Continuationwriting

--Actionchain&Actionscene--

Teachingaims:連貫地Itmadeit!snail/sneil/n.蝸牛ContinuationwritingCharacters:WhoEvents:What;When;Where;Why;How.What?Actionchain(動作鏈):Verb1,Verb2andVerb3...豎起了大拇指滿意地點了點頭212謂語Aand謂語BShenoddedwithsatisfactionandthumbedupatus.noddedwithsatisfactionthumbedupatus

遞給可憐的乞丐23掏出一把零錢伸進口袋Hereacheddeep

intothepocket,pulledoutahandfulofchangeandgaveittothepoorbeggar.reacheddeepintothepocketpulledoutahandfulofchangegaveittothepoorbeggar謂語A,謂語Band謂語C男孩們跳入湖中玩耍。Boysrushedtothelakeexcitedly,tookofftheirclothesandjumpedintothewater.歌手唱歌。Thesinger

glancedat

theaudience,

took

adeepbreathandbeganto

sing.她擁抱她的孩子。Shedashedforwardinahurry,kneltdownandheldhersonintoherarmstightly.1.A,BandCEexercise1.他坐車去警局。Hewenttothepolicestationbycar.他攔下出租車，帶著行李箱跳進車里，告訴司機“去警察局。”He

stopped

thetaxi,

jumped

in

withthesuitcaseand

told

thedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”2.爸爸進來了。Dadcamein.爸爸沖了進來，靜靜地站著，然后突然大笑起來，說“你考上了！”Dadrushedin,stoodstill,andthenburstintolaughter,saying“Youareadmitted.”A,BandC（連詞連接動詞）她在海邊感受著平靜。Standingbesidethevastsea,shelookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.露西受到了老師的鼓勵。Encouragedbytheteacher’swords,Lucyraised

herhand,whispering,“I’lldoit.”2.使用非謂語：Doing/Done…,主干,doing/done…Exercise1.看到一輛車正在靠近，她激烈地揮手，希望能搭上車。(waveviolently,getaride)Seeingacarapproaching,shewavedherhandsviolently,hopingtogetaride.2.面對這四個強壯的人，狼可能會感到受到威脅（threaten），開始撤退。（withdraw）Facingthefourstrongmen,thewolfmightfeelthreatened，startingtowithdraw.Doing/Done…,主干,doing/done…動作面=動作鏈+情感、環境、心理、語言等

Actionscene:

Actions+Emotions,surroundings,innerthoughts,dialoguesemotionsdialoguesActionscenesurroundingsinnerthoughts“我去給你們拿點咖啡，”她笑道，朝廚房走去。DialoguesActionsEmotions“I'llgetyousomecoffee,”shesmiled,headingforthekitchen.站在海邊，他們仰望天空，感受著這份珍貴的平靜。Standing

attheseashore,they

lookedupinto

thesky,enjoying

thepreciouspeacefromwithin.SurroundingsActionsInnerthoughtExercise聽完后深受鼓勵，David伸出雙臂抱住了我并微笑著說：“我可以做到！”

(2022年新高考I讀后續寫)Deeplyencouragedafterhearingthis,Davidheldouthisarmsandhuggedme,replyinginadelightedvoice“Icandoit！”

難過但不害怕，他決定立即改變方案。

Heartbrokenbutfearless,hewasdeterminedtochangethesolutionimmediately.1.她登上(board)飛機，坐在座位上，尋找她的書。________________________________________________________________2.意識到我負擔不起繼續深造學習，我不得不停止追逐我的夢想。_______________________________________________________________3.看沒有人注意到我們，我就把圣誕禮物放下，敲了敲他的門鈴。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.受到老師的鼓勵，他舉起手，小聲說道：“我來(volunteer)”。______________________________________________________________Sheboardedtheplane,satonherseatandthenlookedforherbook.RealizingthatIcan'taffordtocontinuemyfurtherstudy,Ihadtostopchasingmydream.Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,IplacedtheChristmaspresentdownandpoundedhisdoorbell.Encouragedbytheteacher'swords,heraisedhishand,whispering

“Ivolunteer.”actionscene動作面1.Actionchain（動作鏈）:(1)A,BandC（連詞連接動詞）;(2)使用非謂語:Doing/Done…,主干,doing/done…2.Actionscene（動作面）:

Actions+Emotions,surroundings,innerthoughts,dialogues...CONTINUATIONWRITINGactionchain動作鏈continuationwritingSummaryPractice---Continuationwriting---Whatwillhappennext?*Afterabout10minutesinline,itwasourturnandIputeverythingontheconveyerbelt（傳送帶）...*IsuddenlyrealizedIhadforgott