第第頁Module2Myhometownandmycountrywriting寫作書面表達課件（16張PPT）2023-2024學年外研版八年級英語上冊(共16張PPT)

Module2writing

Myhometownandmycountry

1.我來自劍橋，一座位于英格蘭東部的美麗城市。

2.我的家鄉(xiāng)尤其以它的大學而聞名。

3.那里的夏天從來不很熱，冬天也不是很冷。

4.那里有許多古老的建筑和教堂可以參觀。

5.無論所處何地，你都會發(fā)現(xiàn)英格蘭的鄉(xiāng)村是那么郁郁蔥蔥。

6.所以每年的任何時候都可以來看英格蘭，但是記住要帶一把雨傘。

PartIIIQuickResponse

1.我來自大連，一座位于中國東北部的美麗城市。

2.我的家鄉(xiāng)尤其以它的海邊而聞名。

3.大連的夏天從來不很熱，冬天也不是很冷。

4.大連有許多美麗的廣場可以參觀。

5.無論所處何地，你都會發(fā)現(xiàn)大連是那么郁郁蔥蔥。

6.所以每年的任何時候都可以來看大連，但是記住要帶一副太陽眼鏡。

PartIIRequiredquestions

教學目標

學會有條理、述因果的寫作策略，掌握積累相關語言；

能根據(jù)所學和自身理解向他人介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)大連或是自己熟悉的一個地方；

能準確運用描述家鄉(xiāng)的的語言；

能在教師的幫助下或以小組討論的方式起草和修改作文。

WritingTask

北京有有悠久的歷史和燦爛的文化，廣州有豐富的特色美食，大連有優(yōu)美的自然風光——這些無不吸引著眾多外國友人。假設你是Lingling，你的英國筆友Lily打算來中國晚，她發(fā)郵件向你詢問游玩的去處。請根據(jù)下面的內容提示給她回一封電子郵件，向她推薦一個游玩的地方。

內容提示：（1）WhereisagoodplacetovisitinChina(2)WhenisthebesttimetogothereWhy(3)Whatcanshedoatthattime

要求：1.中心突出，語意連貫、層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；

3.70詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearLily，It’sgreattohearthatyouarecomingtoChina.

M2話題寫作

審題思路：

語篇類型：

主題語境：

寫作要點：

寫作素材：

語篇結構：

注意事項：

應用文—書信（電子郵件）

人與自然——旅游勝地

（1）WhereisagoodplacetovisitinChina(2)WhenisthebesttimetogothereWhy(3)Whatcanshedoatthattime

游覽北京的名勝古跡、品嘗廣州的特色美食、欣賞大連的自然美景等

三段式

推薦的游覽活動應與建議游覽的時間一致

范文賞析：遷移篇

Myhometown,Dalian,isabeautifulcityinthenortheastofChina,withapopulationofabout6million.It’sespeciallyfamousforitsbeautifulseaside.Therearelotsofthingstodoandtoseehere.Touristscanenjoythemselvesonthebeachesorinthesea.Theycanenjoythesunriseorfindjoyinswimming.Thebesttimetocomehereisinsummer,it’sverycool.Bringyoursunglassesandswimmingsuitbecauseyoumayneedthemmostdays.

It’sgreattohearthatyouarecomingtoChina.MyhometownDalianisagoodplacetovisit.

Inaword,Daliangivesawarmwelcometoeveryonefromallovertheworld,socomehereandenjoyyourself.

創(chuàng)新篇

DearLily,

It’sgreattohearthatyouarecomingtoChina.Inmyopinion,Xi’anisthebestplacetovisit.

Xi’anisanoldcityinthenorthwestofChinaandthebesttimetovisititisinAutumn.Atthattimetheweatherisneitherhotnorcoldandtherearelotsthingstodothere.YoucanvisittheTerracottaArmyandI’msureyouwillbesurprisedatit.Also,youcanwalkalongtheAncientCitywallorevenrideabikeinit.What’smore,youcanenjoythespecialfoodofXi’an,suchasroujiamoandyoupomian.

Anyway,itisagreatplace.YoucanlearnaboutthehistoryofChinaandtastethedeliciousfoodatthesametime.Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourselfthere.

評價標準

邏輯性句式豐富性選材新穎性書寫美觀性

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ThisyearisChina’s70thbirthday.AlltheChinesearehavingagreatfun.BecauseweallloveChina.Nowletmeintroducemymotherlandtoyou.

ChinaislocatedintheeastofAsia.Theshapeofitsmaplookslikeabigrooster.Italsohasthelargestpopulationintheworld,about1.4billion.

Chinaisespeciallyfamousforitslonghistoryandcolorfulculture.It'sover5000yearsold.AndBeijingOperaisoneofthesymbolsoftraditionalChineseculture.ItisfamousaroundtheworldpeoplefromdifferentcountriesenjoyseeingBeijingOpera.

AsaChinese,Iamalwaysproudtomymotherland.IamsurethatChinawillbecomethestrongestcountryintheworld.AndIwanttosee:”IloveChina,Happybirthday,mymotherland。

Mymotherlandandme

Peoplewithblackeyes,yellowfaceallhaveamother—China,anditisourmother-land.

ChinaisintheeastoftheworldandthepopulationofChinaisabout1.4billion.Thisyear，Chinais70yearsold.Aroundtheworld,peopleinothercountriesknowChinabecauseitsfamouspeople,suchasLuXun.MaoZeDong…alsotheymaybeinterestedinChinesetraditionfoodlikedumpling,ZongziandTofu…evenfamousbuildingsinitscapital,Beijing,anditshistory.

Allinall,Chinaisgettingbusierandstronger，lamlookingforwardtoseeingits100yearsoldevenolder.

MymotherlandisindeneoftheworldsheisthebiggestcountryofAsiaandhasthelargestpopulationintheworldabout1.4billion.She'sChina.

Inmyopinsion,Chinaisanamazingcountry.InChinayoucanvisittheGreatWall,it'sveryamazing.Everywhereinit,youcanknowwhatisthetopofoldbuildings.Butcanyoubelieve，Chinesepeoplebuiltit2000yearsearlier！TheGreatWallshowshowclevertheChinesepeopleare.AlsoChinesehascenturies-oldhistory.Forexample，intraditionalChineseculture，everybodyneedstobepolitetoanyone.SoyoucanfeelverycomfortableinChina.

Happyseventeenthbirthday,China！Ihopeshetogetstrongerandstronger.IlivehappilyinChinaandImproudofmymotherland.Iwillstrivetoimprovemyselfandmakemorecontributionstoher!

Thisyearismymotherland’s70yearsoldbirthday．SoIwantstotellyoualotaboutittosharemyfurthestlovetomymotherland-China.

ChinaisintheeastofAsiaandhas960kmland．ThepopulationofChinaisabout1.4billion.Andit’sthebiggestpopulationintheworld．Ourcountryisfamousforit’shistory．SuchasthesummerplaceorXi’anBingmayong．Theywillshowyouourlongestandinterestinghistorywiththemselves．YoucanalsovisittheGreatWall．Atther，youwillfeelamazingandhappy．Butourcountryisnotonlyfamousforit’shistory，butalsofamousforit’sbeautifulplace．ChanyBaiMountain’llshowyouTianChi，Xihuwillletyoufeelmorerelaxing．

Today，mymotherlandisgettingstrongerandstronger．WecanseemadeinChinaeverywhere．YiDaiYiLumadeusgetclosesttoothercountries．We’reallproudofit．Ibelievemymotherlandwillbestrongestinthefuture．Wealllookingforwardthatday．

China,abigcountrywithlonghistory.Ithinkit’sabeautifulandverynicecountry.

ChinaisintheeastoftheworldandthewestofPaciffcOcean.Ithasthepopulationofabout1.4billion.Ithasthemostfamousplacesintheworld.SuchastheGreatWall,It’sabout2000kilometres.ShenyangandBeijingpalaceMuseum,thesummerpalace……AndfoodisfamousforBeijingduckbutalsothecultureofteainChina.Therearemanykindsofdelicioustea.

Inaword,Ihopemymotherland”China”willgetmoreandmorebeautifulandstronger.I’mproud,IamaChinese.

From1949to2023,mymotherlandis70yearsold.Now,itbecamebusyandstrong.AsaChinese,Iamso

gladtointroducemymotherlandtoyou.

Chinaisabigcountryintheeastoftheworld,ithasapopulationofabout1.4billion.Asforme,Ithinkmymotherlandisnotonlyfamousforitsbeautifulbuildingsbutalsofamousforitslonghistoryandtraditionalhobbies.SuchastheGreatestWall.Chinesepeoplebuiltitfortwothousandyears.ItshowsalonghistoryalsoChinesepeople'swisdom.Andwehavelotsoftraditionalfestivals.ThemostpopularoneistheSpringFestival.Ev