高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習校園故事——藝術比賽為學生增強了信心1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文4續寫原文Rishahadthewholeweekendtoworkonherproject,butshecouldnotthinkofanythingtodo.OnMonday,Rishafeltfrightened,soafterschoolRishaaskedMs.Clayifshecouldwriteanartpaperinsteadofdoinganartproject.“Iunderstandthisprojectscaredyou,Risha,”Ms.Claysaid.“Justremember,youcancreateanykindofartyouwant.”Ms.Claysmiledather.“Artisaperson’swayofexpressinghisorherfeelings—itisn’talwayspainting,drawing,orcutting.Iknowyouwillthinkofsomethingverycreative,andIcan’twaittoseeit.”WhenRishaarrivedhome,shetookoutapieceofpaperandapencil.SherememberedMs.Clay’swords.“Artisaperson’swayofexpressinghisorherfeelings.”Rishawrotetheword“terrified”onherpaper.Shecrumpled(弄皺)thepaperandthrewittothesideofherdesk.5段首句Paragraph1：ThenRishastaredatthecrumpledball.Paragraph2OnFriday,Rishacarefullycarriedherprojectintothelibrary.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點8續寫思路分析9續寫思路分析Para1：ThenRishastaredatthecrumpledball.由第一段首句內容“然后Risha盯著這個揉皺了的球。”可知，第一段可描寫看到紙團后，Risha的感想和采取的行動。10續寫思路分析11續寫思路分析續寫線索想起做雪球——完成項目——老師和同學表揚——感到驕傲12續寫素材13續寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Shenoticedthesmileandthenodsfromteachersandotherstudentsassheputherworkonatable.(由連接詞as引導的時間狀語從句)[高分句型2].HerpridegrewwhenMs.Clayplacedafirst-placestaronherartwork.(由when引導的時間狀語從句)14Part3范文呈現15范文呈現ThenRishastaredatthecrumpledball.Itremindedherofasnowball.Suddenlyanideastruckher.Whynotcreateawinterwonderlandoutofcrumpledpaper?Rishadidn’thavetodraworpaintorevencut.Rishamademanypaperballs,gluedthemalltogether,andplacedthemonabigpieceofhardpapertoformasnowman.Thesnowmanworeahatmadeofblackpaperandascarfmadeofredpaper.Herfinishedprojectwasreallywonderful.16范文呈現OnFriday,Rishacarefullycarriedherprojectintothelibrary.Shenoticedthesmileandthenodsfromteachersandotherstudentsassheputherworkonatable.Ms.ClaywalkedovertoRisha.“Youhavecreatedacreativepieceofartwork.Iamsoproudofyou!”Ms.Claysaid.Rishawasproudofherselftoo.HerpridegrewwhenMs.Clayplacedafirst-placestaronherartwork.“MaybeIamagoodartistafterall,”Rishathought.17范文譯文然后里沙盯著揉皺的球。這讓她想起了一個雪球。她突然想到了一個主意。為什么不用皺巴巴的紙創造一個冬天的仙境呢？里沙不用畫畫，甚至不用切割。里沙做了很多紙團，把它們粘在一起，放在一張大的硬紙上堆雪人。雪人戴著一頂黑紙做的帽子和一