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Example:Thepassageshowstheviewthatworkishelpfultohealthforthereasonthatkeepingbusyletspeoplegetawayfromloneliness,andgetasenseoffulfillmentandachievement.Theauthorholdstheviewthatworkcanmakepeoplehealthierbecauseithelpspeopletogetawayfromlonelinessandgainasenseoffulfillmentandachievement.Theauthorhighlightstheeffectofworkonpeople’shealth,becauseitcanridoneofloneliness,andmakeonefeelfruitfulandproudofhimself,whichalwayscontributestoagoodbody.正文：注意：認真理解寫作要求分段來寫要點要齊全要有自己的觀點，即就此話題，要有話可說語言要準確，句型不能單一，或過于簡單，運用豐富的詞匯和非謂語結構以下按段落賞析好句好觀點第二段：你贊同“努力學習也可以快樂生活”這一觀點嗎？簡要闡述理由！(要表明自己的態度，還要講講理由）Iabsolutelyagree(withtheview)thatwecanstudyhardandleadahappylifeatthesametime.Itisalwaysmybeliefthatonecanstudyhard…Ifullysupportthestatementthatwecanstudyhardandinthemeanwhilelivehappily.Frommyperspective,studyinghardisnotcontradictorywithlivinghappily.Isupporttheopinionthatwecanworkhardaswellaslivehappily.AsfarasIamconcerned,therearenoconflictsbetweenworkinghardandenjoyingahappylife.第二段：你贊同“努力學習也可以快樂生活”這一觀點嗎？簡要闡述理由！(要表明自己的態度，還要講講理由）Itisgenerallybelievedthatwecansleepbetterafterworkinghard.Thereisnodenyingthefactthat…Althoughstudymeansthatwehavetospendmostofourtimelearningsomethingwedon’tknow,itwillmakeusfeelhappywhenweapplyournewknowledgetolife.Studyinghardmeanstreasuringouryouthandnotwastingtime,whichcankeepapersoninhighspiritsandleadtoabusybuthappylife.Eventhoughstudyingisabitboring,wecanstillmakeprogressinlearning,whichcanconsiderablyprovide第二段：你贊同“努力學習也可以快樂生活”這一觀點嗎？簡要闡述理由！(要表明自己的態度，還要講講理由）uswithconfidence.Asourconfidencebeginstoaccumulate,wewillfeelasenseofachievementandtendtobemoreconfident,whichinturnwillleadtoahappierlife.Thereasonsforthatcanbelistedasfollows:workinghardmeansapositiveattitudetolife.What’smore,onlybyworkinghardcanweachievesuccessandunderstandtherealmeaningofhappylife.第三段：舉例說明你的同學是如何努力學習并保持健康樂觀的心態的？（要有例子）Mostofmyfriendsneverfailtostudyhardandatthesametime,enjoytheirlife.Whenevertheyareworn-outafterhardwork,theymaygototheplaygroundforsomeexercise.Aftertheexercise,theyreturntothegoodmoodandkeepworkingon.Myclassmate,Jack,studiesveryhardandhealsohasahappylife.Jacklovesliteratureverymuchandheisinterestedinwhatheislearning,sohecandevotehimselftostudyingit.Thereisnodoubtthatheisveryhappywithit.Jackhasfoundhisinterestsohecannotonlystudyhardbutalsokeepapositiveattitude.第三段：舉例說明你的同學是如何努力學習并保持健康樂觀的心態的？（要有例子）Therearemanyexamplesinmylife,whostudyhardandkeepahealthyandpositiveattitude.Theymakethemselveslikelearningwhattheylearn,sothattheynevercomplain.Whentheyfeeltiredofstudying,theywilldosomeexercise,likeplayingbasketball,orjogging.Furthermore,theyallliketocommunicatewithclassmates.第四段：簡述如何才能做到努力學習并快樂生活？Thereisnodoubtthatwehavealotofhomeworktodoinourschoollife,whichsometimesisreallydullandstressful,butifwecanfindouttheadvantagesofstudy,keepcalmandpatientwhenwearetiredoutbecauseofstudy,wecanleadahappylifemeanwhile.Inmyopinion,itisimportanttoplayhappilywhenyouareplayingandtostudyattentivelywhenyouarestudying.Toenjoyahappylifeandworkhardatthesametime,first,weshouldholdapositiveattitudetoourlife.Thensetagoalforourselves.Bysettingagoal,weareonestepclosertoourdreams.Justassomeone第四段：簡述如何才能做到努力學習并快樂生活？says,“atnoageshouldwebedisappointedifwehaveadreamandiswillingtoworkhard.”Thus,wecanfocusontheprogresswemakeeveryday,anditistheprogressthatmakesyouhappyandwillingtoworkharder.Obviously,apositiveattitudeplaysaveryimportantrolewhileyouarestudying.Ifyoulovewhatyouarestudying,nomatterhowhardyouwork,youwillfeelitenjoyable.Andyoucangainthebiggesthappinesswhenyoumakeprogress.Ofcourse,youcanalsofindawaytorelaxwhenyoufeelstressed.第四段：簡述如何才能做到努力學習并快樂生活？Itisnotthestudythatmakesustiredbutourunwillingmindsthattakeustothedarkside.Ifweareoptimisticenoughtoovercomethedifficulties,nothingcandefeatusorpreventusfromenjoyingahappylife.Frommypointofview,toworkhardaswellasenjoyahappylife,wecan’tbeinfluencedbyfailures.Allweshoulddoistoencourageourselvesandholdapositiveattitude.Communicatingwithfriendsalsobringsalotofhappiness.Inbrief,happinesscomesfromourminds.DecidetotryforajobataradiostationWenttoChicago3.Knockonthedoor4.Bedisappointed5.ItriedWOCradio6.Themothersaid:everythinghappensforthebest7.Aladytoldmetogotosmalltownstofindasmallstation8.Theprogramdirectorwassatisfiedwithme.9.Ibecameasportsannouncer.Findthekeypoints:Whilehuntingforajob,theauthorsufferedonefailureafteranother,whichmadehimfeelverydisappointed.Itwashismother’sencouragingwordsthatinspiredhimtogoontryinguntilhesucceeded.aftergraduating,hismotherencouragedhimnottogiveup.Sohekeptontryingandfinallybecameasportsannouncer.Whentheauthorwasupsetthathecouldn’tfindajo