托福作文寫(xiě)作范文詳解Shouldgovernmentsspendmoremoneyonimprovingroadsandhighways,orshouldgovernmentsspendmoremoneyonimprovingpublictransportation(buses,trains,subways)?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.1.題目翻譯政府是應(yīng)該花更多的錢(qián)改善道路還是改善公共交通工具（比如公共汽車(chē),火車(chē)，地鐵）？為什么？1.題目翻譯.審題關(guān)鍵詞：Money;Roadsandhighways;Publictransportation;SocialDevelopment;People'srequirements.論證分析：正:Thefirstreasonisthatpublictransportationbenefitsthegreatestnumberofpeople.正：Withthelimitedamountofmoney,thepublictransportationwillhaveagreaterimprovementthanthehighways.正：Finally,withalotofproblemsinpublictransportation,weshouldnotskipthisstep.范文：Governmentsshoulddefinitelyspendmoremoneyonimprovingallformsofpublictransportation.Theseincludebuses,subwaysandtrains.Thisisthebestwaytopreservenaturalresourcesandreducepollution.此段結(jié)構(gòu)本段第一句話提供了文章討論話題的背景。第二話簡(jiǎn)單解釋分析。最后一句話點(diǎn)明了作者的立場(chǎng)，闡述其觀點(diǎn)。此段功能本段是文章首段，對(duì)文章要討論的內(nèi)容提供了背景和社會(huì)上激烈討論的話題，然后點(diǎn)明了作者立場(chǎng)，并提出論點(diǎn)。Asaplanet,we'redealingwithafiniteamountofnaturalresources.Oncethey'regone,theycan'tbereplaced.Theycan'tfillourneedforoilandgasolineforever.Butweseemtoforgetthatandconsumethematanincrediblerate.Inwealthiercounties,somefamilieshavetwoorthreecars.Assoonasteenagersgettheirdriver'slicenses,they'regivencarssotheirparentswon'thavetodrivethemplaces.此段結(jié)構(gòu)本段是對(duì)我們目前的生存環(huán)境通行的分析。全斷沒(méi)有分層次，就是分析和闡述。此段功能本段是文章的第二段，也就是正文第一段，分析了我們現(xiàn)在的生存環(huán)境,為后文的發(fā)展公共交通做鋪墊。Publictransportationhasn'tbeensufficientlydeveloped.Becauseofthis,suburbanareassurroundingcitieshavebeenallowedtosprawlmoreandmorewidely.Thismeansthatpeoplecan'tevengotothestorewithouthavingtohopintothecar.Everythingistoofarawayfromwheretheylive.Iftherewerebetterandmorefrequentpublictransportation,peoplecouldusepublictransportationforerrandsandlocaltravel.Asaresultofallthecarsbeingdriven,we'redealingwithterriblepollutionproblems.Inbigcities,therearedaysduringthesummerwhentheelderlyandpeoplewithrespiratoryproblemsareadvisednottoleavethehousebecauseofthesmog.Tenyearsagothiswasunheardof!Nowit'sthenorm.Publictransportationwouldcutdownconsiderablyonairpollution.此段結(jié)構(gòu)本段是一個(gè)分總的結(jié)構(gòu)。本段可以分為兩個(gè)部分。第一部分：首先第一句話闡述了一個(gè)背景，就是我們現(xiàn)在的大眾交通還沒(méi)有被很好的開(kāi)發(fā)。后面對(duì)此通行了原因分析。第二部分：強(qiáng)調(diào)小轎車(chē)可能帶來(lái)的污染，并宣揚(yáng)大力發(fā)展公共交通，闡述了本段分論點(diǎn)。此段功能本段是文章的第三段，也就是正文第二段，寫(xiě)了支持作者立場(chǎng)的第一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)。Publictransportationalsoencouragesasenseofcommunity.Peoplewhotraveltoworktogetherallthetimegettoknoweachother.Carsisolateusfromneighbors.However,peoplefeeltheyneedtodrivebecausetheycan'tdependonpublictransportationtofittheirschedules.Ifmoremoneywereavailable,buses,subwaysandtrainscouldrun24hoursaday.Thentheywouldbeavailableallthetimetothepeoplewhoneedthem.Ialwaystrytotakepublictransportationwheneverpossible,andIencouragefriendsandneighborstotryittoo.Ithinkwemustsupportpublictransportationinordertocreateabetterworld.此段結(jié)構(gòu)本段是一個(gè)總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)。首先第一句話即點(diǎn)明了主旨。后面對(duì)此通行了闡述原因。并且不Car?做了對(duì)比，突出了公共交通的重要性。并在最后一句話重申論點(diǎn)，速行升華，即公共交通可以給我們更好的生活。此段功能本段是文章的第四段，也就是正文第三段，寫(xiě)了支持作者立場(chǎng)的第二個(gè)分論點(diǎn)。不上面一個(gè)段落時(shí)并列的關(guān)系。滿分因素剖析一、語(yǔ)言表達(dá)這篇文章的在語(yǔ)言方面非常下功夫，可以看出作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。在句子方面，作者熟練運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)從句，表語(yǔ)從句,狀語(yǔ)從句等多種復(fù)合句式，句子長(zhǎng)短交錯(cuò)，富亍變化。在用詞方面，作者也非常講究，作者使用了很多動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)和比較高級(jí)的詞匯。Becauseofthis,suburbanareassurroundingcitieshavebeenallowedtosprawlmoreandmorewidely.本句中用到了一個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯"sprawl",意思是"延伸，蔓延"，同樣的表達(dá)還有"spread"和"extend",但是spraw所指的蔓延多是無(wú)計(jì)劃性肆意地，用在此處很形象Asaplanet,we'redealingwithafiniteamountofnaturalresources.此句中，動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)dealwith意思是"處理"，后面接名詞戒動(dòng)詞的ing形式，同義詞還有"handle"和土鱉用法"d。”,如果下次遇到用do的時(shí)候，可以用dealwith戒者h(yuǎn)andle來(lái)替換，這樣文章語(yǔ)言會(huì)有所提升。Thismeansthatpeoplecan'tevengotothestorewithouthavingtohopintothecar.此句中出現(xiàn)了托福作文中常用的黃金句型"cannotdowithout",意思為"如果不做某事某事就不能做成"。這種結(jié)構(gòu)常常用來(lái)表達(dá)一件事是另一件事的必要條件的邏輯關(guān)系，不ifnot引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句意思相同。但大家可以看到，這種表達(dá)比ifnot引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句要簡(jiǎn)練的多，而且一篇文章如果出現(xiàn)太多的if也會(huì)讓考官頭疼。因此，大家不妨在寫(xiě)作中多使用這種用法。Inbigcities,therearedaysduringthesummerwhentheelderlyandpeoplewithrespiratoryproblemsareadvisednottoleavethehousebecauseofthesmog.此句中,when引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句修飾名詞days,而不是thesummero這種定語(yǔ)從句先行詞不被修