單元寫作記錄難忘的一天Unit7ADaytoRemember寫作維度本單元的寫作任務是以日記的形式記錄“難忘的一天”。一般有這樣幾個主題：學習交流促進成長的一天；與朋友或家人之間情感升華的一天；參加勞動感悟生活的一天等。寫作支架/模板記錄難忘的一天開篇點題事件要素：時間，地點，人物，事情發展等呼應主題黃金語料(從教材內外積累好句)開頭段①Myfirsttimeto...isimportantforme.②IwillneverforgetthedaywhenI...forthefirsttime,becauseitisso...forme.③Istillrememberdoing...中間段①Ithappened...②ThereasonwhyIthinkitisunforgettableis...③ThesemagicwordstouchedmyheartandIwillneverforgetthem.④Afterastormcomesarainbow.⑤IstillrememberthedaylastsummerwhenIwentforapicnicwithmyfather.⑥Thereisnodoubtthatmyparents/teachers/friends...mealot...結尾段

①ThiswassuchanunforgettableexperiencethatIwouldrememberitforever.②Thismomentwillbethemostpreciousmemoryformebecauseitmakesme...③Itwon’tbeforgottenbecauseitteachesme...經典例題(從經典例題中學會審題)假如你是李華，上周五你參加了學校組織的郊游活動。請你以“schooltrip”為主題，寫一篇英語日記，內容包括參加活動的人員、集合時間、郊游地點、交通方式、活動內容以及個人感受等。審人稱:第一人稱審時態:一般過去時審主題:學校旅行審體裁:應用文（日記）要求：(1)70詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)；(2)可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。Friday,25OctoberOurclasswentonaschooltriplastFriday._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________精彩范文展示Friday,25OctoberOurclasswentonaschooltriplastFriday.Itwastiringbutgreatfun!WewenttotheNationalPark.Wemetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andwenttherebybus.First,weclimbedthemountain.教材原句:①Itwastiringbutgreatfun!(教材P54)Whenwewalkedalongthemountainroads,wecouldenjoythebeautifulflowers.Itwasreallyexciting.Whenwegottothetop,everyonejumpedupanddownwithgreatexcitement.Aftertwohours,wedecidedtogotothelake.Wewentfishingbythelake.Atnoon,wehadapicnicandenjoyedourselvesinthesunshine.Wesangsongs,dancedandflewkites.Wedidlovethefreshairandthebeautyofnature.Wetooklotsofpictures.Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.教材原句:②Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.(教材P54)【亮點詞塊】walkalongthemountainroads沿著山路走jumpupanddown蹦蹦跳跳decidetodosth.決定做某事gofishing釣魚【高分句子】Whenwegottothetop,everyonejumpedupanddownwithgreatexcitement.(When引導時間狀語從句)當我們到達山頂的時候，每個人興奮地又蹦又跳。Wedidlovethefreshairandthebeautyofnature.(did作助動詞，強調“love”這個動作)我們真的喜歡這新鮮的空氣和大自然的美麗。實戰演練你的生活中肯定有過一次難忘的經歷，如參加一場比賽、和朋友的一次爭吵、一次單獨的旅行等等。這些經歷也許讓你高興，也許讓你難過，但相信你一定從中受益匪淺。請以“AnUnforgettableExperience”為題寫一篇英語短文。要求：語句連貫；詞數70左右；作文的題目已給出，不計入總詞數。AnUnforgettableExperience范文參考AnUnforgettableExperienceLastsummer,IwenttoBeidaiheforvacationwithmyfamily.Wetookatraintogetthere.Welivedinabighotelnearthesea.Westayedthereforthreedays.First,wewentforawalkalongtheseaside.Wewentswimmingandtookmanyphotosthere.Wealsoboughtmanysouvenirsinafamousmarket.W