本文格式為Word版，下載可任意編輯——初一年級英語All,children,should,play,sport

Thesportisverygoodforus,itgiveusalotofhealthy,strongandfun.

First,playsportcanmakeyouhealthier.

Playsportcanmakeyoustrong,whenIwasalittlechild,Ididnotlikesport,andIthinksportsareallv()eryboard,soIneverplaysportb,thanIalwayssick.Butoneday,myfriendstoldmeagame,itcall"badminton',myfriendtoldmeagain,ifIwonthisgame,Icanhaveagift!ThenIplayedthebadminton,weplayedthebadmintonawholeafternoon,atlast,Iwon,Ihaveagift!Aftertheday,Ialwaysplaysport,thanInoteasilygotsick.Sportseveryday,keepsthedoctoraway.

Second,playsportscanmakeyoualotoffriends.Ialreadysaid,whenIwasalittlechild,Ialwayssick,soIalwaysathome,Ididnothavefriends.But,Iplayedsports,Isawalotofmyclassmatesandmyfriends,theyallplayedsportsbefore,Itriedtojoinwiththem,soweplayedtogether,thenalotofdaysago,weallmakefriends,Ihavemorefriendstoo.

Third,playsportscanrelievestudypressure.Now,ourstudyisveryimportant,weallneedmorehardtostudy,wecannotdoalotofrest.Soinschoolsportsarewebestchose,itcanrelievestudy.

Playsportsareverygood,sportsallveryhealthyforus,weneedplaysportscanhelpusmoreclear-headedtodothethings,soallchildrenshouldhavetoplaysports.

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Doingsportsisverygoodforus,whichmakesushealthy,strongandhappy.

First,doingsportscanmakeyouhealthierandstronger.WhenIwasalittlechild,Ididnotlikesports.BecauseIthoughttheywereallboring,Ineverdosports.Atthattime,Iwasalwayssick.Tilloneday,myfriendtoldmeagame,called"badminton'.HesaidthatIcouldhaveagiftifIwon.ThenIplayedwithhimthewholeafternoon.Atlast,IwonandIgotagift!Afterthatday,Ialwaysdidsomesports,anddaybyday,Iwasnoteasilytogetsick.Ibecamestrongerandstronger.

Second,doingsportscanhelpyougetalotoffriends.WhenIwasalittlechild,Ialwaysstayedathome.SoIhavegotfewfrineds.WhenIstartedtoplaybadminton,Isawalotofchildrendoingsportsthere.Itriedtojointhem,andweplayedtogether.Weallgotwellwitheachother,andImadelotoffriendstoo.

Third,doingsportscanrelievestudypressure.Now,studyisveryimportantforus,weallneedtoworkhard.Wehavelesstimetohavearest.Sowhenwehavetime,wehadbetterdosomesportstorelax.

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