高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習校園音樂劇尋犬記與我的成長之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ineighthgrade,ourdirectoranddramateacherMr.LoomisaskedmetolookforadogforasupportingroleSandyinourschool’smusical.Itriedveryhard,butinvain.Iknewthisdoghadtohaveawinningpersonality,butitwouldalsohavetolookthepartandteamupwellwiththeleadingroleKayla.“Ashley,IthinkIcanhelpyougetadog,”offeredJohn,ourassistantdirector,whenwewerealldonefortheafternoon.“That’dbegreat,”Isaid,openingthestagedoor.“Ihavenoideawheretogetthispuppy.”Johnflashedasmileatme,“Itextedmyneighbor,whorunsthelocalshelter.Shetextedmerightbacksayingshecouldhelpus.Don’tworry!Mr.Loomisalwayssaystheaterisforeveryone.”4續(xù)寫原文Truerwordswereneverspoken.Mygiantbirthmarkthatcoveredhalfofmyfacewouldbetoomuchofadistraction.Ihadactedinonemusicalandlovedit,butafterwardIoverheardaladytellingMr.Loomishowkindithadbeenforhimtocastme.Afterthat,Istoppedperformingandworkedbehindthescenes.However,lookingfortheperfectSandylookedlikeanimpossibletask.Desperationforcedmetosayyes.HardlyhadwearrivedwhenJohn’sneighborinvitedustothebackyard.Therewesawthedog.“Thisisthedogyouwant!”sheannounced.“He’sobedientandcalm.”Asshesaidthat,thedogturnedaroundandkissedher.5續(xù)寫原文“He’sathree-leggeddog!”Iexclaimed,statingtheobvious.“Yes,”theneighborexplained.“Abandonedafteranaccident,hewasadoptedbymyfriend,whosawhisfantasticpotential.”“Thankyou!Takehimfortherehearsal(排練)onMondaymorning,please,”Johnsaidasweleft.AllMondaymorningIwasabsent-mindedintheclassroom.WouldheworkoutasSandy?Wouldhecheworbarkordoanythingbad?SuddenlyIheardthefamiliarvoiceofJohn.“Ashley,Mr.Loomiswillbewaitingforyouathisofficeduringthelunchbreak.”6段首句Paragraph1：Duringthelunchbreak,IwenttotheofficeofMr.Loomis.Paragraph2：OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaconfidentlyontothestage.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了八年級時，導演讓“我”為學校音樂劇尋找一只叫桑迪的狗，“我”久尋無果，助理導演約翰聯(lián)系了在動物收容所工作的鄰居幫忙。看到一只三條腿的狗，“我”雖驚訝但還是帶它回去排練。“我”因臉上的胎記曾放棄表演轉(zhuǎn)做幕后，對這只狗能否勝任忐忑不安。不過，在與它排練過程中，它表現(xiàn)出色，最終在周三晚的演出中，它自信地與凱拉登臺，演出獲得成功，“我”也克服了內(nèi)心的障礙，重新體會到表演的快樂和意義。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Duringthelunchbreak,IwenttotheofficeofMr.Loomis.午休時，我懷著忐忑的心情走向盧米斯先生的辦公室。一路上，我不停地在腦海中設(shè)想各種可能出現(xiàn)的場景，擔心他會對這只三條腿的狗不滿意。推開門，我看到盧米斯先生正坐在辦公桌前，他微笑著讓我把狗帶進來。當狗乖巧地走到他身邊時，盧米斯先生蹲下身子仔細觀察，臉上露出了驚喜的表情，他稱贊這只狗很有靈性，眼神中透露出的友善和專注非常適合桑迪這個角色。我懸著的心終于落了地，暗暗下定決心要和這只狗一起努力，讓它在舞臺上大放異彩。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaconfidentlyontothestage.周三晚上，我們的桑迪自信滿滿地跟著凱拉走上舞臺。聚光燈灑在它們身上，桑迪絲毫沒有表現(xiàn)出緊張或膽怯。它熟練地完成了每一個動作，與凱拉的配合默契十足。臺下的觀眾被它的可愛和靈動所吸引，不時發(fā)出陣陣笑聲和掌聲。當演出結(jié)束，全場響起雷鳴般的掌聲時，我激動得熱淚盈眶。這只三條腿的狗不僅成功地完成了演出，更讓我重新找回了對表演的熱愛和信心，我知道，這次經(jīng)歷將成為我人生中一段難忘的回憶。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Duringthelunchbreak,IwalkedtowardsMr.Loomis'sofficewithapoundingheart.Alongtheway,variousscenarioskeptflashingthroughmymind,fearingthathemightbedissatisfiedwiththethree-leggeddog.Uponpushingopenthedoor,IsawMr.Loomissittingathisdesk.Hesmiledandaskedmetobringthedogin.Whenthedogwalkedobedientlyuptohim,Mr.Loomiscroucheddowntoobserveitcarefully.Tomyrelief,alookofpleasantsurpriseappearedonhisface.Hepraisedthedogforitsintelligenceandthefriendlinessandconcentrationinitseyes,whichwereverysuitablefortheroleofSandy.Withmyheartfinallyatease,Isecretlyresolvedtoworkhardwiththedogtomakeitshineonstage.14范文呈現(xiàn)OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaontothestagewithconfidence.Thespotlightshoneonthem,andSandyshowednosignofnervousnessortimidity.Itskillfullycompletedeveryaction,cooperatingwithKaylaseamlessly.Theaudiencewasattractedbyitscutenessandliveliness,burstingintolaughterandapplausefromtimetotime.Whentheperformanceendedandthethunderousapplausefilledthehall,Iwassoexcitedthattearswelledupinmyeyes.Thisthree-leggeddognotonlysuccessfullycompletedtheperformancebutalsohelpedmeregainmyloveandconfidenceinacting.Iknewthatthisexperiencewouldbecomeanunforgettablememoryinmylife.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Duringthelunchbreak,ImademywaytoMr.Loomis'soffice,myheartthumpinglikeadrum.AllmannerofanticipationsswirledwithinmeasIcontemplatedthepotentialreactionstothethree-leggedcanine.AsIentered,theresatMr.Loomis,hisexpressioninscrutable.Withbatedbreath,Iusheredinthedog.Instantly,Mr.Loomis'seyeslitupwithaglimmerofintrigue.Hekneltdown,andashedidso,itwasasifhehaddiscoveredahiddengem."Thisdog,"heexclaimed,"possessesaninnatecharmandafocusthatisnothingshortofperfectforSandy!"Awaveofreliefwashedoverme,andIvowedthenandtheretoensurethisremarkabledogwoulddazzleonthestage.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)OnWednesdaynight,asthecurtainrose,ourSandytrottedalongsideKaylawithanairofself-assurance.Thespotlightbathedtheminagoldenglow,andSandy,unfazedbytheaudience'sgaze,executedeachmovementw