1、江蘇高考英語作文?？碱}型模板我省高考書面表達閱卷方式（網上閱卷），采用兩人判分取其平均值的方法，這樣更能客觀地反映出考生的實際英語寫作水平。但是閱卷速度很快，一般50 秒至 65 秒即可閱讀完一篇文章。對于非常好而且字跡又非常漂亮的作文。閱卷老師會給高分。一、答題應試技巧牢記“一式、兩頭、三寫、四關”的應試要訣。一式，是關注文章體裁，寫對格式；兩頭，即寫好文章的開頭和結尾；三寫，是大小寫、拼寫和書寫無誤；四關，也就是過好內容要點關、行文邏輯關、語法規則關和習慣表達關。具體如下：1. 注重審題，對寫的內容做到心中有數。首先，應通過審題明確文章的體裁。其次，應注重時態及語態，認真琢磨其內容的英語表

2、達方式，避免漢式英語。最后著手寫時要注意分段。2. 內容要點是否齊全；句子語法（包括：時態、語態、用詞、句法和結構格式等）是否正確；詞匯是否準確多樣；句式結構是否豐富多彩；邏輯關系詞使用是否到位；是否合理使用連接詞和過渡性詞語；標點符號、英語字母大小寫是否規范。3. 在表達清晰明了的前提下適當使用有把握的復雜結構和高級詞匯。4. 注重英語習慣，使所寫句子準確地道，注意表達時的切換，避免漢式英語。5. 注重開頭和結尾的技巧。6. 新標準對寫作的要求增加了情感因素，所以發揮自己的觀點時注重思想性，力圖提高文章思想內涵。7. 注重書寫，追求卷面美觀。書面表達屬于主觀性試題，閱卷老師的主觀印象直接關系

3、到考生的得分高低。8. 通讀全文，檢查疏漏。忌：書寫潦草、 單詞模糊不清、 左右明顯不齊、 隨意涂改、 缺乏分段、 字數太多或太少。二、考生要想“取悅”于閱卷老師應注意以下幾個要點1.外在美：字（字跡、字數、字體、字距）；版面（整潔，忌超格、污跡、涂黑）。2. 結構美：分段（最好三段）一篇好的文章應有合理的段落層次，讓人感覺條理清晰。每一段應有一個主題句和幾個支撐句。寫好首段是關鍵（開頭寫得好是獲得高分的基礎）；深化充實中間拓展段（要緊緊圍繞主題展開，不能涉及無關內容。 把好結尾關（好的結尾能起畫龍點睛作用。結尾段寫法很多：可以對前文觀點發表看法，明確表明自己的立場和態度；也可以回到文章的開頭

4、段提出的中心論點上，達到再次肯定和強調的效果。應從多個角度談）。3. 詞匯美：亮點（使用優美語句，但不是偏詞、怪詞，而是生動、集體形象的詞語，并且要運用得正確、 得當。 如：“ The job is very difficult”如果表達成：“ The jobis very challenging”更能顯示出考生的功底）4. 句式美：每段使用一至兩個較高級句型來表達可使全文增色，但不宜過多，以免出錯。常用的句式： what 從句；同位語從句；倒裝句； with 結構；插入語等。句子長短相間，精彩句式的合理使用會使文章可讀性更強；忌低級錯誤（主謂、時態不一致、單詞拼寫錯誤等）5. 銜接美：“有效

5、地使用語句的鏈接成分， 使全文結構緊湊” 是高考書面表達重要的評分依據。段落之間要使用適當的過渡句；句子間要使用邏輯性合理的銜接詞，這樣文章結構緊湊、自然流暢，給人以上下貫通、一氣呵成的感覺。三、概括寫作類2014 年江蘇英語高考首次采用新題型，讀寫任務型。該寫作分為兩部分：第一部分要求用約30 個詞概括所給短文的要點，文體主要以記敘文， 議論文或說明文為主。1第二部分以約120 個詞就短文某一主題談論自己的經歷并發表看法。首先，概括部分考查了學生的概括能力， 學生在概括的時候要注意語言的精煉， 要點要齊全。其次，闡述的理由或論據要簡潔明了，層次分明。最后，對自己的觀點要作出總結。寫作時要注意

6、盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式， 同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。【常規模版】第一段：概括文章要點，語言要精煉，概括要全面，行文連貫，表達準確。概括時常用的句式有 ：1、記敘文類常用模版： The author tells us a story about a _that/who_. The passage is a story about a _that/who_.e.g. The author tells us a story about a kind man who cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain of a b

7、utterfly when he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.2、議論文類常用模版： The passage highlights the importance of sth. The essay/passage/author outlines _. The article gives the view that_ should/shouldnt_ （主題） _（補充論據） .e.g. The passage highlights th

8、e importance of encouragement for students.The essay/passage/author outlines the harmful effects of smoking.3、說明文類常用模板： This article shows/tells us that_. This article not only describes_ but also suggests_.This article points out the common phenomenon_（主題）， which_（補充解釋）.e.g. The article tells us th

9、at habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.第二段：寫完概括后，用恰當的過渡語引出下文；并根據要求進行分析或舉例或說明自己的看法。一） 過渡語1、記敘文的過渡語(1)I have a similar experience.(2)I also went through such an experience.(3)This story remi

10、nds me of another story that happened to.(4)This story reminds me of a similar experience of.2、議論文的過渡語表示贊同(1)I agree with the statement that.(2)I do/quite agree with the author.(3)I m for the writer s idea that.(4)I fully support the statement.(5)I can t agree more with.表示不贊同(1)I don t agree with wh

11、at the writer said/thewriter.2(2)I m strongly against the writer s idea.(3)This opinion sounds right/reasonable, but is hardly practical.3、說明文的過渡語(1)After reading the passage, I had a better understanding of.二）根據要求進行分析或舉例 This is common in/among. Let s take. for example. As for me, I benefit a lot f

12、rom. The story sets me thinking. I can t agree more withthe author.三）說明自己的觀點： As far as I am concerned, . From my point of view, . In my opinion, .第三段：根據要求或啟示，提出看法或如何解決該問題。常用的結論性詞語有：1. In conclusion, .2. To sum up, .3. In a word, .附范文：1請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。Once upon a time in a land far awa

13、y，there was a wonderful old man who loved everything. Animals, spiders, insects.One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon ( 繭) of a butterfly. He took it home.A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled

14、to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly t

15、hen came out easily.But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled( 萎縮的 ) wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life cr

16、awling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid from the body o

17、f the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could

18、have been. And we could never fly.【寫作內容】1以約 30 詞概括短文內容要點；2以約 120 詞就 “個人成長需要艱難生活的磨礪”這一話題發表你的看法，并包含以下要點：(1)你讀了這個故事后的感受；(2)敘述當前父母溺愛子女的現象和由此造成的后果；(3)假如你是父母一方，你會如何磨礪自己的孩子？【寫作要求】31可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中句子。2文中不能出現考生真實姓名和學校名稱。The author tells us a story about a kind man who cut a cocoon

19、 open in order to lessen the painof a butterfly when he saw it strugglingout of the cocoon,onlyto find that it could never flybecause of his help.The story sets me thinking. Our lifeis more or less likethis. Sometimes, strugglesorobstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles

20、 or obstacles that increase ourwillpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goaljust as the butterfly did in the story.Nowadays, with only one child in most families， parents do whatever they can to satisfy thechild sneeds and even do for him whatsho

21、uld be done by himself. Consequently, the childisunable to look after himself without his parents' presence. Too much care from parents depriveschildren of chances to grow strong by conqueringobstacles. Just as a saying goes, “Flowersfrom a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”If I were a pare

22、nt, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and thatheshould be ready to face any difficulties.Besides, Iwouldexpose him to the hardships in lifeinstead of protecting him from difficulties,providingthemwithchances to fight for his brightfuture by conquering challenges.“When shou

23、ld I begin to acquire good habits?2”a young boy asked his teacher.“How old are you? ” asked the teacher. “Eight years old, sir. answered”the boy.“Then you have just lost eight years, the teacher ”replied.There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to a

24、cquire good habits.Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing ones teeth in the psmorning, for instance, keeoneteeths clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others. Bad habits such as sticking onestongue out, biting onesfingernails and picking ones

25、 nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy beingh us,wit weshould try to develop habits that are pleasant.It is said,“We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habitsapwe formed at an early age shour character. Habits are

26、 like tributaries( 支流 ) which flow into a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; aperson s character ismade up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.【寫作內容】1. 以約 30 個詞概括本文內容；2. 以約 120 個詞談談你對好習慣養成的看法，并包括以下要點：（1）你認為好習慣重要嗎，為什么？（2）你身上有哪些好習慣，它們對你的學習或生活有什么影響？（3）怎樣才能養成良好的

27、習慣？【寫作要求】1. 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。2. 作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to developgood habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.I can t agree more with the author. Cultivating a go

28、od habit can not only shape our character,4increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around us. Therefore, I think it is of greatsignificance to form a good habit.As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to speak Englishaloud, reviewing and previewing less

29、ons before going to bed every day. In the past, I didnto speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation and I also did badly in myEnglish tests. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my Englishstudy. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English.Then

30、how can we form a good habit? First of all, you should be determined to fight against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then,you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep pushing yourself. It may take

31、a long period for you to form a good habit but remember it is perseverance that makes you successful!35To make it easier for her parents to get to America, a young woman has drawn three pictures.These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their wayto Americ

32、a. With vivid drawings and clear instructions, they are impressive and easy to understand.(31words)Seeing the pictures, I m deeply moved like many others. The young woman is very sweet andconsiderate. She loves her parents so much. Also, she must have taken a lot of pains to come upwith such a wonde

33、rful idea, which will be of great help to her parents.As for me, my parents are faced with much pressure from work and life. I should try my bestto help them. For example, In addition,4Time to give thanksWhen it comes to Thanksgiving, turkey may be the first thing that comes to mind. Its the right p

34、icture, bute. its not completCelebrated on the fourth Thursday in November every year, Thanksgiving Day is a time for thanksgiving and feasts. It abouts expressing your gratitude to the important people and all the good things in your life.6Americans celebrate Thanksgiving with much warmth and keep

35、many traditional customs. Here we introduce two of the rules Americans typically follow on this day.1. Time for prayers and paying backThanksgiving Day has been associated with prayers in church and in homes for centuries. Attending church prayer services in the morning is the first step of many cel

36、ebrators on Thanksgiving Day. The churches provide worship ( 禮拜) services and organize special events for the occasion.Before Thanksgiving meals, some families gather together and read prayers to thank God for his kindness and the gifts he hasbestowed upon (給予 ) them in the form of friends and famil

37、y.Some people also do voluntary community work on this day, as a way of paying back.2. Family reunions and showing gratitudeLike China Springs Festival, preparing a big meal and bringing the family together at home is a long-standing tradition ofThanksgiving. Distances dont really matter as relative

38、s return home to be with their family, no matter how far away.【寫作內容】1. 用約 30 個單詞寫出上文概要；2. 用約 120 個單詞談談你對感恩的想法，內容包括：(1) 你認為我們中國人有沒有必要過 “感恩節 ”？為什么？(2) 以你自己的經歷或者身邊的人為例，闡述重視感恩的必要性；(3) 總結你的觀點?！緦懽饕蟆?. 可以支持文中任一觀點，但必須提供理由或論據；2. 闡述觀點或提供論據時，不能直接引用原文語句；3. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；4. 不必寫標題?！驹u分標準】內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。Th

39、is passage is mainly about the custom of a western traditional festival, Thanksgiving Day, which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by during the festival.After reading the passage, I had a better understanding of Thanksgiving Day. In my opinion, since the festival has a love

40、ly and healthy theme, why not do as the Americans do? Don t you think giving thanks to things and people around us is very necessary. We cangood chance to spread kindness and consideration.Take myself for example. Because I am busy in studying on weekdays, I have little time to lo ok after my parent

41、s, which makes me guilty. In order to reward them and make them relaxed on the weekend, I get up early in the morning and prepare breakfast for them willingly, which makes them delighted.So it is vital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good and any person that is nice.5

42、It s show time! China s TV channels have ever been full of various shows sincezetheforcraSuper Girl in 2004. Regarding voice as the only ruler, The Voice of China quickly became popular around Chinese mainland and topped a league of all shows broadcast by thecountrys local TV stations.Its popularity

43、 also drew record advertising, the final episode（集） attracting an ad spend of 500,000 yuan persecond. Plus, the episodes of If You Are the One（非誠勿擾）, both hot and controversial, became an instant hit, proving that dating shows can be entertaining and mainstream at the same time. Another TV show Wher

44、e Are We Going, Dad? produced by Hunan SatelliteTelevision, has been wowing （使 叫好） audiences across the nation, filling the Internet with heated discussions about the father'sfigure t deny it is7【寫作內容】1用約 30 個英語單詞寫出上文概要；2用約 120 個英語單詞就各類 “秀”節目談談你的看法，內容包括：（1）探究節目受到追捧的原因；（2）分析節目存在的潛在問題；（3）請你對改進節目提出

45、至少兩點建議?！緦懽饕蟆?作文應涵蓋寫作內容所有要點，可以適度發揮；2可以參考閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；3不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。【參考詞匯】1選秀節目talent show2真人秀 reality showNowadays numerous TV shows have become extremely popular among Chinese audiences. Those programs, ranging from talent or dating shows to reality shows, have received both c

46、ommercial success and public concern.Their massive popularity is mainly based on simple facts. First, they care about social concerns. Second, they promote pursuit of dreams at grassroots level. Third, without exception, they explore a perfect balance between international form and Chinese expressio

47、n.Despite apparent highlights, much room is left for improvement. Above all, commercial interest often overweighs educational purposes, causing much complaints about unbearable advertisements. In addition, some sharp remarks, though eye-catching and overwhelming, may have misleading effect on the yo

48、uth.In my opinion, such shows should shoulder more responsibility instead of merely entertaining the public. As is expected, these programs should be both humanistic and positive in their form and function. Meanwhile, the media should also safeguard the core value of our society.6A young man was sla

49、pped in the face until he bled because hedidn toffer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later he was proved to be a disabled person.In a series of cases nationwide, we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport, which seems to be a mor

50、al problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.People without morals (who dontgive up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned, but theydontdeserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values and not laws. In comparison, the attackers behave worse.The attackers regard

51、 relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats. It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice, but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violent justice?This “violent justice”can confuse many people and encou

52、rage them to do the same, especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.If cruel and rude acts are rooted in childrenshearts, society will never step into civilization. The practice violates common values,neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.寫作內容 1. 以約 30個詞概括短文的要點。2. 以約

53、 120個詞談談你對這一事件的看法 ,內容包括 :(1) 讀完這則新聞 ,你有什么感受 ?8(2) 假如你是車上的一名乘客 ,你會怎樣做 ?(3) 就如何創建和諧社會提出你的建議。寫作要求 1. 你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容,但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。The news is about a young disabled man who was slapped on a bus for not offering his seatto a woman with a baby, which leads to a deba

54、te about who is right and who is wrong.I m so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite. It was wrongof her to get her justice with violence, which really will do great harm to our society.Today in our society, many other people would take it for granted that they should be offereda