1、讀后續(xù)寫真題2021.6新高考1卷1試題再現(xiàn)2試題分析3寫作思路4范文賞析目錄CONTENTS2021試題再現(xiàn)歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析01 A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make

2、French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put

3、 some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going sm

4、oothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the l

5、id starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touc

6、hed the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Para2 The twins carried the b

7、reakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 2021試題分析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析02on Mothers dayWhenWhereAt homeWhoThe twins, Jeff and JannaMom, DadMain IdeaThe twins were preparing the breakfast but they messed it up and burned the finger.WhatMain IdeaWhythey wanted to surprise their mom HowJeff noticed steam sh

8、ooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.(1) 讀大意，抓中心主題 雙胞胎Jeff和Jenna準(zhǔn)備在母親節(jié)為母親做法式吐司和雞肉粥的早餐，母親節(jié)當(dāng)天，他們先煮粥，然后把面包放進(jìn)雞蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二塊面包將要煎成功的時候，沸

9、騰的粥把火熄滅了，廚房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也燙傷了，Jenna幫他用冷水沖手的時候聞到了面包燒焦的味道。(2)讀人物，找續(xù)寫人物 讀續(xù)寫兩段的首句可知，Dad ,Mom和twins是續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的關(guān)鍵人物(3)讀時態(tài)，選續(xù)寫時態(tài) 通讀全文可知，該故事主要是用一般過去時講述的，故續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的時態(tài)也應(yīng)一致。(4) 讀結(jié)構(gòu)，辨劃分方式 弄清故事的結(jié)構(gòu)特點及表現(xiàn)形式，選擇合適的方式劃分段落，常用的有4：以時空變化劃分(指時間和地點)；以人物思想感情的變化來劃分；按記敘內(nèi)容的變化來劃分；按描述角度的變化、事情發(fā)展的階段來劃分。 再看回真題，一開始，這對雙胞胎在母親節(jié)前就在策劃給母親的驚喜，而后是在母親節(jié)當(dāng)

10、天，兩人在廚房為母親準(zhǔn)備早餐。而由續(xù)寫兩段首句可知，續(xù)寫第一段這對Twins還是在廚房里，第二段是在樓上媽媽的臥室里，人物所處地點不斷變化，由此可知, 題目是按照時空變化來劃分的。 而我們在構(gòu)思續(xù)寫內(nèi)容時也應(yīng)在這兩個地點的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行拓展。(5) 讀語言，定風(fēng)格特色 挖掘文本語言表達(dá)風(fēng)格，模仿原文語言寫句子。使續(xù)寫部分的語言風(fēng)格與原文的風(fēng)格相一致，以促進(jìn)語言協(xié)同。此外，如果原文有較多對話, 續(xù)寫也可出現(xiàn)對話；如原文沒有對話, 盡量少用對話形式。elements1. personJenna & Jeff (twins), mother, father2. place3.time4. What ha

11、ppened5. How to doAt homeAt 6:00 am in the morningThe twins wanted to surprise their mother on Mothers DayThe twins planned to cook breakfast for their motherAction Vs. EmotionExcited 1.The twins planned a breakfast.confident2. The twins thought they knew the job. under control 4. The bread got burn

12、t.5. The porridge became a mess.panicked6. The second bread turned black. Losing confidence3. The beginning went well.fineWhat was the rest story?solutionA messClean itThe breakfast was ruinedCook it all over againOver-confidentReadjust the situationNot sophisticated in houseworkStart to learn.2021寫

13、作思路歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析03The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Gratitude to mothers hard work.There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.Housework needs to be learned, mastered and shared by every family member.Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had tu

14、rned black as well. ThemeHow pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. Implication from the two sentencesPara1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. . What woul

15、d the twins say to their mother?Would their father help them out?What would Father do in order to help ?Was the situation at that moment?What did they understand and realize from this incident?2021范文賞析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析04Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Thei

16、r father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next. He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup. Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away, and poured another cup of rice, starting to cook it all over again.

17、In between, he kept silent and focused on what he was doing. The twins stood straight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 oclock, every thing was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing

18、 the house chores. Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of Mother. Their mother beamed from ear to ear, praising and appreciating childrens nice act of gesture. However, the twins lowered their heads, shoulders drooping down. It didnt turn out as they had planned. Finally, Jenna broke out the silence, confessing “Mother, we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast that you make for us every morning is a super easy job. ” Jeff cut i