閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheJulysunwasburningoverOakwoodAvenue.Twelve-year-oldMiafeltsweatdroppingdownherbackasshearrangedthefreshlymadelemonade(檸檬水)onherfoldingtable.She’dmadethechalkdrawingsthatmorning:pinkheartsandblueskateboards.Herbigposterswungdesperatelyinthehotwind:Lemonade50cents—SaveforSkateboard!“Businessslow,eh?”Mr.Rossi’svoicecarriedflour-dustedkindnessfromhisgrocerystoredoorway.Andthesmelloffreshlybakedbreadfollowedhim.Mianodded,smoothingsevensweatycoinsonthetable.Astheyweretalking,asilvercarstoppedby.Abusinessmaninanicesuitsteppedout,phonegluedtohisear.“IsaidIwouldbetheresoon!”Heseemedtobeinahurry.Grabbingabottleoflemonade,heputa$20billontothetable.“Keepthechange!”Miawassurprised.“No,sir.But...”Hurriedly,shecountedout$19.50.“Here’syourchange,sir.”“Keepit.Consideritatip.”Thebusinessmansaidwithagentlesmile.“No,Ican’t.Thelemonade’sfiftycents.”Miainsisted.Thecardoorwasclosed,withonlytire(輪胎)marksleftonthedirtroad.Miastaredatthebill.Twentydollars.Enoughforskateboardwheels!Herfingersbrushedthroughthecashbox.“Wow,goodluck.”Mr.Rossisaidandwentbacktohisgrocerystore.“Butmymomusedtosaymoneyweighsheavyindishonestpockets.”Miawhispered.Asshewasabouttoputawaythemoney,shespottedsomethingunderthemapletree—ablackleatherwalletstickingoutthroughdeadleaves.Mia’sfingersshookassheopenedit.Creditcards.Adriver’slicense.Andahundred-dollarbill.Herskateboardfundscreamedinherears,butMom’svoiceshoutedlouder.Miacouldfeelthewalletwasheavyandrealizedtheownerwouldbeveryworried.Withoutanyhesitation,MiawenttoMr.Rossiforhelp.Lookingthroughthecontentsofthewallet,Mr.Rossisaidtheownerwouldsurelyreturnandlookforit.Somaybethebestchoicewastowait.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Miawaitedatherlemonadestanduntildarknessfell.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThebusinessmanpromisedtobuyMiaaskateboard.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一．續(xù)寫需要回答的問(wèn)題WhathappenedafterMiawaiteduntildarknessfell??Miawaitedatherlemonadestanduntildarknessfell.Disappointedbutdetermined,shedecidedtogohomewiththewallet.ShetoldMr.Rossithatshewouldcomebackearlythenextdaytocontinuewaiting.Whenshegothome,sheshowedthewallettohermom,whopraisedherforherhonesty.?HowdidMiafeelwhenwaitingfortheowner??Miafeltanxiousandimpatientwhilewaiting.Shekeptlookingaround,hopingtoseetheownercoming.Eachpassingminutemadehermoreworriedthattheownermightnotshowup,buthersenseofhonestykeptherwaiting.?WhydidthebusinessmanpromisetobuyMiaaskateboard??ThebusinessmanpromisedtobuyMiaaskateboardbecausehewasdeeplytouchedbyherhonesty.First,shehadrefusedtokeephis$20tipforthe50-centlemonade.Then,helearnedthatshehadbeenwaitingalldaytoreturnhislostwallet.Herintegrityimpressedhimsomuchthathewantedtorewardher.?Whatwastheowner'sreactionwhenhegothiswalletback??Whentheowner,thebusinessman,gothiswalletback,hewasextremelygrateful.Hiseyeswidenedinsurpriseandrelief.Heexpressedhisgratitudeprofusely,sayingthathehadthoughthehadlostitforeverandalltheimportantthingsinit.?WhatdidMialearnfromthisexperience??Mialearnedthathonestyalwayspaysoff.Atfirst,shewastemptedbythemoneyforherskateboard,buthermom'swordsandherownconscienceguidedhertodotherightthing.Intheend,herhonestywasrewarded,andsherealizedthatdoingtherightthingmakesonefeelgoodandcanbringunexpectedblessings.?二、故事主旨?Thestoryisabouttheimportanceofhonesty.Despitethetemptationofmoneyforherskateboard,Miachoosestobehonest,whicheventuallybringsherapleasantreward.Itshowsthatintegrityisavaluablevirtuethatcanleadtopositiveoutcomes.?三、故事山?Beginning：Miasetsupalemonadestandtosavemoneyforaskateboard.Abusinessmangiveshera$20billfora50-centlemonadeandtellshertokeepthechange,butsheinsistsongivingbackthecorrectchange.?RisingAction：Miafindsawalletwithahundred-dollarbillandotherimportantitemsunderatree.SheistemptedbythemoneyforherskateboardbutdecidestobehonestandwaitsfortheownerwithMr.Rossi'shelp.?Climax：Thebusinessmanreturnstolookforhiswallet.HeistouchedbyMia'shonestywhenherealizesshenotonlyreturnedhiswalletbutalsorefusedhistipearlier.?FallingAction：ThebusinessmanpromisestobuyMiaaskateboardasarewardforherhonesty.?End：Mialearnsthathonestyisthebestpolicyandgetsherskateboardinanunexpectedway.?四、故事發(fā)展線索?Mia'slemonadestandsetup→Thebusinessman'spurchaseandtip→Miafindingthewallet→Miawaitingfortheowner→Thebusinessman'sreturn→Thebusinessman'spromisetobuyaskateboard.?五、情感線索?Mia'sinitialexcitementforherlemonadestandandsavingforaskateboard→Surpriseatthebusinessman'slargetip→Temptationwhenfindingthewallet→Determinationtobehonestandwait→Disappointmentasitgetsdark→Reliefandjoywhenthebusinessmanreturnsandrewardsher.?六、續(xù)寫布局與框架?Paragraph1：DescribeMia'ssituationwhendarknessfalls.Sheisdisappointedthattheownerhasn'tcomeyet.ShedecidestogohomewiththewalletandtellsMr.Rossiherplan.Athome,hermompraisesher.?Paragraph2：Whenthebusinessmanreturnsthenextday,heisgratefultogethiswalletback.HelearnsaboutMia'shonestyinmoredetailandissotouchedthathepromisestobuyheraskateboard.Miaisoverjoyedandrealizesthevalueofhonesty.?七、續(xù)寫注意事項(xiàng)?承接原文：Referbacktodetailsintheoriginaltext,suchasthelemonadestand,themoney,andMia'sdesireforaskateboard.Usethesamecharactersandtheirpersonalitiesestablishedintheoriginal.Forexample,Mia'sinsistenceonhonestyshouldbeconsistentthroughout.?整體設(shè)計(jì)：Makesurethetwoparagraphsflowsmoothlytogether.Thefirstparagraphsetsthestageforthesecond.Theactionsandemotionsineachparagraphshouldbuildonthepreviousones.?巧妙設(shè)計(jì)：Createsomeemotionalmoments,likethebusinessman'sreactionwhenhegetshiswalletback.Adddetailstomakethestorymorevivid,suchasthedescriptionofthebusinessman'sexpression.?八、高分語(yǔ)句?呼應(yīng)原文：“JustlikeIrefusedtokeepyourbigtipyesterday,Icouldn'tkeepthemoneyinthewalleteither,”Miasaid,lookingupatthebusinessmanwithhonesteyes.?高級(jí)句型：ItwasnotuntilthebusinessmanheardthewholestorythathetrulyunderstoodthedepthofMia'sintegrity.?九、主題表達(dá)&意義延伸?直接引語(yǔ)點(diǎn)明主旨：“Honestyisalwaysthebestchoice,Mia,”hermomhadsaid,andnowMiatrulyfeltthetruthofthosewords.?促成轉(zhuǎn)變，引發(fā)感悟：Mia'sdecisiontobehonestchangedthecourseofevents.Fromasimplelemonade-sellingday,shelearnedavaluablelifelesson.Sherealizedthatdoingtherightthing,evenwhenit'shard,canleadtowonderfulsurprises.?借象征物點(diǎn)明主旨：Theskateboard,whichwasinitiallyjustamaterialobjectshedesired,nowsymbolizedtherewardofherhonesty.Itwasareminderthatintegritycanbringnotonlymoralsatisfactionbutalsotangiblebenefits.?十、學(xué)生寫作示范?Paragraph1?Miawaitedatherlemonadestanduntildarknessfell.Thestreetlightsflickeredon,castingadimglowovertheemptyroad.Withaheavyheart,sherealizedtheownerwasn'tcomingthatday.Shecarefullypickedupthewalletandthemoneyfromthelemonadestand.“Mr.Rossi,I'mgoinghome.I'llcomebackearlytomorrow,”shesaid,hervoiceabitshaky.Athome,sheshowedthewallettohermom.“Youdidtherightthing,Mia,”hermomsaid,huggingher.Mianodded,butshecouldn'thelpfeelingabitsadthatshestilldidn'thaveenoughmoneyforherskateboard.?Paragraph2?Thenextmorning,Miarushedbacktoherlemonadestand.Notlongafter,thesilvercarpulledupagain.Thebusinessmansteppedout,lookingworried.WhenMiahandedhimthewallet,hisfacelitup.“Thankyousomuch!IthoughtIhadlostitforever,”heexclaimed.AfterhearinghowMiahadwaitedforhim,hewasdeeplymoved.“Youaresuchanhonestgirl.I'mgoingtobuyyouthatskateboardyou'vebeensavingfor.”Mia'seyeswidenedinsurpriseandjoy.“Really?Thankyou,sir!”Sherealizedthatbeinghonesthadfinallypaidoff.?讀后續(xù)寫參