MBA作文講座幅：150/100字

達不到字數要求的，要酌情扣1-5布局：3-5段式

只寫一段為0-4分，只寫兩段0-9分評分標準（5個模塊評分，平均半分鐘一份卷）結構、內容、語言：3段，長短句結合，一定難度的詞匯和短語，少詞匯語法錯誤卷面書寫工整：心情一好分數就不會低篇幅一定要不長不短2分－條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數為嚴重錯誤。（即表達得一塌糊涂）5分－基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。（即表達得糊里糊涂）8分－基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。（即表達得勉勉強強）11分－切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。（即表達得清清楚楚）14分－切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。（即表達得漂漂亮亮）

例如：

1）有人認為機會是極少的

2）有人認為機會人人都有

3）我的看法

Sample1

Astotheopportunity,thereistwodifferentopinions:first,someonethinkopportunityislittleintheirlife.Secondly,someoneconsiderthatopportunityisexistingeverywhereeverybodyhassomekindsofchance.AccordingtomylifeexperimentandknowledgeIagreewiththesecondidea.Thereischanceforeveryoneinsomeunexpectedcase.Butifyouhasnopreparingforit,theopportunitywilllose.Thosewhohavemanypreparationandmuchknowledge,andsomegoodvirtue,mayIquiptheopportunityfirmly.Forexample,twomenareappealingforajobinacompany,andthereisonlyonevacantjobfortheonlyoneofthetwomen.How,thetwomanhasanopportunitytogetthejobbutthebosscertainlywouldacceptthegoodone.

SoIthinktheopportunityisexistingtoeveryone,butmoreopportunityisbelongstowhohasknowledge,experience,encourageandconfident.

該篇文章條理不清，思想紊亂，語言支離破碎，幾乎沒有正確的句子，得2分。

Sample2

Peoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesforthemintheworld,whileothersholdthateverybodywillhavesomekindofchancesinhisorherlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamfor/preferthelatter.Peoplewhoclaimthattheydon'thavegoodluckmaybethosewhoarenotabletotakechances.Maybetheyfailtorecognizeopportunitiesevenwhentheyareinfrontofthem.However,wisemencanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforchancestoappear.

……

Sowecanconcludethateverybodyhastheopportunitytosucceed,butitisuptohimselftotakeit.

該篇文章切題，思想表達清楚，文章結構合理，行文連貫，符合邏輯，屬于14分檔作文。

4．行文要求1）切題：統一，無不相關細節內容

2）條理清楚：連貫、和諧-注意銜接語的使用

3）簡潔：句子要簡練

4）準確：減少語法錯誤，符合英語的表達習慣，避免漢語式英語

…Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned,…/AsIseeit,…thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,because…Inthefirstplace…Forinstance…Inthesecondplace…Evenmoreimportantisthefactthat…/what’more/moreoverInconclusion…inabrief文章的內容不重要！重要的是框架（背）！習慣先看每段的首句+文章末句，再瀏覽全文挑錯字和語法錯誤，所以要寫成3段，每段首句為中心句，結尾再總結一下，這樣老師只看3~4句話就可以給出分數了，節省時間自然分數就高了。中心句的寫法模式性，一般背20句，不管出什么題都能從中挑出3~4句用上，各種題型背一些。??拼寫不大確定的詞一定不要寫！判卷老師最強的能力就是找錯字，而且這是他判斷你寫作能力的重要尺度！當你文章中出現了3個以上的拼寫錯誤的時候，可以說你已經missionfail了。作文中出現一些閃光詞匯和句型（比如成語chancesprefertoreadyones,allroadsleadtoRoma等，多被動句，插入語等，句式變化多樣），對分數的提高有很大幫助的！建議背一些模塊長句。如“重要”一詞，用important太一般了，如果用vital,critical，essential，crucial就能使老師眼前一亮！moreandmore這個詞是一定不要用，可以用Agrowingnumberofsth或Anincreasingnumberofsth，或說…isontherise。Attachimportanceto詞匯和句式的轉化很重要，你背的中心句一定要能體現這兩點，如問題解決型文章末段首句可以這樣寫Animmediatestepmustbetakenbeforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.（必須在問題嚴重之前及時采取有效措施解決）Measures,whenitcomestothisproblem/asfarasthisissueisconcerned/asfarastheproblemgoes,aretobetakensoasto…,Ibelieve.(就這個問題而言，我認為應該采取措施改進以便。。。)正反觀點對比可以說Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththelatter/formerpointofview.(權衡正反兩種觀點，我傾向于后者／前者的看法)，這樣就不用為字數發愁了！大作文的時間３０-35分鐘，５分鐘構思（確定模塊，舉例，論據等），２０分鐘寫，５分鐘檢查。內容切題，但不新穎不重要，不要為了想個好的例子浪費時間，第一是你未必想的出來，第二是你想出來了也寫不出來，第三是你寫出來了老師也不會看！所以要寫最簡單的例子。檢查，這個時間千萬不要數字數，主要是找拼寫和語法的錯誤，主要是全篇文章時態一致、單復數、主謂一致！記住小的地方可以改，但決不要整句整句的改，縮短老師的評卷時間、使老師高興是及格和打高分的首要條件！注意一些常用詞，常用短語不要用錯！！！Convenient,essential,obvious,characteristics/feature,environmentalprotection,prefer。。。to。。。,definitely,5．模塊1.議論型模塊(89words)謀篇布局

-將提示的第一句作為文章的第一句

-將提示的第三句作為第一段的最后一句

-將提示的第二句展開成文章的中心段落

-結論段歸納概括，提出建議Somepeoplebelieve(argue,hold，advocate，recognize,think)that觀點1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethat觀點2.Asforme/asfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehind/tosupportmybelief.Firstofall/inthefirstplace,論據1.Moreimportantly/inthesecondplace,論據2.Mostimportantofall/themoreimportantisfactthat,論據3.Lastbutnottheleast.Insummary,總結觀點.Asacitizenoftheglobalvillage,Iamsupposedto表決心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat預測.例如：2002年1月MBA作文題FailureandSuccessSomebelievethatfailureandsuccessareaninevitablepartoftheirdailylifeandbothcontributetotheirfinalsuccess.Butotherstakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethatfailurewilldestroytheirconfidenceintheirworkandlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetotheformer.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,failureshouldnotberegardedastheendoftheworld.Onthecontrary,itcanteachusalotoflessonsandexperience,withwhichweavoidmakingmistakesagainandfinallysucceed.Second/Inthesecondplace,ifeverythingrunssmoothlyandwemakeachievementseffortlessly,wewillbecomearrogantandbeblindtopotentialproblems,whichmayleadtoourtotalfailure.Fromabove,wecanseeweshouldtakeaproperattitudetowardfailureandsuccess.對比選擇型模版(56words)1.Thereisaheateddebateover____________________.Itiscommonlyacceptedthat____________________.Incontrast,othersclaimthat…____________________.2.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggest__________________.Intheirview,____________________.However,othersthink____________________.Theyarguethat__________________.3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideof…OnMarriageofCollegeStudents1.Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsshouldgetmarriedornot.Itiscommonlyacceptedthattheyareentitledtogetmarried.Incontrast,asmallminorityofpeopleareagainstit.2.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggestthatcollegestudentsarebothphysicallyandmentallymatureenoughtogetmarriedandthattheyknowwhattheyaredoing.Intheirview,ifcollegestudentsgetmarried,theywillbemoredisciplined,moremotivatedandmoreresponsible.However,othersthinktoday’scollegestudentsaremostlyfromonechild’sfamily.Asamatteroffact,theyareusuallyspoiltandnotpsychologicallypreparedforundertakingtheresponsibilityofafamily.Theyarguethatmarriagewilldistractthemfromstudyandplungethemintofinancialdilemma.3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformer.IfIamluckyenoughtomeetmyMr.Right,Imaymarryhim.Thenwemayloveeachother,supporteachotherandencourageeachother.Oh,whatarosypictureitis!非對立觀點題：只闡述好處或者壞處BenefitsofSportsandGamesWiththequickerpaceofourlifeandgreaterstressfromourwork,anincreasingnumberofmodernpeopleattachmuchimportancetosportsandgames./Anincreasingnumberofmodernpeople,withthequickerpaceofourlifeandgreaterstressfromourwork,attachmuchimportancetosportsandgames.Whyaretheybecomingsopopular?First,sportsandgamesdoalotofgoodtoourhealth.Theycanmakeusstrong,preventusfromgettingtoofat,andkeepushealthy.Theycanbeofgreatvaluetopeoplewhoworkwiththeirbrainsmostoftheday,forsportsandgamesgivepeoplevaluablepracticeinbuildingupastrongconstitution.What’smore,theymakeourlifericherandmorecolorful.“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”,justasthesayinggoes.Sopeopleofallagesenjoywatchingandtakingpartinvariouskindsofsports.Sportsandgamesarealsoveryusefulincharactertraining.Theydemandnotonlyphysicalskillandstrengthbutalsocourage,enthusiasm,disciplineandteamwork.Forboysandgirls,whatislearnedintheplaygroundoftenhasadeepeffect/impacton/influenceontheircharacter.Ifeachofthemlearnstoworkforhisteamandnotforhimselfonthefootballfield,hewilllaterfinditnaturaltoworkforthegoodofhiscountryinsteadofonlyforhisownbenefit.Withallthesebenefits,itisnowonderthatsportsandgamesseemtohavebecomeanessentialpartofourdailylife.2004年10月MBA考題ShouldCollegeStudentsLiveoutsidetheCampus?Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsareentitledtorentaflatandliveoutsidethecampus.Itiscommonlyacceptedthattheyhaveeveryreasontomaketheirownchoiceaboutit.Incontrast,othersmaintainthattheyshouldliveinthedormitoryprovidedbytheircolleges.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggestthatcollegestudentsareoldenoughtomaketheirwisechoiceandtakecareofthemselves.Intheirview,collegestudents’livingoutsidethecampusbythemselveshasalotofadvantagessuchasfreedom,morespace,betterprivacy,greaterflexibilityinthetimetable,convenienceandexcellentlivingfacilities.However,othersthinkitdoesharmforcollegestudentstoliveoutsidethecampus.Ontheonehand,theyarguethatthesocietyiscomplicatedandthatthereexistsdangereverywhere.Ifsomethingterriblehappens,whowillberesponsible?Ontheotherhand,collegestudentswillbehardtodisciplineandmanage.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformer.WereIacollegestudent,Iwouldchoosetolivebymyself,forIvalueindependence,freedomandprivacymorethananythingelse.2009真題大作文Itiswell-knownthattextmessagehasbothadvantagesanddisadvantageseventhoughitplaysanincreasingcriticalroleinourdailylife.Somepeoplebelievethatitisablessingfortextmessageenrichesourlifeinalargedegree.Butotherstakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethatitisahellbecausesometimesitbringslotsoftroublesandevendestroysourlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththeformerideaevenifithassomedisadvantages.Thereareadozenofreasonstosupportmybelief.Inthefirstplace,wecansendshortmessagestowishgoodlucktoourrelativesandfriends,whichbringusagreatdealofconvenience.What’smore,shortmessagecanhelpitsuserstoconnecttheoutsideworldeasily.Forinstance,somepeoplesubscribeweatherforecastornews,withwhichpeople’slifewillbegreatlycolorful.Lastbutnottheleast,textmessagecansavealargeamountofmoneyandtime,comparingwithphonecalls.Onthecontrary,theshortmessagewithtoomuchadsdisturbsourpeacefullife.However,thedisadvantagesoftextmessagecanbeignored.Insummary,thetextmessageownsprosandcons,butwecanuseitfreelyandavoiditsnegativeeffects.私人書信模版1DearJohn/SirsorMadams,IamdelightedtohearthatyouwillcometoGuangzhouforavisitsoon.Ican’twaittoseeyou.HereI’dliketogiveyouseveraltips./I’mherewritingforyoutothank/apologize/congulate/complainaboutfor….First/atfirst/atthebeginning/tobeginwith/inthefirstplace,Guangzhouisabigmetropolitancitywithalotofvehiclesandahugecrowdofpeopleandthetrafficisheavy,forwhichIhopeyouwillbeprepared.Second/inthesecondplace/what’smore/themoreimportantisthefactthat,peoplehereareaddictedtofoodsofdifferentflavors,esp.seafoodsandlivinganimals,eveninsects.Idoubtyou’lllikethem.Besides,theweatherhereischangeable,soyou’dbetterbringmoreclothesandmedicine.Withpeoplefromdifferentregionsandcountries,diverseculturesandexoticcustoms,youwilldefinitelyenjoyyourself.ThenImayserveasyourguide.Ifyouhaveanydoubts,don’thesitatetoinformmeplease.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou/earlyreply.SincerelyYours,Signature:LiMing2009書信作文DearSirorMadam,IamherewritingtoyoutoexpressmythanksforyourwarmreceptionwhileIwasinAmericaasamemberofaSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram.……IhopeyouwillcometovisitChinainduecourse.Ifyouhaveanydoubts,don’thesitatetoinformmeplease.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou/earlyreply.SincerelyYours,Signature:LiMing圖表作文模塊Asisshowninthetable(orinthegraph/diagram),…dropped(ordecreased)by…/greatlyincreasedfrom…in1994to…in1996.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsfor…Ontheonehand,…Let’shaveanexampletoillustratethegreatincreasein…Ontheotherhand,…isduetothefactthat…Inaddition,…isresponsiblefor…Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow…AsfarasIamconcerned,…Nouns:arise/increase/fall/drop/decline//reachapeak/thelowestpointAdjectives:sharp/dramatic/considerable/slight/gradual//remainsteady/stayconstant2010真題大作文Asisshownfromthegivencolumn/pie/table/curvechartasabove,itisofdirectlinktomobilephonesubscriptionintheyearsstemming/rangingfrom2000to2008,whichiscomposedoftwosortsofcountries.Thefirstkindofnationthatcatchesourutmostattention,tostartwith,comestothedevelopednations.Thenumberofmobilephonesubscriptionintheyear2008wasequaltothatin2007,thatis,1billion,followedbytheyear2006(0.9billion),whilethatintheyear2000wasthesmallest,say,about0.6billion.Followingthat,we’llcontinuetothenextunit,inotherwords,thedevelopingcountries,whichobserved/saw/witnessedafasterrisingrateofsubscriptioninthesameperiod.Thefigure/dataoftheyear2008wasthebiggest,takingtheleadingposition(4billion),nexttowhichwastheyear2007,putitinanotherway,nearly3.3billion,withtheyear2000beingtheleastinnumberby0.4billion.Theabove-illustratedaspects,sofarinaword,indicatethatthegrowingproportionofmobilephonesubscriptioninthedevelopingcountrieswasmuchseniortothatofthedevelopedones.ItPaystoBeHonestRecently,weoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Whatamazesusmostisstudents'dishonestyinexams.Itistruethatcheatinganddishonestpracticesareineverywalkofourlives.Therearemanyreasonsexplainingthesedishonestbehaviors.Themainreasonisthatmostpeopleneglectthemoralvaluesinpursuitoftheirmaterialbenefits.Whatismore,welackeffectivelawsandregulationsofsupervision.Thirdly,mostdishonestpeoplecanescapethepunishment.Asaresult,theproblemofdishonestybecomesmoreandmoreserious.Consideringallthese,Istillwanttoarguethatitpaystobehonestinthelongrun.Foronething,honestyisatraditionalvirtueofourChinese.Foranother,evendishonestpeoplelikemakingfriendswithhonestpeople.Inconclusion,peopleseldomdenythatitpaystobehonest.ItPaystoBeHonestAsisknowntoall,weoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Peopleseemtogetaccustomedtomanydishonestbehaviors.Infact,therearedishonestpracticesineverywalkofourlives.Thereasonsofsocialdishonestylieinseveralaspects.Firstly,mostpeopleneglectmoralvaluesinpursuitoftheirmaterialbenefits.Secondly,unfaircompetitionsworsenthesituation.Thirdly,welackpowerfulandeffectivelawstocopewiththisproblem.Finally,manydishonestpeoplemayescapepunishmenteasily.Asamatteroffact,tobehonestwillbegoodforbothhonestpeopleandothers.Ontheonehand,behavingyourselfinanhonestwaycanwinrespectsfromothers.Ontheotherhand,beinghonestisanessentialsteptowardsourspiritualcivilization.Therefore,itpaystobehonestinthelongrun.HowtoSolvetheEnergyProblem

a.有人認為解決能源危機的方式是厲行節約

b.有人則認為開發新的能源是最好的辦法

c.我的看法

Somepeopleholdthatthesolutiontoenergycrisisistosaveenergywhileothersclaimthatthebestapproachistodevelopnewsourcesofenergy.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferthelatter.

Itisobviousthatevenifwecansavemuchenergy,wecanonlydelaytheenergycrisis,butcannotsolvetheproblemcompletely.Ontheotherhand,therearestilllimitlesssourcesofenergywaitingfortoexplore:suchasthesun,theseaandtheair.Forexample,wecanmakeuseofthesuntoproducesolarenergy.Sointhelongrun,wemustdevelopnewsourcesofenergyinsteadofmerelyconservingtheknown,limitedsupplies.

標題：HowtoAchieveSuccess

提綱：1）有人說成功主要靠運氣；

2）有人則認為成功主要靠勤奮，與運氣毫無關系;

3）我的觀點

Somepeoplesaythekeytosuccessisgoodluck,whileothersclaimitishardwork.AsfarasIamconcerned,therearemanyfactorscontributingtosuccessandthethreefundamentalonesarediligence,devotionandperseverance.

Diligenceisthefirstkeyfactortosuccess.Diligencehelpsusremoveignorance,overcomedifficulties,andenlightenourminds.Itmakesafoolwise,andapoormanrich.Devotionisanotherfactortosuccess.Whateverwedo,wemustloveitanddoitwhole-heartedly.Onlywhenwesetourmindsonthejob,canwedoitwell.Furthermore,perseverance,orastrongwill,isthelastkeytosuccess.Withoutastrongwill,wearelikelytogiveupwhenwemeetsomedifficulties,letaloneperformwonderfuldeeds.

Toconclude,allgreatmenachievesuccessthroughdiligence,devotionandperseverance.Justasthefamoussayinggoes,"Nopains,nogains";"Wherethereisawill,thereisaway."

標題：CityLifeandSuburbanLife

提綱：1)最近幾年越來越多的人遷往近郊居住

2）城市生活和近郊生活各有特點

3）比較起來，我喜歡的是……

Nowadaysbusiness,governmentandrecreationtendtobeconcentratedinthecentersofthecities.Althoughmostpeoplearereluctanttomovetotheoutskirtsofthecities,Ifeellikelivinginthesuburbs.

Itistruethatthecitycanprovidemuchconvenienceandentertainment,theveryreasonwhypeoplecan'tbeartopartwithcitylife.Butthecostfortheprivilegeoflivinginthecityisalsohigh.What'smore,thereismoregasandnoisepollutioninthecity,whichisfullofpetrolfumesandtoxicgases,tornbytheroarofbusesandtaxies,andthrongedceaselesslybygreatcrowds.Incontrast,livingnearthecountrysideonecanenjoythecleanatmosphere,theclosenesstonatureandthequiet,peacefulsurroundings---theessentialsofahealthylife.

Thenewsuburbanlifeisfastbecomingapredominantpatternoflivinginmostcities;andwiththeimprovementoftrafficandtheperfectionofservices,itwillprovetoholdgreatsuperiorityovercitylife.1.面試在求職過程中的作用2.取得面試成功的因素：儀表、舉止談吐、能力、專業知識、自信、實事求是……HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Nowadays,ajobinterviewisveryimportanttoboththeinterviewerandinterviewee.Toaninterviewer,hecantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchassalary,workingconditionsandalsothedevelopmentprospectsofthecompany.Toaninterviewee,hecanmakeuseofthechancetoknowtheworkheisgoingtotakeup.Afterafullandfrankexchangeofinformation,anintervieweriseasytomakeajudgmentwhetherthejobisreallysuitablefortheinterviewee.Buthowcananintervieweesucceedinthejobinterview?Firstly,theintervieweehastopayattentiontohisappearance,forthefirstimpressionisalwayswhatwestartwith.Secondly,goodmannersareequallyimportant.Theintervieweehastobeneithertooproudnortootimid.Besides,heoughttobehonestabouthispersonalbackground.Finally,greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtohisabilityandskillsforthejobandhisacademicknowledge,whichhemustdemonstratetrulyandconfidently.Inaword,ajobinterviewisagoodchancefortheintervieweetoimpresstheinterviewerwithhismanners,knowledgeandskillsandobtainthejobopportunity.1．上大學的費用（tuitionandfees）可以通過多種途徑解決;2．哪種途徑適合于我（說明理由）。HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducationNowadays,tuitionandfeesforcollegearemuchhigherthaneverbefore.Howtofinanceourcollegeeducationhasbecomeabigconcern.Wecandealwithitinvariousways.Wecangetallofthemoneyfromourparentsorwecancompletelydependonourselves,doingapart-timejobonsummerorwintervacation.Inaddition,wecanapplytosomebankforstudents’loan.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iprefertocombinethefirsttwo.ItmeansmyparentssupportmetosomeextentandmeanwhileIdoapart-timejob-teachingchildrenEnglish1.有人認為讀書要有選擇；2.有人認為應當博覽群書；3.我的看法。ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?Somepeoplethinkreadingshouldbeselective.First,theythinkthatone’slifeissolimitedthatreadingextensivelyisoutofthequestion,sooneshouldonlyfocusonthebookscloselyconnectedwithhismajor.Second,surroundedbytheworldofknowledge,theybelievereadingwithoutselectingissimplyawasteoftime,energyandmoney.Finally,thosewhoarecriticalclaimthatnotallbooksareworthreading.However,therearemanypeoplewhopreferreadingextensively.Firstofall,theyfirmlybelievethatthemorebooksonereads,themoreknowledgeoneacquires.Anotherreasonforthosewholikereadingextensivelyisthattheworldischangingsorapidlythatonlybyreadingextensivelycanonekeepabreastofwhatisgoingoninotherpartsoftheworld.Inmyopinion,peopleshouldreadbothselectivelyandextensively.Ontheone?hand,weshouldreadselectivelyforspecialknowledge,whichneedsourconcentrationandcarefulstudy.Ontheotherhand,weshouldreadextensivelyfortheinformationorentertainment,whichleadstoacolorfullife.Therefore,Reading?shouldbe,accordingtomyownunderstanding,bothselectiveandextensive.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteacomposition?onthetopicDo“LuckyNumbers”ReallyBringGoodLuck?Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運；2.我認為數字和運氣無關，…SampleCompositionDo“LuckyNumbers”ReallyBringGoodLuck?Nowadaysmanypeoplearecrazyaboutsome“LuckyNumbers”,suchasthenumberscontaining8sand6swhichsoundslikeChinese“Fa”and“LiuLiuDaShun”Theywouldliketopaytwiceormanytimesmoreoftheusualpricefora“Lucky”telephonenumber,oracarplatenumber.Theydosoonlybecausetheybelievethatthe“LuckyNumbers”canbringthemgoodluckandgreatfortune.Idon’tbelievethose“LuckyNumbers”canbringgoodluckorbigfortunetoanyperson.Thosepeople’sblindbeliefin“LuckyNumbers”isabsurdandsuperstitious.WehaveneverheardthatBillGates,therichestpersonintheworldnow,everdroveacarwithanumberof888or666.Myneighborhasgotasocalled?“Lucky”telephonenumberformanyyears,buthestillremainsaspoorasheusedtobenow.Therearesomanyexamplesshowingthat“LuckyNumbers”hasnothingtodowithone’sluckorfortune.Numbersareonlysymbolsindicatingthenamesofcertainthings.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteacomposition?onthetopicMyViewonFakeCommodities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1．假冒偽劣商品的危害；2．怎樣杜絕假冒偽劣商品。SampleCompositionMyViewonFakeCommoditiesFakecommoditiesaredisastrousforasociety.ThedisasterstheyhavebroughtaresomanythatIcanonlynameafewhere.First,thenormaleconomicorderisgreatlydestroyed.Commoditiesoffamousbrandsandhighqualitypileupinstoresunsoldwhilepoorgoodsareeverywhereinmarkets.Second,faircompetitionbetweenbusinessmenfallsvictimtofakecommodities.Goodcommoditiescannotbeatpooronesbecauseofthelatter’slowcostandlowprices.Tomakethingsworse,fakecommoditiesbringgreatlosstopeople.Forexample,weoftenhearthatfarmerstoilandsweatforayearwithoutharvestinganythingowingtofalseseedsorpoorfertilizer.Somepeopleevendiethankstothefakewine,orpoisonousfood.Theworstofall,thesocietyisseverelypollutedbythemaddesireformoney.Wemustputanendtofakecommoditiesbyallmeans.Firstofall,weshouldstrengthenourlaws.Lawsmustpunishanyonewhoproducesorsellsfakecommodities,besidescompensatingforallthelossescausedbythemaswell.Anotherthingweshoulddoistolaunchalongandwideant-fakecommoditycampaign.Everyoneshouldkeepaneyeonfakecommoditiesandrefusetobuyorusefakecommodities.Oncebeingcheated,thebuyershouldhavethecouragetoexposeandattackthelawbreaker.Inthisway,therewillbenomarketforfakecommodities.寫作金句：該問題與價值觀/環境污染有關，值得我們深思。Theissue/problemhassomethingtodowith/concerns/isrelatedto/dealswithpersonalvalues/environmentalpollution,whichdeserves/requires/needs/isworth/wants/waitsfor/awaitsourfurther/deeper/closer/strongeranalysis/discussion/insight/thought/illustration/considerationasnext/follows/below.簡寫版：Theissuedealswithourenvironmentalpollution,whichdeservesourcloserconsiderationasnext.環境問題對各行各業的人們產生了深遠的影響，所以值得我們深思。Theinfluence/impact/effectexerted/imposed/posedbytheenvironmentalproblemstoallthepeopleisprofound/deep/serious,whichdeservesourfurtherdiscussion.其次，我們看這個想象的負面性/措施After/Followingthat,wewillmoveontothesideeffects/negativeimpactuponourlife/measurestobetaken.自從改革開放以來，中國發生了很大的變化。初級版：Sincereformandopenin