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HowtoimprovethewritingskillsWeshouldattachimportancetowriting.25分=3篇閱讀理解+1高考出題趨勢2005----2014高考新課標卷書面表達書信：2006200720082010201120132014電子郵件：20052012便條：2009從命題形式來看，體裁穩定，以說明文，尤以書信為主，這體現了寫作的實用性；題材都和國外文化、交流有關。1.應該多練習各種應用文體裁；2.關注國際文化方面的題材，如國外交通、節日等有關內容。注意：1.詞數100左

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結束語以為你寫好。給出開頭和結尾這些格式，重點考查學生的語言表達能力和語篇的組織能力。2.簡約的半開放式要點提綱只給出大致的寫作方向，要求考生結合提示進行適當的想象與發揮；基本完成了從“完全限定內容”的寫作向“部分限定內容”的寫作的過渡。3.“部分限定內容”試題的普及將產生兩方面的影響

——評分標準的變化和增加學生寫作時的困難。八類書信1.道歉信

2.求職信3.請求信4.建議信5.感謝信6.投訴信7.邀請信8.詢問信

技巧1.使用較高級的詞匯3.使用恰當的連接詞詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。運用得當的句子結構可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。使用恰當連接詞，對寫一篇有“英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。增強書面表達效果的技巧2.使用較豐富的句式非謂語各種從句with復合賓語倒裝獨立主格虛擬...強調句型

運用多種語法結構，句式靈活多變，可以使文章增色不少。豐富的句法結構沖刺階段書面表達得分的策略1.肯定不如雙否好2.陳述不如倒裝妙3.主動不如被動巧4.分詞結構不能少Answers練習一1.Seldom

doesheturntoothersforhelp.

2.Inthecenterofourschool

isourlibrary,which

isbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.3.Onlyinthisway

canIimprovemyEnglish.4.Badlyinjuredashewas,hemanagedtotakedownthecar’snumber.5.Notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdid

heknowwhathadhappened.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.練習二1.On/Uponhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.

2.Beingastudent,I’dliketoknowthepriceforstudents3.Followedbymanystudents,

Shewalkedoutofthelab.4.Butforyourhelp,Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexam.5.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.6.Whateverhesays,Iwon’tbelieve.尹夢圓it唐炳田about丁玉常在改錯中出現

佳句收集1.I'msorryfornotgoingto...(尹夢圓）2.I'mwritingtoapologizefornotgoingto...(趙明明）3.I‘mwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingtokeepmypromisethat...(唐炳田）4.I’mindeedsorryforwhatIdidbutbelieveIhadnointentiontoleaveyoualone.(

唐炳田)5.I'mwriting,foronething,toexpressmysinceresorryfornotgoingto...(劉鋅婭）一致歉的表達說明原因1.ThereasonwhyIdidn'tgoisthatIwasgoingtherewhenIreceivedmymother'scalltellingmeshewouldcomeforavisit.(尹夢圓）2.ThereasonisthatyesterdayafternoonIsuddenlygotmymother'scall,inwhichshesaidshewouldcomeforavisit.(唐炳田）彌補過失1.Pleasegivemeachancetomakeupforit.Let'smeetattheplacewhereyoulovethefoodverymuchnextweekend.It'smytreat.(尹夢圓）2.NextWednesdayIwanttohaveadinnertogetherwithyouinordertomakeupforit.Pleaseacceptmyapology.(唐炳田）其它3.Ihadnochoicebuttocanceltheappointmentwithyou.(劉鋅婭）4.Iknowit'smyfault.（丁玉）道歉信的結構及常用句型第一段：說明寫信的目的，為自己的過失表示歉意常用道歉的表示Iam

extremely/awfullysorrythatIcannot…2.Iamverysorryfor…3.Ifeelsorryformyfailureto…..4.Iamwritingtoexpressmysincere/deepapologyformy…5.Iregrettoinform/tellyouthatIamunableto….6.IfeelguiltyforwhatIhavedoneforyou.7.Ifeelapologizedforbeingunableto…8.IbelieveyoucanunderstandthatIhavenotintendedtohurtyou…9.Pleaseforgiveme.第二段：詳細說明當時情況，解釋原因，語氣要誠懇常用句型Nowletmeexplainwhathappenedtomethatday.2.Ihadintendedto…..3.IamafraidwhatIhavedonehascausedmuchinconveniencetoyou.4.Iamtoblameforthissillymistake.第三段：提出補救方法，希望能彌補過失，消除誤會。常用句型Inordertoremoveourunderstanding,Iwouldliketoinvite…2.Tomakeupformyfault,Iwill…3.Tocompensateforyourloss,Idecideto…4.Iwishyoucouldgivemeachancetomakeupformyfault.5.Ihopethesettlementofthismattercanmeetyourwishes.第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意為此負責，希望以后不再出現類似不愉快事件。常用句型Pleaseacceptmymostsceneryapologyagain.2.IpromisethatIwillnevermakesuchastupidmistakeagain.3.Iassureyouthatitwillneverhappenagain.

道歉信模板一Dear___________,

Iamtrulysorrythat_________________________(道歉的原因).

Thereasonisthat_(介紹原因)Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.

Yourssincerely

LiMing

道歉信模板二Dear_____________,

①Iamextremelysorrytosay/tellyouthat_____________(直接說出道歉事由.②Now,Iamwritingyouthisletterofapologytoshowmydeepregret.③Pleaseacceptmysincereapology.④Ihopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemefor_____________(請求對方原諒的事由).

⑤Thereasonformydelay/absencewasthat_____________(過失的原因.⑥Ihadnowayoutbecause_____________自己當時的處境和情況。⑦Thereforeit’snotinmypowerto_____________(過失導致的結果）。

⑧Naturally,Iwanttosuggest_____________(建議下次再實現愿望）。