstｈｅmｄeｖeｌopallofｔｈeｉrｓｋiｌlｓ.Foｒtｈisreaｓｏｎ,ｉｔisimportaｎttｈatschoolｓdｏnｏtｉgｎoreｓpｏrtｓactｉvitｉes.Ｓetｔingasiｄｅｍｏremｏnｅyｆoｒtheｓeactivitieswillhelpｓｃhoｏlｓtoｄeｖeloｐbｅttｅｒｐhysicaｌeｄucationｐrogｒaｍsaｎｄｅｎcoｕraｇemoreｓtudentstopaｒｔicｉpatｅinthem.資助體育活動學生的教育不是只有各學科的學習。對學生而言,培養其他技能也是很重要的，例如團隊合作以及可終身受益的健康習慣。達成此項目的的方法之一是鼓勵學生多參與體育活動。雖然提供充足的經費資助學術性設施，如圖書館,是很重要的,但我認為,資助體育活動也同樣重要。學生受教育的重要目的是追求知識,因此,學校圖書館非常重要。然而，圖書館所購買的資源是可以長期使用的。此外,現在學生除了學校圖書館之外,也有其他的資源可協助他們的學習。例如,許多學生都有自己的電腦,并且可以使用互聯網。而另一方面,體育活動則每年都需要一些經費投資。運動器材會耗損,因此比圖書館的資源更需要經常更換。此外，學校假如為學生提供良好的運動器材,就會發現學生會比較樂意參與體育活動。由于這些活動也是教育很重要的一部分,所以良好的運動器材的重要性是不容忽視的。抱負的做法是,學校應當提供學生非常均衡的教育,以幫助他們培養各項技能。基于這項理由,學校不能忽視體育活動，這一點是很重要的。撥出更多的經費資助這些活動,可以幫助學校發展更好的體育課程，并鼓勵更多學生參與。托福寫作輔導：托福考試滿分作文欣賞(11）附近有工廠的利弊題目Ａcompanｙｈasanｎoｕncedthatitwishestobuilｄａlａｒgeｆactoryｎeａryouｒcomｍｕnity．disｃusstｈeａｄvaｎtａgesanddｉｓadvａntagesoftｈisnｅwinfluｅnceｏnyouｒcｏmmunity.dｏyousupporｔoropposeｔｈefactory?expｌaｉnyourpoｓition.范文aｆaｃtｏryneartheneｉghborhoodHａvｉｎｇａｆaｃtoryneａrsｗhｅresonelivesbriｎgsｗitｈitｂothadvaｎtagesａnddisadvanｔａｇes.aｎobｖioｕsａdvaｎtａｇeｉsanｉnｃｒeasｅｉnthenumberoｆaｖailabｌejｏｂs，ａｎｄｍanｙpeopleinｔhｅcomｍｕniｔymigｈtｆiｎdｅmpｌoyｍeｎtiｎthenｅwfactoｒy.theｆacｔｏryｗｏuｌdbriｎgmoｎeyintotｈeｃｏｍmuｎiｔyｉnotheｒwaysaｓwｅll.ｉtｗouldｈaveｔopaysoｍetaxestoｔhelocalgｏvernｍent,andｗorkeｒｓmiｇhｔｇｏshopｐingoreatａtａｒestａurantintheaｒeaｂeｆoreoｒaftertheirｓhiｆts.Hoｗevｅr,tｈefactoｒywoｕldbｒingsomedisadvantages，too.ｄepeｎdinｇｏnｗhaｔｋiｎdoｆfacｔoryitis,iｔmightpolｌutｅtｈｅenviroｎmentandbｒｉｎgdoｗnpｒｏpeｒtyvalues.iｔwouldｂesuｒetoｉncreaｓetraｆfｉcintｈeaｒeａ，cauｓinｇcongestionanｄｍakinｇitunsaｆefｏrｃhｉｌdreｎtopｌａyoutｓide.finａlｌy,theneiｇｈbｏｒｈooｄwoulｄbｅcomeａnｏisｙ,buｓyｐｌacｅ.ｆoralloｆt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