2022屆高考英語寫作專題之讀后續寫精讀精煉（十一）原文呈現閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成--篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。WhenIwasinschool,Ijoinedanundergraduateprogramtochatwithspecificpatientsandthendiscussitwithothers.ButIhadnospecifictraininginthis,andintroducingmyselftostrangerswasnotoneofmynaturaltalents.Ononespecialvisit,Icautiouslyenteredadarkenedroomtofindanelderlymanlyinginthebed.Therewasnooneelseintheroom,andIfirstlythoughthewassleeping.WhenImovedalittleclosertothebed,Irealizedthathewasverymuchawake,butalsoveryconfusedandanxious.Hedesperatelywantedtocommunicatesomethingtoothers,butIcouldn'tunderstandwhathewassaying.Heseemedweak,andIcouldn'ttellifhewasinpain,orjustscared.Iknewnothingaboutthisman'slifeorhistory,andatthattimeIfelttotallyhelpless.Heobviouslydidn'twantmetoleave,butIfeltsolostanduncomfortablethatIhadtoleavetheroomafteronlyacoupleofminutes.ThenexttimeIwasatthehospital,Iwasaskedtomakefollowupvisitswiththesamelistofpatients.Iexpectedmytimewiththeconfusedmantobejustasshortasthelasttime...ifhewasevenstillalive.Itseemedpointlesstopreventmyselffromtryingtotalkwithsomeonewhowassoweak.AsIarrivedattheroom,thefirstthingInoticedwasthatthelightswereon.Hisdaughterwastherechattingwithhim.Hewassittingupinthebedandlookedabitbetterthanbefore.IintroducedmyselftothedaughterandexplainedtoherthatIhadcomebybefore.Addressingthepatient,IthensuggestedthatIwascertainhedidn'tremembermeatall.Tomysurprise,hecorrectedmeimmediately.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterthisvisit,thewordstheoldmansaidtomewerealwaysinmymind.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________思路分析上學時，作者參加了一個和病人聊天的本科生項目。在一次特殊的拜訪中，作者走進了一間黑暗的病房，看見一個老人躺在病床上，本以為他在睡覺，但走近時才發現老人十分清醒且滿臉迷惑和焦慮，他急切地想和作者交流點什么，但是作者并不能理解老人所說的話，而且他對老人一無所知，強烈的無助感和不舒適感涌上心頭，于是作者只待了幾分鐘就離開了。不久作者被要求去進行回訪時，發現老人病房的燈亮著，老人的女兒在陪他聊天，老人看上去比之前好多了。【寫作指導】Paragraph1的開頭是“令我驚訝的是，老人立刻糾正了我”，再結合Paragraph2的開頭“Afterthisvisit,thewordstheoldmansaidtomewerealwaysinmymind”可知，Paragraph1講的應該是老人記得作者之前的看望以及老人告訴作者之前的看望給自己帶來的影響。Paragraph2的開頭是“在這次看望之后，老人對我說的話一直在我腦海中徘徊”，顯然接下來的內容應該是這次看望老人的經歷給作者的生活帶來的改變，讓作者感悟到小小的善意能帶來巨大的影響。續寫句式提煉令我驚訝的是，他立即糾正了我。翻譯：“我記得你。你才是善良的人！”他興奮地說。翻譯：我想他一定是把我當成別人了，但他隨后準確地告訴了我我們第一次見面的足夠多的細節。翻譯：我對此很困惑。在我第一次看望這個虛弱的病人時，除了露面，我什么也沒做。翻譯：然后他解釋說上次我的出現讓他有了活下去的希望。翻譯：那天我們又聊了一會兒，說了聲再見。翻譯：這次拜訪后，老人對我說的話一直在我腦海中。翻譯：我必須承認，一個我甚至不知道名字的住院陌生人用一句話改變了我對生活的態度。翻譯：它重塑了我看待生活的方式，我看待自己的方式，以及我看待他人的方式。翻譯：它讓我想盡可能地向別人獻上善意，我努力去認可和欣賞別人對我的善意。翻譯：顯然，我們無法知道我們的行為，甚至僅僅是我們的存在對生活的影響。翻譯：參考答案：Tomysurprise,hecorrectedmeimmediately.“Irememberyou.Youarethekindman！”hesaidexcitedly.Ithoughthemustbemistakingmeforsomeoneelse,buthethenaccuratelytoldmeenoughdetailsofourfirstmeeting.Iwassoconfusedaboutthat.Inmyfirstvisittothisweakpatient,Ididabsolutelynothingtohelpthismanexceptshowup.Thenheexplainedthatmypresencelasttimegavehimhopetolive.Wetalkedalittlemorethatdayandsaidgoodbye.Afterthisvisit,thewordstheoldmansaidtomewerealwaysinmymind.ImustadmitthatastrangerinhospitalwhosenameIevendidn'tknowchangedmyattitudetothelifewithasinglecomment.ItreshapedthewayIseelife,thewayIseemyself,andthewayIseeothers.ItmakesmewanttoofferwhateverkindnessIcantoothers,andItrytorecognizeandappreciatethekindnessthatothersoffertome.Obviously,wecouldn'tknowtheimpactouractions,orevenjustourpresence,hasonlife.篇章成文Tomysurprise,hecorrectedmeimmediately.“Irememberyou.Youarethekindman！”hesaidexcitedly.Ithoughthemustbemistakingmeforsomeoneelse,buthethenaccuratelytoldmeenoughdetailsofourfirstmeeting.Iwassoconfusedaboutthat.Inmyfirstvisittothisweakpatient,Ididabsolutelynothingtohelpthismanexceptshowup.Thenheexplainedthatmypresencelasttimegavehimhopetolive.Wetalkedalittlemorethatdayandsaidgoodbye.Afterthisvisit,thewordstheoldmansaidtomewerealwaysinmymind.ImustadmitthatastrangerinhospitalwhosenameIevendidn'tknowchangedmyattitudetothelifewithasinglecomment.ItreshapedthewayIseelife,thewayIseemyself,andthewayIseeothers.ItmakesmewanttoofferwhateverkindnessIcantoothers,andItrytorecognizeandappreciatethekindnessthatothersoffertome.Obviously,wecouldn'tknowtheimpactouractions,orevenjustourpresence,hasonlife.課后練習閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。Jack,aclerkatthelocalbank,waswanderingaloneonthestreet.Itwasacold,silentwinternight.HismindwasonhiswifeLinda,whohadbeeninacaraccidenttwomonthsagoandwasnowlyinginahospitalbed,waitingformoremoneyforheroperation.Jackhadsoldeverythinghehad,andhehadtriedhisbesttoborrowmoneyfromallthepeopleandbankshecould.Buttherealworldiscruel.Alargeamountofmoneywasstillneeded.ToJack,itwouldmeanagreatdealofsufferingtoseehiswifediewithoutanyhelp.“Ihaveonlyoneoptionleft,”Jacksaidtohimself.Thenhewenttothebank,hisworkplace,again.Forseveraldays,heobservedthebankandplannedatheft.Thennextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidn’tnoticehim,ofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebank’ssecuritysystemwasn’tverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.注意:1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________