1、如何算是一篇好文章？覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型 （高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）連接詞巧用逗號(hào)，提升作文品質(zhì)On writing -詞匯選擇與銜接詞運(yùn)用 Be thoughtful Being thoughtful(體諒人）simply means thinking of others before yourself. What you say or do will have an effect on others. Therefore, it is important that you think before you

2、 say or do anything. In this way, you can avoid hurting others feelings. Moreover, a thoughtless act or remark can spoil (損害)a perfect relationship. Remember these rules. If you dont have anything nice to say, dont say anything. Likewise, if you think what you do will hurt others, dont do it. After

3、all, what goes around comes around.(種什么因，得什么果）Section 1:上下文的連貫性上下文的連貫性一篇好的書(shū)面表達(dá)，應(yīng)該行文一篇好的書(shū)面表達(dá)，應(yīng)該行文連貫流暢連貫流暢，具有，具有“邏輯邏輯美美”。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，能使文章上下銜接。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊自然、緊湊湊，使文章更為，使文章更為地道地道，更具，更具“英語(yǔ)味英語(yǔ)味”。記得使用恰。記得使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,如以下的幾類(lèi)。如以下的幾類(lèi)。1。 表增加的過(guò)渡詞： and then, in addition, furthermore, moreover, again, anothe

4、r, first, second 2. 表時(shí)間順序的過(guò)渡詞： afterwards, earlier, later, immediately, soon, next, suddenly, finally3. 表空間順序的過(guò)渡詞： near (to), far (from), in front of, behind, beside, beyond4. 表比較的過(guò)渡詞： in the same way, just like, just as5. 表對(duì)照的過(guò)渡詞： but, still, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of

5、, even though6. 表結(jié)果和原因： because, since, as a result, therefore, thus, hopefully, otherwise7. 表目的的過(guò)渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that8。 表強(qiáng)調(diào)的過(guò)渡詞： in fact, in deed, surely, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, above all, the most important of all,9. 表解釋說(shuō)明的過(guò)渡詞： for example, in th

6、is case, for instance10. 表總結(jié)的過(guò)渡詞： finally, at last, in conclusion, as I have shown, in other words, in brief, as has been stated above, We have been preparing for the past few years. We believe the 29th Olympics will be a great success.We have been preparing for the past few years. Hopefully, the 29

7、th Olympics will be a great success.2. He is running his own research company and he has served as a volunteer.He is running his own research company. In addition, he has served as a volunteer.3. The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way t

8、hrough college.Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.4. Yao Ming is a successful basketball player and he is a commercial star.Yao Ming is a successful basketball player in addition to/apart from being a

9、commercial star.5. You will succeed in your training. You work hard and never give up.So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your training.6. Last night I had a dream. I was running on the track, competing with Liu Xiang. Last night I had a dream that/where I was running on the track, competi

10、ng with Liu Xiang. 7. When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. He became a rich man.When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. As a result, he became a rich man.8. A person without friends might be lonely and selfish. One who has a large number of friends must be warm-hearted a

11、nd friendly.A person without friends might be lonely and selfish. On the contrary, one who has a large number of friends must be warmhearted and friendly.你能用我們剛才學(xué)的連接詞讓下面的文章更精彩嗎？(task for section1)Passage oneLife is filled with challenges. We are faced with a challenge. We usually have two choices. W

12、e can try to solve it. We can decide it isnt worth the trouble and leave it behind.Section2:詞匯的應(yīng)用詞匯的應(yīng)用1.恰當(dāng)使用高級(jí)詞匯 Neil can be expected to come to China around August 6th for the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games. 1)Neil will be available to come to China around August 6th for the opening cer

13、emony of the 29th Olympic Games. 2) The situation is really difficult to understand.The situation is really confusing.3) Birds Nest lies in the Beijing Olympic Park. Birds Nest is located in the Beijing Olympic Park.4) I am sure to find ways to solve the problem.I am sure to find the solutions to th

14、e problem.5) We all have the same chance. We all possess the same opportunity.6) There are more opponents(對(duì)手）than ever before. There exist more opponents(對(duì)手）than ever before. 7. One day I visited the Internet and I opened OICQ. (explored )visited8. Tears sometimes fall down my face. 9. I must grasp

15、the time which belongs to me. (cheeks)( treasure)10. I dont think your plan will be useful. ( work)facegraspbe useful11.He sent his son to school on foot every morning.12.My bicycle lost air yesterday on my way home.(He walked his son to school every morning.)(I got a flat tire yesterday on my way h

16、ome.)sent13.I didnt hear your name.14.I thanked him and stopped the phone.(I didnt quite catch your name.)(I thanked him and hung up the phone.)2. 適當(dāng)利用短語(yǔ)取代單詞1） We all think Chen Zhonghe is a great coach.We all _ Chen Zhonghe.2) The result of the Olympics will be good. The Olympics will _ to be a suc

17、cessful one.3)I am going to Beijing to attend the opening ceremony. I am going to Beijing _ attending the opening ceremony. think highly of turn outfor the purpose of4).There are five rings representing five parts of the world.The Olympic Rings _ five rings representing five parts of the world.5)Sud

18、denly I thought out a good idea.A good idea _ to me.A good idea suddenly_ me.Suddenly I _ with a good idea.consist ofoccurred struckcame up 6)Foreign athletes will find the way easily with the help of volunteers.Foreign athletes will _ finding the way with the help of volunteers.7)Everyone should do

19、 his or her best.Everyone is _ do his or her best.have no troublesupposed to 8) For most foreigners answers in Chinese cannot be understood. For most foreigners answers in Chinese dont_ .9)What you do will be very important.What you do will _make a difference.make sense at allavailable, confusing, b

20、e located, think highly of, turn out, for the purpose of, consist of, occur to sb., strike sb., come up with, have no trouble in, be supposed to, make sense, solution, possess the same opportunity, explore, cheeks, treasure, get a flat tire, hang up the phone, make sense, make a difference, 逗號(hào)的作用：逗號(hào)

21、的作用： 凡逗號(hào)出現(xiàn)的場(chǎng)合無(wú)不體現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)的使用習(xí)慣凡逗號(hào)出現(xiàn)的場(chǎng)合無(wú)不體現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)的使用習(xí)慣或固定的表達(dá)方式或固定的表達(dá)方式, , 也與也與“為盡力使用較復(fù)雜為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯, , 具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力力”, , 以及實(shí)現(xiàn)以及實(shí)現(xiàn)“上下文的連貫性上下文的連貫性, , 即有效地即有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分, , 全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊, , 語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)言的得體性的得體性”這些重要的考試要求相關(guān)。以逗號(hào)這些重要的考試要求相關(guān)。以逗號(hào)為主線為主線, , 研讀流暢、精采表達(dá)的各種方式研讀流暢、精采表達(dá)的各種方式, , 有有可能使得寫(xiě)作快

22、速步上新的臺(tái)階可能使得寫(xiě)作快速步上新的臺(tái)階, , 從而收到事從而收到事半功倍的效果。半功倍的效果。例句：例句： 1. It is, after all, due to his negligence.2. She is, as I have told you before, very fond of collecting stamps. 3. I am ,therefore, very careful when crossing the road. 4. They, Mr. and Mrs. White, will be there in Beijing tomorrow. 5. He is, to be exact, sixteen years old and is not old enough to join