2024屆高中英語讀后續寫之善行義舉類（含解析）1．（2024·重慶·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。Foryears,puttingupChristmaslightshadbeenafamilytraditionforthePatrick’shousehold.ItwasanoccasionwhentheywouldbusilyprepareforthecelebrationofChristmas.TheirChristmaslightdisplaywasalwaysahighlightoftheneighborhoodandbroughtmuchdelighttothewholecommunity.Typically,AnthonywouldinvitetheneighborsoverastheydecoratedtheChristmastreeinthefrontyard.Emily,wholivednextdoorandhadknownSara’sfamilyforlong,oftencametoadmiretheirwonderlandofChristmaslights.InearlyDecember,Anthonywouldstringcolorfullightsallaroundtheirroofuntilitlookeddazzling.Onthefrontlawn,hewouldblowupalargewhiteFrostytheSnowmanandaRudolphwithaglowingrednose.Saraalwaysjoinedin,alongwiththeirwarm-heartedneighbors,hanginggiftsonthetreeandplaying“WhiteChristmas”overandovertokeepeveryoneinthespirit.Yetthebadnewscameinthemidstofthefestivemood,beforetheycouldfinishtheChristmasdecoration.Anthonyfelldesperatelyill.Thesymptomssuggestedacuteheartfailureandhewassoonadmittedtohospital.Saraspentdaysandnightsintheward,attendingtoAnthonyandprayingforhisrecovery,thoughthehopewasslim.OnChristmasEve,Anthonypassedaway.ItcameasahugeblowtoSara.Inthefollowingdays,shehadtomanagethefuneralwhilestrugglingtofigureoutawaytocoverhousingandhouseholdexpenses,andtacklingaseeminglyendlesslistofdifficultto-dos.Perhapshardestofall,shehadtopersuadeherselfintoacceptingthelossofherfather.Itwastoomuchtotake.Whenshepulleduptothehouseafteralongdayonthego,theonlythingthatcouldcomfortherwerethetwinklingChristmaslights,whichbroughtherasparkofhope-itfeltasifthebrightnessofthelightscouldcanceloutsomeofthedarknessofthepastdays’misfortune.Wantingtohelp,Emilysharedtheirstoryonacommunitywebsite.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Touchedbytheirkindness,Saradecidedtofulfillthelightingdecorations,thoughChristmaswasgone.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Wantingtohelp,Emilydecidedtosharetheirstoryonacommunitywebsite.Theheartfeltnarrativequicklygainedattentionfromthelocalcommunity,promptinganoutpouringofsupportforSara.Neighborswouldhelpwiththefuneralarrangement,andsomefriendshelpedwiththechores.Inadditiontopracticalassistance,thecommunityofferedanabundanceofemotionalsupport.Emilywouldfrequentlystopbytolendalisteningear,offeringwordsofcomfortandencouragementtoSaraasshenavigatedtheoverwhelmingemotionsthataccompaniedherfather’spassingaway.Additionally,acrowdfundingcampaignwasstartedtoeaseSara’sfinancialburden.TheheartwarmingresponsefromthecommunitybroughtimmensecomforttoSara,remindingherthatshewasnotaloneinhergrief.Touchedbytheirkindness,Saradecidedtofulfillthelightingdecorations,thoughChristmaswasgone.Togetherwiththesupportiveneighbors,Saragatheredcolorfullightsbulbsandfestiveornaments.ShecarefullywoundstringsoflightsaroundthebranchesoftheChristmastree,ensuringthateverycornerwasbathedinawarmandinvitingglow.Asdarknessfell,thesofttwinkleoflightsenvelopedtheneighborhood,radiatinghopeandspreadingasenseofwarmth.Thelights,onceabeaconofholidaycheer,nowstoodasabeaconofhopeandhealing,shimmeringagainstthedarknessnotjustforSara,butfortheentireneighborhood.TheChristmasseasonwasalreadyover,butthespiritwouldliveon.【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，這篇文章講述了帕特里克一家多年來在圣誕節期間裝飾圣誕燈的傳統。安東尼因病住院，圣誕節前夕去世，妻子莎拉痛苦不堪。莎拉的鄰居艾米莉在社區網站上分享了他們的故事，引起了社區的關注和支持。鄰居們幫助安排葬禮，并提供情感上的支持。社區還發起了籌款活動，減輕莎拉的經濟壓力。受到鄰居們的善意感動，莎拉決定繼續裝飾圣誕燈，為整個社區帶來希望和溫暖。盡管圣誕節已經過去，但精神將繼續存在。【詳解】1.段落續寫：①由第一段首句內容“為了提供幫助，艾米莉決定在一個社區網站上分享他們的故事。”可知，第一段可描寫社區對莎拉一家的幫助②由第二段首句內容“莎拉被他們的好意感動了，盡管圣誕節已經過去了，她還是決定完成燈飾。”可知，第二段可描寫莎拉和支持她的鄰居們一起，點亮圣誕樹上的燈光，點亮社區中的溫暖之燈。2.續寫線索：艾米麗分享故事——社區共同幫助莎拉一家——莎拉和鄰居們共同點亮彩燈——點亮希望和溫暖之燈——最終感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①獲得關注：gainattention/drawattention②.提供：offer/provide③.收集：gather/collect情緒類①.鼓勵：encouragement/inspiration②.暖心的：heartwarming/warm-hearted【點睛】[高分句型1].Emilywouldfrequentlystopbytolendalisteningear,offeringwordsofcomfortandencouragementtoSaraasshenavigatedtheoverwhelmingemotionsthataccompaniedherfather’spassingaway.（句中含有現在分詞作狀語以及that引導定語從句）[高分句型2].ShecarefullywoundstringsoflightsaroundthebranchesoftheChristmastree,ensuringthateverycornerwasbathedinawarmandinvitingglow.（由現在分詞作狀語以及that引導賓語從句）2．（2024·云南·二模）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Inaremoteandsmallmountaintown,therelivedayoungwomannamedLily.Shewasknownforherkindheartandgentlenature.Thetownsfolkadoredherverymuchandoftensoughtheroutforadviceoralisteningear.Lilyalwaysshowedherbestpassioninhelpingthem,whichmadepeopleinthetownthinkhighlyofher.Onesunnyafternoon,asLilywaswalkingthroughthetownsquare,shenoticedasmall,shabby-lookingmansittingaloneonaparkbench.Hisseeminglydecentclotheswerewornout,andhisfaceborethemarksofahardlife,appearinghelplessandbeinginlowspirits.Feelingobligedtohelp,Lilyapproachedhimwithawarmsmile.“Hellothere,sir,”shegreetedkindly.“IsthereanythingIcandoforyou?”Themanlookedup,surpriseflickering(閃爍)inhiswearyeyes.“I...I’velostmyway,”herepliedhesitantly.“Idon’thaveahome.Ihaven’thadanythingtoeatforseveraldays,andIhavenoideawhoIcanturntoforhelp.”Uponknowinghishardships,Lilydecidedtoofferhimsomefoodandaplacetostay.Sheintroducedhimtoherfamily,whowelcomedhimwithopenarmsandinvitedhimtohavedinnerandstaywiththem.Theman,whointroducedhimselfasSamuel,begantoregainhisstrengthaftergracefullyfilinghimselfwiththedeliciousfoodprovidedbythewarmheartedfamily.Heexpressedhissinceregratitudetothemforthefoodandaccommodation.Monthspassed,andSamuelsettledintoaroutineandbecamepartoftheirhousehold.Hebecameskilledatvarioustasksandhisgenuinegratitudeendearedhimtoeveryone.Hesharedstoriesofhispastadventures,inwhichheevenhadanarrowescape,andthefamilyweresurprisedathisexperienceandadmiredhiscourageaswellaswisdom.Oneevening,asLilyandSamuelsatontheporch,watchingthesunsetbehindthehills,Samuelturnedtoherwithaglimmerinhiseye.“Lily,”hesaidsoftly,“Ihaveasecrettosharewithyou.”注意：1.續寫詞數應為150詞左右；2.請按如下格式在相應位置作答。Lily’scuriosityseizedher,andsheleanedincloser.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Lily’scuriosityseizedher,andsheleanedincloser.“Whatisit,Samuel?”“Imayhaveappearedlostandhomelesswhenwemet,”Samuelsaidwithasmile.ConfusionspreadacrossLily’sfaceasshelistenedattentively.“ButIamactuallyamillionaire,”Samuelcontinued.“Idisguisedmyselftoseeiftherewerestillgood-heartedpeopleintheworld.Andyou,Lily,haveprovedtomethatgenuinekindnessstillexists.”Lilywasspeechless,amixofshockandawewashingoverher.ReadytorewardLilyforherkindness,Samuelensuredthatherfamilywouldbeblessedwithabundance.Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney.Lily’sfamilyfoundthemselvesneverlackingdailynecessities.Instead,theywerealwaysenvelopedinwealth,buttheyneverforgotthelessonofkindnessthatbeganwiththeencounteronthatparkbench.Theyusedtheirnewfoundfortunetohelpothersinneed,whoalsopassedonkindnesstotheirneighbors.Andso,thesmalltownbecameknownforitsendlesskindness,whichwasforeverchangedbySamuelwhowasnotwhatheseemed.【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了在一個偏僻的小山城里，住著一位名叫莉莉的年輕女子。她以心地善良、性情溫和而聞名。一次，她偶然地救助一個無家可歸的人，后來，這個無家可歸的人揭露自己的真實身份，原來他是一位百萬富翁。為了報答莉莉的善良和好心，富翁決定給她一大筆錢，但是，莉莉一家人用新獲得的財富繼續幫助有需要的人的故事。【詳解】1.段落續寫：①由第一段首句內容“莉莉的好奇心攫住了她，她湊近了一些。”可知，第一段可描寫莉莉終于知道了塞繆爾的真實身份。②由第二段首句內容“塞繆爾信守諾言，給了莉莉一大筆錢。”可知，第二段可描寫莉莉一家人用新獲得的財富繼續幫助有需要的人。2.續寫線索：莉莉感到好奇——塞繆爾解釋——莉莉知道實情——塞繆爾給了莉莉一大筆錢——繼續幫助有需要的人——感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①保證：ensured/guaranteed②.喬裝打扮：disguised/dressedup③.傳遞：passedon/handedon情緒類①.聚精會神地，注意地：attentively/withconcentration②.好心腸地：good-hearted/kindhearted【點睛】[高分句型1].Theyusedtheirnewfoundfortunetohelpothersinneed,whoalsopassedonkindnesstotheirneighbors.（運用了關系代詞who引導的非限制性定語從句。）[高分句型2].Idisguisedmyselftoseeiftherewerestillgood-heartedpeopleintheworld.（運用了從屬連詞if引導的賓語從句。）3．（2024·貴州畢節·二模）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。OnOct.4.2021,JamesandhisfriendRaphaelweresqueezinginalunchtimeworkoutonPier(碼頭)15overlookingtheEastRiver,whenJamesfroze.“Somebody’sinthewater,”heshouted.BeforeRaphaelcouldrespond.Jamesclimbedovertherailattheedgeofthepierandleapedintothecold,pollutedwaterwithouttakingthetimetoremovehisshoes.WhatJameshadheardwasanalarmedfishermanshoutingfromPier16.nearly50yardsaway,“Help!He’sinthewater!”Andwhathe’dseenwasapersonfloating,lifeless.Raphaeldidn’tneedtoseethevictim.“Maybethefishermansawsomeoneinthewaterwhoneedsourhelp.”hethought.“Ormaybeit’sthefishermanwhoneedsmyhelp.Eitherway,I’mgoingin.”Heyankedoffhisshoesandswan-dived.Approachingtheunconsciousvictim,Jamessawthatitwasamiddle-agedman.Hewasbig,around200pounds,respectablydressedandsinkingfast.Hewas3feetbelowthesurfacebythetimeJamesreachedhim.Jamesdove,feltaround,graspedthemanandkickedupwarduntiltheybothresurfaced.Raphaelwastherenow.Treading(踩，踏)water,thetwofriendsfloatedthemanonhisback.AsRaphaelloopedhisarmsaroundtheman’sshouldersandJamessupportedthehipsandknees,theymadetheirwaybacktoPier15,exhausted.Theymighthavebeenhaulingacorpse(尸體).Theman’sskinwasblue,andneitherRaphaelnorJamesdetectedanybreathing.WhenatlasttheyreachedPier15,theyfacedanewuncertainty.Howtogetout?Thepier’sdeckingstoodanunreachable10feetabovetheirheads.Ametalbeamwascoveredbysharpbarnacles.IfRaphael,shoeless,attemptedtoclimbontoit,he’dhurthisbarefeet.Suddenlythemanbreathedagain,stirredandclobbered(狠揍)confusedlyRaphaelinthefacebeforefadingbacktonearunconsciousness.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150詞左右：2.請按如下格式作答.“Didwedosomethingwrong?”Raphaelaskedhimself._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthemoment,onthepier,thecrowdhadgatheredfromsomewhere._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】

“Didwedosomethingwrong?”Raphaelaskedhimself.“Hewasstillalive!”Jamesscreamed,seeingtheman’sbehaviors.Atthatmoment,thepairsrealizedtheyhadtogetthedrowningmanontothePierasquicklyaspossible.Lookingateachother,theyhadanidea.Theycarefullyrepeatedwhattheyhaddonejustnow.Raphaelloopedhisarmsaroundtheman’sshouldersandJamessupportedthehipsandknees.Overandoveragain,theyfailedtoliftthemantothePier.However,theynevergaveup.(79)

Atthemoment,onthepier,thecrowdhadgatheredfromsomewhere.Peoplestaredatwhatwashappeninginfrontofthem.However,noonesteppedforwardandgavehishandtothetwointhewater.Someoneinthecrowdsuggestedcallingemergencyservices.Suddenly,thefisherman,whohadcalledforhelp,approachedthemwithasmallboat.Thethreeworkedtogetherandfinallymanagedtoputthemanintotheboat.Withintenminutes,thegroupwerebackontheshorejustastheambulancearrived.Themantheyhadsavedwastakentothehospitalimmediatelyforevaluation.(88)

【導語】這是一篇記敘文。2021年10月4日，詹姆斯和他的朋友拉斐爾正在15號碼頭吃午餐，聽到有人喊救命。發現有人落水，詹姆斯爬過碼頭邊上的欄桿，連鞋子都沒脫就跳進了冰冷、被污染的水中。拉斐爾隨后也跳下了水，兩人費力把落水者拖到15號碼頭時，發現碼頭甲板離他們的頭頂有10英尺高，他們夠不到。這時，被救的那個人動了動，在拉斐爾的臉上亂打了一拳，然后又昏了過去。【詳解】1.段落續寫①根據第一段首句““我們做錯了什么嗎？”拉斐爾問自己。”可知，第一段可描寫兩人發現落水者還有呼吸后，便想法設法救落水者上岸。雖說兩人的努力換來的是失敗。然而，兩人并沒有放棄。②根據第二段首句“這時，碼頭上的人群不知從什么地方聚集起來了。”可知，接第二段可描寫看熱鬧的人群注視眼前的一切，卻沒有向水里的兩人施以援手。最終，之前喊求救的那個漁夫劃著船，和水里的兩人聯手把落水者救上岸，救護人員把被救者送到了醫院。2.續寫線索想帶去碼頭未果——不放棄——人們聚集——撥打急救電話——漁夫劃船救援——救護車送人到醫院3.詞匯激活行動類：大喊：scream/shout/yell/exclaim注意到：see/observe/payattentionto/stareat幫忙：giveahand/help/assist/aid建議：suggest/advise/propose情緒類：小心翼翼地：carefully/cautiously/gingerly/withgreatcare【點睛】【高分句型1】Theyrepeatedwhattheyhaddonejustnow.（運用了賓語從句）【高分句型2】Suddenly,thefisherman,whohadcalledforhelp,approachedthemwithasmallboat.（運用了who引導非限制性定語從句）4．（2024·貴州·二模）讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Tiffany’sdifficultiesbeganlastyearwhenshehadguestsatherhomeforThanksgivingandthenagainforChristmas.Herhusbandhadbeeninmedicalschoolandwasnowinthesecondyearofhismedicalresidency.Becauseofthelongworkhoursrequiredofhim,hewasnotabletohelpherasmuchastheybothwouldhaveliked,andsomostofthatwhichneededtobeaccomplishedduringthisholidayseason,inadditiontothecareoftheirfouryoungchildren,felltoTiffany.Shewasbecomingoverwhelmed,andthenshelearnedthatonewhowasdeartoherhadbeendiagnosedwithcancer.Thestressandworrybegantotakeaheavyburdenonher,andsheslippedintoaperiodofdiscouragementanddepression.Shesoughtmedicalhelp,andyetnothingchanged.Herappetitedisappeared,andshebegantoloseweight.Herfamilyandfriendsprayedforherandtrieddesperatelytohelp.Theydeliveredherfavoritefoodsinanattempttokeepherphysicallyhealthy,butshecouldtakeonlyafewbitesandthenwouldbeunabletofinish.Ononeparticularlytryingday,herhusbandattemptedinvaintopersuadeherwithfoodsshehadalwaysloved.Whennothingworked,hesaid,“Theremustbesomethingthatsoundsgoodtoyou.”Tiffanythoughtforamomentandsaid,“TheonlythingIcanthinkofthatsoundsgoodishomemadebread.”Buttherewasnoneonhand.ThefollowingafternoonTiffany’sdoorbellrang.Herhusbandhappenedtobehomeandansweredit.Whenhereturned,hewascarryingaloafofhomemadebread.TiffanywasastonishedwhenhetoldherithadcomefromawomannamedSherrie,whomtheybarelyknew.ShewasafriendofTiffany’ssisterNicoleandhadbeenintroducedtoTiffanyandherhusbandbrieflyseveralmonthsearlierwhenNicoleandherfamilywerestayingwithTiffanyforThanksgiving.Dayslater,TiffanybegantoregainherappetiteandfeelhopefulaboutthefutureandsheowedittothatloafofbreadfromSherrie.TiffanydecidedtovisitSherrietoexpressthanks.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sherrie’swordsrevealedthereasonwhyshedeliveredherbreadandlovetoTiffany.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】TiffanydecidedtovisitSherrietoexpressthanks.WonderingwhatkindofpersonSherriewas,Tiffanyknockedonthedoor.Thedooropened,andSherrieappearedwithaheartwarmingsmilewhichmadeTiffanyfeelateasealot.DuringthecaringconversationonSherrie’scouch,Tiffanycouldn’thelpbutask:“Sherrie,howdoyouknowaboutmyconditioninthefirstplace?”HerwordsweremetbySherrie’sgentlesmile.“BecauseIheardaboutitfromyoursister,andagoodpersonlikeyoudeserveafinepackofbread.”repliedSherrie.Sherrie’swordsrevealedthereasonwhyshedeliveredherbreadandlovetoTiffany.Beingakindandlovingperson,Sherriewouldalwaysshareloveandconcernwithpeoplearoundher.Tiffanyfeltastrongsenseofhopeinsiderhermind,notonlybecauseofthehomemadebreadSherriemadeher,butalsotheloveshereceivedalongwiththeheartwarmingbread.Tiffanydecidednottowastesuchakindness,andshewouldpassonthelovefromotherswithherownaction.【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，文章講述了Tiffany由于家務繁忙，外加獨立照顧四個孩子，慢慢地得了抑郁癥，從而一蹶不振。她唯一的愿望就是能吃上家庭手工做的面包。正在此時，一位只見過一次面的朋友給她送來了面包，這讓Tiffany重新獲得了人生的希望。【詳解】1.續寫段落：①根據第一段首句“Tiffany決定去家里拜訪Sherrie以表示感謝”可知，第一段可描寫Tiffany在收到手工面包后心存感激，決定登門拜訪以表示感謝。此時Tiffany一定會詢問Sherrie是怎么得知她的情況的，以及為什么會幫助她。②根據第二段首句“Sherrie的話讓Tiffany知道了為什么會送她面包”可知，第二段可描寫Sherrie給了Tiffany一個回答，讓Tiffany感到很感動。Tiffany接受了他人的好意后，也一定會把這種善意傳遞下去。2.續寫線索：心情低落，失去食欲——收到了Sherrie的手工面包——重新振奮起來——登門拜訪，表示感謝——了解Sherrie幫助自己的原因——Tiffany很感動，將善意傳遞下去。3.詞匯激活行為類①拜訪：visit/payavisitto②和……交談：conversewithsb./makeconversationwithsb./haveachatwith③嘗試做：attempttodo/trytodo④碰巧做：happentodo/dosth.bycoincidence情緒類①感激的：thankful/appreciated/grateful②壓抑的：depressed/stressedout③感動的：moved/touched④難過的：sad/melancholy【點睛】【高分句型1】WonderingwhatkindofpersonSherriewas,Tiffanyknockedonthedoor.（運用了現在分詞作狀語）【高分句型2】Beingakindandlovingperson,Sherriewouldalwaysshareloveandconcernwithpeoplearoundher.（運用了現在分詞作狀語）【高分句型3】Tiffanyfeltastrongsenseofhopeinsiderhermind,notonlybecauseofthehomemadebreadSherriemadeher,butalsotheloveshereceivedalongwiththeheartwarmingbread.（notonly…butalso…連接的狀語）5．（2024·廣西·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Awarm,sunnydayinearlyNovember,especiallyintheSierras,wasanicesurprise.OnelookatthecloudlessblueskywasallittooktoconvincemetodrivetwentymilesintothevalleytodoearlyChristmasshopping.Temperaturesinthevalleyarebetweeneightandtendegreeshigherthanthoseinthefoothillswherewelive,soIenjoyedthewarmthandsunshineasIwalkedfromstoretostore.Aroundsunset,Isearchedthroughmypurseformycellphone,onlytodiscoveritwasn’tthere.AfterafrustratingsearchIfinallyfounditunderthecarseatandsighedwithrelief.Icalledmyhusbandandheardthepanicinhisvoice.”I’vebeentryingtocallyou.Itstartedsnowingupherehalfanhourago,“heshoutedintothephone.“Well.I’llstopandputthechainsonwhenIgetuptheresoIcanmakeithome,”Isighed.Myhusbandcoughednervouslyandclearedhisthroat.“Uh,IforgottoputthechainsbackinthetrunkwhenIcleanedthecaroutyesterday,”hesaid.Iresistedtheurgetoscream.“Ithinkyoucanmakeithomeifyouleavenowanddriveslowlyfollowingthetiretracksintheroadwhenyougettothesnow,”myhusbandsaidbeforeIhungup.Idroveslowlytowardthe2600-footelevation(高地)wherewelived.Mybiggestchallengewouldbetogetoverthebridge,thenupthehillontheotherside.ThesnowwasfallingharderwhenIreachedthebridge.Iblinkedbacktears.Atruckwasdrivingacrossthebridgeaheadofme.Myhopessoared.Thosebigtireswouldmakeagoodpaththroughthesnow.ThepathfromthetrucktireshelpeduntilIreachedtheendofthebridgeandstartedupthehill.Thetiresstartedspinningandthecarstartedtoslidebackdownthehill.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Whenmycarfinallystopped,Iheardsomeonerappingonthewindow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Istartedwalkinghome,hopingtogettoaplacewhereIcouldusemyphoneontheway.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】

Whenmycarfinallystopped,Iheardsomeonerappingonthewindow.Irolleditdowntoseeayoungmanwithdarkcurlyhairandsparklingblueeyes.Hesmiled.“You’llnevermakeitupthishillwithoutchains.I’llpushyourcartotheside.Youcanwalkupthehill,”hesaid.Thecarseemedtofloateffortlesslytothesideoftheroad.Ijumpedoutofthecarandthankedhimforhishelp.Itriedtocallmyhusbandbutreceptionatthislevelwaspooreveningoodweather.Istartedwalkinghome,hopingtogettoaplacewhereIcouldusemyphoneontheway.Ihadn’twalkedfarwhenawhitetruckpulledupnexttome.“Wouldyoulikearidehome?”thedriverasked.Inoddedandheopenedthedoor.Onthetruck,Ilookedathimcloselyandnoticedsomedarkcurlyhairstickingoutofhishat.“Areyoutheyoungmanwhopushedmycarofftheroadonthehill?”Iasked.Hesmiledandnodded.Afterthetruckpulledintothedrivewaytoourhouse,hehelpedmeoutofthetruck.ButbeforeIcouldthankhim,hehaddrivenaway.【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者在一個陽光明媚、萬里無云的早上，驅車20英里來到一個山谷作圣誕采買。在太陽落山之際，丈夫電話告訴她路上已經下雪了，但是防滑鏈不在車上，于是作者開啟了艱難的回程之旅，幸虧遇到了一個熱心的年輕人的幫助，才順利回到了家中。【詳解】1.段落續寫：①由第一段首句“當我的車終于停下來時，我聽到有人在敲車窗。”可知，第一段可描寫有人主動幫助作者將車推到路邊，作者試著步行回家。②由第二段首句“我開始往家走，希望在路上能找到一個可以用手機的地方。”可知，第二段可描寫手機信號不好，最終還是這個熱心人幫助了她，載她安全回到家中。2.續寫線索：有人敲窗——一個年輕人主動幫忙——把車推到路邊——下車給丈夫打電話——步行回家，尋找有手機信號的地方——年輕人再次主動幫忙——開卡車將作者捎回家——感謝3.詞匯激活：行為類：①成功：makeit/succeed②打電話：call/ring③停車、停下來：pullup/stop④幫助：help/aid情緒類：①毫不費力地：effortlessly/inabreeze②感謝：thanksb/showone’sgratitudetosb【點睛】【高分句型1】Areyoutheyoungmanwhopushedmycarofftheroadonthehill?（運用了以關系代詞who引導的限制性定語從句。）【高分句型2】Afterthetruckpulledintothedrivewaytoourhouse,hehelpedmeoutofthetruck.（運用了after引導的時間狀語從句。）6．（2024·河南·模擬預測）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Itwasaperfectdayforthebeach.MybrotherandIweremeetingourfriendsonthenortheastsideoftheisland,abeachweseldomvisitedduetothestrongcurrents.Daddroppedusoffanhourbeforeeveryonewastoarrive.Iwatchedmybrothertakeoffintotheblueocean.Hewasabodysurfingenthusiast.Idecidednottowaitforourfriendseitherbecausethewaterbegantorise,formingaperfectwave.Iheldmybreathanddovethroughthewave.Iwasunderthesurf,withmyeyeswideopen,thewaterlikesilkflowingovermybody.Itwascold,likeliquidicewakingupmysenses.Ipulledmybodytothesurface,allowingfreshairtofillmylungs,andthenwentbackunder.Ipretendedtobeafish,adolphin,anythingthatlivedunderthesea.Afterawhile,Ithoughtitmightbeagoodideatoheadbackinandseeifourfriendshadarrived.IlookedtowardthebeachandrealizedIhadgonefartheroutthanIshouldhave.Iwastheonlyonethisfarout.Iwasnottooworriedthough.Iwasaprettygoodswimmer.But,asItriedtoswimin,IrealizedIwasmakingnoprogress.Afterwhatfeltlikealongwhile,mybodybegantofeelheavy,andmyarmsgrewtired.HoweverhardItriedtoswim,Iwasnotmovinganyclosertothebeach.Wornout,terrifiedanddesperate,Icriedforhelploudly.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。IbegantothinkImightdrownoutthere.

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