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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Oneday,apoorboywhowassellinggoodsfromdoortodoortopayhiswaythroughschool,foundhehadonlyonethindimeleft.Hewassohungrythathedecidedtobegforamealatthenexthouse.However,helosthiscouragewhenalovelyyoungwomanopenedthedoor.Insteadofameal,heaskedforadrinkofwater.Shethoughthelookedhungrysoshebroughthimalargeglassofmilk.Awarmsmilelithisface.Hedrankitslowly,andthenasked,“HowmuchdoIoweyou?”“Youdon’towemeanything,”shereplied.“Motherhastaughtusnevertoacceptpayforakindness.”Sotheboyhadnochoicebuttothankherfromthebottomofhisheart.AsHowardKellyleftthathouse,aswellasfeelingstrongerphysically,hesensedareturnofhisfaithinGodwhichhehadnearlyabandoned.Yearslatertheyoungwomanbecamecriticallyill.Thelocaldoctorswereconfused,sotheysenthertothebigcity,wheretheyknewthatthespecialistswouldbeabletodiagnose(診斷)thisraresickness.Dr.HowardKelly,nowfamousinthemedicalmunity,wascalledinasaconsultant(會診醫師).注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes._____________________________________________________________________________________________Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspace(空白處)andthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.____________________________________________________________________________________________牛奶與善意故事的續寫續寫分析(兩段)?第一段:“Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.”以極具畫面感的描寫開篇,設置懸念,引發讀者好奇。“Memoriesofthatfatefuldaywhenhe’dreceivedaglassofmilkfromakindheartedwomancamefloodingback.”通過回憶自然銜接前文,將過去與現在勾連,使故事脈絡清晰。“Heimmediatelyrecognizedhernameonthepatientlist.Withouthesitation,hetookchargeofhercase.”“immediately”“Withouthesitation”等詞,突出霍華德?凱利報恩的急切心情和堅定決心。“Heexaminedhercarefully,pouredovermedicalrecords,andconsultedwithotherexpertsdayandnight.Determinedtosaveher,hesparednoeffort,usingallhisskillsandknowledgetofightagainsttherareillness.”一系列具體動作描寫,如“examined”“pouredover”“consulted”等,生動展現他為救治女子付出的努力,既體現了專業素養,也深化了感恩主題。?第二段:“Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspaceandthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.”承上啟下,推動情節發展。“Withamixofanxietyandcuriosity,shetremblinglyopenedthebill.”對女子打開賬單時神態和心理的描寫細膩入微,“anxiety”“curiosity”“tremblingly”渲染出緊張氛圍。“Insteadofnumbers,shefoundthesewords,‘Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk.’”揭曉謎底,與前文女子施恩相呼應,形成情感高潮。“Tearswelledupinhereyesassherememberedthepoorboy.Shelaythere,overwhelmedwithgratitude,realizingthatasimpleactofkindnessyearsagohadebacktoblessherinthemostunexpectedway.”女子的反應和感悟,點明善有善報的主旨,引發讀者共鳴。“Thewarmthofthatglassofmilknowseemedtospreadthrougheverypartofherbody,fillingherwithhopeandstrength.”以溫暖的意象結尾,升華情感,給人以治愈之感。?故事線?貧窮男孩霍華德?凱利為攢學費挨家挨戶推銷商品,饑餓難耐時向一位年輕女子討水喝,女子卻給了他一杯牛奶,且不求回報,男孩心懷感激離開,并重燃對上帝的信仰。?多年后,當年的年輕女子身患重病,當地醫生無法確診,將她送往大城市,身為知名醫生的霍華德?凱利被邀請會診。?當霍華德?凱利聽到女子居住的城鎮名字,認出女子,立刻接手她的病例,日夜努力,運用專業知識和技能全力救治女子。?霍華德?凱利在賬單上寫下“一杯牛奶已付清全部費用”,女子看到賬單后,回憶起往事,深受感動,意識到自己當年的善舉得到了回報。?短語?efloodingback涌現?takechargeof負責?pourover仔細研讀?sparenoeffort不遺余力?fightagainst對抗?wellup涌出?beoverwhelmedwith充滿?inthemostunexpectedway以最意想不到的方式?afatefulday命運攸關的一天?payinfull付清?主旨升華句?Thistaleoftheglassofmilkandthereturnedkindnessremindsusthattheseedsofpassionwesowinthelivesofotherscanbloomintobeautifulblessings,ofteninthemostunforeseencircumstances.?這個關于一杯牛奶和善意回報的故事提醒我們,我們在他人生命中播下的同情種子,會在最意想不到的情況下綻放成美好的祝福。?Justastheyoungwoman’sselflessactnourishedtheboy’sbodyandspirit,sotoodoeskindnesshavethepowertocreateacycleofgiving,whereasimplegesturecanripplethroughtimeandtransformlives.?正如年輕女子無私的行為滋養了男孩的身心,善意也具有創造給予循環的力量,一個簡單的舉動可以穿越時空,改變命運。?ThestoryofHowardKellyandthewomanillustratesthattruekindnessisnotaboutimmediaterewards;itisaninvestmentinhumanitythatpaysdividendsinwayswecouldneverimagine.?霍華德?凱利和女子的故事表明,真正的善良不在于即時回報,而是對人性的一種投資,它會以我們難以想象的方式帶來回報。?Throughtheintertwineddestiniesoftheboyandthewoman,welearnthattheuniversehasawayofbalancingthescales,ensuringthatactsofkindnessareneverforgottenandalwaysreturnedinkind.?通過男孩和女子交織的命運,我們明白,上天自有衡量的尺度,確保善意之舉永不被遺忘,且總會得到相應的回報。?Theglassofmilk,asymbolofsimplegenerosity,beesapowerfulreminderthateventhesmallestactsofkindnesscanleaveanindeliblemarkontheworldandshapethecourseoflivesinprofoundways.?那杯牛奶,作為簡單慷慨的象征,有力地提醒我們,即使是最微小的善舉,也能在世界上留下不可磨滅的印記,并深刻地塑造人生軌跡。?寫作示范?示范一?Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Awaveofnostalgiawashedoverhimasherecalledthekindnesshe’dreceivedthere.Hishandstrembledslightlyashescannedthepatientdetails.Instantly,heknewhehadtodoeverythinginhispowertosaveher.Hespenthoursresearchingtheillness,collaboratingwithtopexperts,andpersonallymonitoringhertreatment.Everyday,hepouredhisheartintothecase,drivenbyadeepseateddesiretorepayherkindness.?Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspaceandthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.Weakly,shereachedforthebill,bracingherselfforalargeamount.Butasshereadthewords“Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk,”hervisionblurredwithtears.Memoriesofthatpoorboycamerushingback.Shelaythere,speechless,feelinganoverwhelmingsenseofwarmthandwonder.Inthatmoment,sheunderstoodthatkindnesswasagiftthatkeptongiving.?示范二?Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Thepastrushedbackwithsuchforcethathefeltasifhewerethathungryboyagain.Withoutasecondthought,heclaimedhercase.Hemeticulouslystudiedhercondition,stayinguplateintothenighttodevisethebesttreatmentplan.Hewasdeterminednotjusttosaveherlife,buttoshowherthatherkindnesshadmadeadifference.Hiseveryactionwasasilentodetothatglassofmilksolongago.?Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspaceandthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.Withapoundingheart,sheopenedthebill.Thewordsonitstoppedherbreath.“Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk.”Shestaredatthem,stunned,astheweightofthemomenthither.Tearsstreameddownherfaceassherealizedthattheuniversehadabeautifulwayofconnectingpeoplethroughkindness,turningasimpleactintoalifelongbond.參考答案Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Herecalledthekindheartedandenthusiasticladywhoofferedhimaglassofmilkyearsago.Hurriedly,hewalkedintotheward

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