1、優點英語2022屆新高考英語考前復習寫作通關練（2）1.假定你是高中學生李華,你的美國朋友Jim即將升入中國的一所高中學習,想讓你給他一些學習建議.請你給他寫一封電子郵件,內容包括:(1)與老師交流,征求老師意見;(2)上課積極參與討論,專心聽講,做好筆記;(3)課后積極完成作業,鞏固知識。注意:(1)詞數80左右;(2)可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。DearJim,_Yours,LiHua2.閱讀下面材料, 根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。In my profession as an educator and health care

2、provider, I have worked with a large number of children infected with the virus that causes AIDS. The relationships that I have had with these special kids have been gifts in my life. They have taught me so many things, but I have especially learned that great courage can be found in the smallest of

3、 packages. Let me tell you about one of the kidsTyler.Tyler was born infected with HIV: his mother was also infected. From the very beginning of his life, he was dependent on medical aids to enable him to survive. When he was five, he had a tube(軟管) surgically(通過外科手術) inserted in a vein(靜脈) in his c

4、hest. This tube was connected to a pump, which he carried in a small backpack on his back. Medications were hooked(穿過) up to this pump and were continuously supplied through this tube to his bloodstream. At times, he also needed supplemented oxygen to support his breathing.Tyler wasnt willing to giv

5、e up one single moment of his childhood to this deadly disease. It was not unusual to find him playing and racing around his backyard, wearing his medicine laden(裝載滿的) backpack and dragging his tank of oxygen behind him in his little wagon. All of us who knew Tyler were surprised at his pure joy in

6、being alive and the energy it gave him. Tylers mom often teased him by telling him that he moved so fast that she needed to dress him in red. That way, when she looked out of the window to check on him playing in the yard, she could quickly find him.Paragraph 1:This terrible disease eventually wore

7、down even the likes of the little energetic Tyler. _Paragraph 2:A few days before his death, Tyler begged me over to his hospital bed._3. 假定你是李華,你校英文報將舉辦題為My Favorite Chinese Scientist的征文活動,請你寫一篇文章投稿,要點包括: 1.科學家簡介; 2.該科學家的貢獻; 3.對你的影響。 注意: 1.寫作詞數應為80左右; 2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。My Favorite Chinese Scienti

8、st_4.閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。 I lived in Texas, where sudden storms often happened every year. Last Sunday, there was no dirt in the air, only bright spring sunshine and a clear blue sky. After lunch, Papa headed out to the field to check on the cattle while Mama started di

9、nner. Everything seemed peaceful. Faye and I played happily in the yard. The heat had been building since dawn. Suddenly the temperature droppedit felt good. Then Mama shouted from the house, Iris, you and Faye get inside, quickly! I looked to the west and saw a huge black cloud of dust, like thick

10、smoke from a railway engines chimney. All the birds flew away. The stoplights nearby werent working because of a power failure. Faye, go with Mama! I shouted. Ill warn Papa. Faye ran toward the house. The storm hit so fast that I hardly saw her climb the steps. In a short time, the day turned into n

11、ight. I screamed for Papa, hoping my voice would lead him back. But I couldnt hear or see him at all. Some poor house roofs were blown off, and small trees down. I thought a terrible storm was on the way and the scene was the worst Ive seen in several years. The dirt and sand stung(刺痛) my face like

12、a thousand bees. I needed to get to shelter. Covering my face with one hand, I made my way toward the car and opened the door. Dirt flew in with me as I pulled the door closed. Papa was still out somewhere! I needed to help him find the car. I searched the dashboard(儀表板) and found the switch for the

13、 front lights. They made some rays, but would Papa see them in the thick darkness? I pushed the horn(喇叭) again and again, hoping Papa would hear it.Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Papas face appeared at the window. _Paragraph 2: Papa shut off the cars lights and I worried the dirt would bury us. _5. 假定你是李江,你

14、的筆友Peter來信說,下周他要在課堂上作與基因編輯主題相關的介紹展示,希望你能幫助他。你給他寫封信,內容包括以下幾點: 1.基因編輯在生活中的應用; 2.你對該項技術的看法。 注意: 1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。Dear Peter, Hearing that you are going to do a presentation on gene editing in your class next week, I would like to share with you some relevant information._ I am hopeful that th

15、e above information is useful to you.Yours,Li Jiang6. 閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫,使之構成一篇完整的短文。 It was a beautiful, sunny day when Jennifers family decided to go fishing on their boat. Her father Thomas loved fishing very much and he had also planted in Jennifer a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to

16、 cast a line and fish. The family boarded their boat that morning for a carefree day trip. They spent the day fishing, and then left the island in the early evening. Jennifer fell asleep beside her younger sister at a table on the boats lower deck. Their fathers sharp orders woke her up: Get out of

17、the boat. The boat is sinking! Jennifer pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. Within seconds, the boat turned over and sank, leaving just the tip of its bow in the air. Unfortunately, her family members died off. Late that afternoon, Pisano set off on the return

18、voyage to his destination. About seven miles away from Catalina Island, Pisano noticed something white flashing in the water. Pisano radioed the Coast Guard and he sped up his boat toward it. As he approached, Pisano jumped into the water and swam toward the figure and grabbed the life jacket. Then

19、Jennifer was saved. From her near-unconscious state, Jennifer was frightened. Pisano swam her back to the boat, where a medical member covered her in warm water bottles on her cold skin. The little girl was sent to hospital and she walked out of the hospital the next day after being treated for exha

20、ustion. Jennifer was adopted by her aunt and uncle. She attended therapy for a while, but mostly she coped by herself and tried to be a good person. Jennifer got married in 2013 and had a son six years ago. In her late 20s, Jennifer began to wonder about her rescuer. She sent Oprah Winfrey a message

21、 to try to get help finding him, but nothing came of it. Pisano sometimes thought of her, too. So he decided to talk about the rescue story on a TV show which features stories from fishermen.注意:1.寫作詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。 That day, Pablo Pena, Jennifers former friend, happened to watch the sh

22、ow._ Pisano patted the table in an instant of recognition._7. 假設你是李明,你打算和幾位朋友在暑假進行一次探險旅行。請根據所給信息,給住在另一座城市的外籍朋友David發一封電子郵件介紹這次旅行計劃,并邀請他一起旅行。 地點:海南島時間:7月15日21日主要活動:遠足、爬山、游泳和篝火晚會等注意事項:請帶好游泳衣和護照注意:1)詞數80左右;2)可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;參考詞匯:篝火晚會campfire partyDear David,_Yours,Li Ming8.閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成

23、一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。 I received an urgent call from my aunt. Turn on the TV. Grannys on the Channel 10 news. It turned out that Granny had made a sandwich run for her office and was stopped at a red light downtown. She had the window rolled down to enjoy the breeze when a man rushed up to the drive

24、rs side window, intending to carjack(劫車) her. Now, what the would-be carjacker couldnt have known was that this woman simply wasnt a granny. This was Nancy Johnson the same woman who owned and lived on a Texas cattle farm, drove her own tractors, and dug her own post holes to lay fence. The week bef

25、ore, she had shot a rattlesnake and chopped off its head with a shovel. She was the proud owner of the new minivan(小型貨車) she was driving. In other words, she was not your normal kind of granny. The carjacker leaned into the open window, one hand stuffed in his pocket, and said, Get out of this car.

26、I have a gun, and I will shoot you. A statement like that would have terrified anyone else. Instead, Granny saw it as a challenge. If you really had a gun in your pocket, you would have pulled it out and led with that first, she shouted at him, apparently unworried. She was right. The criminal didnt

27、 have a gun. He instead reached into the window, grabbed her, and tried to pull her out of the van. He pulled open the door, wildly catching Grannys arms. Granny leaned her shoulder inside to press the horn (喇叭) and started yelling to make people around notice what was happening. With the door now o

28、pen, she held tight the steering wheel with one arm and started kicking the man anywhere her foot could make contact. This tall woman had quite a reach.Paragraph 1 : After a well-placed kick, the man was done, and attempted to release her and run. _Paragraph 2 : Later, we asked, Granny, dont you rea

29、lize you could have got yourself killed? _答案以及解析1.答案： DearJim,Im delighted to hear that youll be a senior student. Now, Id like to share my study tips with you.First, youd better communicate with your teachers regularly. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Seco

30、nd, why not involve yourself in each class actively, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, its a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.I sinc

31、erely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.Best wishes!Yours,LiHua解析： 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據提示信息給Jim一些學習建議.請你給他寫一封電子郵件,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:與老師交流,征求老師意見;上課積極參與討論,專心聽講,做好筆記;課后積極完成作業,鞏固知識. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象.要依據提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關系來寫.本文

32、寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫.3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態;就本文而言應該用一般現在時態.4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.【亮點說明】本文是一篇電子郵件,采用三段式.語言簡練,段落清晰,布局合理,運用高級句子.Having learned that youll be a senior student, how delighted I am.現在分詞的完成式做時間狀語,同時使用感嘆句;take notes carefully so that you can review later?使用目的狀語從句;its a good idea to do your homewor

33、k on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.動詞不定式做真正的主語,句中并運用非限制性定語從句和賓語從句;另外,First, Second, why not involve yourself in的運用為文章增色添彩.英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方

34、面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.2.答案：This terrible disease eventually wore down even the likes of the little energetic Tyler. He grew quite ill and, unfortunately, so did his HIV-infected mother. When it became apparent that he wasnt going to survive, Tylers mot

35、her talked to him about death, holding him tightly in her arms, with tears streaming down her face. She comforted him by telling Tyler that she was dying too, and that she would be with him soon in heaven. The weak boy nodded his head and struggled to wipe her tears. A few days before his death, Tyl

36、er begged me over to his hospital bed. He whispered to me, “I might die soon. But Im not scared. Can you do me a favor the last time?” Sad and helpless, I agreed to do whatever I can. Tyler smiled, “When I die, please dress me in red. Mom promised she was going to come to heaven, too. Ill be playing

37、 when she gets there, and I want to make sure she can find me. ”解析：這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了一位患有艾滋病的小男孩Tyler的故事。Tyler一出生就感染了艾滋病毒，他的母親也被感染了。他從一開始就依靠醫療輔助來生存。雖然做手術很痛苦，但是Tyler從未妥協，經常能看到他背著裝滿藥的背包，拖著氧氣罐在后院玩耍、奔跑。所有認識Tyler的人都驚訝于他活著的純粹快樂以及活著給他帶來的能量。他的媽媽經常逗他說，得給他穿件紅色的衣服。這樣，當她向窗外看他在院子里玩的時候，她很快就能找到他。1.段落續寫：由第一段首句內容“This

38、terrible disease eventually wore down even the likes of the little energetic Tyler.（這種可怕的疾病最終把精力充沛的小Tyler這樣的人也拖垮了。）”可知，第一段可描寫病情惡化，疾病侵襲。Tyler的媽媽給予Tyler的安慰。由第二段首句內容“A few days before his death, Tyler begged me over to his hospital bed. （Tyler去世前幾天，求我到他病床前陪他。）”可知，第二段可描寫作者與Tyler之間的談話。呼應前文“Tylers mom oft

39、en teased him by telling him that he moved so fast that she needed to dress him in red.”提及的紅色衣服，這里描寫Tyler對作者提出了穿紅色衣服的請求。2.續寫線索：病情惡化一媽媽給予Tyler死亡安慰一Tyler與作者談話一提出穿紅衣的請求3.詞匯激活描述類病情惡化：grow quite ill；be not going to survive行為類安慰：talk to sb. about sth, comfort sb； comfort sb. for sth；cheer sb.緊抱著：hold sb.

40、tightly, give sb. a big hug情緒類難過：unfortunately；unluckily；sad and helpless；sadly 3.答案： MyFavoriteChineseScientist MyfavoriteChinesescientistisYuanLongping,thefatherofhybridrice.(科學家簡介)AsoneofChinasmostfamousscientists,Yuandevotedhimselftostudyingagriculture.HishybridstrainshavehelpedfeednotjustChina

41、butmanyothercountriesthatdependonriceaswell.【高分句型一】 Hereceivednumerousawards, buthecaredlittleforcelebrityormoney.Instead,hemadelargedonationstosupportagriculturalresearch.(該科學家的貢獻) Yuansgreatcontributionstohumanbeingsandhisnoblepersonalityhaveimpressedmedeeply, whichmotivatesmetobeexcellent.【高分句型二】

42、(對你的影響)解析： 4.答案：Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Papas face appeared at the window. My heart jumped with surprise and relief. He opened the door and climbed onto the seat next to me. He coughed and wiped his eyes with dirty hands, and then pulled me into his arms. Oh, Iris, youre safe. I hugged Papa and cried

43、. I could feel the tears streaming down my dirty cheeks. Papa looked at my face and asked, Your mother and Faye? I said, They are in the house. Papa nodded, Good. Well wait out the storm there.Paragraph 2: Papa shut off the cars lights and I worried the dirt would bury us. Luckily, the wind died dow

44、n and the dust started to settle. Papa kicked against the door, opening it far enough to let us out. We went home as Mama dashed out. Mama! I shouted and ran into her arms. Oh, my precious Iris! Mama cried. You and Papa are safe! Im safe thanks to Iris, Papa said. The cars horn led me to shelter. Im

45、 so proud of you. Mama said to me. I cried even more with tears of joy because my family had survived the horrible storm.解析：上周日，作者的爸爸去牧場看牛，媽媽開始做晚飯。費耶和作者在院子里玩。這是一場可怕的暴風雨來臨了。作者的爸爸還在外面。作者決定開車把他找回來。作者打開車前燈，同時不斷地按喇叭，希望爸爸可以看見燈光或者聽見喇叭聲。第一段開頭是：突然，爸爸的臉出現在窗戶邊。所以應該寫爸爸發現作者開的車，然后上車后的情景。第二段開頭是：爸爸關掉了車里的燈，作者擔心泥土會把我

46、們埋起來。本段應該寫作者和爸爸在后面如何應付狂虐的暴風雨，以及風暴逐漸平息以后，一家人見面的情景。5.答案：Dear Peter, Hearing that you are going to do a presentation on gene editing in your class next week, I would like to share with you some relevant information.【高分句型一】(寫作目的) Genome editing allows geneticists to treat a wide range of health problems

47、, such as restoring a blind persons vision. By correcting abnormal genes early on, it ultimately prevents diseases from ever developing. It may even help us enhance healthy bodies or select specific characteristics for unborn children.(基因編輯在生活中的應用) But with the development of genome editing come som

48、e moral issues and consequences. Therefore, we have to put appropriate controls in place to keep the technology from running wild and make sure it works to our advantage.(你對該項技術的看法) I am hopeful that the above information is useful to you.【高分句型二】(希望) Yours,Li Jiang6.答案： That day, Pablo Pena, Jennife

49、rs former friend, happened to watch the show. The incredible story he heard on the air caused a memory. Pena remembered a conversation hed had years earlier with Jennifer. He was excited and contacted her. He reached out to Jennifer to ensure she wanted to meet her rescuers. Jennifer agreed to show

50、up at the studio a few days later. Im Jennifer, she said, her voice trembling. Pisano patted the table in an instant of recognition. Among hugs and tears, the story that decades earlier had united the strangers came true. Now that shes met him, she says she hopes to stay connected forever. On May 18, 2021, the 35th anniversary of the accident, Pisano took Jennifer and her family on his fishing boat to Catalina Island, following the same course they took all those years ago. They stopped the boat, and the family threw some bunches of lilies into the water. Teary Jennifer sai