讀后續(xù)寫微技能之情緒描寫Continuation

writingWaystodescribeemotions

主講人：羅潔Improve

reading,

viewingandwritingskills;1.語言能力Enjoythecolorfulemotionspositively;3.思維品質(zhì)Befamiliarwithcommonemotions.4.文化意識Applythewaystodescribeemotionsincontinuationwriting;2.學習能力LearningaimsStep1LeadinIwanttotravelafar,Iwanttoseetheseagull,Inspiteofmuchwindandrain,Ifeelgoodwithyou.Ilovelookingatyourlips.Ilovelookingatyourbrow.Thewhitecloudsinthebluesky,Seemlikeyourbrightsmile.Whensmiling,youarereallynice,Liketheflowerinspringtime,Takingallmyworryandallmysorrow,Nowsofaraway,Whensmiling,youarereallynice,Justlikesummersunshine,Allofthetimeintheentireworldissobeautiful.AvideoclipfromTheGreatGatsbyStep2Observation&

AnalysisWhatwasGatsby'semotion?Hefelt____./Hewasfullof____.clenchhisteethglareatclenchandwavehisfistgrabsbbythecollar咬牙切齒握緊拳頭eyescheeksturnredcheeksbodyEmotionalwordsActionwordsvoiceshout/screamangryangerteethforeheadsweatEmotionalwordsActionwordsNounsAdjectivesMind-mapwhat?how?Task1:Useadj./n.todescribetheemotionsinthepictures.Step3Exploring1.Excitedand________,

thegirlopenedhermouthwidely.surprised/amazed/astonished/shockedTask1:Useadj./n.todescribetheemotionsinthepictures.Step3ExploringTask1:Useadj./n.todescribetheemotionsinthepictures.2.Thekidswereso___________thattheyjumpedinthesky.

excited/happy/

delighted/

cheerful/overjoyed

Step3ExploringTask1:Useadj./n.todescribetheemotionsinthepictures.3.Thelittleboycried,feeling____and________.

sorrowful/depressed.

sad4.Afloodof__________welledupinthelittleboy.sadness/sorrow/depressionStep3Exploring在…涌出6.Thekids_______withjoy,_________theirarms.jumpedwaving5.Withtearsonhisface,thelittleboy_________.

7.Thegirlwassurprised,withher

jaw____________.droppingcriedTask2:Useactionverbstodescribetheemotions.Task3:Readthesesentencesandunderlinethesentencepatterns.1.Excitedandsurprised,

thegirlopenedhermouthwidely.2.Thekidsweresoexcitedthattheyjumpedinthesky.3.Thelittleboycried,feelingsadanddepressed.4.Afloodofsadnessanddepressionwelledupinthelittleboy.5.Withtearsonhisface,thelittleboy

cried.6.Thekidsjumpedwithjoy,wavingtheirarms.7.Thegirlwassurprised,withher

jawdropping.adjandadj,sbdidsth...

Task3:Readthesesentencesandunderlinethesentencepatterns.1.Excitedandsurprised,

thegirlopenedhermouthwidely.2.Thekidsweresoexcitedthattheyjumpedinthesky.3.Thelittleboycried,feelingsadanddepressed.4.Afloodofsadnessanddepressionwelledupinthelittleboy.adjandadj,sbdidsth...

sbwas/wereso+adj+that...sb.didsth,feeling+adj.情緒名詞+動詞+sbTask3:Readthesesentencesandunderlinethesentencepatterns.5.Withtearsonhisface,thelittleboy

cried.6.Thekidsjumpedwithjoy,wavingtheirarms.7.Thegirlwassurprised,withher

jaw

dropping.with+O+OC,sb...

sb...,with+O+OC.

sb.didsth1,doing+sth2.1.Excitedandsurprised,

thegirlopenedhermouthwidely.2.Thekidsweresoexcitedthattheyjumpedinthesky.3.Thelittleboycried,feelingsadanddepressed.4.Afloodofsadnessanddepressionwelledupinthelittleboy.5.Withtearsonhisface,thelittleboy

cried.6.Thekidsjumpedwithjoy,wavingtheirarms.7.Thegirlwassurprised,withher

jaw

dropping.adjandadj,sbdidsth

sbwas/wereso+adj+that...sb.didsth,feeling+adj.情緒名詞+動詞+sbsb...,with+O+OC.sb.didsth1,doingsth2.seized;struck;tookholdof;filled

Step4Practice感到既高興又興奮，他在雨中跳舞。1.

hedancedintherain.Hewassodelightedandexcitedthat2.

,hedancedintherain.

Delightedandexcited3.Hedancedintherain,

.feelingdelightedandexcitedsbwasso+adj.+that...adj.andadj.,sbdidsthsb.didsth,feeling+adj.__________________________________

when

Gatsbyheardhiswords.4.當Gatsby聽到他所說的話，一種強烈的憤怒控制(tookholdof)了他。Heglaredattheman,___________________________.5.他怒視著那個男人，握緊了自己的拳頭。Hecouldn’thelpshouting,____________________________.6.他忍不住吼叫，額頭(forehead)直冒汗。A

stronganger

tookholdofhimclenchinghisfistwithhisforeheadsweating情緒名詞+動詞+sbsb.didsth1,doing+sth2.sb...,with+O+OC.

ContinuethestorywithMother'semotionaldescriptions.Requirements:Step5

Writing3）giveaself-review&peer-review1）write2/3sentencesbeautifully.2）applytheskillsyouhavelearnt.Thetwinswantedtoprepareasurprisefortheirmotherinthemorning,onlytomakethekitchenamess.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakethefoodastheywished.Thenhesneakedbacktobedquietly.

Mother'semotion?Herface?Herbody?ReadandwritePara2.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmother

up.

_________________Withtearsofjoyrunningdownhercheeks,theirmotherfeltmoved.Theirmotherwassomovedthatshefailedtospeakaword.Knowingitwasdonebyherchildren,shewasmovedtotears.Thesurprisewassosuddenthattheirmotherdidn'trealizewhathappened.Openinghereyes,shecouldn'tbelievewhatshesaw.Surprisedandmoved/Proudandrelieved,theirmotherotherhuggedthetwinstightly.movedgratefulsurprisedproudrelieved...Step6Summaryadjandadj,sbdidsthsbwas/wereso+adj+that...sb.didsth,feeling+ad