1、資料來源：來自本人網絡整理！祝您工作順利！高考英語書面表達 書面表達評分標準最高檔要求：應用了較多的語法構造或詞匯;語法構造或詞匯方面有少許錯誤，但為盡力用法較冗雜構造或較高級詞匯所致;有效地用法了語句間的連接成分，使全文構造緊湊。接下來，我給大家預備了高考英語書面表達,歡送大家參考與借鑒。 高考英語書面表達 要想獲得高分就應在正確表達的根底上寫出自己的特色，寫出自己的亮點。 一、詞匯選擇-標新立異 在寫作中較高級詞匯的用法主要是指用法大綱上沒有的詞語、用法通過構詞法改變來的新詞、用法同(近)義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。 1)這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。 a: the flat is in

2、a building on fangcao street. b: the flat situates in a building on fangcao street. 分析：is in是常見詞語，而situates in那么是大綱上沒有的，屬于高級詞匯。 2)在周末我們做許多作業。 a: at weekends, we have a lot of homework to do. b: at weekends, we have endless homework to do. 分析：b句在表達時沒有用法過于挺直的a lot of，而是用法了endless。endless就是由大綱詞匯end加后綴-

3、less改變來的。 3)洗澡間和廚房都很好。 a: the bathroom and the kitchen are good. b. the bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished. 在表達要點時，b句用法了well furnished，這比good語氣強，也顯得生動。 在造句時，較高級詞匯如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個，也會使你的作文顯示出別出心裁。 二、構造造句-別出心裁 在造句時，既要使句子生動，又要使其簡明扼要。 1、用法與人不同的表達方式，特殊是提倡打破漢語句子構造的束縛而重組的句子更受歡送。 1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年月發

4、生過一次大地震。 a: there was a strong earthquake in tangshan in the 1980s. b: a terrible earthquake hit/struck tangshan in the 1980s. 大多數同學用法了there be構造，這是對的，但是b句卻摒棄了常見句式。另辟蹊徑而用法了主語+謂語+賓語構造，且用法了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能珍貴的。 2)你八月十五日的來信我今日早晨收到了。 a:i received your letter which was written on august 15th

5、this morning.(多數人用法的方式) b: your letter of august 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數人用法的方式不同,簡潔) 2.用法一些強勢句式，如強調句、感慨句、倒裝句等，增加語句的表現力。如： 3)阿福救了我妹妹。 a: ah fu saved my sister.(一般句式) b: it was ah fu that saved my sister.(強調句式) 4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是興奮。 a: we were glad to see crops and vegetables growing

6、well.(一般陳述句) b: how glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感慨句) 3、句式多樣,冗雜得體。在寫作中應避開用法一樣長度的一樣句型，而應留意句式的改變，如長短句結合，簡潔句、并列句與復合句共用，還可用法簡化句等;一些較冗雜的構造如獨立主格，分詞構造等也可用法。下面的表達中a句簡潔句多，而且多處用法there be構造，顯得單調、乏味，而b句就有自己的特色(請同學們自己分析)。 5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有臥房、有洗澡間、有廚房;臥房里有床、沙發、桌子和椅子等。 a: its a flat of

7、 25 square metres. there is a bedroom in the flat. there is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. in the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well. b: its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and

8、 a chair. 三、布局謀篇-獨具匠心 在寫作中，我們可按時間、空間或其它規律挨次來支配各要點，同時為使主題突出,構造嚴謹，我們應留意學習和用法交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，2021高考范文堪稱典范。請看： opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees1. they believe a public park should be free of charge. people need a place where they can res

9、t and enjoy themselves. charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance2 of a city. on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and oth

10、er workers, and to buy plants and young trees. they suggested, however, fees should be charged low. 1)該文用法opinions are divided.作交代句，開門見山，隨后兩個段落均用法了主題句(見黑體字局部)，使全文構造緊湊，表達嚴謹。 2)在表述要點時范文還對要點出場挨次作了調整，如40%的同學認為應收門票，但不宜過高。前局部作為主題句放在句首，而后局部另起一句放在句末：they suggested, however, fees should be charged low.這樣就分清了輕重緩急，主題突出，條理清晰。 3)范文用法了and, what is more, however等連詞，在段落之間用法了on the other hand(說明前后兩個觀點是相悖的)，這些連接手段的運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯絡，使文章表達連接，渾然一體。 4)范文在其次段為說明不收門票的緣由時增加了c