1、You are welcome to my class!How to write more beautiful sentences in our compositions? 衡東教師進修學校 朱佩芳 2008 (重慶)高考作文題學校網站新開設了一個“英語寫作”欄目(column)，以便學生發表(post)英語作文，進行交流，提高寫作能力。現請你為該欄目寫一個英文介紹，內容包括：開設目的；欄目優勢：教師在線(on line)指導等；作文要求：內容貼近學生生活；優秀作文的鼓勵辦法；邀請大家參與。 注意：1.詞數100左右 2.開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）Welcome to the colum

2、n “writing English” ! Welcome to the column “English Writing”! Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing” which provides students with the chances to post their compositions and communicate with each other . Not only can students improve their writing ability in thi

3、s way, but also they can strengthen their self-confidence. The column has lots of advantages. It is the teachers guide on line that has the advantage over other columns. If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with professional teachers. It is required that the compositions sho

4、uld be related to the students life. Whats more, if it is organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it . Hoping for the students participation.條件句和被動句強調句主語從句定語從句-ed 結構Then what advanced structures can we use when writing compositions ?1. 非謂語動詞 (non-predicate verbs) (-ing,-ed,-to do)2. 倒

5、裝句 (inversion)3. 各種從句 (clauses)名詞性從句，定語從句與狀語從句4. 強調句 (structure for emphasis)5. 被動語態 (passive voice)(一) 非謂語動詞的使用1. Susan was ill in hospital. She couldnt go to the concert. (現在分詞)2. The professor entered the hall. His students followed him. (過去分詞)3. He wants to improve his spoken English, and he oft

6、en talks with the native speakers. (不定式) 巧用多種結構增強句子的表現力Being ill in hospital, Susan couldnt go Followed by his students, the professor In order to improve his spoken English, he often talks with （二）倒裝句的使用1. We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat. Only 2. She is clever but she never wo

7、rks hard. as3. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street On the other side of the street by changing the plants we eat can we save Clever she is, she never works hard stands the clock tower (三）強調句的使用1. The teachers words encouraged her greatly. （強調主語）2. we have an easy access to the int

8、ernet for information in the E-reading room(強調地點狀語) (2006浙江)It was the teachers words that encouraged her greatly. It is in the E-reading room that we have an easy access to the internet for information. （四）從句的使用1.To our surprise, he refused to take the position（名詞性從句）2.When he climbed up higher, he

9、 felt more breathless(比較狀語從句）3. We all know that the Beijing 2008 Olympic games is a great success(非限制性定語）What surprised us was that he refused to take The higher he climbed up, the more breathless he felt.As is known to us all, the Beijing 2008 Olympic games is a great success1. We should take many

10、 measures to protect the earth where we live. Many measures should be taken to protect the earth where we live . (五) 被動語態Lets MemorizeTry to keep the following complex structures in your mind 1. 非謂語動詞 (non-predicate verbs) (-ing,-ed,-to do)2. 倒裝句 (inversion)3. 各種從句 (clauses)名詞性從句，定語從句與狀語從句4. 強調句 (st

11、ructure for emphasis)5. 被動語態 (passive voice)(05福建) 目前，學校存在少數學生考試作弊現象，英文雜志社擬對此現象向中學生征文，標題是My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations根據下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿.。內容要點如下:主要原因：考試偏多、偏難；不用功、懶惰； 取悅父母、老師個人看法：作弊不對、違反校規；要誠實、努力學習； （其他法）注意 1. 短文必須包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮；2. 短文標題與開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數 ；3. 詞數100左右.4. 參考詞匯：作弊 cheat開頭: It is known

12、 to us all that some studentscheat in examination at school .List out the points:1.考試偏多，偏難。2.不用功， 懶惰3.取悅父母，老師。4.作弊不對, 違反校規5.要誠實, 努力學習6.要改進學習方法7.我們要為考試做好準備, 取得好的成績.Lets discuss what complex structures we can use 考試偏多、偏難 不用功、懶惰 There are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. better: So

13、metimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. We are lazy and dont work hard .better: Not only are some of us lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons.Or: Some of us dont work hard because they are lazy.取悅父母、老師作弊不對、違反校規 要誠實，努力學習They want to please their parents and

14、teachers Better: _ please their parents and teachers, they sometimes cheat when _ examinations. In order totaking Cheating in examinations is wrong. It breaks the rules of schools. Better: It is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schoolsWe students should be honest and stu

15、dy hard Better: _is to be honest and try to get good results by _instead of _ in examinations. What we students should dostudying hardcheating 我們要改進學習方法我們要為考試作好充分準備，取得好的成績.We should improve our study methods Better: Our study methods should be improved.We should get well prepared for examinations so

16、 that we can get better results.Or: Only when we get well prepared for examinations can we get better results. My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too

17、 many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, not only are some of us lazy but they also dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. What we students