Unit5MusicReadingforwritingWriteaspeech1.What’sthetypeofthevideo?2.Doyoulikemusic?Why?AspeechLead-in:watchthevideoandanswerquestionsWhydoyoulikemusic?giveusjoy\happinessinspireustobeoptimistickeepourcompanyrelieveourpressuregiveushope\strengthcalmusdownSkimthetextquicklyandsummarizethemainideaofeachpara.Greetings&self-introduction&purposeofthespeechSarah’spersonalexperiencewithmusic:herproblem&solutionTheimpactsofmusiconSarahSarah’sadviceandhopefortheaudienceGood

morning!My

name

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to

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you

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a

time

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and

you

had

nohope

at

all?Two

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body

ached

allthetime

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thusI

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longer

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live.I

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very

afraid

and

I

felt

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alone

and

discouraged.Then

oneday,Ihadtogothroughatwo-hourmedicaltreatment.Thedoctorwanted

me

to

relax,

so

he

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me

listen

to

some

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one

of

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songs

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"Happy".The

song

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Body

Endinggreetingsself-introduction

topicBeginningReadforthestructureOpening(Para.1)Body(Para.2-3)Closing(Para.4)Aspeech(Title)Greetings,self-introduction&purposePersonalexperienceSarah’sproblem+solutiontotheproblemImpactsofmusiconSarahSarah’sadvice&hopefortheaudienceReadforthestructureReadfordetailsReadthetextagainandanswerthefollowingquestions.Sarahhadaseriousdiseasewhichwasdifficulttocure.ltmadeherfeelmuchbetterbecauseitisthe“medicineofthemind”.Heradvicetoothersistousemusictohelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Readforlanguagefeatures1.Simile(明喻)：tomakecomparisonbetween

twounlikeelements.comparativeword:as,like,as/though,seem,as...aseg.Heworkslikeahorse.2.Metaphor(暗喻):tomakecomparison,butitisimpliedratherthanstated.eg.Theworldisastage.3.Personification(擬人):togivehumanfeelingstoanimalsorpersonalattributes(特質)toinanimate(無生命的)objects.eg.Theskyweeps.Rhetoricaldevices(修辭手法)

arewaystomakeourlanguagemorevivid,andthuskeepthereaders'attention.Rhetoricaldevicesthatareusedinthepassage:Readforlanguagefeatures4.Rhetoricalquestion（設問）:questionwithoutadirectanswer.eg.Whodoesn'tloveabeautifulsunset?5.Quote（引用）:torepeatashortpassage,word,phrase,orsentencethatcamefromsomewhereorsomeoneelse.eg....asLongfellowsays,“Musicistheuniversallanguagesofmankind.”6.Repetition（重復）:repeatwordsorphrasestoemphasize(強調)certainfactsorideas.eg.Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.ReadforlanguagefeaturesHaveyoueverfacedatimewhenthingslookeddarkandyouhavenohopeatall?JohnA.Logansaid,“Musicisthemedicineofthemind.”Musicgavemehappiness.Musicgavemestrengthandbroughtmerelief.Musicgavemehopeandasenseofsatisfaction....itmademyspiritsflylikeakiteinthewind.ItwastherockIleantontobecomestrong...Itbecamemybestfriend.RhetoricalquestionQuoterepetitionsimilemetaphorpersonificationHowtowriteaspeech?

假定你是李華。請你寫一篇演講稿，與大家分享音樂對你的影響。內容包括：

1.曾經考前緊張，無法入眠；

2.音樂改變現狀。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。1.第一段開門見山，點明主題——音樂是如何影響了我的人生的。2．主體部分通過事例、細節描述等有步驟地展開對主題的介紹，語言富有激情和感召力。如：第二段作者在敘述事情時，先用問句開頭，引起讀者注意，然后按照時間順序展開。Twoyearsago、Thenoneday、fromthenon這些時間狀語的使用，使敘述清晰、有序。3．第三段作者連續使用了三個“musicgaveme...”構成的排比句，層層遞進，語氣強烈，富有感染力，突出了音樂對作者的極大影響。4．結尾簡明扼要，照應主題，發出呼吁或建議。如：第四段使用了兩個“Ihope...”構成的排比句，表達了作者對于讀者的美好祝福和真誠建議。學結構第一段：點明演講話題①Goodmorning,everybody!MynameisLiHua.Itismyhonourtodelivermyspeechabouthowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.大家早上好！

我是李華。很榮幸能發表關于音樂是如何影響了我的人生的演講。②Today,I'dliketotalkabouthowtoexpresslovetoourparents.今天，我想談談如何向我們的父母表達愛。③IwanttosharewithyouhowtheInternethashadanimpact/influenceonourlife.我想和你們分享互聯網是如何影響我們的生活的。素材積累——對素材積累的應用要準第二段：通過引言或問題吸引聽眾的注意力，并結合自身經歷，有步驟地展開對話題的介紹，并總結其對自己的影響①Someonesaid,“Wearereadingthefirstverseofthefirstchapterofabookwhosepagesareinfinite...”有人說過：“我們正在讀一本書的第一章第一行，這本書的頁數是無限的……”②Asweknow,musicisthroughourlife.正如我們所知，音樂貫穿我們的生活。③Lastyear,ourbelovedpetdogdied,whichmadeourwholefamilyverysad.Itwasmusicthathelpedusout.去年，我們心愛的寵物狗去世了，這讓我們的整個家庭非常難過。正是音樂幫我們走出了困境。④Wheneveryoulistentomusic,it'sapleasure.Musicmakeseverythingaroundyoulooksobeautiful.無論什么時候聽音樂都是一種享受。音樂讓周圍的一切看起來都那么美好。第三段：總結其對自己的影響①Musicisakindofmedicine,whichcancureourdepressionorunhappiness.音樂是一種藥，它可以治愈我們的沮喪或不快。②Withoutmusic,ourlifewillbecolourlessandtasteless.沒有音樂，我們的生活將會失去色彩，索然無味。③Musicisplayinganimportantroleinourlife,whichisanessentialpartofourlife.音樂在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色，它是我們生活中不可或缺的一部分。④Musicistouswhatsunshineistotheearth,whichbringscolourtoourlife.音樂之于我們就像陽光之于地球，給我們的生活帶來色彩。⑤Whetherwearesadordepressed,thereismusictokeepuscompany.無論我們悲傷或沮喪，都會有音樂陪伴著我們。⑥Itismusicthatgivesusencouragementinthefaceofdifficulty.是音樂給了我們面對困難的勇氣。第四段：總結演講內容，提出希望①Altogether,wecancometo/drawaconclusionthatwecan'tbeseparatedfrommusic.總之，我們可以得出一個結論：我們離不開音樂。②Basedontheabovestatements,wecanconcludethatmusicmakeslifebetter.基于以上陳述，我們可以得出結論：音樂讓生活更美好。③Let'scontinuetakingmusicasourcompanionandenjoyingthestrengthandenjoymentbroughtbymusic.讓我們繼續以音樂為伴，享受音樂帶來的力量和快樂。④Musicissuchagoodthingthatlet'smakefriendswithit.音樂如此美好，讓我們和它交朋友吧。⑤Ihopeallofyouwillbegintotreasuremusicandmakeitapartofyourlife.我希望你們所有人都能開始重視音樂，讓它成為你們生活的一部分。[寫作指導]一仿結構布局合理第一段：

第二段：

第三段：

第四段：

點明話題通過問題吸引聽眾的注意力，并介紹過去的經歷音樂的影響提出希望二仿語言規范美觀

1．與大家分享音樂對我生活的影響。(祈使句；impact)答案

Sharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.2．考試即將來臨時你緊張嗎？(with復合結構)答案

Areyounervouswiththeexamapproaching？3．我無法像往常一樣入睡。(asusual)答案

Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.4．我感到氣餒。(主系表；discouraged)答案

Ifeltdiscouraged.5．老師建議我聽音樂。(suggest＋賓格＋doing)答案

Myteachersuggestedmelisteningtomusic.6．音樂給我力量，給我安慰。(主謂賓)答案

Musicgivesmestrengthandbringsmerelief.7．聽音樂給我一種滿足感。(動名詞短語作主語)答案

Listeningtomusicgivesmeasenseofsatisfaction.8．為什么不試試呢？(whynot)答案

Whynothaveatry？三仿句式高級表達9．用“It'sanhonourto...”改寫句1。答案It'sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.10．用asaresult呈現句3和句4的因果關系。答案Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.Asaresult,Ifeltdiscouraged.四謄寫[參考范文]Hello,everyone.It'sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.Areyounervouswiththeexamapproaching?Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.Asaresult,Ifeltdiscouraged.Then,myteachersuggestedmelis