英語書面表達系列之

Writingaletterofadvice英語書面表達系列之Writingaletterofa寫作攻略1：什么是建議信？1.建議信是寫信人針對某事向收信人提出建議和忠告。2.建議信有可能是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點；也可能是寫給某個組織和機構，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。3.建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內容，提出建議的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當先。寫作攻略1：什么是建議信？Page

2三段式：第一段：點明主題：表明寫作意圖，（有時要簡單介紹自己）。第二段：陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由

第三段：總結全文，表明希望三段式：Page

3寫作攻略2：建議信常用句式A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應材料，表明意圖)1.AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…寫作攻略2：建議信常用句式A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應材料Page

41.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?2.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...3.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…4.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...B.建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）B.建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）Page

5C.建議信結尾常用句式（歸納總結，提出希望）

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.C.建議信結尾常用句式（歸納總結，提出希望）1.IbePage

6寫作攻略3：建議信常用常用關聯詞1.表示總結/歸納的過渡詞或短語:ina/oneword,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup，inconclusion，inshort2.表示遞進/增補的過渡詞或短語moreover;what’smore;besides;inaddition;what’sworse;

worsestill;tomakemattersworse;寫作攻略3：建議信常用常用關聯詞1.表示總結/歸納的過渡詞Page

73.表示轉折/讓步的過渡詞或短語:

4.表示原因的過渡詞或短語:5.表示結果的過渡詞或短語:

6.表示條件的過渡詞或短語:

however;

although;evenso/not;because,

becauseof,thanksto,dueto（由于）,

asaresultoftherefore,consequently,

forthisreason,aslongas,onconditionthat...,once...

3.表示轉折/讓步的過渡詞或短語:however;alPage

87.表示時間的過渡詞或短語:8.表示論述順序關系的過渡詞或短語:9.表示解釋說明的過渡詞或短語:10.表示強調事實的過渡詞或短語:first,second,third,firstly,secondly,thirdly,firstofall;tobegainwith;tostartwithwhat'smoreimportant;inaddtionlastbutnotleast,lastlyinthebeginning，andthen,afterthat,next,finally,intheend,inotherwords;thatis(tosay);namely;...infact,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank,asamatteroffact,actually7.表示時間的過渡詞或短語:first,second,Page

91.在下面空格中填入正確的連接詞，使句子的銜接更加緊密1.Thebossaskedhimtoleave._________________，hewasfired.2.Heisagreatscientist._______________________，heisgoodatplayingtheviolin.3.HethoughtaboutgoingtoGreeceorSpain,but_______________decidedonCanada.4.Ididn'tgotothepartywiththem.________，Iwenttohelpanoldladywithherhousework.5.Somepeopleareoverambitious.________，theyareusuallyunhappy.What'smore/Besides/InadditionInotherwords/ThatistosayfinallyInsteadTherefore/later1.在下面空格中填入正確的連接詞，使句子的銜接更加緊密1.Page

102.請閱讀下列短文，選擇適當的過渡詞或短語填空并補充橫線上的內容second,asaresult,despite,on(the)onehand,what’smore,inaword,ontheotherhandAsanewwayofshopping,onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.

①________,onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings._____________________________________________________________________________________

_____②,itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.______________________________________________Third,wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.

__③__,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.______④,wecanbecheatedeasily.______⑤wecannotseethethingsindetail.

_____⑥,____⑦thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.Soweshoulddevelopit.On(the)onehandontheotherhandasaresultwhat’smoreInaworddespitesecondInsteadof

searchingacrowdedstore,wejustneedtowatchthe

computerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.

spendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Wedon’thaveto2.請閱讀下列短文，選擇適當的過渡詞或短語填空并補充橫線上Page

11DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What'smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

3.找出文章中的模板句子DearLiHua,3.找出文章中的模板句子Page

12建議信寫作模板(1)

Dear___,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____./I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon____.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.yoursSincerely建議信寫作模板(1)Page

13DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的問題.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,you'dbetter________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter_________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

建議信寫作模板(2)DearLiHua,建議信寫作模板(2)Page

14假設你是李華，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的來信，他在信中說，進入高中后，不能適應高中的學習生活，學習遇到障礙，因而情緒低落，甚至有了放棄學業的想法，請你給他回信，內容如下：1向Bob表示問候和安慰2針對他的問題提出建議，要點如下：1)要了解高中正確的學習方法，并學會把知識轉化成能力。2）上課認真聽講，遇到問題及時向老師和同學求助3）不要喪失信心。注意：詞數100左右可對要點進行適當擴充參考詞匯：適應adjustto(sth/doing)學習方法learningmethods課后練習假設你是李華，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的來信，他在信中說，進Page

15DearBob,I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringseniorhighschool.Youshouldrememberthatitisverycommonandotherstudentsmayfacethesameproblem,soyoudon’thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Herearesometipstohelpyou.DearBob,Page

16

Firstofall,itisnecessarytoknowabouttheproperlearningmethodsinseniorhighschoolandlearntoturnknowledgeintoability.Secondly,itisagoodideatolistentotheteachersattentivelyandturntoyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpwhenmeetingwithanydifficultiesinstudy.I’msuretheywillbewillingtohelpyou.Finally,neverloseconfidence.Afterall,confidenceisthefirststeptosuccess.Firstofall,itisnecePage

17Ihopeyouwillfindmyideashelpful.yours,LiHua(115words)IhopeyouwillfindmyidePage

181.學習語文是一種享受，你會發現語文學習是在與另一個人對話，也是在與自己對話。每當你讀一篇文章時，仿佛作者就在你身邊，他的經歷、他的情感都進入了你心中。2.不論讀名家名篇，還是自己創作，你會更清楚地認識到自己，每次學習語文，其實都是對自己的一次審視，你不僅僅懂的更多，而且文學素養也隨之提高。這便是語文，需要你與之心靈相通。3.動物也有著自己的語言。它們不光有聲音語言，還有許多無聲的語言，例如美妙的舞姿、絢麗的色彩和芬芳的氣味，研究這些千奇百怪的語言對人類有特殊的意義。4.議論文寫作中大部分同學會陷入泛泛而談，沒有議論的內容，就算有論據可用，也只是蜻蜓點水，草草收兵。不少作文且不說能運用幾種修辭組織語言，更不說能使句子富有意蘊，單是連最基本的語言通順也很難做到。5.記敘文的寫作反映的問題則更大，且不說選材的平淡，就語言的敘述而言，無法體現出一個學生高中三年這一思想蛻變的進步，反而還停留在初中的水平，令人汗顏。6.大部分的記敘文平鋪直敘，語言啰嗦乏味，缺少靈動性的語句，不會運用各種表達方式，邏輯錯亂，這樣的文章基本都被判為四類下。7.由果溯因法。事物都是互相聯系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果關系的聯系形式存在的。寫材料作文，審題時如果能由材料中列舉的現象或結果推究出造成所列現象或結果的本質原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。8.提煉中心法。這是寫新材料作文最為常見且最為穩妥的審題立意方法。寫新材料作文時，如果能準確地提煉出材料的中心，并以其作為文章的主旨，一定會使所寫文章既切題又有深度。所以，寫新材料作文時這種方法來立意最多。9.抓關鍵句法。關鍵句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的關鍵性語句可以作為選擇立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，關鍵句常常是命題者或材料中的人物的評議性語句。感謝觀看，歡迎指導！1.學習語文是一種享受，你會發現語文學習是在與另一個人對話，Page

19英語書面表達系列之

Writingaletterofadvice英語書面表達系列之Writingaletterofa寫作攻略1：什么是建議信？1.建議信是寫信人針對某事向收信人提出建議和忠告。2.建議信有可能是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點；也可能是寫給某個組織和機構，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。3.建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內容，提出建議的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當先。寫作攻略1：什么是建議信？Page

21三段式：第一段：點明主題：表明寫作意圖，（有時要簡單介紹自己）。第二段：陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由

第三段：總結全文，表明希望三段式：Page

22寫作攻略2：建議信常用句式A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應材料，表明意圖)1.AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…寫作攻略2：建議信常用句式A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應材料Page

231.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?2.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...3.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…4.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...B.建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）B.建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）Page

24C.建議信結尾常用句式（歸納總結，提出希望）

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.C.建議信結尾常用句式（歸納總結，提出希望）1.IbePage

25寫作攻略3：建議信常用常用關聯詞1.表示總結/歸納的過渡詞或短語:ina/oneword,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup，inconclusion，inshort2.表示遞進/增補的過渡詞或短語moreover;what’smore;besides;inaddition;what’sworse;

worsestill;tomakemattersworse;寫作攻略3：建議信常用常用關聯詞1.表示總結/歸納的過渡詞Page

263.表示轉折/讓步的過渡詞或短語:

4.表示原因的過渡詞或短語:5.表示結果的過渡詞或短語:

6.表示條件的過渡詞或短語:

however;

although;evenso/not;because,

becauseof,thanksto,dueto（由于）,

asaresultoftherefore,consequently,

forthisreason,aslongas,onconditionthat...,once...

3.表示轉折/讓步的過渡詞或短語:however;alPage

277.表示時間的過渡詞或短語:8.表示論述順序關系的過渡詞或短語:9.表示解釋說明的過渡詞或短語:10.表示強調事實的過渡詞或短語:first,second,third,firstly,secondly,thirdly,firstofall;tobegainwith;tostartwithwhat'smoreimportant;inaddtionlastbutnotleast,lastlyinthebeginning，andthen,afterthat,next,finally,intheend,inotherwords;thatis(tosay);namely;...infact,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank,asamatteroffact,actually7.表示時間的過渡詞或短語:first,second,Page

281.在下面空格中填入正確的連接詞，使句子的銜接更加緊密1.Thebossaskedhimtoleave._________________，hewasfired.2.Heisagreatscientist._______________________，heisgoodatplayingtheviolin.3.HethoughtaboutgoingtoGreeceorSpain,but_______________decidedonCanada.4.Ididn'tgotothepartywiththem.________，Iwenttohelpanoldladywithherhousework.5.Somepeopleareoverambitious.________，theyareusuallyunhappy.What'smore/Besides/InadditionInotherwords/ThatistosayfinallyInsteadTherefore/later1.在下面空格中填入正確的連接詞，使句子的銜接更加緊密1.Page

292.請閱讀下列短文，選擇適當的過渡詞或短語填空并補充橫線上的內容second,asaresult,despite,on(the)onehand,what’smore,inaword,ontheotherhandAsanewwayofshopping,onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.

①________,onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings._____________________________________________________________________________________

_____②,itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.______________________________________________Third,wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.

__③__,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.______④,wecanbecheatedeasily.______⑤wecannotseethethingsindetail.

_____⑥,____⑦thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.Soweshoulddevelopit.On(the)onehandontheotherhandasaresultwhat’smoreInaworddespitesecondInsteadof

searchingacrowdedstore,wejustneedtowatchthe

computerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.

spendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Wedon’thaveto2.請閱讀下列短文，選擇適當的過渡詞或短語填空并補充橫線上Page

30DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What'smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

3.找出文章中的模板句子DearLiHua,3.找出文章中的模板句子Page

31建議信寫作模板(1)

Dear___,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____./I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon____.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.First,itisimportantto____.Asyou’ll____.Then,italsohelpsifyou____.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Because____.youcanalso____.I’msurethat_____.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.yoursSincerely建議信寫作模板(1)Page

32DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的問題.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,you'dbetter________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter_________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

建議信寫作模板(2)DearLiHua,建議信寫作模板(2)Page

33假設你是李華，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的來信，他在信中說，進入高中后，不能適應高中的學習生活，學習遇到障礙，因而情緒低落，甚至有了放棄學業的想法，請你給他回信，內容如下：1向Bob表示問候和安慰2針對他的問題提出建議，要點如下：1)要了解高中正確的學習方法，并學會把知識轉化成能力。2）上課認真聽講，遇到問題及時向老師和同學求助3）不要喪失信心。注意：詞數100左右可對要點進行適當擴充參考詞匯：適應adjustto(sth/doing)學習方法learningmethods課后練習假設你是李華，最近收到了你的朋友Bob的來信，他在信中說，進Page

34DearBob,I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringseniorhighschool.Yous