1、For personal use only in study and research; not forcommercial use批改網(wǎng)高分表達一、短語，高分詞組1. creati ng a gree n campuS建綠色校園2. enjoy great prestige in the world 享譽世界2. is the essence o是 的精華3. Rece ntly a debate about gree n campus has aroused public atte nti引起公眾關(guān) 注。4. U ndoubtedly 毫無疑問5. Has a profound impac

2、t on both in dividuals and society 個人和社會有極深影 響。6. Needless to say, a gree n campus in eludes不.必說7. Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。8. make efforts tomeiMea nwhile, we should make efforts to improve the moral sta ndard of uni versity stude nts in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of stude

3、nts9. Work out解決，實現(xiàn)10. In crease the aware ness of the importa nce of.曾強對.的認識的重要性11. Rewi nd the clock 時光倒流12. In addition to this 除此之外13. Go all out全力以赴（屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語）14. what's more意思是另外，而且,是四六級經(jīng)典補充類詞組。What's more,bigger banks can diversify their earnin gs, which should further militate aga

4、inst failure .而且，大銀行可以使他們的收入多樣化，這可以防止經(jīng)營失敗。15. whereas意思是然而，是四六級經(jīng)典轉(zhuǎn)換話題類詞匯。16. nothing but意為：只有，只不過，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒！Gen ius is nothi ng but labor and dilige nce.天才只不過是勞動加勤奮。17. takeadva ntage ol利用，是四六級經(jīng)典短語18. attach importance toS為：重視，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語 19. take pride in 意為：以自豪，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒20. take adva

5、 ntage o的意思是利用，是四六級經(jīng)典短語。21. on accoun t of意為：由于，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語22. far beyond的意思是遠遠超過，大量超出，遠在天邊，是四六級經(jīng)典詞組。23. may as well意為：最好，不妨，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒！ We may as well cut across the playgro und.我們不妨從運動場上橫穿過去。24. it pays to意為：是值得的。屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分句型，用得很棒！ Thoughtime is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make o

6、ur work better.25. not to mention意為 更不用說 /別提,同意表達有 to say nothing of、not to speak ofIt goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studyi ng abroad become more sig nifica nt. A case in point, we can have it. On acco unt of an accide nt, he hardly can achieve this spe

7、ctacular project and not to men ti on the reward he can take pride in. What's more , it is uni versally ack no wledged that study ing abro ad is of con seque nee. For one thing, on no acco unt can we be in differe nt to other's pai n since they might go through some surge. That is the reas o

8、n why we should hug and coun sel them to restore their con fide nee. For the other thing, we may as well go all ou t to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of thei r hearts as well. Foryour in formati on, it is love that con tributes to the harm ony and wealthi

9、 ness of a n atio n, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challe nge and fin ally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their go als.What,more提高文章連接性studying4.1 When there is love, there comes hope.修改學(xué)習(xí)提示易混詞匯：affection, love, atta

10、chment均含 愛，熱愛”之意。4.2 The picture depicts a com mon sense of a lamp brighte ning the dark ness, telli ng a philosophy to us as to love .修改學(xué)習(xí)提示易混詞匯：lamp, light均有 燈”之意。4.3 As we can see, evide ntly, love compared to be a lamp and whe n the darker surr oun ding is, the brighter it will be.修改學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯 :e

11、nclose, encircle, envelop, fence, surroun（均有 包圍”之 意。 4.4 The draw ing is un doubtedly meanin gful and pays to thi nk that has we ever attach importa nee to love surro unding us.修改學(xué)習(xí)提示易混詞匯 :con sider, thi nk, believe, count, deem, reck on, regard 含有 認為”之意。第4段5.1 It goes without saying that whereas on

12、ly when our condition is rougher will the lo ve become more sig ni fica nt.修改優(yōu)秀詞匯whereas意思是然而，是經(jīng)典轉(zhuǎn)換話題類詞匯。學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯 : significant, important, momentous 均含 “重要的，重大的 ”之、八意。精彩句型it goes without saying tha意為：不用說，很明顯。類似的表達有： 屬于經(jīng)典高分句型， (It is) needless to say (that，) It is obvious that， Obviously, .。 用得很棒！5

13、.2 A case in point, we can have it. 修 改閃光短語a case in point意為：一個恰當(dāng)?shù)睦樱瑢儆诮?jīng)典高分短語，用得很 棒！ 拓展辨析 動名搭配 have.it 在語料庫中出現(xiàn)過 34 次5.3 On account of an accident, he died of tetanus and his son was completely paralyze d. 修改 學(xué)習(xí)提示 accident 表示“意外事故 ”。注意與 incident 的區(qū)別。詳情點擊閃光短語on account of意為：由于，屬于經(jīng)典高分短語。5.4 Without her

14、 help and affection, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to men ti on the reward he can take pride in .修改閃光短語高分詞組，not to mention意為 更不用說/別提”,同意表達有to say nothing of、not to speak of。學(xué)習(xí)提示易混詞匯：plan, design, plot, scheme, project, blueprint, programm均含 “計劃”之意。閃光短語 take pride in 意為： 以自豪，

15、 屬于經(jīng)典高分短語， 用得很 棒 ！5.5 What's more, the Brooklyn indeed light up the world, so do their love. 修改閃光短語what's more有助于提高文章銜接閃光短語what's more意思是另外，而且，是經(jīng)典補充類詞組。學(xué)習(xí)提示易 混詞匯： earth, world, globe 均可表示“地球”之意。 第 5段6.1 As far as I am concerned, it is universally acknowledged that love is of consequen ce

16、, while loving each other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege. 修 改 學(xué)習(xí)提示易混詞匯:ack no wledge, admit, con fess, recog ni ze, con ced均 含 承認” 之意。精彩句型It is universally acknowledged tha億思是大家都認為，是經(jīng)典句型。閃光短語 高分詞組， be of 接名詞用來說明句子的主語所具有的性質(zhì)或特 征。 6.2 For one thing, on no account can we be indiffere

17、nt to other's pain since they might go through some surge. 修 改 精彩句型On no account can意思是絕對不能.,是經(jīng)典句型。學(xué) 習(xí)提示易混詞匯：energy, force, power, might, strength, vigour均 有 力”之 意。閃光短語on no account意為：決不，屬于經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒！精彩句型on no account can we意為：我們絕對不能.，屬于經(jīng)典高分句型，用 得很棒！6.3 That is the reason why we should hug and

18、counsel them to restore their confidence . 修改 精彩句型that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是經(jīng)典句型。學(xué)習(xí)提示 reason 表示 “原因，理由 ”。注意與 cause 的區(qū)別。詳情點擊精彩句型 the reason why 意 為 ：. 的 原 因 是 . ， 屬 于 經(jīng) 典 高 分 句型。 6.4 For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate t

19、he darkness of their hearts as well.修 改閃光 短語may as well意為：最好，不妨，屬于經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒！閃光短語take adva ntage of的意思是利用，是經(jīng)典短語。閃光短語 go all out 意為：全力以趕；鼓足干勁，屬于經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很 棒！拓展辨析動名搭配lend.hand在語料庫中出現(xiàn)過559次6.5 To conclude, only when we fall into the darkest place, will we truly understand ho w precious love is. 修改 拓展辨析

20、注意conclude和deduce區(qū)別。6.6 For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve t heir goals. 修

21、改學(xué)習(xí)提示易混詞匯:battle, war, campaign, struggle, warfare, fight, combat, engagemen均有 戰(zhàn)斗， 戰(zhàn)爭”之意。is the essence o是。的精華Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attentic引 起 公眾關(guān) 注。Un doubtedly毫無疑問Has a profound impact on both in dividuals and society 對 個人和 社會有極深影 響。 Needless to say,a gree n camp

22、us in eludes不必說 Degradable plastic可 降解塑 料。Meanwhile,we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university studen ts in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake osftudents ' menhteaal lth .過渡句：In the first place,it is essential that.,furthermore,it is high time for us to.,

23、last but not least.Work out 解決，實現(xiàn)Increase the awareness of the importance of.增 強 對 .的認識 的重要性 Rewind the clock 時光倒流 In addition to this 除此之外Go all out全力以赴屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語What' more高分詞匯whereas意思是然而，是四六級經(jīng)典轉(zhuǎn)換話題類詞匯。nothing but 意為：只有,只不過， 屬 于四 六級經(jīng) 典高分短 語， 用得很棒！ Genius is no thi ng but labor and dilige nee.

24、天才只不過是勞動加勤奮。what's more 意 思 是 另 外 ， 而 且 , ， 是 四 六 級 經(jīng) 典 補 充 類 詞 組。 What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further mil itate against failure .而且，大銀行可以使他們的收入多樣化，這可以防止經(jīng)營失 敗。take adva ntage of的意思是利用，是四六級經(jīng)典短語 attach importa nee to意 為：重視，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語高分短語take pride in意為

25、：以，自豪，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒高分短語take adva ntage of的意思是利用，是四六級經(jīng)典短語。on accoun t of意為：由于，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語it goes without saying that 意為：不用說 .，很明顯 .。類似的表達有：屬于四六 級經(jīng)典高分句型， (It is) needless to say (that，) It is obvious that， Obviously, .。用得很 棒！高分詞組far beyond的意思是遠遠超過，大量超出，遠在天邊，是四六級經(jīng)典 詞組。It goes without say ing thatit

26、pays to keep early hours 不用說早睡早起是值得的。高分短語may as well意為：最好，不妨，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒!We may as well cut across the playgro unc我們不妨從運動場上橫穿過去。高分句型it pays to意為：是值得的。屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分句型，用得很棒！ It pays tohelp others.幫助別人是值得的。高分表達高分詞組，not to mention意為 更不用說/別提,，”，同意表達有to saynothing of、not to speak o。高分表達高分詞組，be of接名詞用來說明句

27、子的主語所具有的性質(zhì)或特征。Though time is of the esse nee, it pays to spe nd some to make our work better.分短 語contribute to意思是對某事有幫助，有貢獻；有助于做某事 ，是四六級經(jīng)典 短語。高分短語stay up late意思是熬夜，是四六級經(jīng)典短語。Many retired people can still eon tribute to the society with their rich experie nee . 許 多退休的老人還能用他們豐富的經(jīng)驗為社會作貢獻。好評報錯高分短語on no a

28、ccount意為：決不，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒! Young people should on no acco unt n eglect their daily physical exercise 青年 人決不應(yīng)疏忽每天的體育鍛煉。好評報錯高分句型On no account can意思是絕對不能.，是四六級經(jīng)典句 型。 On no acco unt can we ignore the value of kno wledge我 們絕對不能忽略知識 的價值。好評報錯There is no denying tha意思是不可否認的，是四六級經(jīng)典句型。There is no denying t

29、hatthe qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse不 可 否認的，我們的生活品質(zhì)已經(jīng)每況愈下。高分句型the reason why意為：的原因是，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分句 型。 The reas on whywe have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for u 我 們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。好評報錯高分表達高分詞組，look forward to意為 期望/等待”。 好評報錯高分表達 高分詞組， look forward to 意為“期盼/期待”

30、 高分句型 It is universally acknowledged that 意思是大家都認為，是四六級經(jīng)典 句型。whereas意思是然而，是四六級經(jīng)典轉(zhuǎn)換話題類詞匯take into account 意為把 , 考慮進去，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分短語，用得很棒！A case in poi nt is高分短語意為：一個恰當(dāng)?shù)睦樱瑢儆谒牧壗?jīng)典高分短語， 用得很棒！ 高分短語 cope with 意為：對付, ，妥善處理，屬于四六級經(jīng)典高分 短語，用得很棒！ 高分短語 once for al 意為：一勞永逸地，屬于四六級經(jīng)典 高分短語，用得很棒！比女口 take into account （

31、我不覺得它很牛的樣子）、heart and sou，play an role in等等。高分句型that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是四六級經(jīng)典句型。referring to not hesitate toGive priority to 給 =優(yōu)先權(quán)Recently,a heated debate arose online in China about the "Chinese style of crossing th e road", a term referring to the tendency of large crowds of peop

32、le to cross roads in di sobedience of red lights.Puzzle out苦思，puzzle overBe short of缺乏。attach great importance to 高度重視七、 An advantage of is that+ 句子 （.的優(yōu)點是 .）例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create （produce） any pollution.三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too muc再怎么強調(diào).的重要性也 不為過。 ）例句： We cannot emphasize the importanee of protecting our eyes too much我們 再怎么強調(diào)保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。It makes me understand that perseverance makes the impossible