雅思英語作文典型范文開頭段：ThediagramsindicateHartfordatthreedifferentstagesinitsdevelopment:1985,1995and2005.主體段：In1985,thebuilding

stoodcloseto

amainroadnamedHartfordStreetand

nextto

agarden.Insidethebuilding,therewasabroadreadingareaandakitcheninthesouthwestcorner.Inthenexttenyears,anexpansionnorthwardoccurredontheoriginallibrary,occupyingroughly1/3ofthegreenregion,withanewmeetingplaceemerged.Besides,alltablesandchairsinthereadingareadisappeared,whileareceptioncounterwasinstalled.Kitchenunderwentsomeredecorationontheshapebutitslocationremainunchanged.Asfortheentrance,itwasenlargedandmovedtothesoutheastcorner.By2005,thebuildingfurtherextendedtowardthenorth,andtherestofthegrasslandwerereplacedbyaparkinglot.Wherethemostdramaticalterationswereseenwastheinnerbuilding.Firstly,thereceptionwasremoved,leavingthehallempty.Moreobviously,aspectaculartheaterwasconstructedinthenorthdivision,withawidestageandmanyseats.結尾：Duringthe20-yearperiod,thebuilding

hadincreasedinsize

andthecarpark

hadbeenadded.Theoldpark,however,werefirst

reducedinsize

andthenvanished.erciseconsistentlyin2010inAustraliaatdifferentagecategories,withtheyoungestageclassbetween15and24andtheoldestgroupover65yearsold.Overall,theratioswereatthehighestformenduringtheiryoungestperiodandforwomenaged35to64,whichallaccountforaround53%.Tobeginwith,thefigureofmalestartedwith52.8%,thendeclinedrapidlyasageincreased,reachingthebottomat39.5%asofage35-44beforerisinggraduallybackto46.7%whenreachingthelastagecategoryof65andabove.Ontheotherhand,women’spercentagebeganatarelativelylowlevel(47.7%)comparedtothatofmen,butgrewcontinuouslywithageandpeakedatclass45to54,followedbyaveryslightdecreaseinthenextgroupandfinallydroppedtoitsminimumattheoldestgroup,arrivingat47.1%.Inconclusion,therewasastrongertendencyformentodoexercisewhentheywereyoungoraftertheyretired,whileamongfemales,thehighestexercise-levelwasachievedbymiddle-agedwomen.What’smore,proportionofbothgenderswereverycloseduringtheirsenioryears,whichreported46.7%and47.1%respectively.Withthepopularityofelectronicdevices,therehasbeenagrowingtrendofreadingandacquiringinformationviadigitalmedia.Somevoiceshasdeclaredtheforthcomingextinctionofprintedreadingmaterials,whiletheopponentsinsistontheunreplaceablecharmandfunctionalityofreadingwithpaper.Asforme,Ibelievethatthe“deathofpaper”theoryisnonsenseandshouldbeseriouslypreventedforourownsake.Tostartwith,Readingonpaperismoreeffectivethanonscreen.Morespecifically,whenreading,eitherascientificjournalorpoliticalnews,itissuperconvenientforreaderstoextractessentialinformationefficientlybyunderliningkeysentences,coloringsignificantideasaswellastakingnotesinthemargins,whichcannotberealizedifreadingwithasmartphone.What’smore,thefactthatbetterreadingcomprehensioncanbeachievedfromprintedmaterialisalsoprovedbymanyresearchesandanalysis.Secondly,staringattabletsorsmartphonesforprolongedperiodsmaycausehealthissues,especiallytotheeye.Forinstance,studiesfoundthatpeopletendtoblinkmuchlesswhenreadingonscreenandthiscanleadtoeyestrainandblurredvision.Moreover,therehasbeenevidencesdemonstratingastrongpositivecorrelationbetweenmyopiaandoveruseoflaptopsorotherportableelectronicdevices.Thus,topreventthehealthyeyesight,timespentwithE-booksmustbecontrolled.Anotherreasonforpaper-basedbookstobeatE-booksliesontherelentlessdistractionfrominternet.Forexample,someonewithweakself-disciplinewouldbesusceptibletothetemptingcommercialpop-upadvertisingandeasilydirectedfromareadingplatformtoaonlineshoppingwebsite.Inaddition,betterperformanceonretainingandrecallinginformationafterreadingareexhibitedonpaper-readers,asconcludedbymanywell-controlledexperimentalstudies.Insummary,althoughdigitalmediaarebecomingmoreandmoreaccessibleandimmersive,itstillhasmanyundeniabledisadvantagescomparedtoprintedbooks.Therefore,whenitcomestoreading,undernocircumstancesshouldpaper-madebooksbeeliminated.ThetwomapsdisplaythecurrentlayoutoftheindustrialregionofthetowncalledNorbitonandillustrateitsforthcomingdevelopmentblueprint.Overall,existingfactorieswillbereplacedbyhousing,andanewschoolaswellasaplayingareawillbeadded.Currently,thereisaroundaboutinthemiddleofthemanufacturingarealocatingeastofthetown,withtwopathsleadingeastwardandsouthwardrespectively.Moreover,surroundingtheroundaboutandbesidethepaths,8factoriesstand.However,Inthenewurbandesignmap,allfactorieswillbedemolishedandreconstructedtobuildingsservingotherfunctions.Firstly,acommercialcenterandanewhospitalwillbebuiltadjacenttothesouthwestandsoutheastsidesoftheroundaboutrespectively.Plus,asmallerroundaboutisplannedontheintersectionbetweenthesouthboundstreetandthemainroadonthesouth.What’smore,anewpathwillextendnorthwestandtwohouseswillresidenexttoit.Anothernewrouteleadingnorthwardwillalsobeconstructed,itwillcrosstheriverandoccupytheoriginalfarmland,whichwillberelocatedtotheeast.Additionally,peoplewillraiseagianthousealongsidethepathwayalon