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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。AsChristmasdecorationsappearedintown,ourparentscalledmytwoyoungerbrothersandmetogether.Atfirst,Ithoughtsomeonehaddied,becauseIhadneverseenmyparentslooksosad.MybrothersandIstoodwaitingfortheawfulnews.Momhuggedmeasshemurmured,“Christmasisgoingtobedifferentthisyear.Wewon'tbehavingatreeorpresents.Wecanbarelyaffordfood.”Dad,restingonthecouch,beckoned(招手示意)theboysintohisarms.“ThingswillchangewhenIgetbacktowork.”Myfamilywaspoorerthandirt.Dad,theonlybreadearnerinourfamily,workedinacoalmine.However,soonafterreturningtoworkattheendofalongstrike,Dadwashurtinarockfallthatbrokebonesinhisfoot.Lyingonthecouchwiththeswollenfoothighonpillows,hedidn'ttalkorsmilemuch.Therewaslittletosmileabout.Nowork,noine.Atnineyearsold,Imotheredmyyoungerbrothers:Rodney,agedsix,andStevie,three.Wesharedasmallbedroom.Thatnight,afterourparents’announcement,wetalked.Rodneybegan.“Em,didyouseehowsadMommyandDaddylooked?IthoughtMommywasgonnacry.“Me,too.Daddy'sfoot’s…thisbig”whisperedStevie,holdingouthisarms.“Yeah..We'reinhardtimes,"Isaid.“ItmakesMommyandDaddysad."“Butwedon'thavetobesad,"Iadded,hopingtobrightenthemood.“Sincetherearestillseveralweekstogo,maybewecandosomethingtocheerthemup,"Isaidwithoverdoneenthusiasm.Theboysproposed,“Wecantakethemoneyfromourpiggybank...earnsomemore..andsurprisethemwithgifts!"“Icanrunerrands(跑腿)forAuntEmandneighborstoearnmoney,"Ioffered.“Yeah,"Rodneyadded,“IandSteviecanreturnbottlesandsavethedepositmoney...insteadofbuyingcandy!"HepushedSteviegentlywithhiselbow.“Yeah!”Stevieclutchedhishandstogether.Wehadaplan!Untiltheynoddedoff,Icoachedmylittlebrothers(especiallyStevie)inwaystoguardoursecret.“Don'ttalkaboutitduringtheday."注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!____________________________________________________________________________________OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.____________________________________________________________________________________圣誕暖心行動續寫一、續寫分析?第一段續寫分析?開篇表明孩子們一早行動,為圣誕節籌備驚喜。續寫時應圍繞孩子們賺取零花錢、籌備禮物的過程展開。比如遇到的困難,像被人拒絕、尋找空瓶不順利等;還要突出守護秘密的細節,讓故事更具懸念。?第二段續寫分析?此段描繪圣誕節當天,孩子們送出禮物的場景。續寫需重點刻畫父母收到禮物時的神態、語言、動作,展現他們的驚喜與感動。結尾通過孩子們的感悟,實現主題升華,點明圣誕節的真正意義。?二、故事線?賺取零花錢:主角幫AuntEm做雜務,弟弟們收集空瓶攢錢。?守護秘密:Stevie差點泄露計劃,被Rodney及時阻止。?購買禮物:用攢下的錢為父母挑選禮物。?送出禮物:圣誕節當天,將禮物送給父母。?父母反應:父母震驚、感動,說不出話。?感悟真諦:孩子們領悟圣誕節的真正含義。?三、短語歸納?rushto:匆忙前往?helpwith:幫助做……?scourneighborhoods:搜索街區?hidecarefully:小心藏起?blurtout:脫口而出?beamwithpride:自豪地微笑?caressthebrooch:輕撫胸針?realizethemeaning:領悟意義?四、主旨升華句?這個圣誕節,我們明白,真正的禮物不是商店里的商品,而是家人間無私的愛與關懷。?在物質匱乏的日子里,我們用行動證明,愛比任何財富都更珍貴,能溫暖彼此的心。?通過這次經歷,我們懂得,圣誕節的真諦在于給予愛,而非獲取物質,這讓家庭紐帶更緊密。?這份飽含心意的禮物,驅散了家庭的陰霾,讓我們知道,只要有愛,艱難時刻也能充滿希望。?那個特別的圣誕節,我們領悟到,愛能讓平凡日子變得神圣,賦予生活真正的意義。?五、寫作示范?示范一?Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Everyweekend,ImowedlawnsforneighborswhileRodneyandStevierakedleavesinthepark.Onerainyday,Rodneycaughtacold,yetherefusedtostayhome,insistingoncollectingbottles.Wecountedoursavingseverynight,eyesshiningwithanticipation.Finally,wevisitedathriftstore,findingatieforDadandascarfforMom.?OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.Dad’seyesmoistenedasheheldthetie,andMomwrappedthescarfaroundherneck,beaming.“Youkidsarethebestgiftwecouldeveraskfor,”Dadchokedout.Aswehuddledtogether,Irealizedthatlovewasthemostpreciousgift,bindingourfamilythroughthickandthin.?示范二?Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Ibabysatforfamiliesintheneighborhood,whileRodneyandSteviesetupalemonadestand.Once,ameandogchasedStevieawaywhenhewascollectingbottles,buthedidn’tgiveup.Afterweeksofhardwork,ourpiggybankwasfull.Wewenttoacraftsfair,choosingahandmademugforDadandapaintedpictureframeforMom.?OnChristmasmorning,wehurriedintothelivingroomandhandedthegiftstoMommyandDaddy.Momgaspedindelight,tracingtheedgesoftheframe,andDadsippedfromthemugwithasmile.“ThisisthebestChristmasever,”Mommurmured.Throughthisexperience,welearnedthatthespiritofChristmasliesintheloveweshare,makingeverymomenttogethertrulymagical.?【答案】參考范文Weawokeinthemorning,transformingfromsadchildrentothesecretagentsonanimportantmission!Thefollowingweekssawmedashinghomefromschooleachdaydeterminedtoearnapenny.Iwasusuallygreetedbysecretwinksandgrinsonewithamissingtooth,andtheotherwithtiny,straightteethbothassuringmeoursecretwassafe.AfewdaysbeforeChristmas,wegleefullywentshopping.WeboughtMomanewapron,andforDad,apairofleatherslippers.ThenightofChristmasEveseemedendless.Iawokeoccasionally,oroneofmybrotherswokemeasking,“Howlongtilldaylight?”OnChristmasmorning,wehurr

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