讀后寫作---動作描寫小說片段欣賞

Resurrection復活

“Good-bye!”shesaid,withherpleasant,tendervoice,keepingbackthetearsthatfilledhereyes;andsheranawayintothehall,whereshecouldcryinpeace.

Maslova,whensheheardthesentence,blushedscarlet.“I’mnotguilty,notguilty!”shesuddenlycried,sothatitresoundedthroughtheroom.“Itisasin!Iamnotguilty!Ineverwished---Ineverthought!ItisthetruthIamsaying---thetruth!”andsinkingonthebenchsheburstintotearsandsobbedaloud.當Maslova聽到審判時，她的臉羞得緋紅…Howtoexpresscry?如何表達“哭”?Howtoexpress“walk”如何描寫“走”？Shestoodstillforamoment,andhe,noticingit,threwdownhiscombandmadeasteptowardsher,butatthatverymomentsheturnedsuddenlyandwentwithquicklightstepsalongthestripofcarpetinthemiddleofthepassage.Intheeveningatallman,withlonggreyhairandwhitebeard,enteredtheroomandsatdownatoncenearkatusha,smilingandgazingatherwithglisteningeyes.“Oh,whatareyoudoing?”shecried,inatoneasifhehadirreparably(不可彌補的）brokensomethingofpricelessvalue,andranquicklyaway.Withoutlookingatthejudgehegazedsteadfastlyatthebench,leavingplentyofroomfortheothers.Hefixedhiseyesonthepresident,andbeganmovingthemusclesofhischeeksasifwhisperingsomething.Katushacaughtsightofhimovertheheadsofthoseinfrontofher,andhesawhowherfacebrightenup.如何描述“看”？Howtoexpress“see”?leanforwardwithhiswholebodymovehischeekswithoutspeaking…thepresidentsaid,quietlyandfirmlylookstraightatthepresidentinsilencestareatthejudgewithafrightenedlookfixhereyesanxiouslyon…lookstraightupathimwithapleasantsmileshesaidwithasigh,andsatdownTranslatethefollowingexpressions:boweddownandraisedtheirheadagain,shakingbacktheirhairclatter(發出喀嚓聲）withtheirnailedbootsonthestonestepssaidinapiteoustoneshesaid,butonlywithherlipslistenwithdeeplyattentiveexpressionsPeter獨自坐在那兒，身上裹著一條紅色的棉手帕，看起來怪可憐的。Peterwassittingbyhimself.Helookedpoorly,anddressedinaredcottonpocket-handkerchief.Haveatry!那只貓站了起來，伸了伸懶腰，然后走過去嗅了嗅那大籮筐。Thecatgotupandstretchedherself,andcameandsniffedatthebasket.我看見她在臥室里抽泣，因為她弄壞了自己心愛的玩具娃娃。Ifoundhersobbinginthebedroombecauseshehadbrokenherfavouritedoll.閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(騎行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追趕)。Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2.應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3.續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.參考答案：paragraph1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.PaulandBeckygotoutofthecarimmediatelytogivehelp.Butwiththebarehands,theydidn’tdaretofightwiththewolf.However,theystillapproachedtothewolfbravely.Atthesametime,thewolfalsonoticedthemandturneditsheadback,

shoutingloudlyatPaulandBecky.Macthenjumpedoffthebicycleandwasreadytofightagainstthewolf.Thatreacheddeadlock.paragraph2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Theyfoundthedangeroussituation,wherethreemencircledthewolf.Mac’sfriendsalsojumpedofftheirbicyclesandjoinedthefightwiththewolf.Moreandmorecarsstopped.Somed