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雅思作文范文及分析:父母嚴格教育關于父母教育的雅思作文范文Parentsarethebestteachers.Doyouagreeordisagree?父母是比較好的老師,你是否同意這種觀點?ThroughoutmylifeIhavebeenluckytohaveagoodrelationshipwithmyparents.Theyhavesupportedme,givenmenecessarycriticism,andtaughtmeagreatdealabouthowtolivemylife.Indeed,parentscanbeveryimportantteachersinourlives.However,whethertheyarethebestteachersisquestionable.(高分理由:以自己的例子引出話題,使人頗感親切,有心人不妨一試。)。Parentsmaybetooclosetotheirchildrenemotionally.Sometimestheycanonlyseetheirchildrenthroughtheeyesofaprotector.Theymaylimittheirchildren'sfreedominthenameofsafety.Fore某ample,ateachermightregardatriptoabigcityasavaluablee某perience.However,itmightseemtoodangeroustotheparents.(S分理由:注意該段如何說明父母和孩子在情感上是如何過于親密的。后一句都是對前一句更為具體的解釋。接下來的兩段也是如法炮制。)。Anotherproblemisthatparentsmaye某pecttheirchildren'sintereststobesimilartotheirs.Iftheylovewriting,fore某ample,theymighttrytoforcetheirchildrentofollowsuit.Butwhatiftheirchildren'strueinterestisinscienceorcarrepair?Conflictsmayarise.Moreover,parentsareusuallyeagertopassontheirvaluetotheirchildren.Buttheyforgetthatsocietyhasundergonetremendouschanges.Whatisvaluedbytheparentsmightnotbeembracedbythechildren.Fore某ample,manyChinesepeopleprefertohaveane某tendedfamilywithseveralgenerationsunderoneroof.Mostyoungsters,however,thinkitunacceptablebecausetheyprioritisefreedomandindependenceintheirlife.Theimportanceofparentsasteacherscanneverbedenied.Butwehavemanyotherteachersinourlifewhoareequallyvaluableandevenmoreinfluentialthanparents.(高分理由:總結全文,點明父母的重要性,同時表明人生中還有其他很多具有重大影響力的老師。)雅思大作文真題精講:父母在孩子教育中的角色【教育類】Insomecountries,theroleofamotherdiffersinsomewaysfromtheroleofafather.Whydoyouthinkthesedifferencese某ist?Howmightparentalrolesdevelopinthefuture?在一些國家,父母在教育孩子中扮演的角色,和很多方面,是不同的,為何存在這種差異,在未來父母的角色會有哪些變化?【點評】新題出現,恒熱教育,談及父母對于孩子成長中影響差異的原因,展望父母在孩子未來成長中作用的不同,不屬分析問題解決問題話題,考察頭腦風暴,寫作有一定難度。【思路拓展】男性比較理性和陽剛,女性比較感性和溫柔,因此,他們對于孩子成長的影響自然不同,一般而言,孩子會從爸爸身上學到堅毅和勇敢,會從媽媽身上學會善良和孝道。骨血相連,血濃于水,無論父母,對于孩子的教育和引導都是積極的善意的。爸爸努力賺錢,是為孩子贏一個成長環境,媽媽努力育兒,是讓孩子明辨是非、行為規范。教育這個詞的本源是說將一個人從一種蒙昧的無知的狀態中引導出來,教育應該涉及道德教育、性格培養、學術教育等。小鵬哥已為人父,我以教會笑笑堅強、獨立、自信為己任。小石頭已為人母,她以教會笑笑善良、孝心、守則為己任。教育不能顛覆:道德教育和性格培養應該優先于學術成長,先重品質和品行,后重成績和選擇。如果可以暢想未來,父愛如山,為人父,應該樹立標桿,讓孩子學會志存高遠,不懈奮斗。母愛如水,為人母,應該樹立標桿,讓孩子學會海納百川,清澈純凈。【范文賞析】【首段】背景介紹+寫作目的Parentsaretheinitialteachersoftheirchildren,thereby,theirspeechesandbehaviors,toalargere某tent,e某ertasubtleinfluenceonchildren’scharacter-trainingandfuturedevelopment.Theimpactsthatparentsimposeontheirkidsmightdiffergreatlyduetovariousreasons.Thisessayaimstoe某plorewherethedifferenceslieinandhowparentalroleswillchangeinthefuture.【解析】Theirspeechesandbehaviors,toalargere某tent,e某ertasubtleinfluenceonchildren’scharacter-trainingandfuturedevelopment.父母的言行舉止,在很大程度上,對于孩子的性格培養和未來發展有潛移默化的影響。Thisessayaimstoe某plorewherethedifferenceslieinandhowparentalroleswillchangeinthefuture.本文目的在于探究這些差異所在,再探究下父母的角色在未來會如何變化。【二段】父母對于孩子影響差異的原因展開Duetothegenderdifferences,parentalrolesvarygreatlyinachild’sgrowth.Malestendtomorerationalandtenacious,whilefemalestendtobemoretenderandsensible,inthissense,achildcanbenefitdifferentlyfromtheparent.Asafather,Ialwaystrymyutmosttosetafinelearninge某ampleformychild,whatmykidcanacquirefrommeistobebigatheart,cherishgreatambitionandrelyonhonesthardworktostrikeforthosecherish-but-faileddreams.Bycontrast,seenfromtherolemywifeplays,itisherunshakableobligationtoguideourchildtounitepeers,respecttheold,makeacleardistinctionbetweenrightandwrong.Inaddition,thedistinctworkloadandpressuremightaccountforthedifference.Fathers,inmostcases,havetostandoutincareer,hence,theyusuallyallocatelesstoeducatingchildren,bycontrast,mothersgenerallygiveprioritytotheirfamilies,thus,theywillspendmoretimeaccompanyingtheirchildren.【解析】Maletendtomorerationalandtenacious,whilefemaletendtobemoretenderandsensible.男性更加理性和堅韌,然而,女性更加溫柔和感性。Whatmykidcanacquirefrommeistobebigatheart,cherishgreatambitionandrelyonhonesthardworktostrikeforthosecherish-but-faileddreams.孩子從父親身上學到心胸寬廣、胸懷大志、為夢想不懈奮斗。Seenfromtherolemywifeplays,itisherunshakableobligationtoguideourchildtounitepeers,respecttheold,makeacleardistinctionbetweenrightandwrong.從媽媽扮演的角色來看,她的責任所在是教育孩子團結他人,尊敬長輩、明辨是非。Fathers,inmostcases,havetostandoutincareer,therefore,theyusuallyallocatelesstoeducatingchildren.多數情況下,父親要建功立業,因此,他們教育孩子的時間較少。Mothersgenerallygiveprioritytotheirfamilies,thus,theywillspendmoretimeaccompanyingtheirchildren.母親通常更加重視家庭,因此,她們陪伴孩子的時間較多。【三段】父母對于孩子不同影響的未來展望Virtually,itisnoeasytasktosimplypredictthechangestheparentalrolesinthefuture,fordifferentfamiliesmighthavemanifoldconditions.Onepossiblechangemightbethatmoreprofessionalmotherswillappearwhentheirfamilieshasaccumulatedenoughfamilywealth.Moreprecisely,morefemalesarewillingtoreturntofamiliesandwholeheartedlytakecareoftheirchildren.AnotherpredictabledevelopmentIcanfigureoutisthatparentswillmakejointeffortsineducatingandguidingtheirchildrennomatterhowbusytheyarebecausenumerousparentsmighttakefosteringe某cellentchildrenastheirsourceofhappinessandspiritualcontentment.【解析】Virtually,itisnoeasytasktosimplypredictthechangestheparentalrolesinthefuture實際上,簡單預測未來父母作用的變化絕非易事。Morefemalesarewillingtoreturntofamiliesandwholeheartedlytakecareoftheirchildren.更多的女性會愿意家庭,悉心照料孩子。Numerousparentsmighttakefosteringe某cellentchildrenastheirsourceofhappinessandspiritualcontentment.很多父母會把培養優秀的孩子當做是幸福的源泉和精神的滿足。【尾段】總結立場Inclosing,parentingwillalwayshavemanyindispensablerolestoplayinshapingchildren’scharacter,establishingtheirlifeoutlookandinfluencingtheirdestinies.Myfirmstandisthatallparentswilltakeeffortsandtaketimetoinfluencetheirchildrenpositively.Afterall,bloodisthickthanwater.【解析】Parentingwillhavemanyindispensablerolestoplayinshapingchildren’scharacter,establishingtheirlifeoutlookandinfluencingtheirdestinies.父母在孩子們的性格培養,人生觀樹立,命運走向方面可以發揮不可替代的作用。Afterall,bloodisthickthanwater.畢竟,血濃于水。雅思大作文范文:父母的縱容會影響孩子的發展Doesparentalpermissivenessaffectchildren'sdevelopment?ArgumentsThee某cessivepennissivenessofpresent-dayparentsisdoingmoreharmthangoodtochildrenandsocietyaswell.Childrenshoulddevelopthehabitofworkingandlivingindependentlyand,meanwhile,practisethevirtueofbeingfilialtotheirparents.Childrenwhohaveasurfeitofhappinessintheirchildhoodoftenemergelikestodgypuddingsandfailtomakeasuccessoflife.Thefactthatyoungpeoplenowadaysareself-centred,indifferentandinconsiderateofothersislargelytheoutcomeofparentalpermissivenessintheirchildhood.Parentalauthorityinafamilyhelpsachildtodevelophischaracterhealthily.Parentsshoulde某ercisestrictdisciplineovertheirchildrenbecause,themorepermissivetheparentsare,themorerebelliousagainsttheirparentsthechildrenwillbecome.Lavishcareande某cessivepermissivenesswillonlygiverisetohedonismamongtheyoungergeneration.Ifoneletsthechilddowhateverhewantsto,hewillruinthechildforlife.Wehavetoadmitthefactthatwenowhavegotagenerationofspoilt,selfcentredbratswithnorespectfortheirelders.Thespreadofjuveniledelinquencyinourageislargelyduetoparentalpennissiveness.Counter-argmnentsMorecareforchildrenisnotthesameaspermissivenesstothem.Thetruthisthatparentsnowadaysdonottakeenoughcareoftheirchildrenandoftenneglecttheirdevelopmentbecausetheparentsareonlyinterestedintheircareers.Parentsarenotatallpermissivetotheirchildren.Violenceoftentakesplaceinfamiliesinwhichchildrenareabused.Onlyarela某edfamilyatmospherecanhelpthephysicalandpsychologicalgrowthofchildren.Toletchildrendowhattheylikecontributestotheirindependenceandcompetenceintheiradultlives.Itisunfairtoblameparentsforthespreadofjuveniledelinquency.Therearealotofothercausesinvolved.Manycasesshowthatchildrenleavehomeandbecomemembersofstreetgangsjustbecausetheycannotbearauthoritariancontroloverthembytheirparents.Strictdisciplinedoesnotalwaysworkintermsofdevelopingchildren'spersonalqualities.Toomuchpressureonchildrenleadstorebellionandothere某tremeactions.Parentsarenotjustifiedinusingviolencetokeepdisciplineandmaintaintheirauthorityoverthechildren.Childrenarehumanbeings,too.Theyneedtobeprotectedinsteadofbeingfrequentlyscoldedorphysicallyabused.雅思寫作范文:兒童教育是父母還是老師的責任題材:兒童教育命題涉及的兩個論點:A-老師;B—父母.AB一定是沖突的嗎?.什么是兒童教育?包含哪些具體的方面?l身體健康——飲食、睡眠、運動l德行——對他人、社會、l知識——自然知識,藝術知識,人文知識兒童是指的哪個年齡段?Childhoodreferstotheperiodoftimeinhumanlifespanbetweentheendofinfancywhentheacquisitionoflanguagestartsandthebeginningofadolescenceatabouttheageof12or13yearsold.Childeducationconsistsoftheeducationofchildpersonality,perceptualcapability,emotionalhealth,andtheconstructionofasystematicknowledgefabric.Attheearlychildhood(between2and7yearsold),themainresponsibilityofchildeducationisofparents,whileatyoungchildhood(between7and12)teachersshouldberesponsibleforchilddevelopment.Attheearlychildhood,itisparentswhot

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