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2015I卷H卷113320021110111101881111短文改錯平時從詞法、句法和行文邏輯三個角度設題，要求考生識別并糾正短文中的語言知識錯誤。短文改錯的錯誤種類有多詞、缺詞和錯詞三種，在文章的10個錯誤中，以錯詞設計為主導。■占起電qPassage1（2016全國I卷）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換更正作文，請你更正你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增添、刪除或更正。增添：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A），并在其下邊寫出該加的詞。刪除：把節余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。更正：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下邊寫出更正后的詞。注意：1?每處錯誤及其更正均僅限一詞；2.只同意更正10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea?ltisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.答案：thatMyuncleistheownerofarestaurantcloseto^1live.Thoughnotverybig,therestaurantispopularinourarea.Itis_alwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleev^a

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