申請自薦一．開頭部分：介紹自己，簡要說明信息來源，并提出申請1.I'mwritingtoapplyforthejob/post/positionas...我寫信是為了申請……的工作/崗位。2.Iamwritingtorecommendmyselfasaqualifiedcandidatefor...我寫信是為了推薦自己作為……的合格候選人。3.Iammorethandelightedtoreadyour...andI'mwritingtoapplyforbeing...我非常開心讀到你的……，我寫信是為了申請成為……。4.Ilearnedfromsb./thenewspaperthatyourcompanywantstohire...我從某人/新聞得知你們公司想要雇用……。5.Ireadtheannouncementof...thatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.我讀到了你發布在網上的公告稱……，我對此很感興趣。二．結尾部分：請求給予機會，期望盡快回復1.Iwillbemuchgratefulifyoucangivemetheopportunity./IwillappreciateitifIcanbechosenforthejob.如果您能給我這個機會，我將不勝感激。/如果我們能被選中做這份工作，我會很感激。2.Idohopemyenthusiasmandqualificationwillwinmeafavorableconsiderationfromyourside.我真誠地希望我的熱情和資歷能夠贏得您的青睞。3.Ihopeyoucanoffermetheopportunity./Ihopetobechosenasa...sothatIcandosomethingfor...我希望您能給我提供這個機會。/我希望被選中成為……，這樣我就能為……效勞。4.Ifgiventheopportunity,I'llbemorethandelightedtoworkforourcityandbesurelydevotedtothejob.如果能夠得到這個機會，我會十分樂意為了我們的城市而工作，對工作盡心盡責。5.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.期待盡快得到您的回復。三．多積鮮活佳句，做到意蘊豐富1.Ifgiventhechance,I'llshowtheforeignfriendsaroundourcity,gettingthemtoknowmoreaboutthereallifeandcultureinChina.如果被給予機會，我會帶外國朋友參觀我們的城市，讓他們更多地了解中國的真實生活和文化。2.AsanImageAmbassador,notonlycanIspreadChineseculture,butalsoIcanputmytalentintogooduse.作為一名形象大使,我不僅可以傳播中國文化，而且可以充分運用我的特長。 3.Inaddition,suchalearningexperienceisnotonlyagreatchanceformetoimprovemyself,butalsoapreciousopportunitytospreadChineseculturetoBritishfriends.此外,這樣的學習經歷不僅是我提高自己的絕佳機會，也是向英國朋友傳播中國文化的寶貴機會。4.Onthewhole,Iamqualifiedtobeavolunteer.Ihopetohelpoutpeopleinneedandrewardoursocietyassoonaspossible.總之，我有資格成為一名志愿者。我希望能盡快幫助有需要的人，回報我們的社會。四．內化寫作范式，確保形體規范DearSir/Madam，I'm 讓(簡單的自我介紹).I'mwritingtoapplyfortheposition(申請的具體職位).Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause(說明為什么想得到這次寶貴的機會).I(優勢一).Besides，(優勢二).IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua五．實戰訓練——“要點”和“出彩”齊飛【題目要求】假定你是李華，暑期在倫敦學習，得知當地美術館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者,內容包括:1.寫信目的;2.個人優勢;3.能做的事情。注意:1.寫作詞數應為80左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。一．“2步驟”找全要點——保基本分(一)顯性要點題干找1.寫信目的:①I'mwritingtoapplyforbeingavolunteerfortheChinesepaintingexhibition.Itwillbeheldinyourartgallery.我來信是為了申請成為中國畫展覽的一名志愿者。這次畫展將由您的畫廊舉辦。2.個人優勢:②IthinkIamfitforthisjobbecauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingssincechildhood.我認為我很適合這份工作，因為我從小就學習中國油畫。③IamfluentinbothChineseandEnglish.我的英語和中文都很流利。3.能做的事:④IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChinesepaintings.如果我幸運地被選中成為志愿者，我可以帶有可參觀畫廊，讓他們更多地了解中國油畫。(二)隱性要點關聯好1.自我介紹:⑤I'mLiHua,astudentstudyinginLondon.我是李華，一名在倫敦求學的學生。2.強調個人優勢:⑥ItcontributestointroducingChinesepaintings.這有助于介紹中國油畫。3.表示感謝:⑦Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.如果您能給我這次機會，我將不勝感激。二．“2層面”注重完善打造亮點(一)高級詞匯抓住眼(升格②③⑦句中的加黑詞匯)1.fit→bequalifiedfor2.befluentin→haveagoodcommandof3.beverygrateful→behighlyappreciated(二)高級句式點亮篇(按要求升級句子)1.用恰如其分的非謂語動詞為表達“增色”(用非謂語動詞改寫句①)I’mwritingtoapplyforbeingavolunteerfortheChinesepaintingexhibitiontobeheldinyourartgallery.2.用定語從句為表達“添彩”(用which合并句③和句⑥)IhaveagoodcommandofbothChineseandEnglish,whichcontributestointroducingChinesepaintings.3.用言簡意賅的省略句凸顯“實力”(用省略句改寫句④)Ifluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChinesepaintings.三．“2方面”打造高顏值——“語”順“形”美（謄寫成文，注意邏輯銜接和行文規范）DearSirorMadam,I’mLihua,astudentstudyinginLondon.I’mwritingtoapplyforbeingavolunteerfortheChinesepaintingexhibitiontobeheldinyourartgallery.IreallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecauseIamsuchahardcorefanofChinesepaintings.Personally,IthinkIamqualifiedforthisjobbecauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingssincechildhood.Additionally,IhaveagoodcommandofbothChineseandEnglish,whichcontributestointroducingChinesepaintings.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Ifluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChine