PAGEPAGE3專題限時集訓(二十四)短文改錯(Ⅰ)A(2018·福州市模擬)WhenaskingwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledges，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopewewilllovethebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavetherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportanttohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnotwisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasuretoseethosechildren'ssmilefacesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaoldsayinggoes，“Thereiskindnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'stogivepresentstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.【答案】Wheneq\f(asking,asked)whatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogaineq\f(knowledges,knowledge)，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopeeq\f(we,they)willlovethebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryoneeq\f(have,has)therighttoeducationanditisofgreateq\f(important,importance)tohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnoteq\o(\s\up7(∧),\s\do5(only))wisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbeeq\f(pleasure,pleased)toseethosechildren'seq\f(smile,smiling)facesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Aseq\f(a,an)oldsayinggoes，“Thereiskindnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'seq\o(to,﹨)givepresentstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.B(2018·牡丹江市模擬)I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatisbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbaoisactuallyakindofluckymoneyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsorinspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，grabbinge-hongbaoontheirmobilephonesareafairlycommonandexcitedactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgiveluckymoneytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein20s.It'sjustforafunorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.Therefore，I'mconcernedaboutthesafeofon-linepayment.Sorulesandregulationsneededtobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosystemtoguaranteeitsoperation.【答案】I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，eq\f(what,which)isbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbaoisactuallyakindofluckymoneyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsoreq\f(in,on)specialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，grabbinge-hongbaoontheirmobilephoneseq\f(are,is)afairlycommonandeq\f(excited,exciting)activity.Unlikethetraditionofelderseq\f(give,giving)luckymoneytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoareineq\o(\s\up7(∧),\s\do5(their))20s.It'sjustforeq\o(a,﹨)funorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.eq\f(Therefore,However)，I'mconcernedabouttheeq\f(safe,safety)ofon-linepayment.Sorulesandregulationseq\f(needed,need)tobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosystemtoguaranteeitsoperation.C(2018·泰安市模擬)Lastweek，myfriendsinvitedmegocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifeltsoexcitingandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，heagreed.Wegottothemountaintopthatwewouldstayforawholenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneofmyfriendswereplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，wewakeupataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesuntocomeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskygradual.Itwassoamazingscenery.Thebeautyinnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.【答案】Lastweek，myfriendsinvitedmeeq\o(\s\up7(∧),\s\do5(to))gocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifeltsoeq\f(exciting,excited)andaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，eq\f(he,they)agreed.Wegottothemountaintopeq\f(that,where)wewouldstayforawholenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneofmyfriendseq\f(were,was)playingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，weeq\f(wake,woke)upataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesuneq\o(to,﹨)comeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskyeq\f(gradual,gradually).Itwaseq\f(so,such)amazingscenery.Thebeautyeq\f(in,of)natureimpressedmeatthatmoment.D(2018·珠海市模擬)ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepmovedbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyinfrontofthebank.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbad，hismoneywaslyinginalldirection.Atoncethepeoplearoundrushtopickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthemoneytheyhadjustpicked.Theoldmancountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissed.Tomygreatjoy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyourlife.It'struewhathonestyismoreimportantthanmoney!【答案】ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwaseq\f(deep,deeply)movedbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyineq\o(the,﹨)frontofthebank.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingseq\f(bad,worse)，hismoneywaslyingineq\f(all,any)/eq\f(direction,directions).Atoncethepeoplearoundeq\f(rush,rushed)topickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，noteq\f(know,knowing)whattodo.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthemoneythe