讀后續寫練習寫作專項訓練

第二節（滿分25分）2024屆高三第二次學業質量評價T8聯考英語試題（讀后

續寫）

閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短

文。

Whenwewerefinallydismissedfromthelastclassoftheday,thestudents

streamedoutoftheclassrooms.Itwasanotherboringdayafterschool.Idraggedmy

feethomeasIsighed.Yetanotheruneventfulday,Ithought.LittledidIknowthatthe

daywouldtakeaturnfortheworse?

Theliftlobby（電梯間）ofmyflatwasoldanddirty.Thewalls,whichwere

paintedwhite,hadbeendirtiedovermanyyears.Ireachedmyflat'slobby,and

pressedtheliftbuttonandwentin.Justthen,MrsLim,myelderlyneighbour,hobbled

（蹣跚）in.Shelookedancientwithtissuepaperwhitehair,wearingafaded

old-fashioneddress.Iheldtheliftdooropen,flashingafriendlysmile,andpolitely

greetedher.Iaskedherhowshefeltthatdayandpressedthebuttons.Shethanked

meforbeingsopolite,thenweweresilentfortherestoftheride.

Theliftfelldownincreasinglyfast.Therewereloudclankingsoundshereand

therewhiletheliftgrewslowerandslower.Myheartbeathardandfastasmyhands

turnedcoldandwetwithsweat.Unfortunately,theliftcametoanabruptstopatthe

fifthfloor.Ipressedthebuttonshardseveraltimes,butitwasofnohelp.Thelights

onthebuttonshadgoneout.Itsoondawnedonmethatweweretrapped.Anicyfear

creptupmyspine.MrsLimwashysterical（歇斯底里）.

“Wewillnevergetout!”shecriedwithherfacepale.Ithadbecomeacolourless

mask.Ihadnotimetolose.Ipressedthebellintheliftimmediately.Thesoundwas

surelydeafening,butwhatotherchoicedidIhave?MrsLimburstintotears.Itried

myverybesttocomforther,tellingherthateverythingwouldbeallrightandthatwe

neededtofindouthowtogetoutsafely.MrsLimbeganhavingtroublebreathing,and

Iimmediatelyhelpedhersitdownandloosenedhercollar.

Paragraph1:Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

Paragraph2:Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheother

sideoftheliftdoor.______________________________________________________________________________

試題分析

1.主要人物：

（T）I:astudent

②Mrs.Lim:myelderlyneighbor

2.視角：第一人稱

3.主題：人與社會（被困電梯，如何與鄰居老太太一起脫險）

4.前文故事梗概：

放學回家，感覺又過了無聊的一天。哪里知道，后來的事情，讓人感覺更糟糕。

在老舊電梯碰到老鄰居Mrs.Lim,蹣跚走進電梯。跟她打了招呼，然后就安靜地等電

梯上行。突然電梯快速地下墜，后來在五樓停了下來。接著，電梯里一片漆黑。鄰居

老太太嚇得歇斯底里地哭喊。雖然我也感到恐懼，但我還是不斷安慰她，幫助她鎮定

下來。……

5.續寫安排：

第一段：Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

①（與前一句和前文銜接）當時電梯里的場景

②（過渡）我們的表現

③（承上啟下）自救無果，等待救援

第二段：Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheother

sideoftheliftdoor.

①（與前一句銜接）我們的反應

②（過渡）消防員是怎樣救我們的

③（收尾）事后回想

下水作文

Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.Thelightsflashednowandthen.Butit

wasn'tlongbeforetheydiedoutthoroughly.Thedarknessswallowedusentirely,

whichbroughtusmorefear.Iattemptedtopressthebuttonsthatseemedtobe

availablebutinvain.Theresultbroughtmethethoughtthatwemighthavenowayto

getout.IbegantoshoutforhelpasIbangedonthedoorsandcalmeddownmy

elderlyneighbor,sayingnothingwouldbewrong.Thatwasthedarkestand

excruciatingmomentinmylife,whichseemedtobeadecade,waitingforrescue.（96

words）

Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideofthelift

door.Wesprangtoourfeet,overjoyed.Luckyenough,rescuefinallycametous!They

sparednoeffortstobreakthedooropen.Steppingoutofthelift,wecouldclearlysee

beadsofsweatslidingdowntheirheadsandsensetheirgaspingforbreath.Nothing

couldbebetterthanseeingthebeautifulworldoutside!Weofferedourheartfelt

appreciationtothem.Myelderlyneighbor,Mrs.Lim,evencameover,huggingthem

tightlyasifreunitingwithonce-lostfamilymembers.Itturnedouttobethebestclass,

whichbroughtmethewarmth,careanddedicationofpeople.（97words）

試題呈現：20240423廣州二模

閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短

文。

WhenIwassevenyearsold,myfamilymovedfromMexicotoAmerica.InMexico,

Iwasacheerfulgirlwholovedmakingpeoplelaughwithmyjokesandinventing

finegamestoplaywithmyfriends.However,whenIarrivedinAmerica,Ifoundit

hardtofitin,andIbecamequieter.

Welivedinasmallhousewithamodestyardwherewegrew

vegetables-myresponsibility.WhileItookprideinwatchingthemgrow,therewere

timeswhenIdreamedofhavingabeautifulgardenlikemyschoolmateLuella's,with

itsdelicatetulips（有R金香）.AlthoughLuellalivedinthesameneighborhoodasme,we

barelykneweachother.

ItwasafteratornadothatLuellaandIfinallybecameclosefriends.Thetornado

struckonaSundayafternoon.Thegentlebreezetransformedintoastrongwind,and

thickgraycloudsfilledthesky.Gradually,thetornadotookshapestartingasathin

ropeandgrowingintoalargeblackfunnel（漏斗）.Myentirefamilygatheredinthe

bathroom,seekingshelterfromthestorm.Terrified,Isatclosetomymom,kneesin

mychest.Afterthestormhadpassed,ourworriesandfearswerereplacedbyrelief

thatwewereunharmedandthatourhousehadremainedundamaged.

AsIsteppedoutside,Iwitnessedtheextentofthedamagethetornadohad

causedtoourneighborhood.Acrossthestreet,atalltreehadfallen,crushingLuella's

gardeninfrontofheryellowhouse.Wehurriedovertocheckonit.Fortunately,her

familyseemedtobeawayatthetime,andnoonewasinjured,However,her

once-beautifulgardenwasinruins,withthefallentreedestroyingthetulipsand

debris（碎片）spreadeverywhere.Icouldonlyimaginehowheartbrokentheymust

feelseeingthis.Thenmymom'susualwordsranginmyear,“Itismoreblessedtogive

thantoreceive/'andmyfamilystartedtothinkabouthowwecouldhelp.

注意：1,續寫詞數應為150左右；2,請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Just

atthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.

Evenafterthedebriswascleared,IcouldstillsenseLuella'ssorrowforherlost

garden.

下水作文：114+141

Justatthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.Themomentthey

steppedoffthecar,theywerereallytakenabackbythemessthetornadohadmadeof

thegarden,obviouslyunpreparedfortheseverityofthedamage.Luelladashed

towardswhatwasherbeautifulgardenandstrokedthoseweatheredflowers,sadness

writtenalloverherface.Seeingthis,Iapproachedher,tryingtocomforther.Tocheer

Luellaup,myparentsandIjoinedinthecleaningwork,puttingthefallentreebackin

place,clearingallthedebrisoutofthegardenandrepairingallthegardeningsupplies.

Withourjointefforts,whatwasjustnowalandofruinsnowturnedintoagardenon

itswaytorecovery.

Evenafterthedebriswascleared,IcouldstillsenseLuella'ssorrowforherlost

garden.Seeinghersufferingsomuch,IknewIshoulddosomething.rrWecanplants

sometulipseedsinthegarden.Andsoonyourgardenwillbeabeautifulagainwitha

seaoftulips/'Isuggested.Seeminglyinfectedbymyidea,shebeamedandnoddedin

approval.Thenextfewdayswitnessedthetwofamiliesworkingtogether,digging

holes,plantingtheseedsandputtingthesoilbackinplace.Itseemedthatthegarden

startedtoreviveitselfandwasgettingbackonitsfeet.Dayafterday,LuellaandI

watchedthetulipsgrowingandflowering,swayingelegantlyinthebreeze.Daybyday,

weembracedthefriendshipandclosenessgrowinginourhearts.NevercouldIhave

imaginedthatitwasthesetulipsthathelpedmefitintoaforeigncountryandfind

backthesunshineversionofme.

參考范文1：90+96

Justatthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.Empathysurgedwithin

measIsawtheirshockanddisbelief.ApproachingLuella,Itightlyheldherhandsand

said,Tmsorryforyourloss,butthankfullyyou'reallright."Sheweaklynodded,still

puzzledbythedevastatingscene.Myfamilyvolunteeredtohelpcleanupthemess,

cuttingdownthebranchesandremovingthefallentrees.ToupliftLuella'sspiritsand

bringhercomfort,Itriedmybesttocheerherupwhiletidyingthegardenwithher,

duringwhichmyownjoyfulpersonalityseemedtoreviveabit.

Evenafterthedebriswascleared,IcouldstillsenseLuella'ssorrowforherlost

garden.Myheartwentouttoher,knowingherdevotiontothosetulipsshehad

nurtured.Determinedtorestorethebeautythatoncethrived,Isuggestedthatwe

rebuildthegarden,whichLuelladelightedlyembraced.Witheachbulbcarefully

planted,thenewtulipseedlingsfilledthegardenonceagain,whichsymbolizedthe

sproutingofanewfriendshipbetweenusaswellastheturningthatIfinallygot

embracedbythisnewenvironment.Mymomwaswasright:It'smoreblessedtogive

thantoreceivebecausewhenyougive,youmayreceivesomethingunexpectedin

return.

參考范文2：106+109

Justatthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.Empathysurgedwithin

measIsawtheshockanddisbeliefontheirfaces.Icouldn'thelpbutapproachLuella,

tightlyholdingherhandsandsaying「Tmsosorryforyourloss,butthankfullyyou're

allright."Sheweaklynoddedatme,stillappearingpuzzledbythe