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新概念英語第三冊作文指導一、題型解析要求考生在閱讀一篇短文后,根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容和提示,進行續(xù)寫。該題型旨在考查考生的閱讀理解能力、思維能力和寫作能力。二、解題步驟1.仔細閱讀短文,理解文章主旨和思路。2.根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容和提示,確定續(xù)寫部分的主題和寫作方向。3.結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)驗和語言儲備,進行構(gòu)思和寫作。4.檢查所寫內(nèi)容是否符合題目要求,是否與原文內(nèi)容相吻合。三、寫作技巧1.認真審題,明確續(xù)寫任務。2.確定主題和寫作方向,確保續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與原文內(nèi)容相吻合。3.注意時態(tài)和人稱的使用,保持前后一致。4.注意上下文的連貫性和邏輯性,使用適當?shù)倪B接詞和短語。5.注意語言的質(zhì)量和表達方式,盡量使用生動、形象的語言。6.檢查拼寫、語法和標點符號等細節(jié)問題,確保語言準確無誤。四、優(yōu)秀范文閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly'sfamily.HereldersisterSerenawasnowdancingatatopcollege.ThoughKelly'smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersister'sfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethadfadedyearsbefore,andshewaseagerforanewchallenge.Onedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudio,shewalkedpastthegym,fascinatedbyboxers(拳擊手)traininginsidetheboxingring.Shewasdeeplyimpressedbyhowhardtheyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infact,she'dlongbeenattractedtoboxing.Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase:BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT(選拔).ThatwaswhatKellyreallywantedtodo.Sheknewhermomhadhighexpectationsforherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.Thenextday,shegatheredhercourageandtoldSerenaabouthernewpassion.Atfirst,Serenadidn'tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious,shereplied,"YouknowMomwantsyoutobeaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingisonlyforboys,andyou'resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly.""ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,"Kellyinsisted,"andwhatexactlydoes'onlyforboys'mean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!"Gradually,touchedbyherdeterminationandpassion,Serenabegantounderstandandsupporther.Kellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingtorespectherdecision,nomatterwhat.Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunching(擊打)abilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn'tcomenaturaltoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindtostickwithherchoice.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)要求應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。范文一:ThenKellybeganhertraining,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Everydayafterschool,Kellydashedtotheboxinggym,occupyingherselfwiththeintensetraining.Stretchinglegs,practicingherfootworkandimprovingendurancehadbecomethebittersweetroutineofherlife.Evenwhenshewasmadefunofbyboysinthegym,shebitherliptightlyandcontinuedhertraining.Finally,thetryoutcame.Extremelynervousthough,shesteppedintotheboxingring,movedfastandpunchedhardtothesurpriseofothercandidates.Afterthetryout,Kellyleftthegymconfidently,knowingshedidherbest.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Toherdelight,Kellyfoundhernameonthelist.Thrilled,shesharedthenewswithSerena,bothreadytorevealthesecrettotheirmom.Atdinnerthatday,Kellygatheredhercourageandsaidtohermom,“I'msorry,Mom.I'vemadetheboxingteamandI'mreadytocarvemyownpath."Atfirst,aflickerofdisbeliefandshockcrossedhermom'sface,butafteralong,heart-to-hearttalk,shegaveKellyabearhugandwhisperedsoftly,“I'msoproudofyouforbeingyourself.”高純同學:ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.DaysandnightswitnessedKellyputtingherbackintotraining.Shekeptrunningeverymorningandpunchingthesandbageverynightdespitedoubtsandlaughtercomingfromothers.Withsweatservingasatokenofherrelentlesseffortsandunflaggingdetermination,shetoneduphermuscles,madestridesinfootworkandpunchingabilitiesandbrokedownthebiasthatboxingisonlyforboys.Asthetryoutfinallycame,Kellyperformedperfectlywithstrengthandconfidence,whileSerenawasconcealingthewholethingfromtheirmother.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.WithKelly'snameshiningonthelist,sheknewthathereffortspaidoff.Scarcelyhadthenameleaptintothetwosisters'eyeswhentheycouldn’tcontaintheirecstasyandexcitement.Halfanxiousandhalfjoyous,theydartedbackhomeandpouredoutthethingtotheirmom.Atfirst,Momfurrowedhereyebrow.Butgradually,Kelly'sdeterminationinhervoiceironedhermom'swrinklesout.Finally,shewrappedherarmsaroundKellyandsaid,"I'mproudofyou!"Thesewordsmadeaboutasmuchsenseasbreezeandhintedthatit'struepassionthatcarvesherownpath.向澤宇同學:ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Comparedwithotherboxersshemet,shehadlittleexperienceandlostgroundtothemattheverybeginning,butthatneverdefeatedher.Everyday,whenshehadsparetime,sunandmoonalwayswitnessedafigurehittingandmovinginthegym.Despiteherbeinglaughedatbysomeboysandreceivingmisunderstanding,neverinhermindpoppedthewords"givingup",andherskillswereenhanceddaybyday.Finallythedayoftryoutcame.Confident,sheshowedeverythingshehadpracticedperfectlywithoutevenanerror!Breathingasighofrelief,shesawtheshockedlooksofothersandknewshehadmadeit.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Crowdsgathering,everycandidatewaseagertofindhisownname.Squeezingherselfintothecrowds,Kellywasimmediatelygreetedbyhername.Transfixedwithirresistibleexhilaration,shejumpedoverthemoonandsharedthisthrillingnewswithSerena.However,shehadtofaceanotherconcernnow:howwouldhermomreact?WhatifMomdidn'tsupport?Thatnightatdinner,KellylookedatSerena,noddedherheadandsummoneduphercouragetotellalltohermom.Tohersurprise,afterafewsecondsofsilence,Momsmiledanduttered,"Idon'tmeantolimityourfuture,andit'sgreatthatyoucarveyourownpath!"Haditnotbeenforthisexperience,Kellywouldneverdevelopherpassionforboxingandpursueadifferentpath.Now,thispathwassuretohaveapromisingfuture.范文四:ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Everyafternoonafterschool,shedirectlystrodetotheboxingringtolearnthebasicfooting,differentstrikingfromdifferentangles.Itwasanexhaustedworkout,especiallyforabeginnerlikeher.Yearsofballetpracticemadeherbotharmsandfiststoosuppletochangethemintopowerfulones.Butshecouldendureallthehardshipbecausethatwaswhatshechose.Whatshecouldnotbearwaswhenshecamebackhomeandliedtohermomaboutherday,makingupalltheballetthing.ThesenewnormalcametoanendwhenthefinaldayofselectionwasscheduledforaFriday.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Kelly'snamewasprintedonthetopofthelist.Shesmiledtoherselfinwardly.Hardworkpaidoff.Theonlyproblemleftwastoconvincehermomthatboxingwasherrealpassionandshewishedtochasewhatshelovedtodo.Serenapromisedtohelpherwhenshebrokethenews.AtfirstMomwasstartledandfuriousthatKellycheatedher.However,graduallyMomsensedthatitwastimetoletherchildfollowherhearttodosomethingshepersistedwith.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Sincemychildhood,Ihavelovedtopaintandinfact,thisisagreatfascinationforme.Tobeanartist,IkeptlearningandpracticingpaintingwhenIwasintheprimaryschoolandthejuniorhighschool.Aftercompletingmyseniorhighschool,ItriedtogetadmittedtoalocalartcollegeinDurbaninSouthAfrica.Atthesametime,ItooktheadmissiontestofsomeotherlocaluniversitiesincaseIdidnotmissayear.Becauseofsomanytests,Iwasunabletocollectmyresultofartcollegetest.Oneday,IwastoldbymyrelativesthatIwasonthewaitinglistandthereforethepossibilitytogetadmittedtotheartcollegewasprettyslim.Ibelievedthemandwentontakingtheotheruniversitytests.Butlater,whenIwenttotheartcollegeafterafewweeks,Icametoknowtherealtruth.Ipassedthetestwithhighmarksandwasontheadmissionlist,buttheadmissiondatewasover.Finally,Irealizedthatthiswasakindofplotagainstmeandoneofmyuncleswasthekeyplotter.Ialsofoundthatmydadagreedontheissuenottoinformmeaboutmyresult.Infact,theydidnotwantmetobeapainter.Theythoughtbeinganartisthadlessvalueinthepresentage.Itmaynothelpmetosurviveinthiscompetitiveworld.Theywantedmetobeabusinessmanlikethem.Intheiropinion,theyareabitcommercialineveryaspectandtheymaylendmeahandinmyfuturecareer.So,theymadetheplananddecidedtohidemyresultfromme.Buttheydidnotrealizethatwhattheydidwouldcausemealotofanxietyandpain.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。范文一:IfeltsadwhenImissedthechanceforadmissiontotheartcollege.Afterall,itwasmyidealcollege,whosemajoriswheremyburningpassionlies.Besides,Ihadcommittedmyselftolearningandpracticingpaintingsincemyprimaryschool.Mixedwithmysorrowwasadeepsenseofanxiety,painandanger.WhatifIwouldnotbeadmittedintoanycollege?WhatifIwouldhavetorackmybraintodealwiththecommercialbutboringsciencesubjects?Thoughoutofgoodintention,mydadanduncleweredefinitelyinnopositiontohidetheresultfromme.Sureenough,it,partly,wasmyfault.Ishouldhavecheckedthetestresultbymyself.Fortunately,Ihadtakenadmissiontestsofothercolleges.Now,Ihave
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